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There used to be a lot of things for children to do There used to be a lot of active activities for

in their leisure time. Currently, however, they are children to do in their leisure time. Currently,
more likely to be sedentary. Hence, some people however, they are more likely to be more
believe that physical education classes should be sedentary. Hence, some people believe that
required in schools. I completely agree with this physical education classes should be required in
view for the reasons mentioned below. schools. I completely agree with this view for the
reasons mentioned below.
In my opinion, exercise has a variety of In my opinion, exercise has a variety of
advantages for children’s overall educational advantages for children’s overall educational
development. First of all, physical activity helps development. First of all, physical activity helps
children improve social skills as well as children improve social skills as well as
discipline. For instance, taking part in fitness discipline. For instance, taking part in fitness
class regularly can supports learners make more class regularly can support/assist learners in
friends and work with others as a team. making more friends and working with others as
Secondly, although some parents believe that a team. Secondly, although some parents believe
sports lessons are waste of valuable study time, that sports lessons are waste of valuable study
their kids may become stressed after spending time, their kids may become stressed after
hours on studying without active. Lectures from spending hours on studying without active
physical education class encourage their body activities/ being active. Physical education
produce endorphins that can make them feel lessons encourage their body to produce
relaxed or full of energy. endorphins that can make them feel relaxed or
full of energy for other theoretical/academic
subjects.
In addition, some young people now do not enjoy
In addition, some young people now do not enjoy
active, which may increase potential risks of
being physically active, which may increase
diseases. Thus, physical activity can develop
potential risks of diseases, such as obesity and
their mental well-being. Recently, there are many
autism. Thus, these activities can develop their
organizations prepared events for the purpose of
physical and mental well-being. Recently, there
encouraging teenagers to exercise such as
are many organizations prepared events for the
walking, running, cycling, etc. This shows that
purpose of encouraging teenagers to exercise
society is worried about the lack of active of
such as walking, running, cycling, etc. This
children. In the future, the government will have
shows that society is worried about the lack of
to spend a lot of money on medical care if people
activeness among children. In the future, the
are unfit, so that it is better to encourage people
government will have to spend a lot of money on
prevent diseases sooner.
medical care if people are unfit, so that it is better
to encourage people prevent diseases sooner.
For the reasons mentioned above, I believe that
in order to promote children’s potential as well as For the reasons mentioned above, I believe that
protect their health, sports lessons must be in order to promote children’s potential as well as
compulsory in schools. protect their health, sports lessons must be
(261 words) compulsory in schools.
Estimated score: 6.0+ (261 words)

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