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THE PANIC ROOM
Okay, there’s this WOMAN. She’s going through a divorce and
is looking for a place for her and her nine year old BOY.
After years of the three of them being cooped up in a one
bedroom apartment, they're looking for a place of their own,
a place with all four walls theirs, a place with a little
outdoor space. Beginning of the movie, she and her Boy walk
into this big old converted brownstone, which has recently
been made into a single family dwelling by the previous
owner, a wealthy but slightly deranged guy who actually died
in the house. Oh, it’s been in all the papers, there’s a
big controversy with his estate, his whole family is suing
each other over his money.
They like the place, a lot. Obviously they have a good deal
of money, and we find out it’s because some major asset is
being sold because of the divorce, so there’s a big influx
of cash, The Woman works too, she’s a writer who writes for
a “This Old House” type website, she answers home
improvement questions. Martha Stewart with power tools. In
fact, the realtor is kind of nervous showing her places,
because she knows so much about houses and the shortcuts
people take during construction, what is good work and what
is not. Can‘t get anything past her. The entire tour takes
place inside the house, in fact the entire MOVIE is going to
take place inside the house, or just out in front on the
stoop, or just out on the patio, but even those scenes will
be SEEN from inside the house. The camera is never going to
leave the house, so just get used to the idea.
On the tour, the woman is shown a place called a safe room,
or panic room. Apparently, this is all the vogue in high
end construction right now, that despite the low crime rate
in New York and generally fantastic economy, a lot of
wealthy people are inordinately concerned about home
invasion robberies. To combat that, there are companies
that specialize in the construction of panic rooms, or
impenetrable inner sanctums, which are built just off the
master bedroom, usually by splitting up-another bedroom,
half of it for a closet, half for the panic room.
The way it works is this -- if your alarm goes off or you
have any other reason to suspect someone is breaking intoyour house, you go dixectly into your panic room and seal
the double metal doors (which are attractively disguised by
wood-finished fronts and so forth). ‘The main attributes of
the panic room are its reinforced steel-core walls and its
buried phone line, which is not connected to the house’s
main line and never exposed, either throughout the house’s
infrastructure or outside the house. So there you are,
walled up, safely tucked away, able to call for help and
wait without concern for help’s arrival.
But, depending on the level of paranoia of the builder of
the panic room (and this guy was really paranoid), other
features are available too. A bank of video monitors, with
corresponding cameras deployed throughout the home.
Supplies of water and food. A ventilation system and oxygen
scrubber, for those really long post-apocalyptic stays. A
spring-loaded inner door, solid steel, activated by a wall
switch (infrared beams for safety, like an elevator, because
this door is heavy and it really moves when you push that
button). This room has all the bells and whistles.
The woman and the boy really love the house, with the
possible exception of the panic room, which the mother finds
pretty funny and maybe just a little bit sad. The boy digs
it and wants to make it his room, but she thinks it would be
better if they converted it into a family room or guest
room. There are two bedrooms upstairs, one for the boy and
one for the Woman’s mother, who is going to come live with
them to help them through this tough time, another reason
they want so much space. Interestingly, this brownstone
also has an elevator, as the paranoid old guy had a
disability that made it hard for him to get up stairs.
Patio, elevator (which the Boy spent most of the tour
playing in), single family renovation -- if you’re looking
for a brownstone in New York, this is the best you can
possibly do, so the woman decides to buy it on the spot.
Hard cut to the same house, now with mountains of unpacked
boxes in it, and the woman and her son strewn across the
floor in the main entryway (a roomy spot), exhausted. This
was moving day, The movers stand around, waiting for their
tips, then they leave, and the newly-divorced Woman and her
Boy are alone in their new place for the very first time.
Exciting! Sad. Divorce. Drag. But from what we gather
about Dad, he wasn’t around much anyway. After eight or
nine years of happy marriage (they married young, the woman
is only in her early thirties), the husband created anO
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internet start-up thing, one of the lucky ones that went
public in a huge way, and after years of having a combined
income of about eighty grand a year, suddenly the two of
them were worth ninety-six million dollars.
And that’s when the trouble started. Money doesn’t always
change things. Sometimes it mangles them beyond
recognition.
Here’s a good place for a few words about style. Although
you've already read a good deal of backstory, this amounts
to almost the entirety of the background information on
these people that we will ever learn throughout the film,
and when such depth of background is expressed, whenever
possible it will be done with three or four lines of
dialogue from which we can infer the rest of the
information. This movie is spare. THIS MOVIE IS SPARE. It
is primarily a story told with pictures, and dialogue will
only be used when absolutely necessary to convey a story
point, or when the human behavior of the characters would
seem abnormal without spoken words. But as you'll see, for
much of the movie it is in the best interests of all the
characters NOT to speak.
This is not to say the characterizations will be vapid or
empty. On the contrary, the challenge is that much greater
to create real and recognizable characters who express
themselves through action and behavior, and they’re going to
have plenty of opportunities for that.
So far, we're only eight or nine pages into the movie. Now,
after the movers have left, the Woman drags herself up off
the floor, she has to do something about dinner. After
that, it’s bath and bed, for both of them. The Woman orders
pizza. She reaches for her cell phone, then decides to see
4f the phone company actually got around to turning on THEIR
phone. She unpacks a phone, plugs it in, and gets a dial
tone -- hey, whaddya know, Bell Atlantic comes through for
once.
She orders pizza. Pizza is delivered. Pizza is eaten. The
Woman has a glass of wine. Neither one of them talks, just
chews. How did everything get so weird? Where are we,
anyway? Fuck Dad, Neither Woman nor Boy say it, but it’s
im the air. Fuck him anyway. And fuck Her too. The Woman
has another glass of wine.O
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She gives the boy his bath. She listens while he reads to
her. He’s a sharp kid, loves Tom Swift. She spends twenty
minutes reading the instructions for the house’s alarm.
Doesn’t get half of it, who ever does, but she manages to
set it for the night.
When the alarm goes on, the video screens in the panic room
all turn on. She doesn’t realize this, because she doesn’t
care. She does not need a panic room. She puts her cell
phone in its charger on her nighttable.
She has a third glass of wine.
She takes off her clothes, puts on an old Knicks tee shirt.
His, probably.
She gets in bed.
and she cries herself to sleep.
‘The middle of the night. Through the kitchen window, we see
@ van pull up and park across the street. A man gets out of
the van, He wears black, He walks toward the house. He
hag tools, too.
The Woman sleeps. So does her son, one flight up, on the
fourth floor. Third floor is the master bedroom, bathroom,
and panic room (the joke). Second floor is the spacious
entryway and living room. Ground floor is the kitchen,
which has a street-level entrance, and the dining room.
Converted basement is going to be a family room, it leads
out to the patio. The house is seventeen feet wide. Ninety
feet deep. There is a skylight; it does not open. There
are ten windows. There are three sets of French doors that
open onto the patio, or reach the patio by way of the spiral
staircase that clings to the back of the house. There are
two front doors, one on the entry floor, at the top of the
stoop, one on the kitchen floor, ground level. Those are
the only entrances or exits from the home.
Unless you count the roof access, through a closet on the
very top floor. But who would use that? We drift into that
closet, which is hanging ajar, to have a look. We rise up,
following the iron ladder that leads up to the roof portal.
We look up at the portal. There is a narrow crack that runs
along its edges, and just a sliver of moonlight can be seen
coming through that crack, enough to illuminate the squareO
outline of the portal. A shiny silver something slides
through that crack. It slithers along the edge of the
portal, searching for something. It finds a small round
nub. The silver something stops. It HUMS with electricity
for a moment.
On an alarm panel, a message appears -- “ZONE 26 DEFAULTED.”
In the closet, the panel is removed, A million stars are
visible in the night sky beyond. But we’re inside. And
now, so is an Intruder.
In bed, the Woman stirs. An alcohol sleep is a restless
one, and she’s suffering. She sits up groggily, chugs a
glass of water. Lays down again.
The Intruder steps into the hallway and immediately looks
around, concerned. Something is not as it should be. It’s
the packing boxes. The signs of life. This is unexpected.
He creeps down the hall, peers into the top floor bedroom.
Sees the little boy. He is extremely upset. He creeps down
the stairs, passes the master bedroom, peers in there too.
‘The Woman lies in bed, her back to the door, her eyes open,
Now her head hurts. Great. Behind her, the Intruder
appears silently in the doorway. From his point of view,
she’s asleep on her side, facing away from him. He moves
away. She didn’t hear. She closes her eyes again, tries to
sleep.
Downstairs, the Intruder goes to the front kitchen window
and looks out at the van, parked across the street. He
reaches to a lightswitch and flicks it. Through the window,
we see the stoop light go on. He turns it off again, then
on and off once more, rapidly. Still through the window, we
see the doors of the van open again. ‘WO MORE INTRUDERS
climb out. Also in black. Also with tools. A great many
tools. They walk calmly across the street, grow large in
the window. The First Intruder (we’ll call him ONE) steps
over to the kitchen door, runs his silvery strip through its
gap again, and the alarm panel shows another zone defaulted.
The door opens. TWO and TEREE come inside. They
immediately notice the packing boxes and freak out. One
calms them. There is a rushed, whispered conversation, of
which we catch only the vital phrases. First, they weren’t
expecting any people here, they thought they weren’t movingoO
in till next week. Second, they have no guns, and are very
concerned about their safety. Number One communicates that
there is only a woman, alone, and a little kid. They can
handle it. What if she has a gun? I’m willing to take that
chance. Two says relax, I brought a gun.
This was not in the plan. They chastise him, but are
grateful. Three suggests getting the hell out of there, but
under pressure from the others says what if we just scare
them of£? Number One says bad idea, they’1l call the cops.
I need forty-five minutes. The Cops would be here in ten.
Nobody can leave this house till I’m done. Nobody. So,
they ask, what do we do?
One has an answer to that. He dumps a bag full of long
screws onto the kitchen counter. They set to work. Acting
on One’s instructions, Three cuts the cord on the phone in
the kitchen, the only phone she’s hooked up in the house.
One by one, they go to the windows and doors on the lower
three floors. Using silent, cordless screwdrivers, they
drive long screws through the doors at an angle, screwing
them into their frames. Nobody gets out of this house.
Nobody.
Upstairs, the Woman gets out of bed, She’s bleary, her head
thurts, she doesn’t do well with alcohol. In the dark, she
staggers off toward the bathroom door and steps through it.
But it isn’t the bathroom door, it’s the door to the panic
room. She walks in, turns around in the dark, feeling for
the light switch. The only light in the room comes from the
nine four inch TV screens, which show clear views of what’s
going on downstairs. But she doesn’t see those. She finds
the light switch, flicks it on, and it nearly blinds her.
She realizes where she is, mutters something about the God
damn bathroom, and staggers out of the room. If only she’d
lddked at the screens.
Back in the bedroom, she has left the light on in the safe
room so that she can see. She opens another door -- thank
God, the bathroom. First things first, three Advil and a
glass of water. Then she turns to the toilet.
Downstairs, the work continues. The basement French doors
are sealed. Ditto the kitchen window and the kitchen level
French doors. One, Two, and Three move up to the entry
level. Next floor up after that is the master bedroom.Oo
In the bathroom upstairs, the Woman flushes the toilet and
heads back to bed.
