Writing Task Exercise
Writing Task Exercise
To get a huge income will buy something that we can make happier
2. Having much money can get a high probability of investing in the future
3. Help poor people
Nowadays, It is often considered that having a huge income is more essential even if it is not pleasant for
us. I agree with this opinion and think that considerable wages are more necessary than work
satisfaction.
To begin with the state, I consider that the biggest aim for work at an enterprise is to get compensation,
not anymore at all. The great revenue that we received in a month can buy something that makes us
happy. Although some people argue that happiness cannot be bought with money, however only with
money so we can buy something, nothing at all. For instance, if we have a lot of earnings, we can spend
it to buy holiday trip tickets that form us cheerful. Therefore money In this case buys happiness, and it
becomes more meaningful than satisfying duties.
Furthermore, I expect that having the revenue enormously makes a higher probability to form an
investment. Owning an investment is mandatory today, due to only depending on the salary is not
enough for savings in the future. In hence, advantages of receiving huge fees much more profitable than
propitiation at work.
Finally, Having a great income, it cause we can share for the underprivileged. We as social beings have an
obligation to help others. By helping poor people our lives becomes more blessed. For example we can
set aside part of our salary to support an orphanage. Consequently, we get many rewards.
In conclusion, I believe it is wise choice for having much salaries than receiving satisfaction on job.
IELTS Writing Task 2. Sample 2
Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly
feeling under pressure.
In modern times, many learners have to work while studying, in which it can be reduce the time study
with the result that make feel exhausted. There are two main causes that probably caused that.
To begin with causes of this case, Less finance support from parents or family is the biggest reason. Many
learners are from poor family. Unfortunately most schools or universities required a lot of money for less
fortunate people. Furthermore, they spend their money not only for tuition fees but also other
expenditures for instance, living cost and health insurance, etc. Consequently they need side income to
fulfill all their needs.
Subsequently, Work experience is important to prepare the skills before get work officially. Some
enterprises required with various terms of length of work experience and there are companies that
accept without any skills, however they always prioritize applicants who have worked in their field
before.
Nevertheless, there are two solutions to answer the causes, one could hardly cast doubt on scholarship
is the key to funding the learners to comply tuition fees and also fill up their expenditures. Many funders
provide options to meet the needs of students. Moreover, most of them allow fully funded even though
with huge amounts. Accordingly, If the pupil award the scholarship, they will not wish to work for fulfill
all their expenditures.
The work experience is highly substantial to apply for a job. Most importantly, Finding the job type with
less duties is the appropriate choice. Studying while working can indeed, withal accomplish the study is
more essential. Hence, the students required to find the job that can be adapting with their study. For
instance, part time in a restaurant, department store or as content creator as well can be considered.
These maps illustrate how a region site is planned to be developed over a 10 year period. Overall, there
will be extensive developments with regards to construction of houses, facilities, and roads in the region
site, and the number of residents will also increase significantly.
In 2023, there was only a few of houses to the west and south west of the site where the McGoldrick
Road was located in right beside of the residence. There were also have farmer’s market to the north of
site. Accommodating a slight of resident altogether supported by shopping center parallel to houses and
public park. There were also Griffiths farm and Hoolahan farm which is located in the northeast at the
map and the latter to east of the area.
There are plans to increase the number of residents served by the residence is by 500 in 2033. As a
result, a new range of residences will replace the stores, and row of the residence are going to be
continued along the residential line of the map. The farmer’s market will be demolished, however the
roundabout will be added at the cross of McGoldrick Road and That street. The griffiths farm will
replaced by supermarket as a substitute for existing shops. In addition, Hoolahan farm and open field will
changed by car park and the latter by sports center. Nevertheless, the public park will remain stay.
These maps illustrate how a region site is planned to be developed over a 10 year period. Overall, there
will be extensive developments with regards to construction of houses, facilities, and roads in the region
site, and the number of residents will also increase significantly.
In present time/ now , there are only a few of houses to the west and south west of the site where the
McGoldrick Road is located in the right beside of the residence. There also have farmer’s market to the
north of site. Accommodating a slight of residence altogether supported by a shopping center parallel to
houses and a public park. There is also Griffiths farm and Hoolahan farm which is located in the
northeast at the map and the latter to east of the area.
