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📝 WalkthroughWalkthroughThe documentation for the Met Office integration was expanded with detailed information about the DataHub API and datapoint-python library, clarified prerequisites regarding API call limits, added a parameter table, restructured entity descriptions into Weather and Sensor subsections, and introduced a section on integration removal. No code or public entity declarations were modified. Changes
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21-22: Clarify and align documentation style for API details.Consider adding “the” before “DataHub API documentation” for consistency with HA docs style:
- Details about the API are available in the [DataHub API documentation](…). + Details about the API are available in the [the DataHub API documentation](…).
26-26: Add missing article in prerequisites.Insert “The” to improve readability:
- Free tier subscription gives 360 calls per day… + The free tier subscription gives 360 calls per day…
30-35: Refine table headers to match Home Assistant conventions.HA docs generally use “Option” and “Description” rather than “Parameter” and “Value”:
| Parameter | Value | | :-------- | :---------------------- |→
| Option | Description | | :-------- | :---------------------- |
38-43: Improve entity section clarity.
- Rename header to “### Weather Entity” for specificity.
- Either replace the
<integration name>placeholder withmetofficeor explicitly call out that it’s a placeholder.
44-47: Use plural form for sensor section heading.Change “### Sensor” → “### Sensors” to align with the list of multiple sensors below.
48-61: Optimize sensor table ordering and consistency.
- Consider ordering sensors alphabetically or by importance (e.g., temperature first).
- Ensure units (e.g., “%”) are consistently formatted across humidity and precipitation entries.
62-64: Eliminate redundant phrasing.Simplify the sentence:
- Entity IDs follow the following format: + Entity IDs use the format:
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Context: ...ecific) dataset to obtain your API key. Free tier subscription gives 360 calls per d...
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26-26: Add missing article for grammatical correctness
Insert “The” before “free tier subscription” to improve readability:- Free tier subscription gives 360 calls per day, which is enough to use this integration for one weather site. + The free tier subscription gives 360 calls per day, which is enough to use this integration for one weather site.
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21-22: Approve: Added DataHub API and Python client links
This directs users to the official DataHub API docs and datapoint-python library for implementation details.
30-35: Approve: Configuration option table
The new table clearly outlines the required parameters and descriptions.
38-38: Approve: Weather subsection header
Consistent with other integrations, the “Weather” subsection is well-placed.
40-42: Approve: Weather entity table
The table clearly presents the weather entity ID format and available forecasts.
44-44: Approve: Sensor subsection header
The header aligns with the overall structure and follows documentation standards.
46-46: Approve: Sensor introduction line
This line effectively explains that individual sensors are created for each condition.
48-60: Approve: Sensor conditions table
Comprehensive list of sensor entities with descriptions and default state.
62-62: Approve: Entity ID format note
Clear guidance on sensor entity ID formatting.
64-64: Approve: Example ID snippet
The c 8000 ode snippet clearly illustrates the naming convention.
| Details about the API are available in the [DataHub API documentation](https://datahub.metoffice.gov.uk/docs/f/category/site-specific/overview). The [datapoint-python](https://github.com/EJEP/datapoint-python) library is used to retrieve data. | ||
| | Condition | Description | Enabled by default | | ||
| | :----------------------- | :------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ | ------------------ | | ||
| | `weather` | [Weather condition](https://developers.home-assistant.io/docs/core/entity/weather/#recommended-values-for-state-and-condition). | Yes | |
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- avoid tables and use lists instead.
- Please use the sensor name as it is displayed in the UI, not in YAML
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