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caught up on a few prompts, here are my entries for the past 2~! https://8ballbice.neocities.org/muse
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ryomakesthings
2 months ago
I love how precise and visceral the descriptions of june 11th are, they make the poem feel very much live. I also adore june 17th, there is something almost brutal in how short it is and how much it leaves open to the viewer. great job!
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8ballbice
2 months ago
thank u for reading ryo, it rlly warms my heart to hear ur perspectives! ;__; <3
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is ur button busted? or is it just for me ?? i cannot see it anymore
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8ballbice
2 months ago
oh gosh you're right! it is... i haven't been on in a few days sorry, i'll try to fix it!!
my fill for this weeks prompt,! https://8ballbice.neocities.org/muse
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ryomakesthings
3 months ago
I absolutely love your vocabulary and the imagery you paint through it, very evocative!
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manyface
3 months ago
wow, this was so cool and visceral and interesting to read... your word choices are sublime!!! - j
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my fill for this week https://8ballbice.neocities.org/muse !
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ryomakesthings
3 months ago
I really like the contrast between the reverent tone of the piece and the visceral imagery scattered throughout, I think it works really well!
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right there with u brotherrrrrrr 🙂↕️