Downstairs, the Intruders hear the water rushing through the
pipes. They freeze. They stare at the ceiling as the feet
move across the floor, headed back to bed. They hear the
CREAK of the bed as she gets back into it, They still
freeze, Then, dead quiet, they get to work sealing the
final door. ‘
Upstairs, the Woman is getting in bed when she notices she
left the light on in the panic room, She mutters another
unprintable, gets up. Inside the panic room, she squints,
locking around for the switch. And as she squints, she
notices the video monitors. And the men in her living room,
dressed in black, sealing up her house like her own tomb.
She blinks, moves closer. This can’t be right. She stares.
These are just pictures. They have no relation to reality.
That’s not possible.
In the living room, Three’s hands are quivering as he works,
and the cordless screwdriver slips out, falls toward the
floor of the living room. Three’s eyes pop wide --
-- and upstairs, in the safe room, the Woman watches in
horror as the image of the screwdriver hitting the floor is
verified by the SOUND of it clattering to the tile, audible
through the open door to the safe room.
Im the living room, One and Two shoot ferocious looks at
Three. One makes a quick decision. He points at Two, holds
up. four fingers, telling him to go up to the fourth floor
and secure the kid. He points at himself, holds up three
fingers, meaning he’ll go secure the woman. He points at
Three, then at the spot they’re standing on, telling him to
stay here, at the base of the stairs. One and Two set off.
Upstairs, the Woman is acting quickly. Still in underwear,
tee shirt, and bare feet, she races up the carpeted stairs
from the third floor to the fourth, then down the hall to
her son’s room. she starts to wake him. Like a kid, he’s
profoundly asleep, and won’t wake up.
Downstairs, One reaches the third floor and heads for her
bedroom. Two is just behind him.The Woman is desperate, still can’t wake the Boy. She sees
a half-drunk glass of water next to his bed, picks it up and
throws the water in his face. NOW he’s awake. And pissed
off.
Downstairs, Two hears the boy's voice. He hurries down the
hall of the third floor and starts up the stairs to the
fourth,
Upstairs, the Woman hauls the Boy out of bed and into the
hallway. But at the end of the hallway, she sees Two,
headed straight for them. She turns to the left, yanks open
the elevator door, throws aside the gate, and races inside
with the Boy. She slams it shut and punches floor one. The
door locks, the elevator starts to drop. Two yells down to
One, they’re in the elevator, headed toward you!
One goes to the elevator door on the third floor, sees the
Woman and Boy’s bare feet come into view through the little
window. They descend, they’re eye to eye for a moment, his
hand on the door. He tugs, ferociously, as they go by him,
bending the door, but it won't open. As they pass, he turns
and takes off, headed down.
Now the Woman knows he’ll be there when the elevator reaches
the bottom. She jabs the “three” button, thinking of the
panic room, but the elevator keeps going down. ‘The Boy
tells her that if she hits stop, when it starts up again,
you can push a new floor, Ke knows, he was playing in it
all day. She pushes stop, then start, then three. The
elevator starts to rise. She loves that kid.
A floor below, One hears the elevator stop, then start up.
He turns around, races back upstairs. There is a close
chase, ending with the Woman and the Boy sealing themselves
off in the panic room. The steel door WHANGS shut right in
front of One, who is crazy with rage. How could the plan
have gone so_bad?
Now the standoff begins. The Woman explains to the boy -- I
have no idea who they are or what they want. They probably
xead in the newspaper about Daddy’s company selling and
figured we have a lot of expensive jewels or something.
Let’s just wait, let them rob us, and then we'll come out.
She tries the special phone, the one with the buried phone
line. Dead, of course, she didn’t even think to hook up a
separate number for the panic room. She was never going toO
use it. She was going to make a closet out of it. They
wait.
We stay with her. She and the Boy familiarize themselves
with the features of the panic room, to pass the time. They
check the video monitors. The Intruders are in a heated
conversation, but we can’t hear it, there aren’t speakers
attached to the monitors. There is, however, an intercom
system in the panic room, a paging system that can be heard
throughout the house. The Woman notices this. She makes an
announcement to the Intruders -- take whatever you want and
get out. The Intruders confer, then start doing something
she can’t see. She goes back to the Boy, asks him how he’s
feeling. She seems inordinately concerned with his health.
