BUSINESS LETTER 3 (PRELIM)                   on.
The address can also begin with a job title
                                                    or a department (if you don’t know the name).
   Business Letter- a letter written in formal     For e.g: The Sales Manager, The Accounts
    language, used when writing from one            Department etc.
    business organization to another.               5. Subject and Receivers Reference No- use
   Business letter- used for different             for the reader immediately knows what your
    purposes, like placing orders, making           letter is about. Use ‘’Subject’’ or ‘’Re’’.Usually
    inquiries, and so on.                           comes between Salutation and body. The
   Business Letter- it produces a permanent        receiver’s references, the receiver’s pervious
    record, they are confidential, well-            letter number is mentioned under the heading
    considered messages.                            reference. This will enable the receiver to
                                                    easily take out a copy of his own letter from his
      PARTS OF BUSINESS LETTERS                     files and understand the matter in the reply.
                                                    EXAMPLE: Your Reference: MBM/SD/285/05
1. The Letter Head/Sender’s Address-                DATED 5TH oct. 2005
includes the company’s logo/symbol/name,
address, ZIP, telephone number, fax number,         6. SALUTATION- compliment or greeting.
email address and website of the company.           Written beside the left hand margin, two
Printed at the top center/left or the right side.   spaces below the Inside address and two lines
 Sender’s Address- usually given in the            above the body of the letter. It is followed by a
    letter head, but if there is none, the          comma (,) or a colon (:). Salutation depends on
    sender’s name, address and contact              the gender, type, number or the social status of
    details can be typed.                           the person addressed.
2. Reference- include a reference line to           Ex: Dear Sir, Dear Madam, Dear Amit Das,
identify a file or case number, invoice number      Dear Sales Manager, Dear Customer, Dear
or any other internal identifying information, if   Ladies and Gentlemen, Respected Sir, Dear
your company requires one. Some companies           Nancy,
have specific reference codes that they place
either in a reference line below the date, or at    7. BODY- begins two spaces below the
the very bottom of the letter.                      salutation. Contains the message or the
                                                    information to be communicated. Most
EXAMPLE: REF.HMT/25/2005/114                        important, lengthiest, prominent part- written in
                                                    correct, appealing and impressive style.
3. Date- consists of the date, name of the          Double space between paragraphs. If letter
month and the year. If the letter sheet includes    exceeds one page, repeat the recipient's name,
a letterhead, type the date from 2 to 3 lines       date, reference/subject line and put page
under the letterhead, else type it under the        number. Continue your letter three lines below
return address. Never send a letter without a       the heading.
date. Never write like 7-2-12 or 7/2/12              Divided normally into 3 parts:
because it shows that the writer is careless        1) Introductory paragraph
or in a great hurry.                                2) Middle paragraph
                                                    3) Closing paragraph
TWO STYLES:
                                                    8. COMPLIMENTARY CLOSE- It is written two
   British Method (ordinal numbers)- 4th           spaces below the last line of the body. It is a
    July, 2012.                                     polite way of saying " Good bye". It depends
   American Method (cardinal number)-              on the tone and degree of formality.
    July 4, 2012.                                   Formal: Respectfully yours, Sincerely, Yours
                                                    faithfully
4. The Inside Address- includes the name            Informal: Cordially yours, Warm Regards,
and address of the firm or the individual to        Best wishes
whom the letter is written. Written on the left
side, beside the margin, two spaces below the       9. THE SIGNATURE AND DESIGNATION-
date-line. Use Courtesy titles before names of      Written double space below the complimentary
the receiver such as Mr., Mrs., Shri, Miss so       close.
   First comes Signature (pen written). Sign                          LAYOUT
    your first and last name.                       1. BLOCK
 Second line - type written name.                   Each line of every part begins at the left
 Third line business title. The signature acts          margin.
    as proof.                                        At least one line space between each part.
10. ENCLOSURES- This line tells the reader           Time saving method and beautiful to look
to look in the envelope for more. Write                  at, also known as American style.
Enc./Encl./Enclosure below the signature block.     2. INDENT
e.g. Enclosure                                       New paragraphs begin about 1.5
Enclosures: 3                                            centimeters to the right of the left margin.
Enclosures: Check #231 for $500                      This style is also known as Hanging style.
 If you don't enclose anything, skip it.            This method consumes a lot of time, looks
                                                         shabby, therefore out of practice.
