Hanyangprofessor2

Deadline 3: Yujin Jang

Dear Professor I have completed deadline 3 of "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" from the professor.

This is my draft Hongseong at Wikivoyage for main project individually.

Please check, Thanks.Yujin0203 (talk) 07:00, 4 October 2024 (UTC)

@Yujin0203 Good progress _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:59, 6 October 2024 (UTC)

Deadline4：CAI ZHIHANG

Dear Professor.

I am studying “Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis” and “Media Trends and Globalization”.

This is my first draft of the sandbox link Caizzz (talk) 06:12, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

@Caizzz Good start. Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability

In some cases you have links to Baidu content rather then Wikipedia - please make sure to fix your links. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:20, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

This is my new link Caizzz (talk) 12:30, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

@Caizzz Good, but please check your links. Your url for reference 1 leads to Chinese Wikipedia, instead of the book in question.

Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:18, 8 October 2024 (UTC)

Here is the new link Caizzz (talk) 05:25, 11 October 2024 (UTC)

@Caizzz Good job adding English titles, but please fix link to Wikipedia in your reference 1, it should link to the book in question. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:24, 11 October 2024 (UTC)

Here is the new link Caizzz (talk) 04:54, 14 October 2024 (UTC)

@Caizzz I have fixed it for you. Please see how it should be done. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:19, 15 October 2024 (UTC)

Here is the new link Caizzz (talk) 04:31, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

@Caizzz Good progress. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced before being published. See Wikipedia:Verifiability

Also, please add links (and Chinese title, if the source is in Chinese) to references 5, 13 and 15. If the reference is not online, please add other information that allow confirmation that the source exist (link to library catalogue entry for the position or such). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:44, 21 October 2024 (UTC)

Here is the new link 5，13，15 Annotation has been completed. Caizzz (talk) 04:23, 28 October 2024 (UTC)

@Caizzz Good. Please replace reference 15 with a better source. Per the discussion and explanation at 1Wikipedia:BAIDU, Baidu is not allowed on Wikipedia (too many errors). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:34, 30 October 2024 (UTC)

For ref 23 - is this a book? Can you add ISBNs to it and other books? Also, if it is in Chinese, it needs a Chinese title, not just English. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:35, 30 October 2024 (UTC)

Reference 15 has been revised. The original text in reference 23 has no annotations.Here is the link Caizzz (talk) 04:20, 11 November 2024 (UTC)

@Caizzz Ok. Please carefully check all references one by one to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.

Please correct a link to Baidu in article body in the 'Folk commemoration' section, it should link to Wikipedia instead.

Please add references to the content that is missing them. I see many sentences and even paragraphs without a reference. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:35, 13 November 2024 (UTC)

The Chinese title and English title have been written. The Baidu link in the folk memorial has also been replaced with a Wikipedia link. Then there are only 24 references in the original article, and I have already made 24。This is my new link Caizzz (talk) 04:39, 15 November 2024 (UTC)

The Chinese title and English title have been written. The Baidu link in the folk memorial has also been replaced with a Wikipedia link. Then there are only 24 references in the original article, and I have already made 24。This is my new link Caizzz (talk) 04:42, 15 November 2024 (UTC)

@Caizzz The references look better, but you have not fixed metadate for most, despite my request above. As such, more fixes are still needed. Reference 5 for example needs a Chinese title, date and publisher and the link is wrong - it leads to a generic table of contents that does not mention anything about the topic. Similar issues are present in other references

What is reference 23 ("Mass media and Tiananmen square")? Is this a book? It probably needs Chinese title. All books should have ISBNs as well as information what particular page we are citing. For example, reference 6 is to a book. Which page in this book is being cited? It needs to be identified.

As noted before, you need to ensure all your content is referenced - I still see unreferenced paragraphs. such as the one that begins with "After Hu Yaobang's death". _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:14, 17 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline 5 : Lee jisu

Dear professor

I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' class.

I've completed Deadline 5.

2022년 러시아의 우크라이나 침공과 중국 (ENG->KO)

Please check it.Xisuux (talk) 04:34, 1 November 2024 (UTC)

@Xisuux Good. Please change the English article titles from the see also template to Korean. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:48, 4 November 2024 (UTC)

PS. And double check whether the article does not exist in Korean. For example. Disinformation in the Russian invasion of Ukraine exists at ko:2022년 러시아의 우크라이나 침공과 중국 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:51, 4 November 2024 (UTC)

I have reflected your feedback.

I found an article with a Korean version and corrected it.

Please check it. Xisuux (talk) 04:45, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

@Xisuux Good. If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Korean Wikipedia, please use this tool - zh:틀:임시링크 . If you need help with it, please stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to use it _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:06, 19 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline5：ZHANG XIAORUI

Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."

Understanding Small and Big Data through Wikipedia: We have completed the editing Mohe

"Media Trends and Globalization": I completed the translation of all my articles in the sandbox User:Zzzxxxrrr/sandbox

Thank you for your checking. Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 04:42, 1 November 2024 (UTC)

@Zzzxxxrrr

Regarding Mohe, it looks good. Please try to find and propose a new banner (see our instructions at https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Banners ) .

Then please ask for review and follow the recommendations from it (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review).

