Unit 2 Elements of Good Writing
Unit 2 (p. 31)
  Five Elements of Good Writing
1. Purpose: (Inform, Persuade, Entertain)
    What was the purpose of your homework paragraph?
2. Audience (Who? Tone? )
3. Clarity (be descriptive or precise and use clear pronouns)
4. Unity (everything is related)
5. Coherence (logical order, repetition of key words, good
transitional words and phrases)
1. Purpose: (Page 33-34)
    What was the purpose of your homework
 paragraph?
2. Audience (Page 35)
3. Clarity (Page 38)
4. Unity (Page 45)
5. Coherence (Page 48)
Audience Page 36-37
Recognizing person: Who is “you”?
 If you want to be healthy, you should exercise
Don’t change the person in a sentence or paragraph.
Look at Page 36 Activity 3. Correct the sentences.
Page 37 - Tone and Audience
Tone: Formal and informal
          “Person”
Formal:         Third, First
Informal:       First or second
First:  I
Second: You
Third: One, he, she, they, people
Page 43        Clarity (pronoun reference)
Activity 10
Check to see if the pronouns are clear and change them
to make the sentences clearer.
Page 49 Common Transitions
Study those common transition words and phrases.
 Use them in your next paragraph.
 1. Give examples            for example, for instance
 2. Add information          and, next, in addition
 3. Compare/Contrast          in contrast, by comparison
  4. Show time               finally, after, before
  5. Emphasize               obviously, without a doubt
   6. Show Sequence     first (second), next, at the same time
  7. Summarize             therefore, thus, in conclusion
P. 50 Proofreading strategies
Take a break
Read aloud
Read backwards
Cover your work
Pretend you are someone else
                           Note: A paragraph can
                           have a title
                           but it’s not necessary.
                           But an essay will always
                           have one.
In-Class Writing Activity
1. Go to:
    http://www.pbase.com/davesperling/seoul1
and choose or download a picture of a Korean person.
2. Imagine that person is you. Write a letter to your friend
or family telling them about your life. (Imagine you live in
a new city far away). Be sure to write in informal tone.
3. Write a new paragraph about the person in the photo.
Imagine you are writing a short biography for that person
for a magazine. Make the writing formal in style.
Exchange your paragraphs with your
group or partner.
Read your partner’s paragraphs.
How did you like your partner’s story? Tell them
something you liked.
Can you find any confusing pronoun references?
Can you find any errors of tone (formal vs. informal)?
Homework
Page 51 (Build your vocabulary)
Page 52 (Collocations)
If you want to get ahead, we will start Unit 3 next
 week. We will focus on writing a Classification
 Paragraph.