I.

Bố cục bài viết IELTS Writing Task 2 bao gồm:

➔ Intro: 2 sens ~ 40 words
➔ Body1: 5 sens ~ 100w
➔ Body2: 5 sens ~ 100w
➔ Conc: 1 sens ~ 25w
II. Lưu ý

Ví dụ: The man who is working so hard is my boss

=> Cụm: “who is working so hard” là mệnh đề quan hệ, bổ nghĩa cho chủ ngữ “the man”, để
người đọc có thể hiểu người đàn ông đó là người nào và như thế nào.

Who: Thường sử dụng làm chủ ngữ, tân ngữ hoặc có thể thay thế cho các danh từ chỉ người.

…. N (person) + Who + V + O

Ví dụ: The person I admire most in life is my father, who has done so many great things for our
family.

Which: Thường sử dụng để làm chủ ngữ, tân ngữ, dùng để thay thế cho các danh từ chỉ vật.

S + V + O + which + V’ + O’
The school organizes events which aim to promote cultural diversity among students.

S + which + V’ + O’ + V + O
Renewable energy sources, which help reduce our carbon footprint, should be encouraged
worldwide.

S + which + S’ + V’+ V + O
Climate change, which scientists often emphasize, poses a significant threat to our planet's
ecosystems..

S + V + O, which + V’s/es + O’
People adopt pets, which brings companionship and joy to their lives.

Many students join extracurricular clubs, which enhances their overall learning experience.

not allowed to write:

f*ck / sh*t
 mom / dad / kid / buddy / guy / cop/ kind / app
God / Amen
… / etc / and so on
Gonna (going to) / wanna (want to)
And / But / Or / So
You

Write:

N of N:
a friend of mine / the University of Economics / the Ministry of Healthcare / the
Department of Environmental Protection / Hanoi National University of Education /
Ministry of Education / Department of Human Resources / …

the government:
~ the authorities / governments
= money + power
- ban / make laws / introduce policies / encourage / establish / invest …
- invest in public infrastructure / education / healthcare system / environmental protection
...
- subsidize companies / old people / people with disabilities / workers … to overcome the
pandemic
- encourage people to do exercise frequently / to eat less fast food / travel by bus more
often / donate to help poor people / ...
- ban/prohibit drinking before driving / video games / fast food / ...
- force …

I think / agree / believe / would say / would argue that …

In my opinion/view, …
From my point of view, …
From my perspective, …
In my opinion, I think that X

I think that the government should help poor people.

In my opinion, the government should help poor people.

- tens of / hundreds of ...

- some / many / a lot of ...
- various / numerous .
- a significant number of …
- Tiêu chí chấm
 PEEL

Phần Vai trò Yêu cầu

Point -Giới thiệu quan điểm của bạn -> Không đi vào chi tiết
-> Đoạn này trình bày vấn đề gì -> Nếu cần thì đưa ra quan điểm
cá nhân
Point: I think that the rise of
social media and online
communication platforms have
led to decreased face-to-face
interactions.

Explain -> Giải thích cho quan điểm -> Phải rõ ràng
(hay giải thích cho câu point) Explain: This means that
individuals who spend more
time looking at screens instead
of talking to people nearby are
experiencing fewer meaningful
connections.
-> Nên sử dụng cấu trúc S-V-O
và mệnh đề quan hệ
 Example -> Đưa ra 1 hoặc nhiều ví dụ bổ -> Các ví dụ có thể từ hiểu biết
trợ cho câu point cá nhân:
Example: many young people
in Vietnam struggle with face-
to-face communication skills.
-> Có thể có số liệu hoặc không
-> in Vietnam, research shows
that 60% of teenagers do not
hang out frequently as those in
the previous generation did, and
spend most of their time chatting
online instead

Link -> Kết đoạn bằng việc liên kết -> ngắn gọn, liên kết ngược lại
ngược trở lại với câu point với câu point như một vòng
khép kín.
Link: This demonstrates that
excessive use of the Internet has
a negative impact on people who
use Internet frequently.