Regarding your Chinese translation to English, about the diary, please proofread it carefully (you can use AI or tools like Grammarly). Right now, there are many grammar or vocabulary issues, and the article is very hard to read because of numerous errors. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:57, 4 November 2024 (UTC)

Hello, professor. I have added a new banner to Mohe's article and reviewed it （this is the link）, please check it. Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 04:37, 4 November 2024 (UTC)

@Zzzxxxrrr Very good. But see the talk page at Talk:Mohe – Travel guide at Wikivoyage - a better (larger) image is needed. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:51, 6 November 2024 (UTC)

Dear professor

I changed the banner of Mohe

AI is also used for sentence checking on translated articles.User:Zzzxxxrrr/sandbox

Thank you for your checking. Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 05:19, 11 November 2024 (UTC)

@Zzzxxxrrr You can upload only the pictures you have taken yourself. Please show me proof in class that this picture was taken by yourself; otherwise, it will be deleted as stolen. 

Regarding your English translation, please proofread it carefully with AI or Grammar tools - if you have done so already, this was clearly not sufficient. There are many grammar or vocabulary errors, and it is difficult to read; many sentences have errors and are confusing. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:40, 13 November 2024 (UTC)

Dear professor, I have modified Mohe’s banner again. There are grammatical errors in the article, please check it. Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 06:01, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

The grammatical errors in the translation of the article have been corrected, please check.User:Zzzxxxrrr/sandbox Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 06:03, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

@Zzzxxxrrr The picture is not formatted correctly - it is obviously unnatural. Please reupload it with proper aspect ratio, then upload another version for the banner using the tool here: https://croptool.toolforge.org/ You need to CROP the image, not stretch it.

Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.

Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?

Please see the feedback at Talk:Mohe – Travel guide at Wikivoyage _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:11, 19 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline 5: SHU YING

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"

I've finished the Deadline 5 , translating the second article in my sandbox. [1]

Please check. Syouziiye (talk) 06:59, 4 November 2024 (UTC)

@Syouziiye Very good. Please merge it with the existing one at 德國經濟 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书

See 维基百科:合并页面 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for advice on how to merge page

Then we will see if the Chinese reviewers have any comments

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:12, 6 November 2024 (UTC)

Professor,according to your guidance, I uploaded this article. Please check it Syouziiye (talk) 13:04, 11 November 2024 (UTC)

@Syouziiye Your article remains in your sandbox. To finish the assignment, you need to publish it (merge it into the article in the public mainspace). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:42, 13 November 2024 (UTC)

OK，it was published now,please check it here. Syouziiye (talk) 06:49, 15 November 2024 (UTC)

@Syouziiye Good, now please observe it to see if the Chinese reviewers raise any issues that should be fixed. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:16, 17 November 2024 (UTC)

OK,I'll watch out for that. By the way for another translated article,now it is also succesfully published. Please check it here. Syouziiye (talk) 05:09, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

@Syouziiye Good. Please try to add WP:CATEGORIES to your articles if they don't have any; see categories at the bottom of the original articles for ideas and try to find similar categories in Chinese. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:12, 19 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline 4: LAOXINYI

Dear professor： I'm taking course is "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" . I gave constructive feedback on another classmate's essay：https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%ED%86%A0%EB%A1%A0:2022%EB%85%84_%EB%9F%AC%EC%8B%9C%EC%95%84%EC%9D%98_%EC%9A%B0%ED%81%AC%EB%9D%BC%EC%9D%B4%EB%82%98_%EC%B9%A8%EA%B3%B5%EA%B3%BC_%EC%A4%91%EA%B5%AD#%EC%9C%84%ED%82%A4_%ED%94%BC%EB%93%9C%EB%B0%B1_2 please check it out! Thanks. Laoxinyi (talk) 03:04, 10 November 2024 (UTC)

@Hanyangprofessor2 I have completed deadline 4 of "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis". Here is the link Laoxinyi (talk) 05:46, 15 November 2024 (UTC)

@Laoxinyi Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:17, 17 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline 5: LAOXINYI

Dear professor： I'm taking course is "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" .

This is my sandbox link：https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Laoxinyi

I have completed the draft and published it on the homepage：https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Luzhou_City

Please confirm. Thank you! Laoxinyi (talk) 03:09, 10 November 2024 (UTC)

@Laoxinyi Good progress. Your article needs a banner, a climate section with a chart, and your listings need to be expanded with GPS coordinates and other content (description, address, websites).

If you forgot how to do some of that, see our assignments instructions at User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage or come to my office for a demonstration _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:22, 11 November 2024 (UTC)

@Hanyangprofessor2 Hello, Professor. I have revised the article according to your suggestions. Please check it! thanks! Laoxinyi (talk) 06:52, 15 November 2024 (UTC)

@Laoxinyi Good job with the banner - now please work on the other issues I mentioned above _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:19, 17 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (week11): SHU YING & YUE ZIYI

Dear professor,

We're taking the course "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" .

This is our final editing and there is the link: Fuding.

Please check. Thank you. Syouziiye (talk) 04:38, 11 November 2024 (UTC)

@Syouziiye Good progress. Please ask for your article to be reviewed as discussed in our assignment at the bottom of the page here: User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage

Additionally, please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.

Add a GPS listing for the port in which the ferry arrives, similar to the raiway and bus station.

Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:06, 13 November 2024 (UTC)

We've corrected it accroding to your guidance. But there is no discuss here now. Please check it first. Thank you. Syouziiye (talk) 06:18, 15 November 2024 (UTC)

We have initiated a discussion request on the article's talk page, but have not received any comments yet. YZY2233 (talk) 06:38, 15 November 2024 (UTC)

@YZY2233 To receive feedback, you need to follow my instructions. You created a section with a heading but no content, and you did not link it from the noticeboard for linking such requests. Please re-read my instructions at the bottom of my instruction page. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:30, 17 November 2024 (UTC)

We followed your instructions to work it out,please check it again. Thank you. Syouziiye (talk) 04:56, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

@Syouziiye Very good, now this is correct _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:13, 19 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline5: Jeongeun Park

Dear Professor:

I'm taking the course Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis.