There are plans to increase the number of residents served by the residence will have been increased by
500 lives in 2033. As a result, a new range of residences will replace the stores, and rows of the
residence are going to be continued along the residential line of the map. The farmer’s market will be
demolished, however the roundabout will be added at the cross of McGoldrick Road and That street.
The griffiths farm will be replaced by supermarket as a substitute for existing shops. In addition,
Hoolahan farm and open field will be altered by a car park and the latter by a sport center. Nevertheless,
the public park will remain the same/ unchanged.
IELTS Writing Task 1
The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years
The two pie charts provide information about how different resources sectors contributed to the energy
production percentagewise of France in the years 1995 and 2005. Overall, all resources increased
percentages except petrol. At the beginning of the period the highest contributed to energy production
of France was coal, gas, and petrol, while the petrol resource became the second largest followed by
nuclear and other resources.
Coal, gas, and petrol sector accounted for around 29 percent of France’s energy in 1995. Coal and gas
sector experienced a slight increase to approximately 30 percent in 2005. Energy resources from nuclear
was 6 % in 1995 and had a threefold increase to one-tenth in 2005. At the beginning of survey, the other
resources made up slightly above 5 % of France’s resources, and these fithe gures rose nearly doubled
(9%) in 2005.
However,
Petrol sector, which comprised almost one-third of France’s resources in 1995, fell to 19% in 2005.
Agree: 1. Requires the experience/ skill
2. We must focus to our target
It is considered that choosing the career path immediately in life and never alter it in the future is the
best way to become a successful professional. Although the finest method to be a successful
professional is selecting a career shortly and never switch it forthcoming, I think consideration about the
career path need time before decide it clearly and sometime can shift to the other field.
On the one hand, In becoming a successful professional requires a lot of skills. The experience can is
obtained from the many hours of work and often do it. The more often we do it, accordingly more
shrewd in our line of work. Because of need sufficient process and time to gain the experience,
therefore, career selection required from an early age. Moreover, Focus on goal is important. Sometimes
we can not concentrate to our achievement due to laziness or distract from surrounding environment.
Hence, in a career never be affected by anything, stay focused on achieving a target to become a
succsessful specialist.
On the other hand, To become a successful profesional, a lot of knowledge is needed. In career selection
is required educational background consideration. Skills and experience are still not enough to become a
specialist, but acknowledgement is also essential. As the education takes time. Consequently, to chose a
career path do not have to rush. It’s better to prepare it first by honing the knowledge before choosing
the career path. In addition, In the middle of career can be stopped because of something. For instance,
health, family, and environmental factors, etc. We can not push our dream if the conditions are not
supported.
In conclusion, personally I agree that, becoming a successful profesional, it will be better to choose the
career path rapidly and focus on the goal. Nevertheless, education is important before deciding on a
career and we can not force ourselves due to something
It is considered that choosing the career path immediately in life and never altering it in
the future is the best way to become a successful professional. Although the finest
method to be a successful professional is to select a career quickly and never switch it
needs, I think consideration about the career path needs time before deciding it clearly
and it can shift to the other field.
On the one hand, becoming a successful professional requires a lot of skills. Experience
can be obtained from the many hours of work and doing it. The more often we do it, the
more shrewd in our line of work. Because they need sufficient processes and time to
gain experience, therefore, career selection is required from an early age. Moreover,
focusing on goals is important. Sometimes we can not concentrate on our achievements
due to laziness or distraction from the surrounding environment. Hence, in a career
never being affected by anything, stay focused on achieving a target to become a
successful specialist.
Overall, the peak of vegan people’ percentage was in 2016, while the lowest point was
before 2014 over the period.
Woman was the most dominating throughout the survey. During 2011 – 2013 its annual
percentage of vegan remained constatnt at about 20 percent per year. However, the
figure started inclined rapidly in 2014 reached at 28 percent. Following this, the
women’s graph increased until 2016 and reached it’s the highest point of about 36
percent before fall in 2017 (30 percent).
The man’s graph was the second most considerable percentage over the period during
the survey. The man’s percentage stood at 17 percent in 2011, and experienced a
gradual surge unti the end of survey reached slightly over 25 percent. However the
children domination was the least percentage, its reached 10 percent in the beginning of
survey and experienced a small soar at approxiametly slighlty below 15 percent and
remained unchanged the following the year until the end of survey
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of five substantial expenses categories in the
US, Canada, the UK, and Japan in 2009.
Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that housing, food, and
transportation were the most significant fields for spending of 5 major items in nearly all
countries. While health care and clothing categories had smaller percentages of the
survey.
