I really like that Ravy and Kavir are in an established relationship (or that's what it seems like to me at least) at the start of the game and somewhat intimate at that, a nice change of pace from other vns.
Nobody knows, he made some tweets about his situation then just dipped, there were plans for the next update too. I really hope he's okay, where ever he is.
The supernatural elements would not fit the game at all if you had planted the seeds for it during the first few days sure it might work, but you didn't or if there were they were extremely subtle. I'm sorry if this sounds harsh but that's why you should always plan a good portion of your story before making it, it feels like you've just been winging it up until this point.
It's good that you didn't force the update out and really thought about it, I'm sure the game benefited a lot from this decision in the long run. And the supernatural thing doesn't have to be thrown out completely, maybe have it as a fun Halloween special along the line or make a different game with those ideas and characters.
Wouldn't scanning it be the best way to understand it and figure out what's it's doing that causes such a reaction so they can better handle it. If Byte couldn't do anything during the panic attack he should have made that more clear, or maybe come up with a plan (dulling all of our senses maybe) or discuss it shortly and say they shouldn't mess with it unless Loken said so than just outright ignore it completely.
Imo, it wouldn't cause any pacing issues, it's just figuring out what the Demons are doing to us, it can still be made ambiguous if it's magic, science or whatever.
It might be intentional because the file name of the game is different each update, Renpy is kinda annoying sometimes with updating games so it's completely understandable.
You can manually transfer the saves from one update to another pretty easily anyways.
Decent game so far, the English translation is pretty bad. Do you just use Google Translate for the translation? You should think about getting someone to proofread and translate it properly.
That was.. one of the stupidest things I've read, and I enjoyed it more than 60% of the other stupid shit I've read I also cackled so A for effort and a good job, now go lick grass or whatever you kids say.
I just saw the retweet on Shirokoi's Twitter of Malus concept art and I find it so funny he's just a noodle now, I'm sure he'll get his glow up someday but I still want him to stay a cute little noodle
I just played through the game and I have to say wow, this is one of the most unique furry visual novels to come out in a while. The art is great, I really like your use of color it really makes the characters pop out in contrast to the background. The story is very interesting, I have to say the pacing did feel a bit rushed but that's understandable considering you had to cut a good chunk of the story due to the workload. The music is really nice, the heavily auto-tuned voice that plays during the main menu is a nice touch.
I notice that you used some Vietnamese words, like Dawn's last name is Sun Bears in Vietnamese and some other names sound viet to me, nothing noteworthy I just thought it's kinda cool as Vietnamese myself.
