Sing Sing 2024
Sing Sing 2024
Story by:
CLINT BENTLEY, GREG KWEDAR, CLARENCE "DIVINE EYE" MACLIN, & JOHN
"DIVINE G" WHITFIELD
Screenplay by:
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MAN ON STAGE
For aught that I could ever read,
could ever hear by tale or history,
the course of true love never did
run smooth.
The lights flood the stage and they take their bows to the
roar of a standing ovation.
CUT TO:
We draw closer to the man who gave the monologue, waiting his
turn. We see the contours and shadows of his face in sharp
relief, his eyes bright despite the years on his face. This
is JOHN “DIVINE G” WHITFIELD.
CUT TO:
TITLE CARD.
BOOK FAN
Excuse me. I’ve been trying to
catch you in the yard, but...
DIVINE G
Of course.
(sees the title)
You from Rikers?
BOOK FAN
Spent two years there. How’d you
know?
DIVINE G
This one was very popular there for
a while. Got a pen?
BOOK FAN
Man I can’t believe Puck did you
dirty like that.
DIVINE G
Hell of a twist.
BOOK FAN
But hey man, for real...
DIVINE G
Releasing those tears is healthy
for you. Don’t tamp that shit down.
EXT. YARD - AFTERNOON
DIVINE G
Come on. Don’t hog it all from your
brothers.
Then a SIREN WAILS and Divine G drops onto his belly, puts
his hands on the back of his head along with everyone else in
the yard.
DIVINE G
Alright gentlemen. Beautiful work
last night. Let’s hear those kudos.
JJ
But G. That monologue... I never
heard population that quiet.
DAP
When you looked around at those
butterflies...
DIVINE G
It’s because I forgot the rest of
the monologue. I was thinking.
They all laugh.
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
Dropped two lines though. I’ll
never forgive myself.
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
Now, uh, we also need to talk about
what we can do better. Those
transitions were... rough.
MIKE MIKE
Man. I’m still riding high. Already
miss stepping on the wood.
(looking around)
Maybe talk about improvements at
the next meeting.
DIVINE G
Alright. Well, Want to go over the
waitlist? See if there’s anyone to
pull up?
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
What about Curtis Cross?
MIKE MIKE
I talked to some people about him.
He’s not serious. He’s just wants
to be a star. Steal the show.
DIVINE G
Alright. Maybe he stays on the
waitlist one more round. Then we
revisit him?
They agree.
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
One more. This is his second
request. Divine Eye.
The others are wary of the idea. Divine Eye has a reputation
for running the yard.
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
I know it. But he’s teaching a
history class with the NAACP. He’s
smart. He just needs something
better than yard work to channel
his talents into.
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
Isn’t that why we’re here? To go
after the ones who need this
program?
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
Let’s just interview him. See
what’s what.
They agree.
Divine G and Mike Mike are talking on the edge of the yard.
Both scanning the yard, looking for someone.
MIKE MIKE
(looks at the sky)
It’s too hot for this. Let’s look
for him another day.
DIVINE G
There he is.
DIVINE G
Excuse me, could I have a word? I--
DIVINE EYE
Be with you in a second. I gotta
take care of something right quick.
Divine Eye keeps walking. He descends some steps into the
lower courtyard. Divine G and Mike Mike stand there, annoyed,
and watch what unfolds below.
CLAY
Oh hey man.
DIVINE EYE
Yo. Nice layup out there.
CLAY
You saw that?
DIVINE EYE
What you mean? Of course I saw
that.
CLAY
Yeah, of course. I held it all day
just like you told me.
DIVINE EYE
And you didn’t tell no one you had
it, right?
CLAY
No, no, of course not.
DIVINE EYE
Well let’s see it then.
CLAY
Oh yeah.
CLAY
What...?
DIVINE EYE
What the fuck is this?
CLAY
What?
DIVINE EYE
What do you mean, what? This ain’t
what I gave you.
CLAY
Huh? Yes it is, I just--
DIVINE EYE
What is this, fucking aspirin? What
the fuck are you trying to pull?
CLAY
Hey man, I didn’t... I put it in my
pocket just like you told me and--
DIVINE EYE
(quietly livid)
You think I’m a fucking fool?
CLAY
No man, I swear to God.
DIVINE EYE
You saying I’m lying then? That I
don’t know what I’m looking at?
Taste it.
CLAY
No, I believe you, I just--
DIVINE EYE
This is aspirin. You know what I
fucking left with you?
CLAY
No.
DIVINE EYE
Not fucking aspirin.
CLAY
Oh please man, come on--
DIVINE EYE
Next time I see you, you better
have a plan for how to get me my
money.
MIKE MIKE
That’s fucked up.
DIVINE EYE
He’s gotta learn what it’s like
around here. Can’t be going around
trusting people. What can I help
yall with?
DIVINE G
You signed up for RTA. We’ve got a
couple openings for our next
production. Maybe you could put
your acting talents to better use
than hustling people.
DIVINE EYE
What, that? That was nothing. You
haven’t seen acting yet.
Divine G seems to be studying him.
DIVINE G
Why did you sign up for the
program?
DIVINE EYE
Heard yall got chick volunteers.
DIVINE G
No. You just have to be honest.
DIVINE EYE
I’m bored. Tired of this yard shit.
I came across this book that fell
off the library cart. Read a couple
lines. When we are born, we cry
that we are born to this great
stage of fools. I thought, this cat
must’ve done some time. He knows
what’s going on.
DIVINE G
So King Lear just happened to fall
off the library cart? And you just
read a few lines.
DIVINE EYE
Yeah well, life’s funny, isn’t it?
DIVINE G
We’ll be in touch.
The water is gentle over the Hudson. Sing Sing’s walls paint
the shoreline. CO’s move between guard towers like toy
soldiers. A sailboat lists by lazily.