Expenditure on food ranged from a low of 14% in the US to a high of 22% for Japan,
with Canada (15%) and the UK (21%) in between. Transportation costs represented
Canada was the biggest one stood at 20%, just above the US at 19% while the UK and
Japan were lower at 15% and 10 % respectively.
The figures were more various for healthcare, as the US at 8%, while the UK at 2%.
Canada and Japan were just slightly under 5%. The last item category (clothing) was
similar percentage-wise around 5% in all countries.
The line graph illustrates the different average expenses between on cell phone and
lane phone services in the years 2001 and 2010. Units are measured in dollars.
Overall, the figure of cell phone increased over the period given, while for lane phone, it
declined. At the start of the period, lane phone was more popular of phone services,
stood at almost 700 dollars, and experienced a considerable growth until reached 400
dollars in 2010. However, the cell phone
Causes:
1. Don’t have sufficient / adequate / enough money to pay for the tuition fees and
also monthly expenses.
2. Demanded to get experience before getting the job
Solution:
1. Find out the fully-funded scholarship
2. Telling to the leader the situation and don’t hesitate to leave the job if it can
generate negative effects for the education.
A large number of students do not have leisure time and get burnout experience
while studying. This is mainly because of lack of funds for tuition fees and monthly
expenses, also demanded to have working experience before really starting to work at
some companies. There are a number of solutions which should be implemented to
deal with lacking time and feel burden.
First and foremost, the reason for students have to work when studying because
they cannot fulfil the monthly expenses. In other words, most pupils that who must
having extra-income due to lack of funding source or do not receive scholarship.
However, there are also pupils have a desire to get something expensive to satisfying
life although having scholarship. Secondly, most company in several fields require
candidates having the work experience. In some expertise, work experience is needed.
For instance mechanic, enormous important to have enough experience to become
proficient there.
There are two effective solutions to the problem of inadequate of time for
studying and get mental-health illness. One way to tackle this is finding the funder which
able to finance not only tuition fees but also annual expenses. By getting fully-funded
scholarship, it will help to guarantee throughout the study. Another method of dealing
with burnout is telling to the team leader the situation. It will gain the student’s
confidence also giving serenity condition through working and studying. Therefore, it
reduce the pressure and spared from burnout. In addition, do not hesitate to leave the
job if it can generate negative effects. Because of that it has bad impact not only in
studies but also in all aspects.
In conclusion, having fully-funded scholarship and also telling the truth condition
to team leader for those who have a job are released are effective with the issue. If
pupils implemented these solutions, lacking of time and getting burnout would soon
unavoidable.
The diagram represents stages involved in the process of aluminium can recycle.
Overall there are seven stages, starting from the dumping of used cans by households,
ending up with the reusing of the recycled alumunium cans.
The process begins when the thrown away used cans that are the trash cans are
collected by the garbage trucks , from here all of them cans are cleaned, grouped
/sorted based on their sizes or types, and frazzled/shredded by machines following this,
the shredded cans are heated and melted in the pot . the heat could reach up to certain
degrees. In the next stage the melted alumunium is shaped and formed into rolled
sheets of alumunium , the size is ranging from … to ,after undergoing this, the sheets
are shaped and moulded into different kinds of alumunium can products, then the ready
to use alumunium cans are finally returned to the market as a various kinds of
beverages and food containers.
In education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some
people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard?
Causes:
1. Totality-work is required to getting the achievement. Everybody obviously have
aim in life.
2. Hard working making people enthusiastic. Make every day easier to live
Negative impact:
1. Hard-working person can exploited by irresponsible people.
2.
It is argued that working harder in a company or a school is always a good behaviour, and
some people consider to do that. From my perspective, through giving more effort in daily
job at work than others, those people have a number of advantages. In several cases,
dedicating more to line of work becomes something you should be pursuing off
First of all, by working hard, it allows us to be more enthusiastic in performing our daily
tasks. This can lead people to acquire easier life in living the day. In other words, as inner
motivation is required to achieve happier life. In fact, a research conducted an Austrian
scientist declared that people who have enthusiasm, life will tend to be more cheerful.
Another reason for why totality in work is required to achieve the goals. That is to say,
without passion in life, it will not be possible to achieve success. Almost all successful
people are persistent at work. As well as education, apparently it is impossible for someone
to excel in school without hard work. Moreover, almost all companies or agencies require us
to be highly motivated in the duties in order to get best outcome. Besides, even dismissal
might occur by a number of companies to whom who do not be in engagement to the target
achievement.
While, working hard is not always a good thing. It can be self-defeating. It is obvious that a
good company will have a good working environment. In which, those people who have an
excellent personality have been verified by acceptance selection. However, excellent people
could be exploited by a few of people even in the first-rate corporation. In other words, this
occurrence is unavoidable. Therefore, being aware to circumstance be required.
In 1981, Butter utilization were the highest of all 3 categories at approximately 140, and Margarine usage
stood at 90. By first of years, the figure of butter increased at around 160 in 1986. However, this upward
trend suddenly experienced an enormous decline and hit 70 grams in a decade. This was followed by
another decrease, although not much steeper in 2007. In comparison, Margarine tend to fluctuated
throughout the survey in range 70 – 90 grams. While, Low fat & reduced spreads was established in
1996. They stood at 10 grams and saw a significant increase and reach the peak level at around 80 grams
before dropped to 70 grams in the end of survey.
Give your opinion Conventional way of working, by coming to the office seems to be out of date
In my perspective, online method is the best way to deal with current development
Three reasons convince me that online method will simplify the way of how work in a corporation.
In the first place, online method create / has created work from anywhere culture. In which, employees
acquire such a big relief to whom have a remote job.
Taken as an example, teenagers who have the job that require lots visits to places of work will get
difficulty in daily working. It is better to give them the ethereality with utilisation of the technology.
Worker need time to travel to the office. Sometimes, many workers have an enormous distance from the
office. Working time has become increase due to accrue of travel time. By reason of everyone needs
sufficient rest, it is impossible for someone to get enough time for their duties.
Finally, staffs of offices who attain online method in a company implied will be more effective to exploit
the working.
Annual leave is often a matter of debate in the present. As applying work from anywhere, employee can
get on working at the same time enjoy vacation. Accordingly, it will reduce burdens.
In conclusion, I consider that in utilization of online method provides positive impacts. The company that
cannot provide the employees to work remote, would be considered unwise.
Main reason: 1. Increasing income to local people and government by paying tax from tourist
2. Presenting national culture considerably to overseas
Consequences: 1. Places that many visitor by tourist tend to dirty and environmental damage can occur
One thing that significantly has contributed a major effect is Immigration. In my perspective, excursion /
tourist attraction is the primary argument why a country has an enormous number of immigrants. There
is the major affect declining the number of immigration. As well there are many possibilities that can
occur that cause a higher rate of immigrant people in one country.
The countries which have several beautiful places are the most factor to attract tourists to visit. Having a
number of panoramas like the beaches and mountains equipped with adequate facilities becomes the
most favourite tourist destination. In which it will increase the number of immigration within a country.
Indeed there are many effects resulted by the enhancement of migration. In the first place, having higher
tourism in country is increasing the national income of local people and the government which is
acquired from tax payments of tourists. It is undebatable that the huge of country’s income comes from
tax.
Another impact, increasing immigration rates will expand the recognition of country’s civilization
considerably to overseas. In the other word, lots of tourists in one country are able to present the
national culture for those that have visited the country. By this way, Culture of a country can be known
by people around the world.
Nevertheless, although tourism have several advantageous impacts, it also has the disadvantages/some
less beneficial impact that might occur. The most common issue that be found is poor environment
which country have the high-rates of migration. By increasing the number of visitors, in the same way
gaining the amount of rubbish that can damaging biosphere. The effect of environmental damage from
fully-waste region cannot be evaded. Accordingly, implementing of waste management is important.
In conclusion, it can be known that declining the number of immigration acquire positive effects such as
increasing local income and expanding nation culture. However, superintendence of rubbish be required
to prevent the environmental damage.
The table shows how the student for those having age below 26 acquired funders for their tuition fees and monthly
expenses in the UK in the years 2008/9 and 2018/19. Overall, the sum up for all resources fluctuate gradually years
by the years. Units are measured by Euro.
In 2008/9, Two most significant funders are from and parental contribution and grant. Stood at 38 euro and 32 euro
in sequentially. While, the least contribute for student’s income from student which no have income from there.
Although student loan does not contribute for the first year of period, they experienced a rise gradually until reach
24 euro in 2018/19. However, the amount of parental contribution decline over the period until reach 16 euro.
Both earnings and other run into a slightly fluctuate with the peak point is 14 euro in 2015/16 and the latter 34
euro in the end of survey. Following this, resulting the total of students income undergo kind of fluctuate with the
highest amount is 5575 euro in the end of period survey.
In some parts of the world, traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. Why is this
happening? What measures could be taken to ensure they do not disappear?
Why: 1. It doesn’t relate to the condition at present. Which have been more modern technology therefore
resulting different culture. Taken as example, Kids used to celebrate their graduate are going to festivals with their
peers, today major of students replace it by watching to movies or 4D cinema.
3. Lack of places that provide the conventional exhibition. old exhibition require lots of space
Solution: Today’s children should be given a recognition of culture. For instance, not only major subject
that given to students, but also the acknowledge of the national culture as how the youth’s nation used to
celebrate in the past to invest cultural value in which beneficial related to face challenges in this current
life
Disappearance of conventional exhibitions and ceremony are gradually extinct in a number of countries in the
world in the present. There are several causes that might affect the changing of culture between in the past and
the present.
First of all, the major reason that can be occurred is lack of places that the conventional exhibitions. The old
festivals require lots of space. It can occur because the elderly era still has enough space. Impossible to implement
the old exhibition recently due to increasing the number of individuals in the world. Therefore, it is difficult to
acquire the adequate of room.
Secondly, the condition at the old era does not relate with at the present. The olden period/ term tend to made the
ceremonial with the conventional tools. It can be seen a huge different that in present have been more modern
technology. Accordingly, differential of culture will occur. Taken as example, Kids used to celebrate their graduate
are going to festivals with their peers, today major of students replace it by watching to movies or 4D cinema.
As a consequence of the changing of culture, there is a way solution to keep the culture for making the celebration
or exhibitions. First and foremost, Today’s children should be given a recognition of culture. For instance, not only
major subject that given to students, but also the acknowledge of the national culture as how the youth’s nation
celebrate in the past to invest cultural value in which beneficial related to face challenges in this current life.
The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday
resort in Australia.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and
make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the percentage of visitors (who took) vacation in Australia by a
number of continents (Asia, Europe, US, and other). While, the table shows how tourists
spend (spent) their holiday in Australia from all parts of the world.
Overall, the biggest contribute (contribution) for Australian tourism were from Asian
people.
In which stretched by length of stay, popular accommodation, and main activity
categories.
Regarding the table, the most significant contributing in number of Australian visitors
were from Asia, accounted for 37%. While, US are the least percentage of tourist in
Australia.
In terms of the length of stay, the longest days for (be) being on vacation were from
European people (16 days). Yet, the most concise time were from Asian with 7 days
long time. However, the most attractive for living accommodation was camping or
caravan with European tourists and other regions. Nevertheless, the major common
activity was sightseeing from Asian and US visitors
More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people suggest
that the solution to this problem is to increase the price of fattening foods. To
what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the present, many people becomes (have become / are becoming / become) aware about
healthy food to avoid the overweight matter. It consider (is considered) (the higher) the price is
the greater the solution to prevent this problem. There are the advantages and disadvantageous
of increasing the price of the fattening foods.
The main factor to get obesity are from junk food and other food that harms and gaining the
weight of our body. Many food that contains carbohydrate and much calories generate more fat
and tend to get problem with body weight or obesity. By increasing the price of high-
carbohydrate food, it will decreasing (decrease) a desire in buying. People obviously consider to
spending money to fulfil their daily needs. Taken as example, if the normal price some of junk
foods at 100 dollars and it gets a doubled to 200 dollars, therefore people tend to spend their
money to the other things that have more value.
Nevertheless, an increasing the cost of a fattening food also have some drawbacks too. Firstly,
the company or private-worker that rely on selling this product can affect to their profit.
Although the company get higher margin, it has possibilities to get lower income than before.
Moreover, Because of decreasing demand of this product, it also influence (influence) the rate
consumer of the other foods at the same time. For Instance, people who used to bought some
burger as a meal in every day, it (is) replaced by food that contains more vegetables. Naturally,
the demand of vegetables will rise gradually and a number of people can change to vegan.
To conclude, the popularity of overweight matter can (be overcome) overcome by increasing
the cost of the product (products) that contain high-carbohydrate and fat. However, it can also
decreasing (decrease) the profit of enterprises that only rely on selling this product. Giving
healthy food education rather than increasing price (of) the product, it will be (a) wise solution
to prevent this problem.
