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PIA JOURN TALK SERIES

Joseph Bernard A. Marzan


Senior Reporter (on-leave), Daily Guardian
Correspondent – Western Visayas, Philippine Daily Inquirer
Contents
■ Editorial and Column Writing
■ Editorial Cartooning
■ Copyreading and Headline Writing
EDITORIAL AND
COLUMN WRITING
What is an Editorial?

■ Article that expresses the


organization’s stand on
relevant issues and
concerns
■ Usually printed in the
Editorial or Opinion
pages, near the staff box
What is an Editorial?

■ Do not have a byline or


tagline
– Collective stand of the
editorial board
■ Different from an ‘Editor’s
Note’, which is typically
written by the editor-in-chief
as an open letter to the
readers
General Objectives of an Editorial

To DIE!
(Discuss, Inform, Engage)
General Objectives of
an Editorial
DISCUSS
■ Analyzing relevant issues
– Simplifying for better understanding
– Clarifying or correcting
misconceptions
– Taking a side on the issue
General Objectives of
an Editorial
INFORM
■ Strengthening the role of the
organization not just as a deliverer of
news, features, and other information,
but also as a social critic
General Objectives of
an Editorial
ENGAGE
■ Mobilizing the readers to act
■ Reacting or raising the issue to be made
known to the public
Objectives of an Editorial
(In the context of campus
journalism)
■ Reflecting the paper’s orientation
■ Analyzing issues from a student’s point of
view
■ Discussing national, local, and campus
concerns
■ Weaving campus concerns as part of local and
national concerns
■ Magnifying national concerns in the context of
local and campus concerns
Characteristics of a
Good Editorial
■ Objective
■ Timely
■ Clear
■ Open
■ Simplified
■ Factual
Parts of an Editorial

1. Introduction
2. Analysis
3. Conclusion
Parts of an Editorial

INTRODUCTION
■ Gist of the argument
■ Attention-grabbing
■ If possible, use 5Ws and 1H
Introduction
Parts of an Editorial

ANALYSIS
■ Clear presentation of arguments
■ Supports the introduction
■ Present and refute opposition
■ Give additional relevant analogies
Analysis
Parts of an Editorial

CONCLUSION
■ Summarizes the points made
■ Must include specific calls to action
when and wherever possible
Conclusion
Types of Editorial

1. Editorial of Information
2. Editorial of Interpretation
3. Editorial of Criticism
4. Editorial of Commendation, Appreciation, or
Tribute
5. Editorial of Argumentation
6. Editorial of Entertainment
7. Mood Editorial
8. Special Occasion
Tips in Writing
Editorials
■ Have your audience in mind
■ Research, research, and research
– Data related to the issue
– Various arguments on the issue
■ Never be neutral, analyze and formulate
based on the facts
■ KISS (Keep it simple but stable)
What is a Column?

■ An individual opinion of
a writer on a chosen topic
or topics, usually
relevant or pressing
issues
What is a Column?

■ Usually appears on the


Editorial or Opinion
section of a paper
■ Written in the tone of
the writer, usually with
free rein
■ Usually based on the
columnist’s expertise
What is a Column?

■ Usually flanked by the


following elements:
– Column title
– Article title
– Byline
– Columnist’s photo
Objectives of a Column

■ Explain or argue the


writer’s stand on an issue
■ Clarify facts which may
not be clear to readers in
regular news or feature
stories
Objectives of a Column
(For campus journalists)

■ Presents individual writers, editors, and sometimes


faculty’s respective stances on campus, local, and national
issues
■ Discusses specific topics targeted to their audiences (i.e.
students)
■ Reflecting students’ advocacies (as individuals and
collectively)
Types of Columns

1. Opinion
2. Advice
3. Expertise or skills-related
4. Informative
Types of Columns

■ Know who you’re writing for (target audience)


– For campus journalists, try to focus more on issues relating to
students
■ Research, research, research
– Data related to the issues
– Arguments for or against the issue
■ Be faithful (stick to the topic)
■ KISS (Keep it simple and straight)
Before we move forward…

■ Seek to answer some questions:


– What now?
– How should we feel about this?
– What do we do?
■ Never formulate your opinion without verifying your facts
– Do not entertain arguments that aren’t factual
– Stronger facts = stronger opinions
■ Journalistic ethics must always be top of mind
■ Good editorials and columns = good editorial leadership
Before we move forward…
Exercise!

Write an 800-word editorial on the


topic of AI and Journalism.
Exercise!

■ Tools are being developed using Artificial Intelligence to write news


articles.
■ GMA Sports launched Maia and Marco, their first AI-powered
sportscasters.
■ Rappler unveiled guidelines on the use of AI in writing its stories.
■ The Philippines on November 1 signed the Bletchley Declaration
with 27 other countries during the AI Safety Summit at Bletchley
Park, Milton Keynes, United Kingdom.
EDITORIAL
CARTOONING
What is an Editorial Cartoon?