INT. CLASSROOM - ANOTHER DAY
BRENT
Hello everyone. I see some familiar
faces, but for those of you who
don’t know me, my name is Brent,
I’ll be at your service as your
director for, whatever you decide
to do for your upcoming production.
But there’s plenty of time for all
that later. For now, let’s start
with a warmup.
BRENT
Gentlemen. Congratulations on
Midsummer. You did beautiful work.
You should be proud. Have you
decided what’s next?
Then one of the men speaks up. Says it’s time they finally
put on one of Divine G’s plays. Novelist. Memoirist. Winner
of four national writing competitions.
BRENT (CONT’D)
I love it. Do you have something in
mind, G?
DIVINE G
Well, I don’t know...
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
OK. I just finished one actually.
It’s called, Fine Print. It’s the
saga of Zabar Turner, a record
producer, who gets tricked into
signing over his record company by
the conniving Fast Freddy. It’s a
story of his journey to get his
studio back. It’s about friendship,
the dangers of overzealous
ambition, betrayal, and the power
of perseverance. And how all
relationships under heaven
contain... Fine Print.
BRENT
Wow. Sounds amazing. Well, do we
have a any other ideas? Or should
we take a vote?
BRENT (CONT’D)
Yes, a new face. Hi.
DIVINE EYE
Yeah, I don’t want to step on
anybody’s toes in here, and I don’t
mean no disrespect, but does every
play have to be so serious?
MIKE MIKE
What do you mean?
DIVINE EYE
I’m just saying, every day in here
is a drama. Every day is a tragedy.
Might be nice to do, I don’t know,
a comedy. Population might
appreciate it.
Divine G just listens.
BRENT
How does everyone else feel?
DIVINE EYE
With a comedy, you could really
turn it up. Have music numbers,
dance numbers. Make it big.
DIVINE G
What kind of comedy would you
propose doing?
DIVINE EYE
What do you mean, what kind of
comedy?
DIVINE G
Do you want to do something broad?
Want to be more low-key and do
satire? Is it musical or not?
DIVINE EYE
Man I don’t know. I’m just saying--
DAP
A cowboy comedy.
DAP (CONT’D)
I’ve always wanted to do a cowboy
play.
This opens the floodgates. The men start throwing out random
ideas for the comedy: Pirates, Ancient Egypt, Robin Hood.
Freddy Krueger.
MIKE MIKE
OK hold on. Does anyone know a
comedy out there has all that?
DIVINE G
That’s not really in my wheelhouse.
BIG E
It could time travel.
DIVINE G
I know, but--
BRENT
That’s true. It could time travel
through all these places. Have a
ton of roles to get more people up
on stage. Have a message.
BRENT (CONT’D)
I uh... I could write it if you
aren’t feeling it, G.
DIVINE G
Doesn’t bother me. If everyone else
is on board.
BRENT
I’ll run it by Katherine and if the
script is bad, we can always pivot
to something else.
MIKE MIKE
Well. I guess let’s take a vote.
All in favor of this original
comedy...
DIVINE G
(laughs)
It’s a straight drama. No point
trying to change that.
MIKE MIKE (O.C.)
Do you have another play that’s
funnier? Maybe we can take another
vote.
DIVINE G
Appreciate it brother. But--
DIVINE G
Mike Mike. Please. I’m really OK
with it. When the time is right --
if the time is right -- we’ll do
one of mine. If not, it’s fine man.
Besides, it’s not like we’re short
on time in here.
DIVINE G
I can’t remember the last time
everyone was that excited about a
play. Maybe he’s right. Maybe a
comedy will take the edge off
around here.
MIKE MIKE
I’ll say one thing, it’ll be easier
than all that dying stuff from the
last production.
DIVINE G
Dying is easy. Comedy is hard.
DIVINE G
(thumbing through)
A hundred and forty-seven pages...
MIKE MIKE
...over the weekend?
BRENT
It was a lot to fit in. It’s got
some dance numbers, some songs, a
Hamlet soliloquy. But at its heart,
it’s the story of an Egyptian
prince who follows clues through
time to find his Mummy.
BRENT (CONT’D)
Yes. Freddy is in there. It will
make sense when you read it. For
now, just find a character you
identify with. Cast list is on the
board. Pick an audition slot.
There’s enough for everyone to have
at least one role in here.
The door opens and one of the men steps in. They thank him
for coming and ask him what role he’s going out for. He names
three characters.
BRENT
OK. Whenever you’re ready.
AUDITION MONTAGE.
They act out gonzo scenes from the play. Tell stories from
their childhood. Sing. Dance. Freestyle rap.
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He goes to take his seat but they tell him he can’t observe
the next audition since they’re going out for the same part.
DIVINE G
Someone else is going out for
Hamlet?
BRENT
Divine Eye is.
DIVINE G
I’ll send him in.
DIVINE G
You’re up.
DIVINE EYE
Sounded good in there. Intense.
DIVINE G
Thanks. Hey... Could I ask you
something?
DIVINE EYE
Anything.
DIVINE G
You asked to do a comedy.
DIVINE EYE
Yes.
DIVINE G
And now we’re doing a comedy.
DIVINE EYE
I’m excited.
DIVINE G
And yet you’re auditioning for the
only dramatic role in the whole
play.
DIVINE EYE
Comedy’s tough, man. I don’t want
to bomb up there.
Divine G nods.
DIVINE G
Good luck then.
DIVINE G
I would also like to note,
Commissioners, that I was a
candidate to become a New York City
Police Officer.
VOICE (O.C.)
I see that in your packet. I’m just
going to go out on a limb here and
guess that that was before you
became a rampaging drug dealer.
DIVINE G
Well sir, I only hustled that one
year after my accident and then...
Mike Mike, can you get your feet
off the desk?
MIKE MIKE
My bad.
DIVINE G
It’s just hard to get the vibe with
you lounging like that.
