Class code:37
Student’s name: tran minh hoang
Peer editor’s name:
Date:16/6
WRITING ASSIGNMENT – LESSON 11
Topic:1
Some people believe that the best way to improve health should have the physical
subject in all school. When children usually learn sports, it will make their health better.
Physical and psychological benefits created by sports activities contributed their healthy
body. Some regular practice of games such as badminton, football or basketball increase
the heart rate and form that it helps improve their health of the individual. Furthermore,
join the game can help reduce stress at workplace and sport related activities will help
the people is leading a healthy lifestyle.
On the other hand, other people think sports facilities will have a few effect and other
measures are needed. They believe that practice is more effective and more important
or some programs bring some benefit to them. For them, some activities people can
practice is always more effective than building the sports facilities. Moreover, during our
lifetime we change lifestyle much. For example, people have a different way to effective
in their health than before such as working style, eating habits, living areas. I think these
are the main reason for leading them to lifestyle good or not. So, they should control
their lifestyle will have more benefits than build sports facilities.
In conclusion, improve health through physical education or sports facilities is not the
best way. I think we can choose the other way to improve their health depends on what
they want and things they need.
Topic:2
It is an irrefutable fact that traffic congestion has become a serious problem in many
countries. Although many people believe that constructing more and wider roads is
the best solution to mitigate this problem, I would agree with those who
believe that building train and subway lines is a better way to reduce traffic jam.
On the one hand, there are some clear reasons why the extension and construction of
roads can alleviate the volume of traffic. Firstly, the existing roads are not wide
enough to accommodate the number of vehicles on the roads. This, in turn, leads to
traffic jams, especially in cities. Secondly, if there are better networks of roads, people
will be able to take an alternative route to avoid crowd when traffic congestion
occurs. However, I do not agree with this view because wider and better roads might
encourage people to buy cars. In a short period of time traffic will increase.
On the other hand, there are many reasons why some people believe that the
government spending money on building train and subway lines is a better decision to
tackle traffic jams. One reason is that trains are faster than buses or cars so people
tend to prefer a train over a car, especially those who commute to work. This may
relieve the pressure on existing roads. Secondly, in many cities, there is not enough
land available to construct or extend roads. By contrast, a subway network is built
underground and there is no need to worry about scarcity of land. Therefore, building
a subway line is certainly a viable option.
In conclusion, it is true that constructing more and wider roads reduces traffic but it is
a temporary solution as good roads prompt people to buy private vehicles. I firmly
believe that governments should allocate funds to build train and subway lines rather
than investing money on roads.