III. Agree and Disagree

03. Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since there is computer technology. To what
extent do you agree or disagree?

01. Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than private
companies. Do you agree or disagree?
02. The only way to improve safety of our roads is to give much stricter punishments on driving
offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

02. The Internet has caused people to be isolated from their real lives. Do you agree or disagree?
03. Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature of their own
country than other countries. Do you agree or disagree?
04. Museums and art galleries should concentrate on works that show history and culture of their
own country rather than works of the other parts in the world. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?

*) Cách viết
-Có thể hoàn toàn đồng ý HOẶC hoàn toàn không đồng ý với đề bài
(COMPLETELY AGREE/DISAGREE)
-Có thể đồng ý HOẶC không đồng ý 1 phần (PARTLY AGREE/DISAGREE)
 A. COMPLETELY AGREE/DISAGREE
1. Mở bài
❖ Mở bài bằng cách giới thiệu cho người đọc biết chủ đề bài viết của mình. Thường là
paraphrase lại câu hỏi trong đề bài.
➔ Cấu trúc câu thường dùng:
It is a common belief that S + V
Many people hold the view that S + V

- Ex: The Internet has caused people to be isolated from their real lives. Do you
agree or disagree?

In today’s modern society, many people hold the view that the Internet has caused people to be
isolated from their real lives. I believe that the internet has caused people to be isolated from the
real world, which is an unexpected consequence for any internet user.

In my opinion, the growing popularity of the internet has not caused people to be isolated from
the real environment, which is an unexpected consequence for any internet users.

2. Thân bài
Chia làm 2 body:
❖ Body số 1: Nêu ra lý do thứ nhất theo phương pháp peel (lưu ý dùng từ nối cho
phù hợp)
❖ Body số 2: Nêu ra lý do thứ hai theo phương pháp peel

3. Kết bài
 In conclusion, I disagree/agree that S+ V.

- Ex: In conclusion, I agree that the Internet has caused people to be isolated from
their real lives.

->Template:

In today’s society, many people hold the view that [vấn đề được bàn luận]. Personally, I strongly
agree that [viết xuống quan điểm mình đồng ý]. This essay will provide some reasons and
relevant examples to support my arguments.

First and foremost, it should be recognized that [Lý do 1/point]. This means that [Giải
thích/explain]. One example that supports this view is [ví dụ/example]. This demonstrates that
[Topic/link] has a positive/ negative impact on...

Another interesting point is that [Lý do 2]. This is because [Giải thích]. For instance, [ví dụ].
This evidence suggests that [giải thích rằng ví dụ này ủng hộ quan điểm của bạn như thế nào].

To conclude, this essay argued that [viết lại quan điểm của bạn]. However, everything has two
sides, and this situation is no exception. Therefore, the efficient use of [Topic] should be
promoted, however, its misuse should be condemned.

->Example:

In today’s society, many people hold the view that the Internet has caused individuals to become
isolated from their real lives. Personally, I strongly agree that/I think that/In my opinion…. the
internet has caused people to be isolated from the real world, which is an unexpected
consequence for any internet user. This essay will provide some reasons and relevant examples
to support my arguments.

First and foremost/Firstly/First, it should be recognized that the rise of social media and online
communication platforms has led to decreased face-to-face interactions. This means that
individuals who spend more time looking at screens instead of talking to people nearby are
experiencing fewer meaningful connections. One example that supports this view is many young
people in Vietnam struggle with face-to-face communication skills. This demonstrates that
excessive use of the Internet has a negative impact on people who use Internet frequently

Another interesting point/Secondly/Second is that the contents which people watch, read or listen
to are too attractive and exciting to give up. This is because online platforms are designed to grab
and hold our attention, often with flashy pictures and exciting stories. For instance, in Vietnam,
research shows that 60% of teenagers do not hang out frequently as those in the previous
generation did, and spend most of their time chatting online instead. This evidence suggests that
the appeal of online content makes it easy for people to become disconnected from their real
lives.