MIKE MIKE
Alright, I got you.
DIVINE G
No. That was a DJ group. We were--
MIKE MIKE
I’ll bet it was funky as hell,
wasn’t it?
CARMINE
Man. How was I cast as a tree?
DINO
I started out as background on my
first production. Can’t have a
believable Sherwood Forest without
believable trees.
BRENT
OK. I want you all to step into the
circle, say your name, step out,
then step back in and introduce
yourself as your character, in that
voice.
DIVINE EYE
Prince Hamlet of Denmark.
The others won’t accept it. They make him go again. He goes
way over the top sarcastically.
DIVINE G
Gladiator Goliathon.
INT. THEATER / ONSTAGE - LATER
They have transitioned into the work for the day. Brent gives
an overview of the rehearsal schedule. The big dance and
musical numbers.
BRENT
Yes.
MOSI
I have a question about my
character. Wouldn’t he be freaked
out by some cat from Ancient Egypt
time traveling into the Middle
Ages? I mean, if I put myself into
the mind of someone from that time,
I don’t even know what a mummy is.
And do we even have a common
language?
BRENT
Well, good questions, but remember,
it’s a comedy, so we can take some
liberties and have fun with it. Why
don’t we workshop it when we get to
it and see how it plays?
DAP
I also had a question. Of what
nature is the time travel in this
play?
BRENT
The nature of...?
DAP
Is it via a wormhole? A rip in the
space-time fabric? I’m just
wondering how we play it. How hard
would it be on the human body?
BRENT
Well, again, those are great
questions, but um... why don’t we
take those scene by scene?
DIVINE G
Brent. May I?
Brent nods.
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
(to everyone)
Listen. You guys wanted a cowboy
play, you wanted Ancient Egypt.
Somebody asked for Freddy Krueger
for some reason. And Brent gave us
all that. How did you think that
was going to happen?
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
Let’s just focus on getting our
scenes up on their feet, focus on
the emotion of your scene and if
that’s true, then the play will
start to come together.
BRENT
Well, uh, thanks. That’s great. Why
don’t we start with your scene?
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BRENT
Amazing! Who’s next?
DIVINE EYE
I’ll do my scene.
BRENT
OK, that was a good start. It will
get smoother. Who wants to go next?
DAP
So is the mummy time traveling too?
Or just her son?
MIKE MIKE
I thought the mummy was a metaphor.
JJ
Forget that. How are we going to
get this thing done? It’s too many
props, too much wardrobe.
DINO
And it’s going to run four hours. B
Block will kill us. Right there on
stage, they’ll walk up and murder
every one of us.
MIKE MIKE
At least we won’t have to finish
the play.
JJ
Maybe we postpone until the fall.
Skip this production and give
ourselves more time to prep.
They look to Divine G.
DIVINE G
I say we go for it. I think this is
one of those instances where the
art we are seeking is also seeking
us. I have no idea why...
(laughs)
Trust the process.
DIVINE EYE
I’m good man. I’ll catch it on the
next round.
It throws off the energy of the group. But they move on.
DIVINE G
Yo. Before you leave, let me show
you something.
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
It’ll only take a second.
DIVINE EYE
Alright.
DIVINE G
Window’s got a nice view too. You
ever look out there?
DIVINE EYE
I don’t look where I can’t go. And
I don’t think you brought me up
here to look at some mountains.
DIVINE G
Listen. You uh, you seem...
frustrated with the work. I can see
you struggling and I’ve been there.
It’s--
DIVINE EYE
I’m not struggling, those exercises
are just goofy.
DIVINE G
They’re leading to something
bigger. You’ll find the depth if
you lean into it. There’s no bottom
to what the work will give you if
you--
DIVINE EYE
Is this the speech you give all the
new guys?
DIVINE G
It’s not a--
DIVINE EYE
Listen man, I know your type.
Always gotta be up front. On top.
Herding everybody around with your
lessons. But I don’t need that. I
didn’t come here for that.
DIVINE G
I’ve been wanting to put a play of
mine up for years. Years.
(MORE)
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
But then you walk in and ask for a
comedy and now... Here we are. But
I didn’t say one word. You know
why?
DIVINE EYE
Cause I was right. Cause everybody
likes a comedy.
DIVINE G
Because it’s what the group wanted.
It doesn’t matter what I want.
Doesn’t matter if we never do one
of my plays. No one is bigger than
the program. No one.
DIVINE EYE
(sarcastic)
Well you’re a real big person.
That’s--
DIVINE G
I know you’ve got a knife in your
waistband.
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
You think it makes you stronger but
it’s a false strength. That yard
shit is not necessary in here.
DIVINE EYE
I don’t need you telling me what’s
necessary.
DIVINE G
You’ve got your armor up. Afraid of
what might be underneath it. Afraid
that if--
DIVINE EYE
You practice that line?
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
All I want to say is: you signed up
for this program. You could have
the respect for your brothers to
try a little when you show up. At
least don’t fuck it up for them.
Divine Eye stares at him like he might try taking his head
off shortly.
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
This place is sacred. It’s fragile.
This program is on a tightrope and
if they take it away... They’ll
take any excuse to shut us down. A
blade would be a pretty good
excuse. That’s all I want to say to
you. Please remember how much these
guys need this.
DIVINE EYE
That’s it?
DIVINE G
That’s it.
BRENT
What about Divine Eye? Is he on A
Block?
BIG E
Nope. He’s B Block. No idea where
he is.
CO
Random contraband check. Step out
of the cell.
Divine G knows the drill. He sighs. Steps out and holds onto
the bars.
The CO goes in the cell and turns it over, goes through every
drawer, turns over his bed, fans out books and drops them.
Turns meticulous order to chaos.
CO (CONT’D)
OK. Go back in.
BRENT
Close your eyes and go to your most
perfect spot. Most perfect moment.
