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study of this sort. ... She had a ferocious sense of privacy," notes
biographer Gary Fountain (xi). Perhaps she also had a sense of
how such publications blur the distinction between the writing
subject and the voice in which we necessarily read (and read into)
the poem. One need not lean on rigid prohibitions against the "in-
tentional fallacy," transcendent claims for the "autonomy" of art,
or even notions of the death of the author, to resist the absorption
of the lyric speaker into the biographical author. My concern here My concern here is...
is not to evaluate the ethics of biographical research, but rather to to examine some of the
contradictions and
examine some of the contradictions and misapprehensions that
misapprehensions that
arise within the criticism emerging from it. These problems are by
arise ... from our
no means unique to Bishop criticism. They arise from our relent- relentless curiosity about
less curiosity about the lives of celebrities, and our perennial un- the lives of celebrities,
certainty about the nature of lyric voice and the relation between and our perennial
the poet, the poem, and society. uncertainty about the
nature of lyric voice and
"Bishop's now virtually mythic story is here told-in the the relation between the
nick of time-by those who knew her best," writes Lloyd Schwartz poet, the poem, and
in his book-jacket endorsement of the oral biography, in which he society.
is a key witness. What this comment unwittingly reveals is the pro-
duction of a myth, which gets read as Bishop's personhood and
projected onto the mythmaking Bishop practices in her poems.
Jacqueline Rose captured just this reflexive fantasy of "Plath" in
her 1991 book The Haunting of Sylvia Plath. Like Plath, Bishop
wrote poems that enact the very problems of forging identity and
of linking identity to voice. As with Plath, there are those who
pathologize Bishop, seeing her writing as therapeutic. And there
are those who relish her "perversity" as a mark of her subversive
relation to patriarchy. Some would wrest control of the poet's cor-
pus. (The question of what gets published where and by whom
may not be as contentious as in Plath's case, but it is certainly as
vexed.) The "soap opera" drama of Bishop's psychosocial adven-
tures has emerged in the ostensible quest for the "truth" of
Bishop's inner life (Rose 6). But what Rose says of Plath is true of
Bishop, perhaps of any great writer: "Inside her writing [the poet]
confronts us with the limits of our (and her) knowledge. In this
context it becomes more than a commonplace of recent literary
analysis to insist in advance that there is no direct access to the
writer, that the only thing available for commentary and analysis
is the text" (5).
Recent Bishop critics often acknowledge the historical and
rhetorical dimensions of lyric subjectivity, but ignore them in
practice. As Rose points out, feminist critics of Plath recognized
that the personal is political; however, they did not fully make the
connection to "an inseparability of history and subjectivity" (7).
Similarly, Bishop's critics have celebrated her subversive relation-
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crave our "real shade" and yet we are restless in these particulars
too, looking for ways to endow them anew with allegorical im-
port, to extrapolate from them a radical account of the world.
The Romantic model defines an individual who exists inde-
pendent of social structures, and who can thus stand singly
against them. "Bishop questions not only the dominant phallic
perspective of our culture but its corollary political categories, hi-
erarchies and prejudices," writes Jacqueline Brogan (176). Bishop
"aims at nothing short of freedom from the inherently dualistic
tradition that lies at the very heart of Western tradition," claims
Joanne Diehl (6). But hasn't the Western tradition been trying to
get beyond dualism ever since Descartes? Bishop might equally be
seen as profoundly invested in the Western tradition's habit of
questioning. The accounts of Bishop as a subversive poet, moti-
vated by her personal alienation, falter once one begins to read the
letters. The Bishop of the letters-impatiently complaining of
Third World conditions, the sloppiness of Brazilian culture, the
sluggishness and insubordination of the servants, and the general
uncompliance of the world with her expectations of it-is often
the very persona that the poems ("Arrival at Santos," "Brazil, Jan-
uary 1, 1502,"and "Manuelzhino," for instance) seem to under-
mine through irony and contradiction. Which is the real Bishop?
Or are we up against not only the difference of life and art, but of
writing with itself? Rather than read Bishop as an individual stand-
ing against a monolithic and oppressive tradition, it might be
more useful to consider a lyric subjectivity taking shape in relation
to the contradictory and unarticulated aspirations of the culture.
