You did really well for a first game. The mechanics seemed well thought-out, the core concept was fun, and I liked the interpretation of the theme. However, it was a bit difficult to figure out how stuff worked at first, but once I figured it out, it was great. The background was also a bit strange, but I'm sure you already know that. Overall, however, this is a great game. If you have time, I would really like to see a completed version of this sometime in the future.