Post-polish after accepting Matt's suggestions

w3c · jnurthen · Feb 13, 2020 · Dec 11, 2019 · Dec 11, 2019 · Dec 11, 2019
commit e544bec79dc83d87dbed0b7e101a03a78b4b5d6d
diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
@@ -8222,10 +8222,9 @@ <h5>Presentational Roles Conflict Resolution</h5>
 			<div class="role-description">
 					<p>A single proposed change to content.</p>
 					<p>For example, in an editing system that supports multiple users, one user may suggest a change, and user would be responsible
-					for accepting or rejecting the suggestion.
-					Authors MUST ensure that a <code>suggestion</code> contains either one <rref>insertion</rref> child or one <rref>deletion</rref> child or ensure that it contains two children where one is an <rref>insertion</rref> and the other is a <rref>deletion</rref>.
-					Authors MUST ensure a <code>suggestion</code> does not contain any other children.
-					Authors MAY use <pref>aria-details</pref> or <pref>aria-description</pref> to associate the <code>suggestion</code> with information,such as related comments, authoring info, and time stamps.</p>
+					for accepting or rejecting the suggestion.</p>
+					<p>Authors MUST ensure that a <code>suggestion</code> contains either one <rref>insertion</rref> child or one <rref>deletion</rref> child or ensure that it contains two children where one is an <rref>insertion</rref> and the other is a <rref>deletion</rref>. Authors MUST ensure a <code>suggestion</code> does not contain any other children.</p>
+					<p>Authors MAY use <pref>aria-details</pref> or <pref>aria-description</pref> to associate the <code>suggestion</code> with related information such as comments, authoring info, and time stamps.</p>
 					<pre class="example highlight">
 						&lt;p&gt;
 						  The best pet is a
@@ -8236,7 +8235,7 @@ <h5>Presentational Roles Conflict Resolution</h5>
 						&lt;/p&gt;
 					</pre>
 					<p>When a suggestion is accepted, authors SHOULD remove the <code>suggestion</code> role, indicating that the proposed revision has been made.
-						removing the element. In addition, child <rref>insertion</rref> and <rref>deletion</rref> elements can be retained or transformed into the final accepted
+						In addition, child <rref>insertion</rref> and <rref>deletion</rref> elements can be retained or transformed into the final accepted content.
 					  </p>
 			</div>
 			<table class="role-features">