Here is the Link. Please check it out. Thank you. Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 11:59, 11 November 2024 (UTC)

@Parkjeongeun0430

Looking at the map I am a bit confused - why is there a shaded area in the middle of the map?

Which neighourhood is in the middle, which is on the left and which is on the right? We should explain it.

The map probably should be zoomed out by one level so all listings can be seen in it _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:15, 13 November 2024 (UTC)

I know it looks like weird. But you should look this picture. Originally, Seoul/North is exactly like my map. Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 07:54, 13 November 2024 (UTC)

@Parkjeongeun0430 I see. I started a discussion on the talk page of that article - I am not sure it makes sense to group all those districts in a single article - what do you think? Best - reply there _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:39, 17 November 2024 (UTC)

I replied on discussion. Please check and answer to my question. Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 12:26, 17 November 2024 (UTC)

@Parkjeongeun0430 Ok :) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:58, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline 6:WANGYIZHE

Dear Professor,

I am currently taking the Media Trends and Globalization course. I have completed Deadline 6. I wrote feedback on JIA YUAN’s article “Asian Centrism.”

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:%E4%BA%9A%E6%B4%B2%E4%B8%AD%E5%BF%83%E4%B8%BB%E4%B9%89#%E5%AF%B9%E6%96%87%E5%AD%97%E7%9A%84%E8%AF%84%E8%AE%BA

andhttps://en.m.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Talk:Ruili#c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241113040200-Evaluation_of_the_Article "Understanding Small Data and Big Data with Wikis." I reviewed Jihaiyun's Ruili

Thank you for checking. WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 04:05, 13 November 2024 (UTC)

@WANGYIZHE1124 This is not correct (wrong place, AI generated useless content). Please post your own thoughts _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:25, 17 November 2024 (UTC)

Sorry, I commented in the wrong place, I have asked Jihaiyun classmates to explain the situation WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 12:15, 17 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline5 : Yoon Hee Jung

Dear professor.

I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data' class.

We've completed Deadline 5.

My topic is danyang.

Please check my final draft, thank you. Hee Jung, Yoon (talk) 05:02, 13 November 2024 (UTC)

@Hee Jung, Yoon Good progress. Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?

Please also address the issues raised at Talk:Danyang – Travel guide at Wikivoyage _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:26, 17 November 2024 (UTC)

I addressed issues and added 'festival' in do section! 218.235.241.133 (talk) 05:51, 22 November 2024 (UTC)

@Hee Jung, Yoon Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:15, 24 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline 5: Lee Jae-hyun

I'm taking the course Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis.

Here is the Link. Please check my final draft ! Thank you. :)JHyunlee (talk) 07:45, 13 November 2024 (UTC)

@JHyunlee Good progress. Are there any bus stations to add to the Get in? Get around needs to be written up, as does the Connet section at the bottom (compare Ansan or other cities). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:27, 17 November 2024 (UTC)

Also, please take a look and address the issues raised at Talk:Nonsan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:32, 17 November 2024 (UTC)

Hello, professor. I added Sections named 'Get in', and 'Connect'.

And I also modified the issues that pointed out in my discussion page.

I hope you check my article and please give a feedback for me. Thank you! JHyunlee (talk) 04:20, 22 November 2024 (UTC)

@JHyunlee Very good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:16, 24 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline5 : Yujin Jang

Dear professor.

I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data' class.

This is my final draft Hongseong for main project.

Please check, Thanks, Yujin0203 (talk) 07:52, 13 November 2024 (UTC)

@Yujin0203 Good progress. Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section? Are there any bus stations to add to the Get in? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:29, 17 November 2024 (UTC)

Also, please take a look and fix the issues mentioned in the feedback at Talk:Hongseong – Travel guide at Wikivoyage _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:31, 17 November 2024 (UTC)

I added a bus terminal and added a festival category in the do part to list the festivals of Hongseong. Also, I made additional modifications by referring to the talk page.Thank you! Yujin0203 (talk) 17:00, 26 November 2024 (UTC)

@Yujin0203 Good. For the festivals, please add links to their pages, so readers can click and read more about them. Also, please add their names in hangul. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:10, 27 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline 5: Jeong Aram & Jo HyeonSeong

Dear professor.

We're taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data' class. @Jeong Ahram @Jo HyeonSeong

We've completed Deadline 5.

Our topic is Dangjin

Please check, Thanks. Jeong Ahram (talk) 06:26, 14 November 2024 (UTC)

@Jeong Ahram Good progress.

Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.

For get in section - is there no train connection?

Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?

Please take a look at feedback you got at Talk:Dangjin – Travel guide at Wikivoyage _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:31, 17 November 2024 (UTC)

I revised it by reflecting the feedback. Please check, Thank you. Jeong Ahram (talk) 01:58, 21 November 2024 (UTC)

@Jeong Ahram Very good. If festivals have pages (URL), you can add the links to their mentions. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:17, 24 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline 6:TANG YINI

Dear Professor,

I am currently taking the Media Trends and Globalization course. I have completed Deadline 6. I wrote feedback on JIA YUAN’s article “Asian Centrism.”https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:%E4%BA%9A%E6%B4%B2%E4%B8%AD%E5%BF%83%E4%B8%BB%E4%B9%89#%E5%AF%B9%E6%96%87%E5%AD%97%E7%9A%84%E8%AF%84%E8%AE%BA

Please check, Thanks Tyuni06 (talk) 07:11, 14 November 2024 (UTC)

@Tyuni06 Please add your own thoughts, not AI generated content, which is hardly relevant (which images are beautiful and relevant)? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:33, 17 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline5:gaoxiaoxia/chensiting

Dear Professor we have completed deadline5 of "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" please check it Babaibiaobin (talk) 11:15, 14 November 2024 (UTC)

@Babaibiaobin

Good progress.

Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.

Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?

Please make sure all entries have some description, for example Wuhai People's Park has none; the first store listed likewise.

You can zoom in and recenter the map to make it more useful

Please take a look at feedback you got a Talk:Wuhai – Travel guide at Wikivoyage _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:50, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadine4:gaoxiaoxia

Dear Professor, This is my Deadline4 for Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis. I left my feedback and suggestions on another student's article Babaibiaobin (talk) 11:24, 14 November 2024 (UTC)

@Babaibiaobin Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:51, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline6:gaoxiaoxia

This is my deadline6 for Media Trends and Globalization Babaibiaobin (talk) 11:43, 14 November 2024 (UTC)

@Babaibiaobin Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:51, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline5:gaoxiaoxia/chensiting

Dear Professor We have completed one of article for Media Trends and Globalization,please check it https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%B6%88%E5%A4%B1%E5%A5%B3%E4%BA%BA%E4%B9%8B%E8%B0%9C

But another article keeps being deleted by other users，So sorry Professor, we may need a little more time https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Potala_Palace_Square Babaibiaobin (talk) 12:09, 14 November 2024 (UTC)

Other users remove copyright content copied from https://www.chinawiki.net/thread/48/22696.

But I found the content on this website is completely copied and translated from Baidu.

We know that Wikipedia cannot use content from Baidu, and we will find more valuable references.

Just confused, why is the content on this website (https://www.chinawiki.net/thread/48/22696.) copyrighted?Maybe Is there any cooperation with Baidu? Babaibiaobin (talk) 12:53, 14 November 2024 (UTC)

@Babaibiaobin A lot of people on the Internet steal content from other websites, ignoring (breaking) Copyright. I don't know if people who run chinawiki.net have permission to use Baidu content, I expect they are just stealing it. But we cannot steal it from them; two wrongs do not maker a right. Also, please note that copyright works like this: EVERYTHING IS COPYRIGHTED UNLESS IT IS VERY OLD OR RELEASED UNDER A LICENCE THAT EXPLICITLY STATES OTHERWISE (read also: Copyleft). So unless you see a message on a page saying that a content is free (such as a note saying Creative Commons license is used - visible for example at the bottom of each Wikimedia Foundation-affiliated page), the content of that page is copyrighted and cannot be used without receiving explicit permission from the owner. Read also: Wikipedia:Copyright violations _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:20, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline5:gaoxiaoxia/chensiting

Dear Professor I edited the Chinese and English content of this entry, please check https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Potala_Palace_Square

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%B8%83%E8%BE%BE%E6%8B%89%E5%AE%AB%E5%B9%BF%E5%9C%BA Babaibiaobin (talk) 15:20, 14 November 2024 (UTC)

@Babaibiaobin Good. Please carefully check all references one by one to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 走进布达拉宫广场-四川经济网-经济门户".), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:21, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline6:HONG HAOTIAN&LI MENGCHEN

Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."

We have completed the issue changes for the English to Chinese [2] and Chinese to English [3] articles.Please check! Honghaotian (talk) 04:25, 15 November 2024 (UTC)

This is our finished putian introduction, please check thanks[4] Limengchen2777 (talk) 04:27, 15 November 2024 (UTC)

@Honghaotian @Limengchen2777

Regarding your translation to Chinese (biodiversity), if you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say. If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it.

Regarding your translation to English, please proofread it carefully - for example, "The search engine fills in the volunteer event" - is event the correct word here? Or "Finding the official volunteer entrance is complex" - what do you mean by entrance? Or in another section: "Most stickers were banned". There are many such errors in the text, making reading and comprehension hard. The 'In 2015, the main owner of the fleet collection bar was replaced' section is another example, I read half of it and I don't know what it is talking about. Is this a forum for people collecting ship models? Please work with an AI tool or preferably a real person fluent in English to carefully proofread your text. What is a bar? See bar - usually it means Bar (establishment) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:29, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

As for Wikivoyage (Putian):

Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.

Get around section is missing.

For festivals, can you add location, time and homepage information? A Chinese name would also be useful

You can zoom in and recenter the map to make it more useful

Please take a look at feedback you got at Talk:Putian – Travel guide at Wikivoyage

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:32, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

Dear Professors, Putian has been revised, and the English translation of the article has also been published.1 Limengchen2777 (talk) 04:49, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

@Limengchen2777 Good job adding the lead section, but other issues I mentioned do not appear to have been corrected yet. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:15, 19 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline5: YoonDaEun & Jeong seolah

Dear professor.

I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data' class.

Me and my group members @Jeong seolah

We've completed Deadline 5.

My topic is Yecheon

Please check our final draft, thank you. Ydaeun0306 (talk) 04:54, 15 November 2024 (UTC)

@Ydaeun0306 Good. Please fix the following:

• Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
• All entries under see should be converted into listings, right now only the first two are done correctly
• Please take a look at feedback you got at and carry out the suggestions you find there: Talk:Yecheon – Travel guide at Wikivoyage

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:33, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

Dear professor.

