edited multipath text for clarity (tech writer) #155
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Text changes LGTM but not sure on procedure for acceptance/landing so am leaving that to Sally. |
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Thanks for your improvements to this page, @thornshadow99. I really love the re-organisation you did, I think it makes a lot of sense and gives the whole page a much more logical flow. Overall this is a really great change.
I did spot a couple of nits, and you'll need to take a look at the table because it's not rendering correctly in the preview (I think I spotted why, I left comments inline).
change suggested by @s-makin Co-authored-by: Sally <sally.makin@canonical.com>
Made changes as requested by @s-makin (one reversion and a change to a table).
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Responded to @s-makin requests for changes--one revision and a modification to the header.
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Thanks @thornshadow99 for making the requested changes, the table is now rendering correctly in the preview and all looks great :) thanks for your work on this page, it's much better organised now and flows way more cleanly
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Per Open Documentation Academy #162, edited text for clarity
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