[IMP] Fleet: Update accidents #13372
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Hi @slinkous - this is ready for a peer review. |
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Hi @Felicious - this is ready for a final review =) |
| Odoo's *Fleet* app offers multiple ways to track accidents. Below are step-by-step instructions for | ||
| only **one** method to monitor accidents and repair costs. | ||
| Odoo's **Fleet** app offers multiple ways to track accidents. Below are step-by-step instructions | ||
| for one possible method to monitor accidents and repair costs. | ||
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In line 14, let's add details on how to get to the service form (: (I had to click 2 links to figure out where to go)
For this use case, go to :menuselection:
Fleet app --> Fleet --> Services, and on the :ref:service form <link to the section you have in the services doc>. Two :ref:service types <fleet/new-type>are created:
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Can't comment but on line 17:
Slight mix-up on grammar (tense):
This tracks various repairs associated with accidents, organized by who was at fault.
Let's change it to:
This setup records repairs associated with accidents and organizes them by fault.
| Odoo's *Fleet* app offers multiple ways to track accidents. Below are step-by-step instructions for | ||
| only **one** method to monitor accidents and repair costs. | ||
| Odoo's **Fleet** app offers multiple ways to track accidents. Below are step-by-step instructions | ||
| for one possible method to monitor accidents and repair costs. | ||
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This structure section is helpful for explaining how things are organized in Odoo while keeping this doc short, as this is covered in other docs. Good job!
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| When managing a fleet, accidents are inevitable. Tracking accidents is crucial for understanding | |||
| vehicle maintenance costs and identifying safe drivers. | |||
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| Odoo's *Fleet* app offers multiple ways to track accidents. Below are step-by-step instructions for | |||
| only **one** method to monitor accidents and repair costs. | |||
| Odoo's **Fleet** app offers multiple ways to track accidents. Below are step-by-step instructions | |||
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| Odoo's **Fleet** app offers multiple ways to track accidents. Below are step-by-step instructions | |
| Odoo's **Fleet** app offers multiple ways of tracking accidents. Below are step-by-step instructions |
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| To manage accidents, the creation of service records is **required**. | |||
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| Refer to the :doc:`service` documentation for detailed instructions on creating service records | |||
| in Odoo's *Fleet* app. | |||
| in Odoo's **Fleet** app. | |||
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| Log accidents and repairs | |||
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Line 35, i think we have an extra comma: "To log an accident and initiate the repair process,"
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Line 41: slight rewording for parallelism (:
"recommended to keep the Notes field identical, as well as attaching …” --> "recommended to keep the Notes field identical and attach …"
| In this example, there are six accidents where the driver was at fault, and four accidents that | ||
| were not the driver's fault. This dashboard also displays the estimated total :guilabel:`Cost` | ||
| for all the accidents in each group. | ||
| In this example, there are three accidents where the driver was at fault, and one accidents that |
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| In this example, there are three accidents where the driver was at fault, and one accidents that | |
| In this example, there are three accidents where the driver was at fault, and one accident that |
Updating to new standards