We fixed feedbacks by you and other peoples. Ydaeun0306 (talk) 06:56, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

@Ydaeun0306 Very good. Can you find some more content to add to the listings under the see section? Are there any other museums or landmarks, manmade or natural, tourists could visit in the area? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:16, 19 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline6:YUE ZIYI

I have already evaluated another student's （ Syouziiye ）essay, please check it. Thank you. YZY2233 (talk) 06:48, 15 November 2024 (UTC)

@YZY2233 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:34, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline 6:SHU YING

Dear Professor:

I am taking the Media Trends and Globalization course. I have completed Deadline 6. I wrote a feedback on YUE ZIYI's article “未来”please check it here.

Thank you. Syouziiye (talk) 07:03, 15 November 2024 (UTC)

@Syouziiye Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:35, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline 6 ---FAN XINRU

Hello professor, these are the three Wikipedia articles I have recently edited, totaling 30 edits. Perhaps you can help me check, thank you very much. Here is the link.1.2.3. Jzhdylb (talk) 07:24, 16 November 2024 (UTC)

@Jzhdylb Looking good! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:35, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

ARTICLE EXPANSION TASK--FAN XINRU

Hello Professor, I have chosen to expand the article on Cangzhou as my task. This is my second time editing and I have expanded and added it according to your requirements. Can you help me look it up? It would be even better if you could point out the issues that need to be changed. Thank you very much, looking forward to your reply. Jzhdylb (talk) 08:58, 16 November 2024 (UTC)

@Jzhdylb Here are my suggestions:

Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.

You need more listings. The middle one (Cangzhou zhan) is unfinished - what is it?

For festivals, can you add location, time and homepage information? A Chinese name would also be useful

Please ask for review and follow the recommendations from it (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review).

Entries in Go next should have blue links to them. What is "Hometown America.Transportation method: Self-driving tour (about 4.5 hours)"? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:38, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

Hello professor, thank you for your guidance last time. I have modified and supplemented according to the guidance. If you can, please help me check the newly revised article again. I want to do better. Thank you very much for your time.Attached article link again. Jzhdylb (talk) 14:56, 23 November 2024 (UTC)

@Jzhdylb Good. You still need to convert mention of Cangzhou Iron Lion (新滄州鐵獅子) into a listing with GPS coordinates. Festival and Expo should have GPS coordinate as well.

And you should be able to add more listings to see. Are there no other monuments or attractions in this area? Is this really so boring? This city is 7 million. Compare to how many listings your colleagues added to a much smaller Korean city at Nonsan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage for example. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:20, 24 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline5:ZAIWEI&WANGTAO-Media Trends and Globalization

Hello professor, these are two articles from our group. This is the published English-Chinese translation.世界价值观调查.This is an English article-Early buildings of Wuhan University.Please check ZAIWEI0328 (talk) 16:40, 16 November 2024 (UTC)

@ZAIWEI0328

Regarding your translation to Chinese (WVS), if you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say. If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it.

Regarding your English translation, please add references to all content. I still see unreferenced paragraphs. Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:41, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline 5：XU YAN

Dear Professor:

I am taking Media Trends and Globalization.

This is my Chinese to English translation project: The Long Night

This is my extra English-Chinese translation project: Asian Pride

Please check, Thank you Xuan6699 (talk) 16:47, 16 November 2024 (UTC)

@Xuan6699 Please convert the bullet points into prose, which is the preferred way of writing in English. The award section should have all awards in the table, not just one.

And for that table (The 3rd "Asian Content Awards) the reference is only about nominations. Please find a reference that confirms that this movie won the "Best OTT Original" award (and was nominated for others - they are not even mentioned in that reference, ex. 'Best Idea').

The section on 'Publicity Fun Facts' seems to be random WP:TRIVIA and should be rewritten, moved aroud or deleted so that it is not random trivia (read the linked guideline).

Please proofread yoru article carefully, and compare it to the guideline at Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Film#Primary_content . Please ensure your heading (section titles) are named accordingly with that guideline.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:49, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

Regarding your translation to Chinese (Asian Pride), if you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say. If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:49, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline6:ZAIWEI-Media Trends and Globalization

Hi Professor, I have already provided feedback to another editor, please check——feedback ZAIWEI0328 (talk) 16:49, 16 November 2024 (UTC)

@ZAIWEI0328 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:51, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline6:WANGTAO-Media Trends and Globalization

Hello Professor. I have left feedback on another student's discussion page. Please check——feedback Wangtao626 (talk) 16:56, 16 November 2024 (UTC)

@Wangtao626 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:51, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline 6: dabin kim

Dear professor,

I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' class. I've completed Deadline 6, please check here.

Thank you. Dbinni (talk) 07:37, 17 November 2024 (UTC)

@Dbinni Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:51, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline6 WANGYIZHE

Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."

https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User%3AWANGYIZHE1124#Chinese-style_virus This is my English translation.

https://en.m.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Menghai This is MENGHAI WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 12:33, 17 November 2024 (UTC)

@WANGYIZHE1124 Regarding your translation to English, please move it from Chinese Wikipedia to English Wikipedia (to your user sandbox here) ; then work on ensuring all content is properly referenced. Good start. Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability . Also, if a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. If you don't know how to use that tool, come to my office hours and I'll demonstrate

Regarding your Wikivoyage article:

• Please add more information to Get in, such as the listing (with GPS) for the bus station. Is there no train connection? Look at how it is done in other articles (ex, Ansan, etc.)
• You need many more listings for see, as well as the do section (in which you can mention local festivals, for example).
• You have a climate infobox, but you should add a section explaining it in words. Look at Ansan or similar articles.
• Please take a look at feedback you got at and carry out the suggestions you find there: Talk:Menghai – Travel guide at Wikivoyage
• Please ask for additional review and follow the recommendations from it (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review).