To conclude/In conclusion, this essay argues that the Internet has indeed caused people to
become isolated from their real lives. However, everything has two sides, and this situation is no
exception. Therefore, the efficient use of the Internet should be promoted for its numerous
benefits in communication and information access, however, its misuse should be condemned.

B. PARTLY AGREE/DISAGREE

1. Mở bài
❖ Mở bài bằng cách giới thiệu cho người đọc biết chủ đề bài viết của mình. Thường là
paraphrase lại câu hỏi trong đề bài.
➔ Cấu trúc câu thường dùng:
S1: It is a common belief that S + V / Many people hold the view that S + V
S2: While there are some benefits/drawbacks to this practice, I partly disagree/agree that
+ topic

- Ex: The Internet has caused people to be isolated from their real lives. Do you
agree or disagree?

In today’s modern society, many people hold the view that the Internet has caused people to be
isolated from their real lives. While there are some benefits to this practice, I partly agree that the
internet has caused people to be isolated from the real world, which is an unexpected
consequence for any internet user.

2. Thân bài
Chia làm 2 body:
❖ Body số 1: Nếu agree thì body này nói về lý do ngta disagree (nhưng ko đưa ra
qdiem cá nhân) và ngược lại
- Nếu agree rằng Internet làm con người cô lập thì ở body này hãy nói về mặt lợi của Int
(ví dụ: nó giúp con người kết nối với nhau mà ko cần gặp mặt, nó giúp ngta giải trí,...)
- Câu sử dụng: On the one hand, the option to … is attractive for several reasons.
Ex: On the one hand, the option to the Internet has not caused people to be isolated from
their real lives is attractive for several reasons. Firstly, ... This is mainly due to …
Secondly, ... For example, …
❖ Body số 2: Nói về qdiem của mình
- Lưu ý: Nếu viết cả 2 body, có thể dùng cấu trúc on the one hand và on the other hand để
nối 2 đoạn với nhau
op op op
- reason - rea1 - rea1
- explain - explain (the mechanism) - (eg)
- example - rea2 - rea2
- explain - eg - (eg)
- result - rea3
- (eg)
Firstly, … Secondly
Firstly, … Secondly, …
The most obvious reason is Finally, …
that … In addition / Moreover
To begin with, … Besides, …
The first reason is that … Moreover, …
Another reason is that …

- Ex: On the other hand, I think that the internet is a major culprit for the isolation
of many people, especially the young, from real life nowadays. The first reason is
that the contents which people watch, read or listen to are too attractive and
exciting to give up. For example/For instance, in Vietnam, research shows that
60% of teenagers do not hang out frequently as those in the previous generation
did, and spend most of their time chatting online instead. Another reason is that
easy access to the Internet keeps young people glued to the screen, with just a few
taps, they can connect with friends, explore entertainment content, or play games.
As a result, leading to isolation from the real-life world and the people around.
3. Kết bài

In conclusion, I disagree/agree that S+ V.

- Ex: In conclusion, I agree that the Internet has caused people to be isolated from
their real lives.

IV. Advantages and Disadvantages

1. 3 dạng
❖ Dạng câu hỏi 1: What Are The Advantages And Disadvantages Of This Trend?
❖ Dạng câu hỏi 2: Do The Advantages Outweigh The Disadvantages? hoặc Do The
Benefits Outweigh The Drawbacks?

❖ Dạng câu hỏi 3: Is This A Positive Or Negative Development/Trend?

 2. Mở bài
advantages - disadvantages
(good points - bad points)
benefits - drawbacks
merits - demerits
positive - negative aspects
positives - negatives
problems / harms / challenges

These days, (đề bài). Even though there are still disadvantages/advantages to this trend, I think
its advantages/disadvantages are more remarkable.

- Ex: Many people now like to eat local food more than foreign one. Do the
advantages of eating local food outweigh the disadvantages?

In today’s world, many people now like to eat local food more than foreign one. Even though
there are still disadvantages to this trend, I think its values are more remarkable.