(MORE)
BRENT (CONT’D)
What are the sounds? Do you hear
anything? Who is there?
BRENT (CONT’D)
Do you feel the temperature? Is
there a breeze? Are you inside?
Out? What are the smells? Hold
yourself there. And... open your
eyes.
Divine G opens his eyes. The men are squinting at the light.
He sees Divine Eye, his face is serene.
BRENT (CONT’D)
Does anyone want to describe where
you just were?
MIKE MIKE
You know uh... I really tried to go
somewhere else. Squeezed my eyes.
Sniffed around. And I came up
empty. Just blank nothing. I guess
I’ve been here too long to imagine
anything out there. But uh...
(looks around at the
circle)
If I gotta be stuck somewhere. This
is where I’d be here. Right here
with yall. This spot. This is
perfect.
DIVINE EYE
Hey hey. He can’t walk back there.
I get nervous with people walking
behind me.
BRENT
Well you’re gonna have to get used
to that. Or act like it doesn’t
bother you.
DIVINE EYE
He could walk in front of me.
BRENT
At some point, someone will walk
behind you. Do you remember your
first mark?
DIVINE EYE
I’m supposed to be next to
Gravedigger. Then Leslie and Marion
magically appear stage left. Got
it.
BRENT
Great. Let’s run it.
DIVINE EYE
Shit. Line!
BRENT
Whether ‘tis nobler... Let’s take
it from the top.
They do, but now it’s not just Divine Eye stumbling. The
others in the scene are too. They can’t find a rhythm.
DINO
Stop!
DINO (CONT’D)
I was a keeplock monster. My anger
consumed me. I worked everything
out with violence. But one morning
at breakfast there was this guy
sitting across from me -- had a big
mole on his nose, I’ll never forget
that. I don’t know who he was but
somebody stepped up behind him and
just cut him. Ear to ear, didn’t
say nothing. The blood, it was...
everywhere. On the table, on my
clothes, on my... face. But I
didn’t move. None of us did. We
just sat there... still. Didn’t
even look at him as he died. Back
in my cell I realized... that’s not
normal. I started to feel like I
wasn’t even human. After that day
everything changed. I heard about
this and my first thought was,
dressing up in funny outfits and
dancing around in a max security
prison is not a great idea. But I
gave it a shot. First time I felt
like a human in... since I could
remember. It showed me the way
back.
The tension from the room is gone. They get back to work.
One man in line yells out to ask what’s going on. A CO yells
back for him to shut the fuck up.
Soon, Divine Eye comes and sits in the row behind him,
soaking wet from the rain.
DIVINE EYE
Why ain’t you up there?
DIVINE G
(without looking back)
We’re not rehearsing any scenes I’m
in today.
DIVINE EYE
So you just come through to keep a
check on everybody?
DIVINE G
I just enjoy watching them is all.
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
It’s a good reminder to see it when
it’s so... rough. But I know,
somehow someway, it’ll all come
together by opening night. Trust
the process. That’s what we say in
here.
DIVINE EYE
What are those notes then? Writing
love letters?
Divine G moves his hand over the notebook, covering the page.
DIVINE G
Nah. Legal work. Some brothers want
healthier food in the mess hall.
I’m researching some litigation to
see if we can fix that.
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
So you just drifted on in, huh?
DIVINE EYE
Yeah...
Divine Eye is quiet a moment.
The ship backdrop onstage almost falls over, the actors have
to hold it up while they devise a way to keep it standing.
DIVINE G
Trust the process.
DIVINE EYE
You got any kids?
DIVINE G
Two girls and a boy.
DIVINE EYE
What are their names?
DIVINE G
You’re all up in my business
today...
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
Divequa, Dinasia, and Karron.
Karron was just born when I came in
here. But he’s the only one who
still writes me. He’s getting into
acting, of all things. Been making
these little movies, putting them
on that youtube.
DIVINE EYE
You don’t write your girls?
DIVINE G
... They don’t... I don’t want to
bother them. They’re trying to live
their lives. We think we’re the
only ones in a prison, but they’re
locked up in here with us. In their
own way.
DIVINE G
There’s a trick to that, you know.
DIVINE EYE
(finally)
What’s the trick?
Divine G lays his script across a table. It’s got notes all
over it, more notes than lines.
DIVINE EYE
Holy shit.
DIVINE G
You can’t memorize your lines until
you know what they mean.
(MORE)
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
Gotta get down under them.
Paraphrase, whatever you’ve got to
do to understand what they’re
actually saying. Then...
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
Then you write. Write all your
scenes without punctuation. In one
long sentence. Write your lines and
write your scene partners’ lines.
It’s a mess but trust me.
(moving down the scroll)
Then, a week later, start taking it
down in blocks. Then scenes. Pretty
soon you’re running the whole thing
in your head. Then out loud. And
then... Only then can you really
start to play with it. Then you can
be present in the moment.
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
The point is to make it digestible.
You do it the same way you eat an
elephant. One bite at a time.
Here...
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
Made one for you.
DIVINE EYE
Thanks. What are those big ones?
DIVINE G
Ah these...
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
My lists. Got one for the day. One
for the week. The month. The year.
Five years...
DIVINE EYE
Bro. I’ve met serial killers that
weren’t this organized.
Divine G laughs.
DIVINE G
Helps me fight the slow time.
DIVINE EYE
What’s that one?
DIVINE G
The most important one. Other than
the play. Got a parole hearing
coming up. A clemency hearing.
DIVINE EYE
They say you found a tape. Proving
you’re innocent.
DIVINE G
Took me ten years. But yes.
DIVINE EYE
Well then you got the golden goose.
I don’t even have to say good luck.
DIVINE G
We’ll see... Do you feel prepared
for your date?
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
I saw the docket. I don’t want to
get in your business, but to be
successful you have to--
DIVINE EYE
(quick)
I’m good man. I’ve gotta take care
of some business. Thanks for the
help.
