Munication Unit 3
Munication Unit 3
COMMUNICATION
COURSE CODE:1070347103
SEMESTER-1
DR.SHREYA VERMA
ASSISTANT PROFESSOR
BUSINESS LETTER
• Vary Sentence and Paragraph - For clear communication, short and directed
sentences are preferred. The sentences should not be too short and direct as
the message may sound monotonous. Simplified sentences are shorter and
easier to understand. Complex and compound sentences should be used in the
paragraph to break the monotony and dull appearance. Paragraphs should vary
in length and structure as well. The average length of the paragraph should be
kept undersized to match with the nature of report. Letters, e-mails, and
memos have shorter paragraphs. The first and last paragraphs are shorter too.
They make it easier for the reader. It may require the topic to be divided into a
couple of paragraphs. Paragraphs should not exceed more than 8-10 lines to
improve readability. The consistency and clarity should not be compromised
because of variety in the paragraph.
• Revise and proofread - Once you have all of your ideas recorded, you need
to begin revising and restructures. Obviously, you will make certain that
there are no grammatical or spelling errors. You will also need to look at the
tone and follow of your writing. Contrast carelessness with casualness in
your writing styler. Harsher tones are lent to messages in case of
high-speed types of communication. Revision and proofreading can keep
away from negative impressions caused by carelessness or creating any sort
of harsh exchange.
• Since you addressed the recipients in the heading, there’s no need to include a greeting.
2. Opening statement
• This section can be between one and three sentences. The opening statement is where you
briefly state the purpose of your memo. Include only a summary of the most crucial
information in this section. Later you’ll be able to get into the details.
3. Context
• In three to ten sentences, provide context. Context is where you let people know what you’re
writing about, why you’re writing them, and any other critical information.
• This section may include the following:
• supporting evidence
• why your organization made the decision you’re discussing in the memo
• background information
• a problem statement
• how you found the problem
• important timing or dates
• other key points
4. Call to action and task statement
• This section can be either two to three sentences or a bullet-pointed
list. This is where you lay out the next steps for your recipients. Write
about what the recipient should do after they read the memo or how
you plan to solve the problem you’ve described.
• Try writing, “Please [task you’d like completed] by [due date]” or “I
appreciate your cooperation in this matter.”
5. Discussion
• The aim of this portion is to persuade the recipients to follow your
recommended actions. Lay out all of the details that support your
ideas, beginning with the most critical information. Give specific
supporting facts, ideas, and research that back up your memo,
organizing the information from strongest to weakest.
6. Closing
• The closing section is an opportunity to end your memo on a courteous note. We
recommend you share what you want your recipients to take action on one more
time here, as well. Generally, memos don’t include a farewell. But if you want to
have one, make sure to keep it brief.
7. Optional additions
• You can include a summary or attachments with your memo if you need to. You
should include a summary if your memo is more than one page. Summaries help
recipients more easily digest the information you’ve shared.
• You can place the summary right before your closing statement. A summary may
list key recommendations, a summation of important information, references,
methods, or resources you used. If the information in your memo needs further
clarification, you can place it within this section. Summaries can be a few
sentences long or a bullet-pointed list of key information.
• Your supplemental information should include any documentation you want to
share, such as graphs, lists, tables, or photos. If you choose to include
attachments, include a note about what you’ve attached below your closing.
8. Revise
• Now that you’ve written your memo, it’s time to revise! Follow the
steps below to ensure your memo is as clear and concise as possible.
Remember: the shorter, the better.
• Cut out any unnecessary material.
• Clarify your main points.
• Proofread for spelling, grammar, and punctuation mistakes.
• Check your facts and resources.
• Get feedback from a colleague before sending.
HOW MEMO IS DIFFERENT FROM…
• How is a memo different from an email?
• Memos are typically more formal in tone and language than emails,
which are most effective when they’re short and to the point. In the
future, the company may use your memo as an official document that
will be printed, disseminated as hard copies, or distributed
professionally to a large group of people in a readable format.
• How is a memo different from a letter?
• Typically, letters are addressed to individuals outside of the
organization. They are meant for longer external messages
communicating a specific topic. These may be informal or formal in
tone.
• How is a memo different from a press release?
• Memos are usually used for internal communications, while press
releases are intended for external communications. A press release is
understood to typically be a longer, more detailed document than a
memo.
• How is a memo different from a circular?
• Circulars are for mass distribution. On the other hand, memos are for
a select group of people. Circulars typically have multiple topics and
calls to action. Memos should address only one subject, briefly.
• Internal changes
• When an organization makes policy, procedural, or high-level staffing changes, an internal
change memo should be written. The HR department may send this email, or it might
come from the leadership team or another department.
• To: All Employees
• From: Kelly Source, Human Resources Manager
• Date: July 20, 2022
• Subject: Changes to Paid Time Off System
• I’m writing to inform you about the recent changes to our PTO system. We are switching
platforms to PalmLeaf HR. This system will go into effect on October 1, 2022.
• In switching to PalmLeaf HR, our company is attempting to make submitting your PTO
requests simpler. You can find tutorials for navigating this easy-to-use platform attached to
this memo.
• You’ll receive an onboarding email from PalmLeaf HR directly this week. Please be sure to
set up your account no later than September 30, 2022.
• If you’re having trouble setting up your account, please email us with any questions at
HR@example.com.
• Thank you for your cooperation during this transition. We’re hopeful that this will make
managing your PTO easier.
• Attached: PalmLeafHR Guide, January 2022
• General business memo
• A general business memo format may be used for just about any business
item. Whether it’s a project in progress or an internal analysis, this
versatile format will fit.
• To: Ava Colon, Phil Comma, and Dave Period
• From: Peter Office, Senior Data Analyst
• Date: May 20, 2022
• Subject: Revenue Analysis
• I’m writing to address the revenue analysis report your team requested.
This analysis covers revenue streams from 2010 to the first quarter of 2022.
• This report was requested by the sales team in January 2022 when Dave
Period stepped into the Chief Sales Coordinator position. The analysis was
compiled using Tableau, and the reports are attached.
• At this time, I am asking you to review the data and let me know if there’s
anything else you’d like me to analyze more deeply. The best way for you to
view the dashboard is through the invite from Tableau in your email inbox.
• Here are the main points from my analysis:
• Our main stream of revenue is our flagship product, Hawaiian-style shirts.
• The second top revenue stream is the running hats.
• Our revenue is generated sales driven primarily through email marketing
efforts.
• There were some periods during which the data were not available and are
therefore not included in this analysis.
• Thank you for taking the time to review this analysis. Please feel free to send
any questions or concerns you have to me at poffice@example.com. If you’re
having technical difficulties accessing the dashboard, please contact our IT
department at IT@example.com for assistance.
• Attached:
• Tableau Guide, 2022
• 2010–2021 Revenue Analysis Report, May 2022
PERSUASIVE MESSAGE
• A persuasive message is the central message that intrigues, informs,
convinces, or calls to action. Persuasive messages are often discussed
in terms of reason versus emotion. Every message has elements of
ethos, or credibility; pathos, or passion and enthusiasm; and logos, or
logic and reason. If your persuasive message focuses exclusively on
reason with cold, hard facts and nothing but the facts, you may or
may not appeal to your audience. People make decisions on emotion
as well as reason, and even if they have researched all the relevant
facts, the decision may still come down to impulse, emotion, and
desire.
TYPICAL FORMAT
• Part Description
• Attention statement (or hook): Use humour, novelty, surprise, an unusual fact, or a
question to get the attention of your audience.
• Introduction: Build interest by appealing to your audience’s needs and wants and
include a purpose statement to set up expectations.
• Explanation: Establish credibility and build your relationship with your audience,
discuss attractive features, and compare with competitors addressing concerns or
potential questions before they are even considered.
• Call to action: Sum it up and offer solution steps or calls to action, motivating your
audience to take the next step. The smaller the step, the more likely your
audience will comply. Set up your audience for an effective closing. It should be
clear what your audience should do, by when, and how.
STRATEGIES FOR PERSUASIVE MESSAGES
• Start with your greatest benefit. Use it in the headline, subject line, caption, or attention
statement. Audiences tend to remember the information from the beginning and end of a
message, but have less recall about the middle points. Make your first step count by
highlighting the best feature first.
• Take baby steps. Promote, inform, and persuade on one product or service at a time. You
want to hear “yes,” and if you confuse the audience with too much information, too many
options, steps to consider, or related products or service, you are more likely to hear “no”
as a defensive response as the audience tries not to make a mistake. Avoid confusion and
keep it simple.
• Know your audience. The more background research you can do on your audience, the
better you can anticipate their specific wants and needs and tailor your persuasive
message to meet them.
• Lead with emotion, and follow with reason. Gain the audience’s attention with drama,
humour, or novelty and follow with specific facts that establish your credibility, provide
more information about the product or service, and lead to your call to action.
NEGATIVE MESSAGES
• Your ability to manage, clarify, and guide understanding is key to addressing
challenging situations while maintaining trust and integrity with customers,
coworkers, managers, the public, and other stakeholders. Keep in mind these
seven goals when delivering bad news in person or in writing:
• Be clear and concise to avoid being asked for additional clarification.
• Help the receiver understand and accept the news.
• Reduce the anxiety associated with the bad news as much as possible by
expressing sympathy or empathy.
• Maintain trust and respect between you and your audience to ensure the
possibility of good future relations.
• Deliver the bad news in a timely fashion in the appropriate channel(s).
• Avoid the legal liability that comes with admitting negligence or guilt.
• Achieve the designated business outcome.
MESSAGE BUFFER
• Begin with neutral or positive statements that sets a welcoming tone and serve as a
buffer for the information to come. A buffer softens the blow of bad news like the airbag
in a car softens the driver’s collision with the steering wheel in a high-speed car accident.
If there is any positive news that can calm the receiver, here at the beginning would be a
good time to point them out. The following are some possible buffer strategies:
• Good news: If there’s good news and bad news, start with the good news.
• Compliment: If you’re rejecting someone’s application, for instance, start by
complimenting them on their efforts and other specific accomplishments you were
impressed by in their application.
• Gratitude: Say thanks for whatever positive things the recipient has done in your
dealings with them. If they’ve submitted a claim that doesn’t qualify for an adjustment,
for instance, thank them for choosing your company.
• Agreement: Before delivering bad news that you’re sure the recipient is going to
disagree with and oppose, start with something you’re sure you both agree on. Start on
common ground by saying, “We can all agree that . . . .”
• Facts: If positives are hard to come by, starting with cold, hard facts, is
the next best thing.
• Understanding: Again, if there is no positive news to point to, showing
you care by expressing sympathy and understanding is a possible
alternative (Guffey et al. 2016, p. 194)
• Apology: If you’re at fault for any aspect of a bad-news message, an
apology is appropriate as long as it won’t leave you at a disadvantage in
legal proceedings that may follow as a result of admitting wrongdoing.
TIPS OF WRITING NEGATIVE MESSAGES
• Avoiding Disaster in Bad-news Messages: Delivering bad news can be dangerous if it
angers the reader so much that they are motivated to fight back. If you’re not careful
with what you say, that message can be used as evidence in a court case that, when read
by a judge or jury, could compromise your position. You can lower the risk of being
litigated against by following the general principles given below when delivering bad
news.
• Avoid Negative or Abusive Language: Sarcasm, profanity, harsh accusations, and abusive
or insulting language may feel good to write in a fit of anger but, in the end, make
everyone’s lives more difficult. When someone sends an inflammatory message and it’s
interpreted by the reader as harmful to their reputation, it could legally qualify as libel
that is legitimately actionable. Even if you write critically about a rival company’s product
or service by stating (as if factually) that it’s dangerous, whereas your version of the
product or service is safer and better, this can be considered defamation or libel. If said
aloud and recorded, perhaps on a smart phone’s voice recorder, it is slander and can
likewise be litigated. It’s much better to always write courteously and maturely, even
under difficult circumstances, to avoid fallout that involves expensive court proceedings.
• Avoid Oversharing but Tell the Truth: When your job is to provide a
convincing rationale that might make the recipient of bad news accept it
as reasonable, be careful with what details you disclose. When rejecting
a job applicant, for instance, you must be especially careful not to lay all
your cards on the table by sharing the scoring sheets of the winning and
rejected candidates, nor even summarize them. Though that would give
them the full picture, it would open you up to a flood of complaints and
legal or human-rights challenges picking apart every little note. Instead,
you would simply wish the rejected candidate luck in their ongoing job
search. When you must provide detail, avoid saying anything bad about
anyone so that you can’t be accused of libel and taken to court for it.
Provide only as much information as is necessary to provide a
convincing rationale.
• Respect the Recipient’s Privacy: Criticizing an employee in a group
email or memo—even if the criticism is fair—is mean, unprofessional,
and an excellent way of opening yourself to a world of trouble. People
who call out others in front of a group create a chilly climate in the
workplace, one that leads to fear, loathing, and a loss of productivity
among employees, not to mention legal challenges for possible libel.
Called-out employees may even resort to sabotaging the office with
misbehaviour such as vandalism, cyberattacks, or theft to get even.
Always maintain respect and privacy when communicating bad news
as a matter of proper professionalism.
CRISIS COMMUNICATION
• A crisis communication plan is the prepared scenario document that
organizes information into responsibilities and lines of communication prior
to an event. If an emergency arises when you already have a plan in place,
each person knows his or her role and responsibilities from a common
reference document. Overall effectiveness can be enhanced with a clear
understanding of roles and responsibilities for an effective and swift
response. The plan should include four elements: