PANELIST’S REACTIONS
Name of Researcher(s): Florendo, Lorelyn M. Guerrero, Jeany Vie C. Lita Angela Jehd R. Miranda,
Lycka M. Olandes, Sherrie Mae R.
Thesis Adviser: Mr. Brian Orias
Technical Adviser: Ms. Ivy Mariss Medrano
Thesis Title: TRACER AND EMPLOYABILITY STUDY OF HOSPITALITY MANAGEMENT
GRADUATES OF CAVITE STATE UNIVERSITY- BACOOR CAMPUS S.Y 2021-2022
Panelist: Ms. Cecil Tuliao
Panel’s Observations/Comments Action Taken
Title: One panelist suggested to change the title We changed the title and use a suggested
because of a certain reason title from our adviser instead
Front Page: Add official spacing for your paper, Modified and utilize the official format from
ask approval from the management send a letter the institution and we asked a permission
checked by the adviser from ARDB management by sending them a
letter
Chapter 1
Introduction: Change format and spacing We changed the format and the spacing as
well
Statement of the Problem: The panelist said to Specific problems were discussed in the new
narrowed down the SOPs SOP
Objective of the Study: He told us not to use the We disregarded the words and use other
word "To identify" Everytime. adjectives that appropriate to our sentence
Hypothesis: No problem with this
Significance of the Study: Additional significant We already modified this part and added
some significance to the study
Time and Place of the Study: He said that to We already removed his name
remove his name
Scope and Limitation/Delimitation: No Comment
Theoretical Framework: We Don't Have This
Conceptual Framework: Just be more creative in We changed the conceptual framework and
doing Conceptual Framework added some information that can help us to
understand our study more
Definition of Terms: Add other words to defined We utilize word and define it in clearer way
such as HACCP
Chapter 2
Review of the Related Literature/Studies: Should We make a precise and well connected to
be connected to the Statement of the Problem our SOP
Synthesis: Add Citation and everything that are Already put necessary things.
needed to put in here.
Chapter 3
Sampling Technique: Disregard the image of We already removed the said image and
Raosoft, Add a latest citation added an updated citation
PANELIST’S REACTIONS
Name of Researcher(s): Florendo, Lorelyn M. Guerrero, Jeany Vie C. Lita Angela Jehd R. Miranda,
Lycka M. Olandes, Sherrie Mae R.
Thesis Adviser: Mr. Brian Orias
Technical Adviser: Ms. Ivy Mariss Medrano
Thesis Title: TRACER AND EMPLOYABILITY STUDY OF HOSPITALITY MANAGEMENT
GRADUATES OF CAVITE STATE UNIVERSITY- BACOOR CAMPUS S.Y 2021-2022
Panelist: Ms. Cecil Tuliao
Panel’s Observations/Comments Action Taken
Title: One panelist suggested to change the title We changed the title and use a suggested
because of a certain reason title from our adviser instead
Front Page: Add official spacing for your paper, Modified and utilize the official format from
ask approval from the management send a letter the institution and we asked a permission
checked by the adviser from ARDB management by sending them a
letter
Chapter 1
Introduction: Change format and spacing We changed the format and the spacing as
well
Statement of the Problem: The panelist said to Specific problems were discussed in the new
narrowed down the SOPs SOP
Objective of the Study: He told us not to use the We disregarded the words and use other
word "To identify" Everytime. adjectives that appropriate to our sentence
Hypothesis: No problem with this
Significance of the Study: Additional significant We already modified this part and added
some significance to the study
Time and Place of the Study: He said that to We already removed his name
remove his name
Scope and Limitation/Delimitation: No Comment
Theoretical Framework: We Don't Have This
Conceptual Framework: Just be more creative in We changed the conceptual framework and
doing Conceptual Framework added some information that can help us to
understand our study more
Definition of Terms: Add other words to defined We utilize word and define it in clearer way
such as HACCP
Chapter 2
Review of the Related Literature/Studies: Should We make a precise and well connected to
be connected to the Statement of the Problem our SOP
Synthesis: Add Citation and everything that are Already put necessary things.
needed to put in here.
Chapter 3
Sampling Technique: Disregard the image of We already removed the said image and
Raosoft, Add a latest citation added an updated citation
PANELIST’S REACTIONS
Name of Researcher(s): Florendo, Lorelyn M. Guerrero, Jeany Vie C. Lita Angela Jehd R. Miranda,
Lycka M. Olandes, Sherrie Mae R.
Thesis Adviser: Mr. Brian Orias
Technical Adviser: Ms. Ivy Mariss Medrano
Thesis Title: TRACER AND EMPLOYABILITY STUDY OF HOSPITALITY MANAGEMENT
GRADUATES OF CAVITE STATE UNIVERSITY- BACOOR CAMPUS S.Y 2021-2022
Panelist: Ms. Cecil Tuliao
Panel’s Observations/Comments Action Taken
Title: One panelist suggested to change the title We changed the title and use a suggested
because of a certain reason title from our adviser instead
Front Page: Add official spacing for your paper, Modified and utilize the official format from
ask approval from the management send a letter the institution and we asked a permission
checked by the adviser from ARDB management by sending them a
letter
Chapter 1
Introduction: Change format and spacing We changed the format and the spacing as
well
Statement of the Problem: The panelist said to Specific problems were discussed in the new
narrowed down the SOPs SOP
Objective of the Study: He told us not to use the We disregarded the words and use other
word "To identify" Everytime. adjectives that appropriate to our sentence
Hypothesis: No problem with this
Significance of the Study: Additional significant We already modified this part and added
some significance to the study
Time and Place of the Study: He said that to We already removed his name
remove his name
Scope and Limitation/Delimitation: No Comment
Theoretical Framework: We Don't Have This
Conceptual Framework: Just be more creative in We changed the conceptual framework and
doing Conceptual Framework added some information that can help us to
understand our study more
Definition of Terms: Add other words to defined We utilize word and define it in clearer way
such as HACCP
Chapter 2
Review of the Related Literature/Studies: Should We make a precise and well connected to
be connected to the Statement of the Problem our SOP
Synthesis: Add Citation and everything that are Already put necessary things.
needed to put in here.
Chapter 3
Sampling Technique: Disregard the image of We already removed the said image and
Raosoft, Add a latest citation added an updated citation
