Writing a Personal

Narrative
p. 88, The Write Source

ECHS
C. Edge
English I
 4 Writing Purposes
• Expository – provides information
or an explanation about a topic
• Narrative – tells a story
• Descriptive – describes a subject
using sensory details
• Persuasive – attempts to change
someone’s viewpoint about a subject
 Personal Narratives
• A personal narrative re-creates a
specific experience or event in your
life.

• To write an effective narrative, select

an experience that you feel strongly
about.
 Be Selective with Details
• Although you are telling a story, you will
still be using sensory details to paint a
mental picture for your readers.
• It is important to include specific details.
• However, a reader doesn’t need to know
every little thing.
• Select details that are important to
retelling the story.
 Writing a Narrative
Paragraph
A narrative paragraph has 3 parts:

1. The topic sentence – introduces the

experience

2. The body sentences – share details

that re-create the experience

3. The closing sentence – reflects on

the experience
 Understanding Your Goals for
Writing a Personal Narrative
• Ideas – clear ideas that re-create life
experiences

• Organization – retell the story in

chronological order with a strong beginning,
middle, and end

• Voice – you want to sound natural,

believable, and interested in your own topic
(try to use dialogue when possible)
 Understanding Your Goals for
Writing a Personal Narrative
(continued)

• Word Choice – choose appropriate words

based on their connotations

• Sentence Fluency – make each sentence

move smoothly into the next

• Conventions – correct any spelling,

punctuation, capitalization, and grammar
errors before turning in your final draft (use a
dictionary, spell check, and grammar
handbook)
This is where it all
begins!
 Keys to Effective Prewriting
• Look for writing ideas:
– Recalling
– Freewriting
– Memoir, etc.

• Select a writing idea for public writing.

– Not every life experience is appropriate for sharing publicly.
– Make good choices at the beginning.

• List your goals for the assignment.

– What do you want to accomplish?
– How will you know if you are successful?

• Identify your audience.

– Who will be reading this?
– Do you need to adjust your way of writing to fit this audience?
Keys to Effective Prewriting
• Gather specific details about your chosen
life experience.
– Actions – relate what you (and others) did in a
situation.
– Sensory details – show what you saw, smelled,
heard, tasted, or touched.
– Personal thoughts – reveal what you thought
during your experience.

• Identify the key sensory details related to

this time (see the chart on p. 97 for a
strategy for gathering these details).
Keys to Effective Prewriting
• Organize your ideas chronologically.
– Memorable narratives are suspenseful; they make the
reader want to know what happens next.
– Start with a problem (conflict) – some type of
physical or mental obstacle in your way.
– Work in actions that respond to the problem – each
action should build suspense in the story.
– Build toward the climax or high point – this is the
most exciting part in which the writer does or does not
overcome the challenge. This should happen at the end
of the narrative.
– (see p. 98 for a diagram for plot development)
Keys to Effective Prewriting
• Use dialogue to add personality to
your writing.
– Dialogue should do three things:
• Show a speaker’s personality
• Keep the action moving
• Add information
– Compare the examples with and without
dialogue on p. 99 to see how dialogue
improves the personality and enjoyment
of a narrative.
 Keys to Effective Writing
• Tell the complete story – the beginning, middle, and end.

• Grab the reader’s interest in the beginning, build suspense

in the middle, and in the ending, tell how you were
changed by the experience.

• Use the details you gathered in prewriting.

• Include dialogue whenever it makes sense to do so.

• Write on every other line, leaving space for additions and

changes later on.
 Writing the Personal
Narrative, p. 102-6
• Get the big picture.
– Have in mind how the story will begin, end, and everything in
between.
• Start your personal narrative.
– Grab the reader’s attention.
– Start in the middle of the action.
– Introduce the main problem.
– Include important background information.
– USE TRANSITIONS (see p. 103)
• Develop the middle part.
– Include the key actions.
– Add sensory details.
– Work in your personal thoughts and feelings.
– Maintain suspense.
• End your personal narrative.
– The end should reveal:
• how you overcame your problem or accomplished something.
• what you have learned from the experience.
 Revising the Personal
Narrative, p. 107-118
• Your first draft is your first look at a
developing narrative. During the revising
step, you improve your first draft by
adding to, rewriting, or reorganizing
different parts.

• Focus on these traits when you revise:

– Ideas
– Organization
– Voice
– Word Choice
– Sentence Fluency
 Keys to Effective Revising
1. Set aside your first draft for a day or two, if possible,
before you review your writing.

