Editorial - WebDev SC Updates #104
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Thanks for this huge update, it's clearly improved readability and nice to see things tidied up, great work!
I've added a number of comments, including some to drop criteria (sorry, hope that's okay in this stage still).
I saw the JSON before the HTML and added my comments there, can readd them to only the HTML if that's helpful.
One comment that I didn't find in the changeset; under goals of web development section, the first is:
Optimize code for accessibility, performance, security, and other impact targets.
I agree everyone should optimize for those things, but other than performance, I don't see how they map to what web developers can do about sustainability so would suggest to only performance here, or say something like “Optimize code for sustainability impact targets.”
This contains the editorial updates for the Web Development Success Criteria of the spec.
Some corrective changes from the original intent were made but these appear to be non-destructive and improve the quality and rationale behind the SC. Those of note are listed below:
Lead editorial credit: @codewordcreative
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Further changes will likely be made/required to this content to ensure it meets measurability criteria, etc.
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