A little remark, though: I think it’d be better to include your introduction text (“It has been raining for two weeks non-stop. The locals say that the Pho Iva…”) in the PDF file. Today, I remember what’s the situation, but in a few weeks/months time, if I’m opening the PDF, I’m almost sure that I won’t know about the two-week rain. What do you think?
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Hello, I love your work but in the Cairn PDF, the title "The dungeon" doesn't exist hahahahahha
Holy, most have made a mistake while editing it. Thanks for let me know!
Love the adventure! Am I missing something, or does the map only list two of the three moon spheres?
i just downloaded this last week and there is still no sign og the third moon stone haha
There’s one right in the beginning. Maybe I should bold it too or even make it seen more important
Are you referring to "1. OBSERVATORY. In the center, a stone sphere resembling the moon."?
As I read this (incorrectly apparently haha), I thought it was referring to something much larger if PC's can squeeze through the hole.
In area 6 LADY STATUE the statue appears human-sized in the illustration. She is holding a moonstone, implying it is small enough to hold in one hand.
This might be the point of confusion?
That’s it! I think I might change the text in the observatory to make it clearer.
thanks for the feedback 💚
Just updated the text on room 3!
cool adventure! I like it a lot.
A little remark, though: I think it’d be better to include your introduction text (“It has been raining for two weeks non-stop. The locals say that the Pho Iva…”) in the PDF file. Today, I remember what’s the situation, but in a few weeks/months time, if I’m opening the PDF, I’m almost sure that I won’t know about the two-week rain. What do you think?
Olá, Bruno! Thanks a lot for pointing it out. I’ll try to include it in other part of the text
Hey there are no files!
Damn! That’s so me hahaha