2. Be sure each main part—the beginning, the middle,

and the ending—works well.

3. Revise any parts that seem confusing or incomplete.

4. Pay special attention to your writing voice. Do you

sound truly interested in the experience?

5. Use specific words that reflect your feelings about the

experience.

6. Be sure your sentences read smoothly.

 Revising for Ideas,
p. 108-9
• Be sure your narrative “shows” your experience,
not just “tells” it.

• Details make the narrative clear.

• Do I show rather than tell in my narrative?

– Your narrative shows if sentences contain action,
sensory details, dialogue, and your personal
thoughts and feelings.

• Have I included enough details?

– Use the 5 W’s and H — who? what? when? where? why?
and how?
 Revising for Organization,
p. 110-11
• Be sure all parts of your narrative
work smoothly together.

• Does my beginning grab the

reader’s attention?
– It does if it does one of the following:
1. Starts in the middle of the action.
2. Creates a clear image with sensory details.
3. Opens with a personal thought.
 Revising for Organization,
p. 110-11
• Does my ending work well?
– It does if you can answer “yes” to these 4
questions:
1.Does my essay build to my personal victory or
accomplishment?
2.Does my personal narrative end soon after the most
intense or most important moment?
3.Will my reader know why this event is important to
me?
4.Are all my reader’s questions answered?

– If any answer is “no”, revise your ending to

make it more solid and satisfying.
 Revising for Voice,
p. 112-3
• The key is realism and consistency.

• Does my dialogue sound realistic?

– It is if it reveals the speaker’s personality.
– Do you know what your speaker’s personality
is? (see the chart on p. 112)

• Have I created a consistent narrative

voice?
– Does it sound like you throughout the entire
work?
 Revising for Word Choice,
p. 114-5
• Use specific verbs and words with the right
connotation, or feeling.

• Have I used specific verbs?

– You have if your verbs show clear actions.
– Use the chart on p. 114 to improve your piece.

• Do my verbs have the right

connotation?
– They do if they create the feeling you want.
– Notice the difference in meaning of the verbs
in the chart on p. 115.
 Revising for Sentence
Fluency, p. 116-7
• Check for a variety of short and long
sentences.

• When should I use long sentences?

– To express complex ideas.

• When should I use short sentences?

– To deliver especially important ideas.
– A series of short sentences can quicken the
pace like a heart beating faster.
 Use the revising
checklist on p. 118
to check your
progress.
 Editing your Personal
Narrative, p. 119-22
• Keys to Effective Editing:
1. Use a dictionary, a thesaurus, and the “Proofreader’s Guide”
on p. 604-763 in the Write Source book to guide your
corrections.

2. Check for any words or phrases that may be confusing to the

reader.

3. Check your narrative for correct use of punctuation,

capitalization, spelling, and grammar.

4. Edit on a printed computer copy and then enter your changes

on the computer.

5. Use the editing and proofreading marks on the inside back

cover of the Write Source book to note your changes.
 Editing for Conventions,
p. 120-21
• Have I punctuated dialogue correctly?
– Follow these rules:
1. Use a comma set off a speaker’s exact words from the
rest of the sentence.
2. Place periods and commas inside quotation marks.
3. Place an exclamation point or a question mark outside
quotation marks when it punctuates the main sentence,
and inside when it punctuates the quotation.

• Have I used pronouns correctly?

– You have if the pronouns agree with their
antecedents in all of the following:
• Number
• Gender
• Person
 Use the editing
checklist on p. 122
to check your
progress.
 Publishing your Personal
Narrative, p. 123
• Make a neat final copy to share.

• Other ideas:
– Recording your narrative.
– Presenting it in a class blog.
– Reading it to a group of your peers.

• Focus on presentation:
– Use blue or black ink and write neatly; or type your essay.
– Write your name in the upper left-hand corner of page 1.
– Double-space your narrative.
– Indent every paragraph and leave a one-inch margin on all
four sides.
– Write your last name and the page number in the upper
right-hand corner of every page after the first one.
Use the Rubric for
Narrative Writing on
p. 124-5 to assess
your writing.
 Reflecting on Your Writing,
p. 128
• You’ve worked hard on your personal narrative.

• NOW – think about your writing!

• Complete each of the following statements

about your narrative:
1. The strongest part of my personal narrative is…
2. The part that still needs work is…
3. The main thing I learned about writing a personal
narrative is…
4. In my next personal narrative, I would like to…
5. One question I still have about writing personal
narratives is…