Writing Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five
countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007.
Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and
making comparisons where appropriate.
The diagram compares how the difference on sale magazine in five countries in the years 2003 and 2007.
Units are measured by sold per person.
Overall, the biggest sale of five countries is country B for all year period survey. While, the least number
of sales is in country E.
The sale magazine trend of country B, A, and C declined year by the year, stood at 50, 49, 39 persons at
2003 and reached 45, 42, 35 persons by the end of survey (2007) after dropped to 47, 44, 35 persons in
2005 respectively. In contrast, country D experienced considerably increase, the graph was initially at 19
persons in 2003 and reached approximately over 22 persons in 2007 after the graph grew at 20 persons
in the middle of period (2005). However, in terms on country C saw a fluctuated trends. The graph was
originally 5 persons and rose until reached around 7 persons in 2007 before fell to same level with the
first period (2003).
Writing Task 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old
buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To
what extent do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
It is considered to make the new building rather than renovating. There are 2 main reasons why
the building should construct the new one. However, the cost problem is considerable of this
case.
Constructing the new building will make a new place that acquires more function through all
rooms and spaces. Many buildings are designed to support the needs of buildings, such as
offices, supermarkets, or hotels. But sometimes, the function of the building changes with time.
Therefore, instead of much renovation, which takes a long time is better to build a new building
that provides the main function of its building. In addition, constructing new buildings tends to
acquire more comfortable than old buildings that have been renovated. Many improvements
that are given, it will make getting weirder of the building. Taken as an example, the building has
been renovated to be a restaurant before the hotel. The building characteristic of the hotel is
having many partitions. Accordingly interior around the walls has many marks from used
partitions. The marks obviously make the building not comfortable.
On the other side, constructing a new building takes much money and normally needs more
rather than renovating. The conditions are better to renovate rather than to construct new
buildings if only minor changes that need or only a few improvements to repair the building. In
terms of constructing the new building, not only creates the new building but also has to
demolish the old’s one. The cost of demolishing a building is relatively equal to constructing a
new building. In other words, building a new modern building takes cost doubled. Hence, taking
renovation is more economical rather than creating the new one.
In conclusion, changing the function of a building, it depends on the condition and how far the
changing affects the cost. If the building has to change, the major function is better to build a
new one that acquires more function and is comfortable. But if only needs a few changes, taking
renovation would be wise.
Writing Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and
make comparisons where relevant.
The two line graphs show the connection between the percentage of punctuality and customer
satisfaction from a bus company in the years 1999 and 2003. Units are measured by percentage
and per thousand passenger's journeys.
Overall, the actual percentage was below target through almost the survey period. Following
this, the satisfaction number relatively increased year by year.
The first line graph shows the target percentage experienced a gradual decrease over the period
survey. Stood at 86% in 1999 until 2000 and become the highest target percentage before 2001
until 2003 (85%). While the actual percentage stood at 85% in 1999 as well as the peak of
period survey. In contrast, the lowest actual percentage was recorded at 82% in 2000. While,
the punctuality percentage on actual was fluctuated by the year 2001 and 2002 reached 84.5%,
84%, and 84.9% respectively.
In terms of satisfaction number, the number of satisfaction customer relatively increased. Stood
at approximately 70 in 1999 and gradually surged to 100 in the middle year of period survey
before declined to around 82. After experienced a fluctuate trends, the complaints number
soared to 110 in 2022. Followed this, the up trends continue grew until reached 120 in the end
period survey.
Writing Task 2
At present, many students experience struggling with their concentration in school. Two
significant factors affect students’ education, and there are two solutions to prevent this issue.
First of all, Lack of support from parents and the environment. The parent is the first important
factor for a student's educational growth. Many pupils spend their time with family or their
surroundings. Furthermore, the initial education from the students is from parents. Therefore
all consequences like decreasing marks in school are responsible by their internal, in this case, a
parent. Moreover, many students also are affected by their surroundings, such as friends. The
quality of their school can determine students' behaviour. This can occur because students tend
to alter their friends. Taken as an example, students may be lazy and not focus because their
peers are addicted to video games etc.
Secondly, finance may be the root of the problem. Many students can not fulfil their
expenditures in a month. Few students have a scholarship, and many struggle to acquire their
daily needs. To fulfil their daily needs, They suppose to have a side job. This can be a problem
due to the lack of resting time. Hence, they can not focus on their school.