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
(holds out the paper)
Forgot this.
More peasants appear and as soon as they see the dead peasant
they die too.
BRENT
OK OK OK. Umm... We’re too
restrained. Too stiff. This is
supposed to fly off the rails.
He thinks.
BRENT (CONT’D)
Everyone on stage.
(sees hesitation)
Let’s go. Everyone.
BRENT (CONT’D)
Pair up. We’re going to do a little
exercise.
BRENT (CONT’D)
OK. I want you to die for each
other. There’s no right way, no
wrong way, anyway you want, the
only rule is... you have to make
your partner laugh. Let’s go.
Some of them start dying immediately. Others are less sure.
BRENT (CONT’D)
Don’t overthink it, just follow
your instincts!
DIVINE G
You want to go first?
DIVINE EYE
Nah, let’s see the pro in action.
DIVINE G
Not bad, huh?
DIVINE EYE
You know when somebody tells a joke
so bad, that you have to laugh at
just how bad it is?
DIVINE G
Oh come on. I threw a little
Laurence Olivier in there.
DIVINE EYE
I never met him. Where’s he doing
his bid?
DIVINE G
OK smartass, show me how it’s done
then.
DIVINE EYE
Alright then, I just have to--
Divine Eye starts choking, gasping for air but none comes.
It’s hyper-realistic, veins popping out on his neck. Not
funny at all.
DIVINE G
You can’t use props though, that’s
cheating.
DIVINE EYE
I didn’t hear Brent say that in the
rules. Hey Brent! Did you say
anything about props?
BRENT
(across the room)
What?!
DIVINE G
Nevermind that. You can cheat.
Check this.
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
Ah hah!
DIVINE EYE
I’ll give you that one. Reminded me
of my corny uncle.
DIVINE G
Nuh uh. You’re just playing it
cool. You loved it.
DIVINE EYE
Whatever. But do you know how to
die like this--
We move back now and watch the whole company try to one-up
each other in a “die off”. Noble deaths. Vengeful deaths.
Cowardly deaths. Playing like kids.
INT. THEATER - LATER
BRENT
Want to try it again?
DIVINE EYE
Why? Did I do something wrong?
BRENT
Let’s just try something.
DIVINE EYE
Long as you don’t say anything
about eating any fucking elephants.
BRENT
I don’t know what that means, but I
won’t... OK. Let’s start at the
beginning.
DIVINE EYE
With my first line?
BRENT
No no no. To before you even walk
onstage. Go to the wing, then step
into the scene.
BRENT (CONT’D)
Go ahead. Let’s see it.
Divine Eye sighs. Then trudges off. Comes back in and stands
on his mark.
BRENT (CONT’D)
Sorry, did you do it already? I
fell asleep.
BRENT (CONT’D)
You’re stepping onstage like you
need permission to be here. If you
have that mindset, you can’t flow.
You have to take the stage. Show
the audience it’s time to pay
attention to you.
Divine Eye tries again. It’s a little better.
DIVINE G
(to Brent)
May I?
(to Divine Eye)
Think about it this way. The world
out there expects men like you and
me to walk through a door cowering.
To bow our head. To feel like we
don’t belong. But not in here. In
here you’re Divine fucking Eye.
Divine G demonstrates.
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
Walk in big. Like when you step out
into the yard. Say I’m fuckin here.
This is my fucking theater!
DIVINE EYE
I’M FUCKIN HERE.
DIVINE G
THIS IS MY FUCKIN THEATER.
DIVINE EYE
THIS MY FUCKIN THEATER!!
DIVINE G
That’s how you do it. Alright.
Now. Where are you going. How do
you leave the scene. Emotionally...
DIVINE EYE
I’m mad.
DIVINE G
Mad. Why?
DIVINE EYE
Cause Maid Marion left me for him.
I gave her this rock to remember
me. And she threw it out like
garbage.
DIVINE G
But anger. That’s easy. It’s the
easiest thing to play. You go big,
you scream, and wow, he’s angry.
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
You wanna go deeper. Try playing
hurt. Hurt makes you look in. Makes
you name it.
BRENT (O.C.)
Let’s run it from the top!
CUT TO:
Divine G and Divine Eye and other men from the company
rehearse throughout the prison.
CUT TO:
BRENT
Hmm. We’ll take a look at that.
Check with props.
BIG E
Brent. Brocolli? I need a six
shooter. Make it cardboard. Paint
it in crayons. What am I supposed
to do with broccoli? No one’s gonna
buy it.
BRENT
It’s funny. They’re expecting a six-
shooter. Make em expect a six-
shooter. Then give em broccoli.
The actor doesn’t totally buy it. Then the man playing Freddy
Krueger approaches, tense.
JJ
We’ve got a serious issue here. The
RTA principles are not clear in my
character. And if I don’t have a
motivation and a moral, we’ll undo
everything we’ve been fighting for.
MIKE MIKE
You’re Freddy Krueger dude. Your
motivation is slicing people up.
BRENT
The moral is in the mummy.
CUT TO:
The stage crew turns it on, but the spot is off by a foot.
BRENT
We can move the mark a little.
DIVINE EYE
Alright, let’s move the mark.
BRENT
The Superintendent has some big
money out in the seats. Money that
can buy us curtains. We need to
melt their faces off with this
fight scene.
MIKE MIKE
We got this.
BRENT
Make it savage.
They finish and bow to polite clapping from their guests. The
Superintendent walks the women out.
BRENT
Don’t worry guys. We can figure it
out without curtains.
Divine Eye and Divine G are off to the side in their own row.
Divine Eye is pushing the sad looking meal around with his
fork.
DIVINE G
Need a line reading?
DIVINE EYE
Huh?
DIVINE G
Nothing. Bad joke. You OK?