11. REFERENCE INITIALS- If someone else             3. SEMI BLOCK/MODIFIED BLOCK
has composed typed the letter for you, it is         Some parts are typed in block method and
common for them to indicate so with initials.            other parts are indented.
Typically it is your initials in upper case          Return address, date, closing and
followed by the other initials in lower case.            signature start just to the right of the
 SWA/KA - (composer/typist)                             center of the page or may be flush with the
 SWA:KA                                                 right margin.
                                                     Most widely followed method in our country
12. COPY NOTATION- When other people are                 specially in govt. offices.
to receive a copy of the same letter, their
names are noted either by their ranks or by
alphabetically. Written just below the reference
initials or the enclosure whichever is last. Type
"cc" before the names if sending a "carbon
copy(to)" and "pc" for photocopy (to).
CC: Jim Blue, Jennifer Louis
                                                          TYPES OF BUSINESS LETTERS
                                                       Inquiry Order
                                                       Refusal
                                                       Acceptance
                                                       Quotation
                                                       Follow up or Cancelation
                                                       Compliance
                                                       Complaints, Claims, Adjustments
                                                       Settlement
                                                       Collection
                                                       Agency
                                                       Sales letters
      GOOD/NEUTRAL NEWS LETTERS                        Rejection Letters.
    OPENING- Mention the Best news or              APPLY "SEVEN C'S" OF COMMUNICATION
     summarize the main idea.
    MIDDLE- Explanations, details, reader          1. COMPLETENESS: Letter should not lacks
     benefits, background.                          its purpose. Provide all necessary information.
    END- Use goodwill ending. Positive             E.g. Order should not only mention quantity but
     friendly, clear statement of action desired,   also size,       price,    packaging,   delivery,
     motivation to action, willingness to help      transportation      charges,   discount   rates,
     further, appreciation.                         payment item and condition etc
                                                    2. CONCISENESS: Be to the point, avoid
    Examples of Good/Neutral news letters:          unnecessary repetitions and include only
                                                    relevant material.
    Approving Credit                               3. CONSIDERATION: Focus on "you" instead
    Acknowledgements                               on "I" or "We", Show reader benefits and
    Acceptance letters                             emphasize positive pleasant facts.
    Letters of Appreciation, Congratulations,      4. CONCRETENESS: Use specific facts and
     Condolence                                     figures, put action in verbs and choose image
    Confirmations, Granting favors and other       building words.
     requests.                                      5. CLARITY: Choose precise, concrete and
    Summaries                                      familiar words. Construct effective sentences
    Adjustments                                    and paragraphs. Reader should understands
    Transmittals                                   the matter in first reading.
    Announcements o Goodwill messages              6. COURTESY: Whether writing a complaint or
    Thank your notes                               a concern, be sincere, thoughtful, appreciative,
                                                    courteous and respectful. Offer to do whatever
       BAD/NEGATIVE NEWS LETTERS                    you can, within reason, to be accommodating
                                                    and helpful.
 OPENING                                           7.CORRECTNESS: Use right level of
1. Buffer                                           language. Double check the facts, figures,
2. Begin with reader interest information.          dates, price, spelling and grammar. Maintain
3.Agreement,      Appreciation,      Assurance,     acceptable writing mechanics.
Compliment, Cooperation.
4. Give good news (if you can grant any)
 MIDDLE
1. Present negative element as positively as
possible.
2.Explanation     and      analysis     of  the
circumstances.
3. Decision, implied or expressed with resale
and or helpful suggestions.
 END
1. Positive, courteous, friendly, firm and
forward looking ending.
    Examples of Bad/ Negative News letters
    Refusing Credit.
    Refusing adjustments on Claims and
     Complaints.
    Answering Non-Sales related inquiries.
    Declining invitations and requests for
     favours.
    Announcing a bad news about prices or
     services.
                     TIPS
   IMPORTANT: Draft your message,
    Revise, Edit, Rearrange and Proof read.
    Maintain proper margins.
   Use the right font size, style and colour.
   Strike the right tone: be brief and
    professional, don't be too blunt or flattery.
   Use a quality pen to sign the letter and
    thoroughly read before you send it
   Neatly fold the letter into thirds and post it
    in a clean envelope(with company logo).
   Neatly print/write your return address
    and the recipient's address on the
    envelope.