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:57, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

Comment:YANGPEIFU

Hello Professor! I have finished commenting on my classmate's Wikipedia article. Please check it out! Thank you! Yangpeifu (talk) 15:36, 17 November 2024 (UTC)

@Yangpeifu Very good, identifying bad sources! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:57, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline 5：Hyeonmin Song

Dear Professor

I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class. I have finished deadline 5. This is my draft .

Thank you for your checking. SongHyeonmin2020007129 (talk) 04:12, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

@SongHyeonmin2020007129

Good progress

Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special. Right now you mention some names of attractions, but they need to be explained a bit more to make them appealing.

Then please ask for review pf your article by experienced volunteers and follow their recommendations after you receive them in a few days (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:19, 19 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline 5：LYU YANGCHENG

Dear professor, this is my understanding https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Penglaiof small data and big data, homework, please take a look, thank you Hanyangdaxue (talk) 05:49, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

@Hanyangdaxue

Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.

Your banner needs to be formatted the correct ratio. Please upload a new image based on the current one using this tool: https://croptool.toolforge.org/ then use it as a banner instead of the current one

Please add a GPS coordinate for the Penglai train station

Please recenter the map - right now most of the listings are hidden on the edge. We probably don't need to show the location of the outlying restaurant or the airport

Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?

Then please ask for review pf your article by experienced volunteers and follow their recommendations after you receive them in a few days (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:26, 19 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline 6:WANG RUITONG &LIN YUYANG

Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."Me and my group members LINYUYANG@l01yy11

Lesson 1: "Media Trends and Globalization" I've finished another Chinese to English translation. Please check the link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:WANGRUITONG&action=edit This is the English to Chinese translation https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%80%A7%E5%88%AB%E8%96%AA%E9%85%AC%E5%B7%AE%E8%B7%9D?wprov=sfti1#%E5%8F%82%E8%80%83%E6%96%87%E7%8C%AE Lesson 2: "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis"Completed both English https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Libo_County and Chinese https://zh.wikivoyage.org/wiki/%E8%8D%94%E6%B3%A2 versions --WANGRUITONG (talk) 08:00, 18 November 2024 (UTC)

@WANGRUITONG

Your translation at User:WANGRUITONG is a good start but needs much more work. There are untranslated Chinese characters (see infobox).

The image at the top is malformatted, with caption outside it. Move it to the middle of the article and adjust the placement of the caption.

References are malformatted - please edit them so that they contain no red errors, and instead have the correct metadata (author, title, date, etc.). Books should have ISBN numbers. Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 费正清,崔瑞德. 剑桥中华民国史(下卷)), please use both the Chinese and English titles. All references should use citation templates. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.

Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability

If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. Again, if you need help with this, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate.

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Please note there are some issues raised at 性别薪酬差距 in the warning box at the top. Please work with editor or editors who added this warning to resolve them. You can identify them by looking at the history of your article, and then you should ask them for explanation if you don't understand the issues mentioned, or asked to check if they have been resolved if you have already tried to address them.

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The banner for Libo is bad - it just shows the top of some tree? Please use a different picture that shows something more interesting.

You can zoom in and recenter the map to make it more useful

Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?

Then please ask for review pf your article by experienced volunteers and follow their recommendations after you receive them in a few days (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:34, 19 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline6 QIAN ZIYI

Hello, professor. I left 1.2 feedback on another student's discussion page. Please check Buryab0ne (talk) 02:11, 19 November 2024 (UTC)

@Buryab0ne Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:21, 24 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline5 QIAN ZIYI

Dear professor,"Media Trends and Globalization": I finished translating my article in the sandbox, and modified it, please check.This is my link. Buryab0ne (talk) 05:00, 19 November 2024 (UTC)

Dear professor, this is my understanding of small data and big data homework.This is my link. Please take a look, thank you Buryab0ne (talk) 05:03, 22 November 2024 (UTC)

@Buryab0ne Regarding your translation, it reads well. Please fix the following issues:

• Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
• Please carefully check all references one by one to remove errors and to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.

Regarding Pu'er – Travel guide at Wikivoyage the following should be fixed:

• please expand 'understand' section. It should have a paragraph on history and another one on the climate, with a graph. See for example Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage or Nonsan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage
• see feedback you got at Talk:Pu'er – Travel guide at Wikivoyage and use it to improve the article
• fill in the get around section
• add more listings to the see section
• for the do section, add listings for festivals

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:25, 24 November 2024 (UTC)

Weekly additional edits，ZAIWEI-Media Trends and Globalization

Hello Professor, please check my contribution history for any additional edits I have made since the start of the semester.——Additional Edits ZAIWEI0328 (talk) 14:45, 19 November 2024 (UTC)

@ZAIWEI0328 Good job, your edits seem well referenced and relevant _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:26, 24 November 2024 (UTC)

Additional Edits，WANGTAO-Media Trends and Globalization

Hello Professor, here are my additional edits so far, please check——Additional Edits Wangtao626 (talk) 14:48, 19 November 2024 (UTC)

@Wangtao626 Good job, your edits seem well referenced and relevant _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:27, 24 November 2024 (UTC)

Additional Edits, Kang eun yeong-Media Trends and Globalization

Hello, professor. I'm Kang eun yeong. I've finished writing articles for English to Korean translation and additional scores. I attach the link, so please check it. Thank you! Eng->Kr, extra credit points Kang eunyeong (talk) 00:33, 21 November 2024 (UTC)

@Kang eunyeong Good. Please try to add WP:CATEGORIES to your articles if they don't have any; see categories at the bottom of the original articles for ideas and try to find similar categories in Korean

If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool 틀:임시링크 - 위키백과 to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:30, 24 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline2: Yeogeun Song

