Language and Structure Analysis
How to Easily Identify Language and Structure Devices in
an Extract
1. Language Devices:
Look for Descriptive Words: Adjectives, adverbs, verbs (e.g.,
“shimmering,” “thundered”).
Figurative Language: Check for comparisons (similes and
metaphors), exaggeration (hyperbole), or giving human traits
to non-human things (personification).
Sound Effects: Identify words that create a sound effect
(alliteration, onomatopoeia).
Tone and Mood: Words that create a particular atmosphere
(e.g., harsh, soft, mysterious).
2. Structure Devices:
Sentence Length: Are sentences short for tension or long for
description?
Paragraphing: Does the focus shift between settings,
characters, or emotions?
Repetition: Are any words or phrases repeated for emphasis?
Punctuation: Look at colons, ellipses, dashes—do they create
suspense, clarification, or abrupt stops?
Juxtaposition: Are contrasting ideas placed side by side?
How to Identify the Effect of a Technique
Ask Yourself:
Why did the writer use this technique here?
Does it create emotion (fear, excitement, sadness)?
Does it help the reader visualize, hear, or feel something?
Does it control the pace of the text (fast/slow, tense/relaxed)?
Examples:
Alliteration (e.g., "The wind whipped wildly") → Creates a harsh,
dramatic, or rhythmic effect.
Short sentence ("Then silence.") → Adds suspense, makes the
moment more dramatic.
Shift in focus (from peaceful to chaotic scene) → Surprises the
reader, builds tension.
Words to Describe the Effect on the Reader
Creates Mood/Emotion
Tense, suspenseful, mysterious, eerie, dramatic, melancholic,
uplifting, chaotic, peaceful.
Engages the Reader
Captivates, intrigues, shocks, surprises, immerses, unsettles,
excites.
Influences the Reader’s Perspective
Encourages sympathy, builds empathy, evokes curiosity, makes
the reader question.
Words to Show Understanding & Engagement
The writer effectively…
This highlights/emphasizes…
This creates a sense of…
This engages the reader by…
The use of [device] reinforces…
The shift in focus allows the reader to…
The sentence structure mirrors the…
What to Do if You Struggle to Identify Techniques
1. Easiest Language Features to Spot:
Verbs and adjectives (action and description)
Repetition (if a word or phrase is used more than once)
Similes and metaphors (if something is being compared)
2. Easiest Structure Features to Spot:
Short vs. long sentences
Shift in focus (different topics/scenes)
Punctuation (ellipses for suspense, dashes for abrupt
thoughts)
3. Make a Simple Statement
If unsure, focus on sentence length or tone:
“The short sentence creates tension by making the action feel
abrupt.”
“The use of adjectives makes the setting feel vivid and
immersive.”