3. Thân bài

Chia làm 2 body (1 adv và 1 disadv, cái nào mình chọn thì mình cho làm body 2)
❖ Advantages:

Topic sentence (Câu chủ đề):

➔ It is clear that (đề bài) can offer enormous benefits

➔ It is justifiable that (đề bài) can provide numerous merits
➔ (đề bài) has/can brings many advantages.
 - Ex: It is clear that eating local food can offer enormous benefits.

Supporting idea 1:

➔ The first significant merit of A is….

➔ One of the greatest merits of A is…
➔ The first one is that,
➔ First/Firstly

-Ex: The first one is that, in comparison to similar foreign products, the locally produced
foods do not need preservatives to maintain their quality during a long time of
transportation. By containing almost no artificial chemicals inside, such food products, as
scientists say, are beneficial to consumers’ health in general.

Supporting idea 2:

➔ An additional/Another strong point that

➔ Additionally, what makes (đề bài) beneficial is
➔ Another merit of (đề bài) is that

Ex: Another strong point is that local food is cheaper than foreign food. For example, in
Vietnam, research shows that most people can save money by buying more local food than
foreign food.
❖ Disadvantages:

Topic sentence (Câu chủ đề):

- It is clear that (đề bài) can offer enormous drawbacks

- It is justifiable that (đề bài) can provide numerous drawbacks
- (đề bài) has/can brings many disadvantages.

Ex: Eating local food has many drawbacks. Firstly, ignoring foreign food means that
there would be fewer choices for citizens as they can only consume food originating from
nearby areas. As a result, those who love discovering the diversity of food in other
regions have to travel if they wish to experience much more food than locally available.
Secondly, the more local food people in one certain area eat, the more impacts there
would be on their local environment. The reason is that it would require the usage of
pesticides and fertilizers, which would probably cause soil and water contamination.

4. Kết bài

In conclusion, (quan điểm của mình đã nêu ở mở bài)

 Ex: In conclusion, I believe that the advantages of eating local food outweigh the
disadvantages

V. Discussion both view

1. Mở bài

Some individuals opine/express that S+V, while others say that S+V.

- Ex: Some people believe that pop stars deserve to earn more money than classical music
performers. Some disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals opine that celebrities performing pop music should be paid a higher
salary than classical music performers, while others do not agree with this idea.

2. Thân bài
❖ Body 1: Quan điểm bạn không đồng tình

Topic sentence: It is reasonable for (đề bài) due to (lý do, nên là 2 lý do)

- Ex: It is reasonable for classical music performers to earn more money due to
their huge effort in mastering instruments and traditional values that they
preserve.

Đưa ra giải thích cho 2 lý do trên:

Lý do 1: Main idea among these is that + giải thích

Lý do 2: Regarding the second point/ Concerning the second viewpoint is that + giải thích

- Ex:

Idea 1: Main idea among these is that learning traditional music takes a lot of time and
effort. People need to practice using instruments and understand the style of each kind of
classical music. Traditional music needs not just knowledge but also talent and regular
practice to create music that people enjoy.

Idea 2: Regarding the second point, classical music is important for keeping a country's
traditional values. If artists who perform classical music can make more money, they are
more likely to continue their jobs. This means that future generations can still listen to
some great music.

❖ Body 2: Quan điểm bạn đồng tình

 Nối với body 1 bằng các từ nối: Nevertheless, However,...

Topic sentence: Nevertheless, I strongly believe that (đề bài) + Lý do (nên là 2)

- Ex: However, I firmly believe that pop celebrities should receive higher financial
compensation because of their short-term impact and significant efforts in
upholding positive images.

Đưa ra giải thích cho 2 lý do trên:

Lý do 1: The first point is that

Lý do 2: Another point is that

- Ex: Idea 1: The first point is that, many pop stars don't stay famous for a long time
because the entertainment industry always changes. As a result, after working for about
one or two decades, they often get replaced by newer and more talented artists.

Idea 2: Another point is that pop music performers try hard to be good examples,
especially in public. They know they have a big influence, especially on teenagers, so
they work a lot to show a positive image. That's why it makes sense for pop music stars
to earn more money.

3. Kết bài:

In conclusion, (quan điểm của mình đã nêu ở mở bài) + 2 lý do ở body 2

- Ex: In conclusion, I suppose that pop performers should be paid with a higher salary due
to their contribution in a short period of time and their responsibility to maintain positive
images.

VI. Causes and Solution

1. Mở bài

Nhắc lại hoặc paraphrase lại đề (ưu tiên paraphrase nếu có thể) + đưa ra ý kiến

This essay will outline a number of reasons for this trend/problem and several
possible solutions to help tackle the issue. (Bài luận này sẽ đề ra một số lý do cho
xu hướng/vấn đề này và một số giải pháp khả thi để giúp giải quyết vấn đề)

My essay below will analyze both causes and feasible solutions to this problem.
(Bài viết dưới đây của tôi sẽ phân tích cả nguyên nhân và giải pháp khả thi cho
vấn đề này)
- Ex: Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number
of children play computer games. What are the negative impacts of playing computer
games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?

These days, many people have widespread access to computers, and a considerable
number of children engage in computer gaming. My essay below will analyze both
negative impacts and feasible solutions for this problem.

2. Thân bài
❖ Body 1: Đưa ra nguyên nhân
➔ Câu 1: câu chủ đề: [Đề bài] is attributed to various factors./ As (đề bài), several
related problems can be anticipated.
➔ Câu 2: nguyên nhân thứ nhất: One main cause of this issue is that … (the first
cause)/ The main issue is that ...
➔ Câu 3: giải thích cho nguyên nhân thứ nhất
➔ Câu 4: nguyên nhân thứ hai: Furthermore, … (the second cause)
➔ Câu 5: giải thích cho nguyên nhân thứ hai
- Ex: One main cause of this issue is that children often play computer games for long
periods of time, leading to a sedentary lifestyle. The appeal of rich gaming experiences
and the availability of many engaging games contribute to children spending many hours
in front of screens. Furthermore, peer pressure and social expectations also play an
important role in increasing the incidence of computer game addiction in children. In
today's connected world, children often form social connections through online gaming
communities. Fear of exclusion or missing out on shared experiences can cause children
to spend too much time playing, exacerbating the negative impact on their physical and
mental health.
❖ Body 2: Đưa ra giải pháp
➔ Câu 1: câu chủ đề: There are a number of viable(=possible) solutions to help
tackle this problem./ Since such issues are serious, the government and
individuals should take steps immediately to address these problems./To solve
this problem, appropriate solutions are needed.
➔ Câu 2: giải pháp thứ nhất: The first solution would be .../ To begin with, …
➔ Câu 3: giải thích cho giải pháp thứ nhất
➔ Câu 4: giải pháp thứ hai: In addition, …/A second measure would be ...
➔ Câu 5: giải thích cho giải pháp thứ hai
- Ex: There are a number of viable solutions to help tackle this problem. First, parents and
teachers should guide children about the benefits of outdoor sports activities.
Participating in family activities can create a positive environment that encourages
children to stay away from the computer. A second measure would be to set reasonable
time limits for playing computer games. This helps children develop time management
skills and minimize negative health effects.
 3. Kết bài

In conclusion, there are main contributors to the problem and several measures
are suggested to put an end to the situation.

In conclusion, there are various negative consequences of (đề bài) and appropriate
steps need to be taken to tackle these problems, (not only by the government but
also by individuals).

1. Some people think that mobile phones should be banned in public places
like libraries, shops and public transports. To what extent do you agree or
disagree with this statement?

2. Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign
language at primary schools rather than secondary schools. Do the
advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
3. Some say that sports play an important role in the development of society.
Others think it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views
and give your opinion.
4. There is a general increase in anti-social behaviours and lack of respect for
others. What are the causes and solutions?