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization". I'm sorry, I'm so late

1. This is the link to the article translated from English to Korean: Deviance (https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/오락)

2. This is the link to the article translated from English to Korean: Criticism of capitalism (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sociocultural_evolution)

Please Checking. 송여근 (talk) 01:59, 22 November 2024 (UTC)

@송여근 Deviance and Criticism of capitalism have already been selected by another student; how about translating Modernization theory since 근대화 이론 - 위키백과 is very short? You also linked Sociocultural evolution is ok and is approved - you can expand 사회문화적 진화 - 위키백과 If you want to discuss selection of other topics to translate, please talk to me in person after class. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:37, 24 November 2024 (UTC)

OK, I'll choose that one. 218.235.241.132 (talk) 06:05, 25 November 2024 (UTC)

@송여근 Ok. Please see me after class so we can record your choices; I cannot locate your name in our spreadsheet. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:14, 27 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline3 : Yeogeun Song

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization".

I'm so late. I'll do my best until the other deadlines.

I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about Korean entertainment company

Thank you. 송여근 (talk) 02:02, 22 November 2024 (UTC)

@송여근 Ok. Please post a link here to your one extra edit outside the sandbox, and for the reference added. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:38, 24 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline 5：Liu Zifu

I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' and "Media Trends and Globalization" class.

in Understanding Small and Big Data class. Me and Zhang Qi have finished deadline 5 （Final Draft）

This is our work

in "Media Trends and Globalization" class. I've finished the final translation from English to Chinese.

This is my work

Thank you for your checking. Peter011008 (talk) 05:57, 22 November 2024 (UTC)

@Peter011008 Good. Here are some suggestions for improvement:

• for wikivoyage, please add GPS addresses (listings) for the main train and bus stations in Get in, and information on festivals to the do section. See for example how this is done in Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage or Nonsan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage
• for your Wikopedia translation, please try to add WP:CATEGORIES to your articles if they don't have any; see categories at the bottom of the original articles for ideas and try to find similar categories in Chinese. Then we will see if the Chinese reviewers have any comments

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:41, 24 November 2024 (UTC)

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Deadline 6 ---FAN XINRU

Hello professor, these are the three Wikipedia articles I have recently edited, totaling 30 edits. Perhaps you can help me check, thank you very much. Here is the link.1.2.3. Jzhdylb (talk) 15:24, 22 November 2024 (UTC)

@Jzhdylb Your edits are good, but please make sure to add citations to your text. For example, what is the source for the claim that "Jade Girl Peak, with an altitude of 625 meters, was formed during the Paleozoic Era. The name of Jade Girl Peak comes from the fact that Jade Girl Peak stands tall and tall for dozens of feet, and looks like a graceful girl from a distance." ? Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:43, 24 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline 5-CUI ZAN

Dear professor, I am taking Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis. This is my understanding of small data and big data assignment. Please check it. Thank you！ Cuicuizan (talk) 16:16, 23 November 2024 (UTC)

@Cuicuizan Good job. Please add a listing with GPS address for the main local bus station (in get in) so that it appears on the map.

In the 'do' section please add information on local festivals. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:46, 24 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline 5 - GUANYUE & LIUZIYE

Dear professor,

I am taking two courses "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki" with @Poeyal.

This is our understanding of small data and big data assignment.

Please check it. Thank you！ Uuueol (talk) 07:44, 24 November 2024 (UTC)

@Uuueol Good. The following fixes are needed:

• Your article needs a climate section with a chart
• Then please ask for review and follow the recommendations from it (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review).
• If you forgot how to do some of that, see our assignments instructions at User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage or come to my office for a demonstration

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:17, 27 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline 5: Dabin Kim

Dear professor,

I am taking ‘Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis’.

Here is a link for deadline 5, final draft.

Please check it. Thank you！ Dbinni (talk) 09:05, 24 November 2024 (UTC)

@Dbinni Good. The following fixes are needed:

Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.

Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?

Please add listings for the main bus and train/subway stations, with GPS coordinates, so they'd show up on the map

Please add at least one entry to the drink section _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:20, 27 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline 4-WEN JIAYAO

Professor, I'm sorry to finish this task so late, but I'm going to speed it up. Here is my sandbox link, which is now 50% translated. https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wjyy1212/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92 Wjyy1212 (talk) 10:30, 24 November 2024 (UTC)

@Wjyy1212 If you are translating from Chinese to English, please do so in your English Wikipedia sandbox, not on Chinese Wikipedia. Let me know when you have added blue links (hyperlinks) and references.

lease remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability

Please carefully check all references one by one to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.

Also, if a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. If you don't know how to use that tool, come to my office hours and I'll demonstrate _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:21, 27 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline6：XI JIAXIN

Dear Professor,

I took two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."

I have completed deadline 6. Suggest editing content for other editors.

This is the link to "Media Trends and Globalization"

This is the link to "Learn about Small Data and Big Data through Wiki"

Then the media trend and globalization of the article "Meizhou Mazu Temple" has been amended, please check, thank you. Xjx921 (talk) 12:43, 24 November 2024 (UTC)

@Xjx921 Your first comment should be moved from your friend's sandbox talk to their main user talk. Please copy it there.

Regarding your second comment (on Wikivoyage), someone asked for you to clarify what you meant - please explain it there in more details.

