Key 2 e Writingworkshop 1
Key 2 e Writingworkshop 1
• Use your paragraph plan as a guide. To join words / clauses: … in order that … • … so (that) …
• … in order to / to (+ infinitive) • ... so as to ...
• Use linkers to create longer sentences.
• Use a variety of language, including different Making conditions
tenses and grammatical structures as well as To begin a sentence: If … • As long as …
vocabulary. • Provided that … • Unless …
D CHECK To join clauses: … if … • … ,but only if …
Read your composition carefully afterwards. • … as long as … • … provided that … • … unless …
• Have you fully answered the task? Ordering an argument
• Have you used the right number of words (if you’ve • First of all, … • Firstly, / Secondly, / Thirdly, ... • Next, …
been given a word count)? • Thirdly, … • Finally, / Lastly, ...
• Is your composition easy to read and logically
organized?
Ordering a narrative
• Have you avoided repetition where possible? To begin a sentence: At first, … / To begin with, …
• Do your grammar, vocabulary, spelling, • Then / Next, / After that ... • In the end, … / Finally,
punctuation and word order seem correct? To join clauses: … before … • … after … • … , then …
• ... as soon as ... • ... as ... • ... while ...
In a review you give your opinion of a book, film, concert, etc., USEFUL LANGUAGE
and say whether or not you recommend it. Describing books / films / TV
Example task: Write a review of your favourite book. programmes
It’s set in …
It’s based on the (book, etc. by … )
A GET IDEAS
It’s about / It tells the story of …
• Think of a book, film, etc. to write about. Choose something The main character is …
you know well.
(film / TV) It stars …
• Make notes about what you remember about the book, film,
It’s written / directed by …
etc. Then choose the most essential details.
It’s a (thriller, comedy, romance, etc.).
• Decide whether you generally liked or disliked it. It might help
It’s a (science fiction, fantasy, crime, etc.)
you to choose a rating: STARSTARSTARSTARSTAR
• Make notes about what you liked and didn’t like, and why. Giving opinions
What I loved / hated about … was …
B PLAN
The best thing about … was …
Organize your ideas into paragraphs. For example: The most memorable part was ...
The … could have been better.
Paragraph 1 I ntroduction, including the title, author /
One criticism (I have) is ...
director etc., characters and setting
Paragraph 2 Summary of the plot Adjectives
Paragraph 3 What you liked and didn’t like + action-packed / believable / excellent /
Paragraph 4 Conclusion and a recommendation to others exciting / gripping / interesting / realistic
– average / badly-acted / badly-written /
boring / disappointing / dull / predictable
C WRITE
Making comparisons
Start with a general … isn’t (quite) as good as …
My favourite book is The Maze Runner, the first
description
book in a futuristic trilogy by James Dashner. … is just as good as …
Use a range of The main character is a brave young boy called … is even better than …
extreme adjectives Tom, who arrives in the Glade, which is an … reminds me of …
and / or modifying open area surrounded by huge walls leading
adverbs to Making a recommendation
to a monster-filled maze. Like the other Glade
emphasize your boys, Thomas can’t remember anything before This will / won’t appeal to ...
opinion he arrived there. He’s determined to become a I (strongly) recommend that …
Talk about how maze runner in order to find a way to get out of I certainly wouldn’t recommend …
you / other the Glade. Don’t bother reading / seeing …
people felt The book is written from Thomas’s point of
view, which can make things slightly confusing Tips for … reviews
Give reasons for
your opinion
at the beginning as he’s lost his memory. Don’t include too much factual
However, this is what I loved about it as it adds information about the plot, etc.
Sum up your to the suspense of the novel and makes you Don’t tell readers what happens at
opinion want to keep reading to find out what happens. the end!
Give a clear In my opinion, it’s a very well-written modern Readers want to know your opinion, not
recommendation classic. Anyone who’s a fan of futuristic novels just read a summary!
should get a copy of it. Remember to end with a
recommendation to your readers. It can
be positive, negative, or mixed.
In a formal email you write to a person in an official role (for USEFUL LANGUAGE
example, an employee at a company) for a particular purpose Greetings and endings
(for example, to make an enquiry).
If you know their name:
Example task: Write a formal email to Mr Colin Blackwell, Dear Mr / Mrs / Miss / Ms (+ surname),
Head of Customer Services, to complain about a product you
Yours sincerely, (your full name)
have bought online recently and ask for your money back.
If you do not know their name:
Dear Sir or Madam,
A GET IDEAS Yours faithfully, (your full name)
• Think about why you are writing. For example, to find out You can end formal emails with:
information (what?), to apply for a job (which?), etc. Best wishes, (your full name)
• Make notes of key things to include (e.g. statements or (Best / Kind) regards, (your full name) (use
questions to ask). with either greeting)
Giving a reason for writing
B PLAN
I am writing to enquire about / apply for /
Organize your ideas into paragraphs. Use a new paragraph for complain about …
each new main idea. For example:
… which I read about in …
Greeting (Dear … ) … which was advertised in …
Paragraph 1 hy you are writing
W Polite requests
Paragraphs 2–3 Your main ideas and questions
I was wondering if it would be possible ...
Final paragraph What you would like to happen next (e.g. I
I would like to know more about …
look forward to hearing from you.)
Would you be able to ... ?
Closing expression (e.g. Best regards, Yours
I would be grateful if you could …
sincerely, etc.)
Adding and sequencing ideas
C WRITE In addition, … Moreover, …
Furthermore, … Firstly, / First of all, …
Secondly, … Finally, …
Always include
Dear Mr Blackwell,
a name if you Including other documents
are given one I am writing to complain about a games console
which I bought recently from your online store.
I have attached a CV / photo / sample of
Use a range Although I set up the console using the instructions
work for your reference.
of tenses and included, it did not work properly. As a result, I called Next stages
structures your helpline and spoke with one of your technicians
Please contact me if you require any
Organize your who asked me to send the console back to be
further information.
ideas with tested. He explained that the company had been
I look forward to hearing from you.
sequencers experiencing problems with the specific model and
that if they could not repair it, they would replace it. Thank you in advance for your help.
Use formal
I received the replacement this morning and I have
verbs and Tips for … formal emails
attempted to set it up. However, the new console
expressions Use appropriate greetings and closing
does not work either. I have also attempted to call
Use modal the helpline again, but I have not been able to get
expressions.
verbs to make through. Use full forms (I am) not short forms (I’m).
polite requests Therefore, I would like you to refund my money as I
Use indirect structures to sound more
have lost confidence in this product. I look forward
polite.
Use an
appropriate to hearing from you. Use formal structures, expressions and
linkers.
closing Yours sincerely,
expression Jan Krakowicz
to match the
greeting