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OCCUPATIONAL ENGLISH TEST
WRITING SUB-TEST: MEDICINE
TIME ALLOWED: READING TIME: 5 MINUTES
WRITING TIME: 40 MINUTES
Read the case notes and complete the writing task which follows.
Notes:
Miss Eleanor Holmes, an 8-year-old, is a patient on your general medical ward in Spain. She
was admitted after near drowning.
Hospital: Southwick Park Hospital, 70 Sparrow Street, Mitchelstown, SPAIN
Patient details
Name: Eleanor Holmes
Age: DOB: 11/01/2011 (8 years old)
Next of kin: Philippa Holmes (mother)
Admission date: 24 August 2019
Discharge date: 26 September 2019
Diagnosis: Near drowning, potential hypoxia (hypoxic brain injury)
Family: Lives with mother and father (James)
Medical history and medications:
Fractured tibia (4yo)
Rotovirus (suspected) (January 2018)
Mild eczema
Social background: Primary school student (year 4)
Enjoys sport and dancing (ballet, street dance, netball, football)
Background: Fell into freshwater lake while on holiday in Barcelona with father and
their dogs.
Found 15-20 minutes later face down.
Paramedics arrived 10 minutes later, basic life support started
On admission to ED: cyanotic,
pulseless,
apnoeic,
fixed & dilated pupils,
tympanic temp 27.7°C
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Management and Progress:
24/08/19: CPR performed
Ventilator & endotracheal tubing inserted
Heated humidifier, radiant warmer, preheated blankets applied
Paediatric ventilator used
Initial ABG (Arterial Blood Gas) = 7.04 / 84 / 36/ 19 / 78%
Spontaneous circulation achieved
28/08/19: ABG = 7.44 / 34 / 94 / 23 / 97%
BP 98/64
Tympanic temp 34.8°C
Patient stable – transferred from ICU to general ward
30/08/19: Temperature normal
Unresponsive to command
Shifting around within the bed
No longer hyperventilated for ICP protection
Mechanical ventilation weaning off begun
05/09/19: Responsive to commands
Basic communication - possible dysarthria
Speech therapy commenced
Difficulty concentrating
Paracetamol 3x daily for headaches
Coughing up pink sputum
Mechanical ventilation stopped
Transfer plan: Transfer to Paediatrics Ward, East Hospital, UK
Continue with Speech therapy
Organise neurological exams (neuropsychological, visual-spatial, IQ_ -
check for delayed problems as precaution
Discuss with parents possible sequela due to hypoxia
Monitor cough, headaches, dysarthria
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Using the information provided in the case notes, write a letter of transfer to Dr Patrica
Jones, Ward Doctor, Paediatrics, East Hospital, UK
In your answer:
• Expand the relevant notes into complete sentences
• Do not use note form
• Use letter format
The body of the letter should be approximately 180-200 words.