■ Expression of opinions
through cartoon drawing
■ Usually printed in the
Editorial or Opinion
pages, accompanied by
the Editorial article
What is an Editorial Cartoon?

■ Drawing or sketching
caricatures of persons or
objects to inform,
influence, argue,
criticize, praise and
interpret certain
phenomenon or simply
to entertain
Elements of Cartooning

1. Composition
2. Balance
3. Unity
Composition

■ Arrangement of all the


elements of a good
drawing to produce the
desired form and
specifications (i.e. lines,
shades, exaggerations,
etc.)
Balance

■ Stability produced by
even distribution of
elements with respect to
the whole
■ Contrasting, opposing,
and interacting elements
Unity

■ Condition of harmony
■ Resulting singleness of
effect or symmetry and
consistency of style and
character
Elements of a Good Editorial
Cartoon
1. Provides insight and potentially changes beliefs
2. Animates ideas and provokes audiences’ thought
3. Expressing the artist’s ideas and thoughts while requiring
minimal explanation
4. Independent and beyond a graphic depiction of the
editorial in text
5. Discusses current subject matter relevant to the readers
Elements of a Good Editorial
Cartoon
Tips on creating your Editorial
Cartoon
1. Focus on the central theme of your cartoon
2. Draw inspiration from pressing and persistent issues in
the community, in school, or in society
3. Studying others’ cartoons is advisable, but original is
better
4. Your drawing has to ‘speak’ to the audience and ‘make
them listen’, so keep it relevant and keep it simple
Tips on creating your Editorial
Cartoon
5. Use less words as possible
6. Use common symbolism, or something that the audience
may infer from your drawing (e.g. dove for peace, two-way
balance for justice or law, crocodile for greed or gluttony)
7. Go back to journalistic ethics, make sure that while your
art is expressive, it is not libelous
COPYREADING AND
HEADLINE WRITING
What is Copyreading?

■ Process of checking the


form of the story
■ Giving the articles a ‘final
touch’ before printing or
publication
■ Also known as editing or
correcting the article
What is Copyreading?
What is a ‘Copy’?

■ The material to be sent


to the typist to be typeset
■ News story, feature
article, editorial, literary
piece, etc.
What do we need to copyread?

■ Errors in fact
■ Errors in grammar
■ Mechanics
■ Errors in structure
■ Opinionized/editorial
statements (for news
stories)
What do we need to copyread?

■ Libelous or derogatory
statements
■ Redundancies, verbal
deadwood, and wasteful
words
■ Errors in unity,
coherence, and emphasis
What do we need to copyread?

■ 'currently at the moment’


■ ‘9AM in the morning’
■ ‘biography of their life’
■ ‘locals of the town’ or ‘students of the school’
■ ’for reasons such as’ or ‘their reason being’
■ ‘ahead of the scheduled date and time’
Copyreading Tools online

Grammarly Turnitin
Copy Editing symbols
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Copyreading steps and tips

■ Read the whole story first.


■ Determine the lead.
■ Check for the accuracy of all facts
and statements.
– Substance > form
■ Correct all errors in grammar,
spelling, structure, and
punctuation, among others.
■ Make sure that the ideas are
organized.
Copyreading steps and tips

■ If there are too many


corrections, advise the
writer, the editors, and
the advisers to see what
you can or need to do
next.
Copyreading steps and tips

■ Re-read, re-read, and re-read.


– If the story is too long, cut
unnecessary details.
– An accurate and more
organized story >
comprehensive story.
– Seek editors’ and adviser’s
guidance if unsure.
What is Headline Writing?

■ Writing the title of the


news story
– ‘Display window’ of
the paper
– Source of intial
information for busy
readers
Why is Headline Writing
important?
■ Summarizes the news in less
than a sentence
■ Presents the news for rapid
reading
■ Indicates the relative
importance of the news by
the amount of display
■ Gives a pleasing appearance
to the news pages
Headline Writing tips

■ KISS (Keep it short and


simple)
■ Get creative, and get
attention.
■ Size and length must be
proportionate to your article.
■ The headline must be based
on the lead.
Before we go…
Some things I would like to say…

1. Relax.
2. Never forget journalistic ethics.
3. Ethical article > creative article.
4. Good outputs = good editorial leadership.
Material sourced from:

■ Prof. Danilo Arao, UP College of Mass Communications


■ Dr. Ian C. Espada, WVSU College of Communication
■ Philip Jayson Falcis
■ John C. Nery
■ Charles Egama
■ Noel Ortega

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