And perhaps it is time to put aside the idea of Bishop's art as the
default or therapeutic position of an alcoholic-asthmatic-lesbian-
homeless orphan cloaking and allegorizing personal experience,
for an idea of art she herself articulated: "What one wants in art,
in experiencing it, is the same thing that is necessary for its cre-
ation, a self-forgetful, perfectly useless concentration" (Ltr. to
Anne Stevenson, 8 Jan. 1964).
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like impersonality" (23). Bishop's story "The Sea and Its Shore"
presents the "order" as decidedly fragmented and transient, some-
thing altered by its ingestion in the present. Tradition is a series of
scraps of paper, with variant messages, both literary and demotic,
blowing around on a beach. While such detritus may not consti-
tute a "collective substratum" or a "monumental order," yet it is
difficult for the narrator to distinguish the beach from the papers,
so inscribed is the present reality with the representations of it that
accumulate. It is not that we have mistaken language for the
world, but that the world, especially the social reality, comes to us
in the form of language, undergoing constant changes of contour.
"The sand itself... looked a little like printed paper" (Collected
Prose 179). This text-soaked world has no ideological structure:
"The papers had no discernable goal, no brain, no feeling of race
or group" (174). The protagonist struggles to find, or rather to cre-
ate, an intelligible unity in all these scraps. Yet the "pastness of the
past and also its presence" continues to define for Bishop the
space of poetry, the individual talent, and the subjectivity of the
narrative, emerging in the effort toward meaningful configura-
tion. Her protagonist Boomer has no clearly defined identity
apart from the papers he tries, often unsuccessfully, to read in ref-
erence to himself. We might be tempted to view the image of this
character (given in the beginning of the story and repeated at
the end), "in some ways like a Rembrandt, but in some ways not"
(180), as a key to autobiographical reading. But Rembrandt's self
portraits are famously elusive as well as absorbing, forging as
much as disclosing identity. In another way the reference dis-
places autobiography, putting not Bishop but an Old Master at
the site of self-scrutiny, just as she will do later with Crusoe.6
Like Eliot, Bishop aimed to write poetry that would partici-
pate in something larger than the self. What have been called
"cloaks" or "shrouds" in Bishop, designed for self-protection,
might better be understood as "masks" in the more classical sense,
designed for symbolic expansion, and engagement with the "gen-
erality" (to use Adorno's word) of language. In modern poetry the
mask has been a device allowing for individuation of voice with-
out unitary subjectivity, and for connecting ideas (the general and
abstract realm of language) to experience-not personal experi-
ence, but particularity. Perhaps this is why Bishop borrowed
Eliot's method for "Crusoe in England" long after she had aban-
doned, as critics generally agree, other aspects of his style. The ab-
stracted, psychological landscape, the allusiveness, the fictional
persona, all recall Eliot's early poetry, and suggest that Bishop
was carrying forward, rather than breaking through, modernist
assumptions.
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3. Who Is Crusoe?
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I had to live
one each and every one, eventually
for ages, registering their flora,
their fauna, their geography.
Of course this image of "the lonely young man, his eyes fixed on
facts and minute details, sinking or sliding giddily off into the un-
known" (Bishop, Ltr. to Anne Stevenson, 8 Jan. 1964) "coincides"
with the figure of Bishop emerging from three prior volumes of
"geography." This would explain the attraction of the figure for her
rather than its significance. Her Crusoe's religion is similarly
haunted by a history of its undoing. Christianity isn't just "left
out," as she said, from the poem; it is conspicuously absent, an ab-
sence that is itself a legacy from the modern poets she admired.
Defoe's Crusoe invents double-column bookkeeping and finds
that God is in the black. But Bishop's Crusoe has passed through
Nietzsche, Kierkegaard, Sartre, and others who set the world per-
manently off balance.
