OUTLINE FOR WRITING TASK 2
1. Some people think that government should provide free education to students in university. To
what extent do you agree or disagree?
(Partly agree)
Main 1: chứng minh tại sao nên miễn phí giáo dục đại học
- help poor students (grounding -> problems -> solutions)
[giáo dục hiện tại có phần inaccessible: inflation (lạm phát), higher demand/quality/cost] -> [lead to
problems…] -> [nếu free tuition cho học sinh đại học, sẽ giải quyết các vấn đề trên]
- more access to education
- encourage people to learn more
- alleviate financial burden on students
- finding talented individuals
- foster a sense of equality which gives poor students a chance
- improve the economy
On the one hand, there are some persuasive rationales that support the claim that university education
should be free of charge.
+ Style 1: In this day and age, due to stagnant inflation, the cost of education has increased
significantly, causing problems for individuals to enter a university if they come from disadvantaged
socio-economic backgrounds/ socioeconomically disadvantaged backgrounds. This would result in
their inability to contribute to the workforce, making the country fail to develop effectively. If
university education can be given to students for free, many talented individuals can contribute to the
workforce, boosting economic development and transforming the quality of living of the whole
population.
+ Style 2: Nowadays, the cost of education has increased significantly due to higher demand for
quality, teaching facilities, and human resources, effectively prohibiting students with lower means of
living from entering universities. This issue leads to the inability of talented individuals to contribute to
their nations’ workforce, slowing down economic development. If university education is given for
free, such a problem would not occur, helping the nations develop better thanks to an improved
workforce.
Main 2: tại sao miễn phí giáo dục đại không thực hiện được?
- government budget is not enough to cover
+ number of students
+ education cost
+ a huge amount of national budget
- students do not have motivation -> reduce the quality of education
On the other hand, despite the idealistic nature of making university education free of charge, its actual
application could bring about many obstacles and problems.
+ Style 1: The coverage of such an expenditure means that government is required to handle an
increasing amount of tuition fee and a large number of students. Also, some nations, especailly
developing ones, may not have a flexible budget that can be spent on such a large expense. As a result,
if the proposal of removing the financial obligations for students is implemented, many governments
would not manage to complete such task.
+ Style 2:
