Abadilla, Baby Aliah
Arcenal, Christ Jeariel 11- Benevolence
Linguis, Vichel Jean
The article entitled “Teenage Pregnancy” was published by Ramiro
Molina and Electra Araya Gonzales. It addressed how individuals involved in
social issues that are rampant especially among teenagers. The writers want
everyone to be aware that pregnancy is one of the social issues that we are
facing and it is not resolved even in well- developed country. The factors and
effects of such issue were also stated in the article. It discussed the very
reason why an individual involved in teenage pregnancy or unwanted
pregnancy.
Qualifying main idea of the article is the strong relevance to our society.
The authors made the right decision in choosing their topic since many people
can relate to it. The author presents research evidence and facts in support
of the argument. They have also drawn conclusions from a range of sources
and take a particular stand on the issue.The authors want us to be aware of
such issue since it is the most common among our age. The article was
successfully made because they were able to hook the reader’s attention and
interest.
There were also some weaknesses that we have noticed in the article.
The first one is the lack of use of cohesive devices. The choices of words and
jargon that disrupts the understanding of the abstract. The authors failed to
suggest some alternative methods of reasoning that would result in a more
conclusive way of interpretation. The supporting details were not enough or
the article to be reliable. And lastly, other perspectives about teenage
pregnancy are not stated in the article.
All in all, the article was able to discuss what teenage pregnancy is. It
shows the common cause and effects and it provides a solution for the
prevention of such issue. The purpose of the article was well- defined and its
content is well- developed. The authors clearly defined the importance of how
we should be aware of the happenings in our society these days. And since
the article was lack of cohesive devices, it could possibly make the readers
read the article slowly and smoothly.
Abadilla, Baby Aliah
Arcenal, Christ Jeariel 11- Benevolence
Linguis, Vichel Jean
I. Introduction
The article entitled “Teenage Pregnancy” was published by Ramiro
Molina and Electra Araya Gonzales. It addressed how individuals involved in
social issues that are rampant especially among teenagers. The writers want
everyone to be aware that pregnancy is one of the social issues that we are
facing and it is not resolved even in well- developed country. The factors and
effects of such issue were also stated in the article. It discussed the very
reason why an individual involved in teenage pregnancy or unwanted
pregnancy.
II. Strengths
Qualifying main idea of the article is the strong relevance to our society.
The authors made the right decision in choosing their topic since many people
can relate to it. The author presents research evidence and facts in support
of the argument. They have also drawn conclusions from a range of sources
and take a particular stand on the issue.The authors want us to be aware of
such issue since it is the most common among our age. The article was
successfully made because they were able to hook the reader’s attention and
interest.
III. Weakesses
There were also some weaknesses that we have noticed in the article.
The first one is the lack of use of cohesive devices. The choices of words and
jargon that disrupts the understanding of the abstract. The authors failed to
suggest some alternative methods of reasoning that would result in a more
conclusive way of interpretation. The supporting details were not enough or
the article to be reliable. And lastly, other perspectives about teenage
pregnancy are not stated in the article.
IV. Conclusion
All in all, the article was able to discuss what teenage pregnancy is. It
shows the common cause and effects and it provides a solution for the
prevention of such issue. The purpose of the article was well- defined and its
content is well- developed. The authors clearly defined the importance of how
we should be aware of the happenings in our society these days. And since
the article was lack of cohesive devices, it could possibly make the readers
read the article slowly and smoothly.