However, the two significant problems can be solved by providing education to each parent in
controlling education fields, and the second is giving more scholarships and gaining the amount
of scholarship also provides their fundamental’s needs such as dormitory and a monthly
allowance. Expect both of these solutions can increase the quality of education in preventing
lack of focus at school
Writing task 1
Writing task 2
It is argue that switching off the stores by e commerce has several impacts both negative and
positive development. There are 2 reasons and weaknesses public to shopping by online rather
than go to the store directly.
In the first place, shopping by online ways can short the time while shopping because we do not
have to go to stores directly that it takes a lot of time rather than just click on the phone.
Secondly, the things that we want to buy, we can find it just swipe on our gadget without
walking around the sopping center.
However, delivery time is considerable needed by online shopping. All e commerce obviously
involve with courier expedition to send the product to consume. It also takes a time depend on
the distance of expedition. In this case, the distance of the online store origins to consumer's
house. Not only determined by distance, but also item categories. It means consider to volumes
and weights. Taken as an example, if the items that we want to buy is like vacuum cleaner, that
is different time with just phone accessories. Because of the higher volumes and weights of
vacuum cleaner, it will takes more days. Moreover, by online shopping we can not check the
unit like touching, smelling, and make comparison with others directly. It can be negative
impacts. For instance, we can not smells parfume and compare with others
In conclusion, I think that the emergence of online shopping that can replace the on site store
have more positive than negative development because on both sectors have own specialize. It
depends to what the things that we want to buy. Besides, technology advances have to utilized
to simplify in life.
Writing task 1
Writing task 2
In some countries today, people are having their first child when they
are older. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages of this
development outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from
your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
Writing Task 1
Writing Task 2
In the first place, the main factor in acquiring our goals is our spirit to make it comes true. Many
successful people never succeeded by luck but by hard work. In cases like this, we can learn
from a scientist like Thomas Alfa Edison. He can make light through a thousand experiments.
Although he got a lot of failures, he never stops tried to make another way to pursue his
dreams.
Secondly, making dream comes true is also influenced by chance. A big goal can be achieved
because of the opportunity. People can make many plans to achieve their aims, but only one
chance they can acquire the goal. The meaning of chance is different from luck. Opportunity
means we have effort inside, but luck is not. In other words, people who want to acquire their
goals having effort is required.
Thirdly, there never was the existence of luck with achieving our goals. Perhaps we get luck from
our daily like saving from accidents or winning games. But, It is different when pursuing our
achievement. The existence of luck only exists in a game.
In conclusion, Only the spirit and hard-working people can achieve the aim. In my opinion, only
a few people can achieve their aims by luck, and I think is omitted in the calculations in pursuing
the goal.
Writing task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram explains the way in which cheeses are made and distributed for store sales.
Overall, the process consists of nine stages, beginning with raw milk and ending up with
distributed-to-store sales.
First of all, raw milk and bacteria are combined and acidified by tenzyme in a closed barrel to
serve as cube curds for cheese production. After that, the curds are solidified, and it is cut to
acquire the small pieces. The small curds are heated and drained in a pan resulting in liquid
form that fills the surface of the bowl. Next, the liquid is added a few of salt. In the next stage,
the mixing liquid is shaped by a mould which is placed on the mat. Following this, the shape
proceeds to ferment in a rack within 2 months until the fermented cheese produces smells
before being packaged by a box cartoon and finally, the boxes full of cheese are delivered to
shops for sale.
The maps illustrate changes in Meadow Side Village over a half-century from 1962 to 2023. In
summary, In over 60 years, the village has experienced major changes, transforming it from a
small Meadowside and Fonton village to an industrial suburb merged together.
In 1962, both meadowside and Fonton were completely separate with no roads or rail
connecting them. While Fonton had a railway line running through it to the north. Meadowside,
located to the west of Fonton, only had a small road from the west.
By 1985, there was a considerable growth in the size of Meadowside village and Fonton. The
small road in Meadowside village had been converted into a main road and was also extended
to the east to connect with Fonton. Moreover, Meadowside had also developed a housing
estate in the west, a leisure complex and supermarket in the south.
Currently, both Meadowside, which is now a suburb, and Fonton are joined. The railway line,
which runs through Fonton, has been extended to the west where a train station has been built.
To the north of the station, a hotel has been constructed and opposite the station, to the south,
there is now a business park