Edited text for clarity #146
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Thank you @thornshadow99 for the very detailed and comprehensive review of this page! Overall I really like the changes you proposed, I think they do add a lot of clarity and your restructuring makes a lot of sense - actually I'd love to go even further with that, and have made one or two suggestions of other things we could move around (see below).
I also spotted a few opportunities for further consolidation - let me know what you think!
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@s-makin So how do I go back and make changes? Do I select the "convert to draft" command? And how do I revert changes? (Pardon if this applies to the other pull request as well). |
Hi @thornshadow99, I can't seem to see the changes you made, but your branch says it's got commits. If you take a look at your branch, is there an option for you to sync? (should be somewhere near the "code" button) |
one more change needed to be made. sorry.
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ready for review. |
Additional changes needed to be made per @s-makin. I missed a few. :)
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Requested changes made. Ready for review by @s-makin.
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Sorry, didn't mean to close the pull request. |
additional change needed.
additional change needed
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Thanks @thornshadow99 for your patience and hard work on this one! I've taken the liberty of fixing up a couple of nits I spotted in the rendered version of the docs. All looks good to me!
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Per Open Documentation Academy request issue #162, edited the text of this document for clarity.
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