DIVINE EYE
It’s just, Hamlet bro. That
soliloquy.
(looks for the words)
My slings and arrows are on the
inside. And all this make believe
ain’t gonna change that. If they
stamp my ticket and crack those
gates... I’m still a fucking
gangster. Jail house college
doesn’t change that. Theater ain’t
gonna change it. It’s my destiny.
It was always waiting for me. It’s
like Hamlet, all he wants is Maid
Marion and he’s going to try and
take on the whole Roman Empire, but
to what end?
DIVINE G
I forget how different this version
of Hamlet is. But listen. That’s
not what I see. You’re an artist.
You always have been.
(MORE)
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
This isn’t turning you into
something else, it’s revealing the
parts of you that have been hidden.
Let it. Let it strip all that other
shit away.
BRENT
Some of you have expressed that a
traditional curtain call is not in
the spirit of Mummy’s Code.
BRENT (CONT’D)
So instead of a bow... we’re gonna
dance. Keys... hit it.
DIVINE EYE
Fuck it. Let’s roll.
Divine Eye starts to move. And like a wave the room bursts
into motion.
Two long-cut boards are brought in, painted like WAVES ON THE
SEA.
They layer the boards and stand on either end, pulling them
back and forth to make it look like ROLLING WAVES, endless
open ocean.
Everyone is in awe as they watch. Transported.
Divine Eye takes the stage with confidence. The whole company
surrounds the stage watching.
Divine G and Mike Mike are on pins and needles with the rest.
Divine Eye starts the soliloquy.
DIVINE EYE
Perchance... Perchaaaance--
Divine Eye reaches out his fist, like he’s grabbing for the
last line. But he only catches air.
They all come around him, razzing him and celebrating his
progress. Brent gives him a hug.
BRENT
Very close. And very good. One more
time from the top?
DIVINE G
Hey. Been waiting for you. Spin the
yard with me?
Divine Eye follows him and they start walking the path
together.
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
I know you haven’t had a lot of
time to prep for your parole board
hearing.
(MORE)
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
I don’t want to step on your toes,
but I know you’ve been busy with
the play -- I remember how much it
was my first year -- so I did a
little prep work for you.
DIVINE EYE
What did I say the last time we
talked about this?
DIVINE G
I did what I could on the forms,
you’ll just need to fill in the
addresses and all that. And write
your essay. The other stuff is just
a template. You’ll need to put it
in your own words to--
DIVINE EYE
How can you stand here and have all
this faith in the system? The
system that put you here. The
system that won’t let you out, even
with what you have. I got none of
that and--
DIVINE G
Are you telling me they got you?
DIVINE EYE
Who got me?
DIVINE G
They’ve got you convinced that you
belong in here. That this is where
you’re supposed to be--
DIVINE EYE
--That ain’t it--
DIVINE G
--and now you can act tough and say
you’re not going to prepare but
that’s what’s real, isn’t it? They
got you fooled.
DIVINE G
Don’t say it. They want you to say
it. But you’re not a lap dog,
you’re a fucking wolf.
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
How we see the world is how it’s
delivered to us.
DIVINE EYE
(slowly)
If I try and they don’t let me
out...
DIVINE G
Then you try again on the next one.
It doesn’t change who you are or
where you’re supposed to be.
DIVINE EYE
How long does the essay need to be?
DIVINE G
There’s no limit. Three to five
pages is a good length, from my
research.
DIVINE EYE
I heard sometimes they don’t even
tell you their decision. You just
wait.
DIVINE G
They always send a letter. If it’s
a thick letter, you didn’t get it.
But if it’s thin, just one sheet of
paper... then you’re free. Thick as
a brick, or light as a feather.
Divine G and Mike Mike are talking across their cells. Just
sharing stories and chatting.
MIKE MIKE
Ballet? Are you joking?
DIVINE G
(laughs)
Shut the fuck up. I loved it.
There’s no room for lies in ballet.
Everything is direct, every
movement is necessary.
(gets quiet)
I couldn’t tell my friends about--
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
Hey. You fall asleep on me again?
Still silence.
DIVINE G (O.S.)
(smiles)
After I sat through your dumbass
story.
He rolls over.
The whole cast sits in a big circle on the stage. Except for
ONE EMPTY CHAIR. Mike Mike’s. We let them sit in silence for
a while. Taking in each face. Their grief.
BIG E
Man, I can understand a brother
stringing up. I can understand a
stabbing. But his brain just shut
down...
PREME
My dad died of an aneurism. One day
he was fine, the next just... I
found him leaned over the sink.
Toothbrush still in his mouth.
They start to share stories about what Mike Mike did for each
of them.
Divine G tries to nod along and smile but its clear something
is breaking apart inside of him.
DIVINE EYE
Do you want to talk about it?
DIVINE G
Everything that needed to be said,
got said. Right? Do you need to get
anything off your chest?
DIVINE EYE
I’m only asking because you didn’t
say much earlier and--
DIVINE G
(sharp)
What’s that supposed to mean?
DIVINE EYE
Look man. I didn’t mean anything by
it. I’m just saying, if you need--
DIVINE G
I’m good.
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
I gotta go write a dozen letters to
his family tonight. So I need to
finish up these chairs. Appreciate
it.
DIVINE G
That’s correct.
LEAD COMMISSIONER FERGUSON
You have also served out your
sentence for criminal possession of
a controlled substance, third
degree, one to three year sentence
by plea.
DIVINE G
Yes.
DIVINE G
Did you also have time to review
the letter from the Jeffrey
Deskovic Foundation for Justice? I
received a letter saying there was
some issue with the timing of my
filing, but I sent it within the
submission window.
DIVINE G
As far as I understand.
DIVINE G
To date. That’s correct.
DIVINE G
I understand.
DIVINE G
(excited)
Yes. Harold Wesley confessed to the
crime on that tape. But it was
buried, along with some other key
evidence.