Regarding your article translation (MM Temple), the following fixes are needed:

• Remove the Chinese characters from the beginning of each heading. They can and should be present the first time you mention a Chinese proper name (for a person or place) if that entity has no Wikipedia article that can be linked to
• if a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. If you don't know how to use that tool, come to my office hours and I'll demonstrate.
• Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability. A lot of your content has no references and cannot be published.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:28, 27 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline 5-LIU XINRUI

Dear Professor，

I am studying your Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis course. This is the link to Deadline 5. I will continue to enrich this article.Please check it. Thanks for your patience. 1.241.68.131 (talk) 14:47, 24 November 2024 (UTC)

Dear student. Please remember to WP:SIGN your posts; otherwise I cannot notify you that you received a response here.

The following fixes are needed for your article:

Your article needs a climate chart

Is there a local intercity bus station, like the Ansan Express Bus Terminal in Ansan? If so, please mention it in the 'get in'.

Zoom out your map a bit and perhaps recenter it so that more listings are shown.

For listings in the Do section, please asdd GPS coordinates. Also, please add a subsection about local festivals, if there are any in this area.

Also, add GPS coordinates for restaurants mentioned.

Please ask for additional review and follow the recommendations from it (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review).

If you forgot how to do some of that, see our assignments instructions at User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage or come to my office for a demonstration _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:33, 27 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline 5-LI LINLIN

Dear Professor,

I am taking 'Understanding Small Data and Big Data' course. My topic assignment is Burqin, you can check the link. And I also made an extra credit, Qianjiang. I will continue to enrich this article.

Thank you for checking.

Hope u have a nice day~ Leeinm (talk) 04:45, 25 November 2024 (UTC)

@Leeinm Good. The following fixes are needed in Burqin:

The picture is not formatted correctly. Please reupload it with proper aspect ratio as explained at https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Wikivoyage:Banner_Expedition#How_do_I_help? , then upload another version for the banner using the tool here: https://croptool.toolforge.org/

Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.

Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?

Please see the feedback at https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Talk:Burqin and carry out the fixes required there

Please ask for additional review and follow the recommendations from it (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review).

Please add GPS info for 'River Promenade' and 'Market'. Try to add some more entries to the 'see' section.

For your other article, Qianjiang:

Please add get around, do and buy sections. Well done with the extra credit project. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:37, 27 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline 5 : HUANG YANHAN & MA CHENXIAO

Dear professor,

I am learning to Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis.

Here's my assignment with the group.@Mcx8202229

Thank you for checking. HYH031277777 (talk) 06:18, 25 November 2024 (UTC)

@HYH031277777 Good. The following fixes are needed:

• Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
• please write up a short (2-3 sentences) explanation of the local climate (you have a climate graph already, good, but it should have a text section. See articles on Ansan or Beijing or such for examples)
• In Get in, please add listigns with GPS coordiantes for the main railway station, and the main intercity bus station.
• Please ask for additional review and follow the recommendations from it (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review).

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:40, 27 November 2024 (UTC)

Article revision Ma chenxiao

Hello professor, this is my sandbox draft. I have modified and streamlined the article after the administrator's prompts. Please check it out.User:Mcx8202229/sandbox Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 06:19, 25 November 2024 (UTC)

@Mcx8202229 Good progress. The following fixes are needed:

• Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability. Currently, Game content, Background setting and Development have no references.
• The review section should summarize the reviews; but they seem to be just translations . We cannot copy and translate someone's review, we have to summarize it, or quote briefly. Please rewrite this to summarize what the reviewers said. For example of how this should be done, see The Elder Scrolls V: Skyrim - Wikipedia or Genshin Impact - Wikipedia

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:51, 27 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline6：JIA YUAN

Dear Professor,

I took two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis." I have completed Deadline 6. I wrote feedback on GUO YING's article, Abortion in Poland.

Deadline 5 has also been revised. Translation of the article "Media Trends and Globalization": Asiacentrism，Indocentrism And add content to Indocentrism ”Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis”The Wikipedian guide: shangraoJiayyyyy (talk) 06:46, 25 November 2024 (UTC)

@Jiayyyyy Good. Please ask User:糯米花 if their concerns over 亚洲中心主义 have been resolved.

For Shangrao , please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.

Also:

• please write up a short (2-3 sentences) explanation of the local climate (you have a climate graph already, good, but it should have a text section. See articles on Ansan or Beijing or such for examples)
• For main train/subway/bus stations, please add listings with GPS coordinates
• Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
• Please ask for additional review and follow the recommendations from it (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review).

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:54, 27 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline 5：ZHANG MINGSHUO

Dear Professor. I am studying “Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis” and “Media Trends and Globalization”. Here's my edit link to Wikivoyage, check it out。BAOTOU Shuo1103 (talk) 10:12, 25 November 2024 (UTC)

@Shuo1103 Good. The following fixes are needed:

• please write up a short (2-3 sentences) explanation of the local climate (you have a climate graph already, good, but it should have a text section. See articles on Ansan or Beijing or such for examples)
• Your article needs a climate section with a chart
• get around section is missing
• do section is emtpy. Please add some suggestions there. Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
• Please ask for additional review and follow the recommendations from it (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review).

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:56, 27 November 2024 (UTC)

Deadline5：BAILINHAN

Hello professor, I continued to edit Wikitravel, re-corrected the GPS and added introductions to attractions and GPS, and also edited other content, please check it Bai0926 (talk) 05:19, 26 November 2024 (UTC)

@Bai0926 Good. The following fixes are needed:

• please write up a short (2-3 sentences) explanation of the local climate (you have a climate graph already, good, but it should have a text section. See articles on Ansan or Beijing or such for examples)
• Please add a see section and popualate it. Please split entries between see and do - see for example how this is done in Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage
• Please ask for additional review and follow the recommendations from it (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review).

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:59, 27 November 2024 (UTC)