After Defoe's Robinson Crusoe, the primary figure haunt-
ing Bishop's Crusoe is of course William Wordsworth, or rather,
Wordsworth's lyric "I." Wordsworth's presence in this poem
follows from Rousseau's misappropriation of the Crusoe myth
as a celebration of man's happiness in the state of nature. While
Alexander Selkirk, upon whom Robinson Crusoe is based, would
"dance among the goats," Defoe's man is much too practical for
such antics. Romanticism transfigured the Crusoe myth into a cel-
ebration of solitude and communion with nature. Bishop admit-
ted to Lowell that she was a "nature lover," but the redemptive
possibilities of the natural landscape are quickly withdrawn in this
poem. The draft of the poem at Houghton Library explicitly re-
futes the promise of pastoral:
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Well, I tried
Reciting to my iris-beds,
"they flashed upon that inward eye,
which is the bliss. . ." the bliss of what?
One of the first things that I did
When I got back was look it up.
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too, the persistent longing for human connection that arises in-
evitably within all systems of distinction, the need not only to mas-
ter but to love another.
5. Who Is Friday?
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monic.) But it is within the colonial model, not from outside it,
that the yearning for reciprocity arises, hence the conflicts Merrill
observed in the language about Friday.
To call Bishop's poem a meditation on "her loss of Lota," as
Fountain does (265), is to ignore the social history roiling within
these lines. Friday, like Crusoe, belongs to history and to the
mythic pantheon history creates. The crucible of language has
transformed him many times over-as the natural servant, the
noble savage, the Winander Boy, Samuel Beckett's Lucky, Gal Fri-
day. Indeed, Friday has left the realm of myth and entered the
realm of idiom. Bishop indicates this when she remarks: "Just
when I couldn't stand it another minute longer, Friday came." Fri-
day (whether slave or weekend harbinger) promises release from
the alienating force of monotonous routine and lonely labor
("registering the flora and fauna"). By drawing on this historically
inflected myth the poem does not stand against the social reality
but rather enters into its dynamic, allowing the "re-seeing" to arise
as a cultural, not just a personal impulse. "Accounts of that have
everything all wrong" not because the past has lied and the truth
is personal, or because Bishop is presenting a radical counter-
ideology, but because language and meaning are historical and
social.
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Keats to re-enact the betrayal of his brother Tom [by a hoax per-
petrated by George Wills]" (44). Stewart draws out striking ex-
amples of Bishop's allusion to nursery rhyme, but in the end, in
"At the Fishhouses," for instance, this somatic meaning simply
"reawakens a tragic childhood" (44). "The [poem's] move from the
most abstract senses of sound and sight to the immediate physi-
cality of touch and taste is a historical journey to the sources of
Bishop's early loss of her father and mother" (61). But in "At the
Fishhouses" that loss is explicit from the outset (from the substi-
tution of grandfather for parents); it hardly needs a somatic mean-
ing to bring it out. For the poet living in New York or Florida
but writing about the Maritimes, this childhood has long since
been reawakened and brought into the prepositional realm of
language. The point is not to be in touch with the past but to open
it to transpersonal discourse. The rudimentary, prebourgeois
rhythms of nursery rhymes and hymns, as Adorno pointed out (64),
give the poet access to a holistic community residing within lan-
guage. Stewart misses an opportunity to read lyric possession in
this way, as ultimately impersonal. For while she recognizes that
form can represent the "transport or waylaying of subjective in-
tention" she ultimately does so, as Yopi Prins has pointed out,
"with reference to a model of the unconscious that still assumes
an individual consciousness" (155).
Bishop's disavowal of autobiography would seem most
clearly belied by the end of the poem, where Crusoe looks with de-
tachment at the relics of his island life. The museum may be an ex-
pression of modernity's desire to collapse time and space and to
replace experience with objects that represent it. These things
have no aura for Crusoe. The ego connection to them has burned
off. The images clearly also form a figure of the writing life, and
the relationship of the poet to her poetic materials and products.
Universities and libraries, as Harrison has documented in detail,
had approached Bishop about manuscripts and letters for their
archives (121). But what seems most important is how this serves
as the autobiography of all creative effort, not just Bishop's. The
last two stanzas of "Crusoe in England" involve a final intersec-
tion of the personal and the impersonal. The creative urge, the
poem tells us, is born of desperate need; the word becomes flesh as
if to redeem the user:
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singular antagonism toward the past but from her profound en-
gagement with its contending aspirations and mutating myths.