DIVINE G
I don’t...
DIVINE G
Yes. I’m one of the founding
members of that program. I’m very
proud of it.
DIVINE G
No I’m not a director. I’m on the
Steering Committee, kind of the
board that guides the direction of
the program inside. And yes, I act.
Usually a few roles per production.
(growing more proud)
It seems like just acting in a
play, but it really opens up
something inside these men --
myself included -- that was closed
off. We all learn to get closer in
touch with our feelings.
DIVINE G
(fumbling)
Well I-- Well no, not here. Of
course not. I mean this is-- This
is coming from the heart. I hope
that’s the way it’s being
interpreted, it’s coming from the
heart. I just--
(stops, takes a breath)
(MORE)
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
The program is designed to help
individuals learn management skills
and just, become better human
beings. That’s all I was trying to
get across.
DIVINE G
Thank you for the time. And thank
you for the consideration.
DIVINE G
You’re going home.
DIVINE EYE
I can’t believe it. It still
doesn’t feel real.
DIVINE EYE (CONT’D)
What about yours man? Have you
heard anything yet?
DIVINE G
Come on. They’re waiting for you.
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
You know you don’t have to carry
that thing everywhere with you,
right? They’ll let you out even if
you lose it.
DIVINE EYE
I have to keep looking at it to
make sure I read it right.
DIVINE EYE
This, um, reminds me of something
I read on the wall in the box. Got
me through my longest stretch in
there.
(thinks a moment)
(MORE)
DIVINE EYE (CONT’D)
We the willing, led by the
unknowing, have been doing the
impossible for the ungrateful for
so long, with so little, that now
we are qualified to do anything
with nothing.
(considers the cupcake)
I love yall man. Every one of you.
Now come up here and get some of
this. Everyone gets a taste, even
if its just a little one.
PETE
I haven’t worn a suit in fifteen
years.
DIVINE EYE
OK, that’s good. Can you move over
toward the stage, brother? Lotta
guys need to use this mirror.
CUT TO:
INT. ONSTAGE - LATER
The Egyptian Set is wheeled in. The prince does his Egyptian
slide across the stage. Two Egyptian guards stand beside
Mummy in her sarcophagus.
DIVINE G
Zakariedies has got me locked into
a 25 year no-pay contract. If I
don't stay and be his number one
gladiator, he's gonna kill my wife
and daughters and feed me to the
lions.
The timing throws his scene partner, who stumbles. Then asks
for his line.
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
(to first actor)
You say, We sure could’a used you
for some serious backup. Then I
say, Hey, well never fear,
Gladiator Goliathon is here. I’ll
smash ‘em, I’ll bash ‘em, whether
short or tall. Then,
(to second actor)
You say, Why, you’re just the kind
of person we need. You could be our
bodyguard, and hopefully you’ve at
least been rehearsing,
(turning to the theater)
And then I cap it off by moving up
and saying the profound line, Look,
if you can help me escape, consider
it done. And that’s the end of Act
IV.
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
Oh yes, and remember, it’s a
comedy. So say it BIG! Say it
merry! Be HAPPY!
BRENT (O.S.)
Um. Why don’t we take five and--
DIVINE G
Why? It’s not going to help. More
time and more time, if we don’t
have it now, we’re not going to get
it, don’t you all understand that?
Don’t you get that?
DIVINE EYE
C’mon bro. Let’s take a walk.
DIVINE G
(snaps)
Get the fuck away from me!
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
See? Anger is easy to play.
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
What the fuck are we doing here?
These silly fucking outfits.
Dancing around, for what? So we can
do it all over again in six months?
Working our asses off. We kill
ourselves just to get permission to
paint cardboard and then what?
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
We’re just entertaining ourselves.
Dancing for them while they warm up
the chair. That’s the real fucking
joke.
DIVINE EYE
You done?
DIVINE G
No. I’m not.
(long pause)
Isn’t that hilarious?
Divine G walks off the stage into the darkness until it
envelopes him whole.
- The THEATER. The stage filled with props, but dark and
empty.
DINO
Hey!
DINO (CONT’D)
You love this program? You’re
protective of it? How did you get
in here?
JJ
So does that mean the rules don’t
apply to him? We have clear
protocols in place for this.
BRENT
I remember my first time directing
a production in here. I decided all
the roles, who would get what
parts. It’s how you do it on the
outside, the director decides. Then
I brought that list in and Divine G
pulled me aside and said, that’s
not how we do it here. We decide
together.
Brent thinks.
BRENT (CONT’D)
When the towers fell, I was so
worried about you guys. I called
all my friends, a few family
members, but I couldn’t call you. I
couldn’t make sure you were ok. The
second they let us in I came back
and Divine G was the first person I
saw. I cried at the sight of him.
He just pulled me in and let me get
it all out. Then he said, you good?
I said, yeah I think so. He said,
OK, well get your shit together. I
don’t need you worrying the others.
The young man he extorted crosses the room and sits with a
GROUP OF HARD-LOOKING MEN. He’s accepted into their ranks.
He looks across the room at Divine Eye. The young man looks
ten years older. It seems to have cost him a lot to get this
money.
But not the wealth Divine Eye longs for any longer.
BRENT
Now hold that face in your mind.
And open your eyes.
CHARLIE
Did it look like me?
They group explodes with excitement, everyone jumps up,
hugging Charlie.
CUT TO:
A LITTLE LATER.
CHARLIE
(looking for the words)
I’ve been talking to a counselor
and she says, you know, I might
have the, uh, the PT...
CARMINE
(softly)
PTSD.
CHARLIE
I miss yall is all. I feel like my
family is in here and I’m just...
CHARLIE (CONT’D)
(collecting himself)
Ah shit. Brent asked me to come in
here and pump you up before the big
show and look at me.
CHARLIE (CONT’D)
Maybe, uh, maybe we can do a
exercise. Just cut it up a little.
Would that be OK?
BRENT
Yeah. Definitely. Let’s all get up
on our feet. Stop sitting around
like a sewing circle.
They all get on their feet and Brent starts describing the
exercise.
DIVINE EYE
You know, I lied when I came into
the program. I said I didn’t know
what those plays were and I just
wanted to talk to the chicks and
all that. I mean, I did want to
talk to chicks, but I knew about
the plays. I was artistic, you
know. When I was a kid.
Divine G is listening.
Divine Eye gets quiet, looks around the yard. His world here.
DIVINE EYE
The one with the... guys in the
asylum--
DIVINE G
Cuckoo’s Nest. Not a comedy.
DIVINE EYE
(smiles at that)
Nope. But here’s what it was. See,
before that day, I thought I was
free. I did whatever I wanted. I
was a wolf. But I saw you up on
stage, crying over someone who
died, and I realized, I ain’t free.
I wear a mask. Every day. All of us
do. Except for you. And I needed
that. I watched every play you were
in after that. I got on the waiting
list and I spent a whole year
getting no tickets, just so I could
know what that felt like.
DIVINE G
I knew you were lying about that
too. I never forget a face out in
that crowd.
DIVINE EYE
(laughs)
Yeah right.
DIVINE G
I fucked up.
DIVINE EYE
You did.
DIVINE G
What’s that?
DIVINE EYE
You gotta admit that I absolutely
crushed that soliloquy. Like,
Shakespeare himself rolled around
in his grave just a little so he
could hear what I was bringing to
it.
Divine G laughs.
DIVINE G
You did. You did, my beloved.
BACKSTAGE.
Divine G looks across the cast. They look him back at him,
waiting for him to say something.
DIVINE G
I thought I was stronger. And uh...
I’m just grateful for this family.
Then one actor starts a chant that the others soon join.
ALL
(starting quiet)
Energy. Energy. Flowing through my
body.
(a little louder)
Energy. Energy! Flowing through my
body.
CUT TO:
And then...
A roar of applause.
WASH TO WHITE.
CO
Yall were pretty good out there the
other night.
DIVINE G
They let me come down and say
goodbye. Still waiting?
DIVINE EYE
Been the longest two days of my
whole bid.
DIVINE G
I’ve heard that.
(of the cell)
You cleaned out.
DIVINE EYE
I didn’t have that much to start
with. Sorry I didn’t have nothing
to give you. I didn’t feel like I
had nothing good enough.
DIVINE G
You’ve given me plenty.
DIVINE EYE
This ain’t goodbye, you know. I’ll
see you out there before long.
DIVINE G
Nah...
DIVINE EYE
Come on man. Don’t get all, what’d
you call it, fatalistic. Don’t bum
me out on my last day in here.
DIVINE G
Nah, It’s not like that. I’m good.
Here. Whatever that means.
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
I had a little brother, Jeffrey. He
had a, condition, it was
congenital. His heart wasn’t strong
enough to pump blood around his
body... looked all blue since I can
remember. It was ironic because he
was the biggest hearted person I
ever met. He knew things too. From
the time he was ten he started
saying he was gonna die soon, that
he wouldn’t be with us long. He
always said, Davey, don’t worry
mama when I’m gone. I used to get
so fuckin mad at him but...
(MORE)
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
it was just cause I was scared of
what he was saying. Scared of
losing him.
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
I used to carry him to the park in
the afternoons. The 260 park in
Canarsie. He was a baseball fanatic
so we’d go down to the five
diamonds and watch the other kids
play. I don’t know anything about
baseball but I’d just sit there and
listen to him talk and talk. He saw
all these intricacies of the game I
just didn’t see.
(sighs)
After I lost him... I didn’t open
up. I took care of people but I
didn’t really... I didn’t want to
lose somebody I was close to like
that again.
(looks at Divine Eye)
I couldn’t stand you when you came
into the program. Couldn’t stand
the sight of you.
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
Now I feel like I’m sitting on that
bench again with him. Knowing he’s
going someplace better, but wishing
so bad he’d just stay a little
longer.
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
Alright get out of here.
Divine G sips his tea and makes a few notes. The others are
still buzzing from the play, talking about what a joy it was
to do a comedy.
JJ
Yeah, but I thought a comedy would
be a lot easier than that.
BIG E
So what do we want to do next?
DAP
What about one of Divine G’s plays?
DAP (CONT’D)
Do you have one that you want to
do?
DIVINE G
I don’t know...
JJ
Come on man. Wasn’t there one about
a music man or something?
DIVINE G
Ah yeah. Fine Print. But that one
still needs some work. Lost in the
second act.
(thinks)
You know. I’ve got one that I wrote
a couple years back that could fit.
It’s called Pro Se. It’s about...
His GATE clangs open. He steps out, carrying his box, and
stands outside his gate, waiting for his CO escort.
He looks around. His eyes land on Mike Mike’s old cell. A new
face looks out at him from it. A young man. They nod to each
other, a subtle moment of recognition.
Divine G stands with his paper sack. A twenty foot steel gate
lumbers open.
The CO makes a note and signals to the gate man in the tower.
DIVINE G
I was just trying not to walk too
fast. Didn’t want them to see me
running, think I was escaping and
shoot me.
They laugh.
Divine Eye meets G along the fence. They grab each other a
deep hug. Holding it for a while.
DIVINE EYE
You good?
DIVINE G
It’s a lot, isn’t it?
DIVINE G (CONT’D)
Almost too much.
DIVINE EYE
Just sit with it man. Sit with it.
You’ve got plenty of time.
Divine G leans his head back by the open window. The trees
give way to open farmland. The breeze and the sunlight
crossing his face. He closes his eyes. Soaks it in.
And then his eyes open. To the new world.
THE END.