Jeffrey Perl may be correct that "inversion, travesty and obsessive
negative allusion seem indispensable to nonhumanist aesthetics"
(17). But Bishop's "Crusoe in England" has a more complicated
relation to the past; she recognizes that the antagonisms emerge
from within rather than against the humanist tradition. The com-
pelling personal voice of the impersonal Crusoe makes this poem
unforgettable, "live in detail," not a noman's voice of Everyman.
Impersonal craft conveys it: full of sentence sounds, bent across
an inimitable music, rich in alliteration, modulating in and out of
blank verse and free verse, rhyming and unrhyming, ranging from
primer verse to swan song, now intoning, now jaded. The rhythm
of long sentences against short, the parentheses, dashes, ellipses,
all these impersonal devices (largely ignored by critics) give a per-
sonal inflection to the speaker, create an effect of immediate voice.
But while Bishop's Crusoe gives the sense of the particular within
the generality of language, he also gives voice to contradictory,
historical impulses that his particularity does not resolve. His re-
flection, his boredom, his self-irony, his knowledge and doubt, his
moments of passion in love, loss, or fear, are not Bishop's or De-
foe's, but ours.
Notes
1. This is hardly a new point, having been made first in my essay "The Imper-
sonal and the Interrogative in Elizabeth Bishop" and again by Edelman.
4. Valerie Rohy, influenced by her thesis advisor, Edelman, has provided a more
rhetorical reading of Bishop within a gay-studies framework. In her analysis, les-
bian sexuality in Bishop must be understood as itself operating "within language
and linguistic displacements" (119) and embedded in structures of symboliza-
tion rather than with reference to "the place of the unrepresentable real" (Jar-
raway, qtd. in Rohy 121). But again, art circles back to biography. "Gwendolyn"
for Rohy becomes a narrative by which Bishop comes to terms with her lesbian
identity as a form of metaphoric substitution for the lost mother.
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5. Jerredith Merrin's article is typical and proceeds with exactly the same logic
as Jarraway employs: "I suggest that Bishop's gaiety or delight in the possibilities
of change is in turn inextricable from her gayness: her questioning of gender
boundaries, for example, and the exploration (however oblique and shrouded) of
the pleasures and anxieties of same-sex love" (154). "Inextricable" in what way
she does not make clear. Is the link motivational? Causal? Referential? Are all
Bishop's references to mutability (the central topos of the lyric tradition) trace-
able to her sexual preference? How we understand the link has profound impli-
cations for how we read the poems.
6. "The Monument," which Vernon Shetley has also associated with "Tradi-
tion and the Individual Talent" (41), again directs us away from the Romantic
model of creativity. "The bones of the artist-prince may be inside / or far away
on even drier soil" (Complete Poems 24). The poem suggests that we think of sub-
jectivity not in terms of origin (or biographical past), but in terms of parable, the
perpetual future of trope: "[W]atch it closely" (24).
7. Bishop noted as early as 1934 that "On an island one lives all the time in a
Robinson Crusoe atmosphere ... A poem should be made about making things
in a pinch-& how it looks sad when the emergency is over" (Notebook). There
is of course a lot more in the poem she did write, but this outline, which predates
Lota and Brazil by 20 years, suggests the poem is not reducible to late biograph-
ical impulses. Bishop writes to Lowell in 1964 "that she had been up late work-
ing on a poem about Crusoe." (qtd. in Millier 446). Two pages of that effort, es-
sentially the first two pages of the poem, called "Crusoe at Home" with "(in
Hull?)" written below, can be found in the Houghton Library.
8. See Rich, "The Eye of the Beholder: The Poetry of Elizabeth Bishop." Jar-
raway seems unaware of this essay, though it anticipates his argument.
9. One wonders, too, whether Bishop knew Hardy's "In a Waiting Room,"
which takes place in a train station. The text the speaker encounters there is the
Bible, and it prompts his move through several stages in thinking about his con-
nection to others.
10. Louise Glfick makes these points about Berryman (Gliick 45).
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