The Boy notices something on one of the screens. She turns.
The Intruders have written out a sign and are holding it up
im front of one of the cameras -- “WHAT WE WANT IS IN THAT
ROOM.”
Oh, shit. She flicks the intercom key, asks them a question
“What do you know about this room”
More frenzied writing. Some arguing, a first draft torn up.
Finally, the sign is held up -- “MORE THAN YOU.”
She responds. “Can’t come out. Can‘t let you in. Go
away.”
They write back. “WE WILL LET YOU Go.”
She scoffs. Liars. ‘We're going to sleep. Get the hell
out of my house.” She switches off. She finds some things
to make them more comfortable, encourages the boy to lie
down and sleep. Yeah, right. The boy prowls instead,
opening drawers -- matches, flashlights, sealed water bags
designed to last five years, tinned food, rations, flares, a
few basic tools, that sort of thing. She tells him again,
more strongly -- lie down, don’t exert yourself. Well wait
them out.
Downstairs, One is in a rage, Two feels okay as long as he’s
got the gun, and Three is freaking out. Ke wants to pack up
their shit and get out of there, right the fuck now, we're
never going to be able to get into the room now. One starts
going through their tools, thinking, hard, how the hell to
break into the very room THAT HE DESIGNED AND THEY BUILT!Oh, shit, this could be worse for the Woman than we think.
One curses the tools, none of which are up to the job. His
eyes fall on something sitting out on the metal balcony on
the kitchen floor. It’s a large barbecue grill. What the
hell good is that?
Im the room, the Boy is still restless. Down along the
floor, he’s found a small round portal, set inside a recess,
that seems like it should open, but he can’t figure out how.
He's feeling its edges, looking for a switch, poking about.
The Woman asks him for the fourth time to lie down, don’t
get your adrenaline up, when they both suddenly sit bolt
upright at a SOUND. It’s a POUNDING sound, coming from the
wall right outside the room. Are the Intruders trying to
break through? That’s pointless, the walls are steel-cored,
don’t worry honey, we'll be fine. But the Boy seems
frightened. She checks a funny-looking watch he wears on
his wrist. A digital readout says “120.” No problem.
But outside, in the bedroom, One is going at it like a man
with a plan. He has a claw hammer, and is ripping away the
sheetrock on the outer wall of the panic room. Sure enough,
on the other side of the two by four studs there is sheer
metal reinforcement, but that’s not what he’s after. There
is an air duct running through the wall, feeding into the
room through a welded hole in the steel, part of the panic
xoom’s ventilation system. One exposes a portion of it,
then grabs a drill, switches to a metal bit, and starts
drilling a hole in it the size of the end of a garden hose.
Inside the room, the Woman can’t for the life of her figure
WHAT that horrible metal screeching is. Trouble, that’s for
sure.
In the bedroom, the hole is drilled. One shoves the end of
an actual garden hose into the hole in the duct, then hacks
off ten feet of hose from a reel and turns to Two, who
attaches the other end of the hose to A PROPANE TANK, the
kind you use for a gas barbecue grill. Three voices an
objection, but Two spins the handle, we hear the HISS of the
propane leaving its tank, we follow it along the length of
the hose --
-- and see it emerge through the ventilation grill at the
top wall inside the panic room, floating the little pieces
of string that dangle from the vent. The Woman and Boy
sniff. This ain’t good. What is it?, the Boy asks. she
10has a one-word explanation. “Propane.” She starts to
frantically try to stuff the grill with something, but the
gas is leaking in anyway. While she does that, the Boy
starts to cough and choke.
Outside the room, Three is in a state. He didn’t sign on
for killing people, and he is definitely not in the mood.
One says relax, will you, nobody is killing anybody, we're
just forcing them to come out of the room so we can hold
them someplace for forty-five minutes, that’s all. The very
worst that happens is they’1l pass out, we‘1l drag them out
here into the fresh air, and they’ll be fine. Really?, Two
asks. And how are we supposed to get into the room if they
die? One says hey, fellas, I don’t hear any suggestions
from you.
Inside the room, there is much coughing and gasping, until
the Boy finally uncovers the switch for that strange portal
he found, which now twists open to reveal an emergency
ventilation source directly to the outside. It’s a tube, a
foot thick, through the exterior of the house, covered by
steel mesh on the outside, but as they both fall to the
floor and suck air, they're able to get oxygen through it.
For the time being.
Outside, the debate has intensified. Two is practically
brawling with Three, One is even losing his certainty about
this plan. Still, the gas HISSES through the hose.
Inside the room, the Woman knows this can’t go on forever,
and she gets an idea. She rummages through the drawers,
finds the matches and lighters they saw earlier. The Boy’s
eyes go wide, you can’t be serious. But she is. She tells
him to cover himself with as much blankets and clothes and
whatever else he can find, which he does. She finds
something to stand on, gets right up in front of the grill,
and pries it off with a screwdriver. The duct is wide
enough to put your arm in. She reaches in, all the way in,
lighter in her hand, Inside the duct, we see her start
thumbing the lighter, which is extremely difficult, given
the slight amount of space.
Outside the room, One tells the other two to shut up so he
can hear that funny scratching noise. He moves closer to
the duct. The Woman keeps trying, not getting a spark. One
suddenly recognizes the scratch of a cigarette lighter. He
leaps off the chair he’s standing on, dives across the room,
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to yank the hose from the tank. Inside the pipe the lighter
lights, a bright flame shoots out in two directions, one
toward the panic room, one the other way in the duct.
In the panic room, the woman hurls herself back, her arm
scalded, and drops to the floor just as the ceiling of the
panic room erupts in a bright blue flame.
In the duct the flame shoots the other way, into the hose,
through the hose, backing up toward the tank. One lands
next to the tank, knocking the hose away just as a huge blue
cloud of flame erupts from the end of the hose. The flame
engulfs One, his hair starts on fire, his chest, his arms.
Two and Three throw a blanket over him, he rolls on the
floor in pain.
In the closet, the blue cloud on the ceiling WHOOMPS out,
leaving a few little pockets of flame that the Woman
extinguishes by swatting with a blanket. She SHOUTS and
SCREAMS in triumph and anger, but stops, noticing the look
her Boy is giving her. Her arm is singed, the hair burned
off, the sleeve of her tee shirt burned back to the
shoulder. But it doesn’t really hurt. Her face is sooty,
blackened.
Out in the bedroom, it’s worse for One, who has lost most of
his hair and shirt. But his skin isn’t badly burned, which
is something, I guess. Still, he’s in a rage. He POUNDS
the door, SCREAMS at the Woman, who POUNDS and SCREAMS right
back. Whoever lives in the brownstone next door hears the
screaming through the walls and POUNDS on the common wall,
SHOUTS something indistinguishable. The Woman hears that
and takes heart, starts SHOUTING at the wall, call the
police, call the police! But her words must be fuzzy and
indistinct too, the Neighbor just pounds some more.
Time for Round Two. If the Intruders are going to attack
with lethal force, the Woman knows she must go on the
offensive, but how? Fortunately, she’s got a sharp kid, who
has just put together the fact that they’ve got a narrow
tunnel to the outside and a very powerful halogen
flashlight. They look out the tunnel, see that directly
across the courtyard, they can see the bedroom window of an
apartment on the third floor of the building opposite.
Great, the Kid says, we/ll just send an SOS message in Morse
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Code -- dot dot dot, dash dash dash, dot dot dot. It’s
great to be a nine year old boy, you remember stuff like
this.
While the Boy is explaining this to her, she surreptitiously
checks that funny watch he wears again, Now it says 105.
She'd better keep an eye on him. But his plan seems to have
taken his mind off their immediate dangers, and that’s good,
so she lets him get to work. He gets the halogen
flashlight, very powerful, and starts sending out the
message. The light flashes perfectly on the far wall of the
apartment. The message is conveyed. Across the way, they
see a man get out of bed. Come to the window. Peer out at
the source of the lights. Attempt to “read” the message.
‘Then angrily yank his drapes shut. Damn.
Down on the entry floor of the house, there is a heated
conversation underway between One and Two. We only catch
pieces of it, but the gist is that Two is Very Concerned
about Three and is not about to jeopardize his share of
fourteen million dollars because of that candy ass. We get
the rest of the plot here -- the old guy who died, the
reason his relatives are suing each other is because there’s
fourteen million of his estate that no one can seem to find.
Typical of a paranoid old bastard, he built a safe in his
safe room and didn’t tell anybody about it. Only the guys
who actually built the room know about the safe, and that
gives them a pretty dam good idea where the missing
fourteen million is. After a lot of talking about it, these
career non-criminals finally worked up enough nerve to come
here tonight to break into that safe. But they hadn’t
counted on the new owners moving in, and now they’re losing
their composure. One attempts to calm Two, so they can quit
bickering and concentrate on the real issue, how the hell
they’re going to get irito that room. Three has been left
upstairs to stand guard outside the door to the panic room.
Inside the room, the Woman is thinking hard, and remembers
her cell phone, which is sitting on her night table, if only
she could get to it. But she can’t, because Three is right
outside the panic room door, in case the Woman tries to come
out. She can see him on one of the monitors, standing right
outside the door, and she can also see the other two, down
on the entry floor.
In the bedroom, Three is Very Concerned himself, and he’s
desperately trying to eavesdrop on the conversation
Bedownstairs, and when he hears something directly involving
him that really pisses him off, he moves to the stairs, to
hear better, The Woman sees him leave the master bedroom
and debates bolting for the night table. But she can’t find
Three on any of the monitors, so she doesn’t know if he’s
near ox far. Shit, whaddya do now? She doesn’t know he’s
Just outside the door, leaning over the stairwell. she
thinks. The Boy urges her to go ahead. She’s not so sure.
Three still can’t hear that well. He moves to the top of
the steps, sneaks down two steps. He KNOWS they’re talking
about him. He debates, thinks, agonizes. Oh hell, I gotta
go argue my side. He takes off down the stairs.
In the room, the Boy sees Three show up on the entry floor
monitor. GO! He says. The Woman does. she presses the
button and the steel door cranks open. She shoves open the
fake closet door, strides across the room, snatches up her
cell phone, walks back across the room -
-- and, downstairs, they hear the fake door SLAM and the
heavy steel door WHANG shut as she makes it safely back into
the panic room. One and Two both turn and look at Three,
who was on guard duty. Well now, Three, you idiot, what the
fuck do you think she just did? They take off upstairs.
Im the panic room, the woman dials 911 with trembling
fingers. Can’t get through. No signal. Steel lined walls.
SHIT! She tries every spot in the room. No signal.
In the bedroom, the three of them search the place, try to
find what’s missing. One spots it immediately -- there’s an
empty cell phone charger on the nightstand. The others
freak out, but he is calm. steel lined walls, remember?
She‘1l never get a signal in there. But, on the subject of
phones, on the subject of phones...
++. which is precisely the subject the Woman is thinking of
at the moment. Cell phone won’t work, buried phone line
isn’t comnected, but what about the main phone line? What
about that bundle of wires she saw in the wall when she
xemoved the face plate for the ventilation system? One of
them has to be for the phone, because she knows that just on
the other side of this wall --
-- there is a phone jack, which One is now looking at. He
turns to Three. On the subject of phones, he asks Three --
14when I said cut the phone, did you cut the main line at the
junction box in the basement, or did you just cut the cord
on the phone in the kitchen? Three says, gulp, he cut the
kitchen phone. Shit. One takes off, for the basement.
Again, Two is not pleased with Three.
In the bedroom, the Woman and the Boy are working quickly.
She finds a neat little bundle of wires in the wall, sorts
through them quickly, and finds a blue one. She knows blue
is phones. She’s no dummy. She did a whole series of
articles on phones. She and the Boy get to work, he
disconnecting the phone unit from the buried-cable jack, and
she stripping the blue line out from the bundle and pulling
out enough to make a connection.
One races down the steps to the basement.
In the panic room, the Woman and Boy are like animals,
clawing and tearing at the ends of their respective phone
cables, stripping the wires with fingers and teeth.
Intercut between them and One as he finds a flashlight and
searches for the phone box. Back in the panic room, they
twist the wires together, get a dial tone, she punches 911,
and, of course, here’s how it answers -- “911 emergency,
please hold.” You gotta be kidding me.
Meantime, One is getting closer to the phone panel.
The Woman can’t hold any longer. She hangs up, dials
another number she knows by heart, it rings five times, and
a husky male voice answers. It’s her ex-husband. At first
he’s irritated, but she shuts him up quick. This is the
entire message she gets out to him -- “Listen to me. Theze
are three-”
And then, in the basement, One rips the whole phone panel
out of the wall.
Dead line. What will the Husband do with this very tiny bit
of information? No idea. But the Woman and Boy prey he’11
do SOMETHING. He lives right around the corner, literally
two blocks away. If he’s got a brain in his head, he’ll at
least call the police for them. “There are three-” I mean,
what the hell COULD it mean, in the middle of the night?
“There are three bears?” The Woman and the Boy are giddy,
they feel they’ve won. Surely he’1l call the police.
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In the bedroom, things are deathly silent between the three
intruders. Tempers are at the breaking point, but nobody’s
shouting anymore. That’s worse. Three informs the others
that he has made a decision. He’s leaving. One and Two
both remind him of the deal they made early on, which they
all swore to -- Nobody leaves. Three says forget that, man,
I build things, I don’t kill people. And I’m sure as hell
not getting killed myself. Do you know how dead we’d be if
that propane tank had gone up? We built that room, you know
as well as I do, she is never coming out, and we are never
getting in.
Inside the panic room, a crisis is brewing. The Boy doesn’t
look very well, he’s pale, thirsty, dizzy and getting
disoriented. The Woman checks his wristwatch thing, which
now reads 82. This causes her a great deal of concern, and
now she tells him bis blood sugar is falling, probably
because his body was shooting out so much adrenaline. What
do we do if it keeps dropping?, the Boy asks. It’s not
gonna keep dropping, don’t worry, just keep yourself calm.
Out in the bedroom, Three makes it official. He’s leaving.
He leaves the room, followed by One and Two, who are
xeminding him of the doctrine -- nobody leaves. One is
pleading vehemently, Two just says those same two words over
and over, almost to himself. Nobody leaves.
In the panic room, the Woman starts looking through the
foodstuffs that are stored in the room, checking the
contents, looking for something with sugar in it. What if I
have an attack, the Boy asks? Oh, you know, we’ll just give
you a shot of Glucogen. But where is the Glucogen, the Boy
asks, no dummy. It’s, um, it’s, you know, in your room. No
biggie, Kiddo. Relax. The Boy, worsening, lays back and
tries to remain calm. He stares at the video monitors.
Downstairs, Three bounds down the stairs to the kitchen
floor and goes to the door with his screwdriver. He starts
unscrewing the kitchen door, to get the hell out of there.
One, from the stairs, yells at him to stay. Three says
forget it, I’m goin’. Pleading. Shouting. Arguing. Three
just gets the last screw out, he throws open the door, a
BLAST of wind gusts in, it’s a blustery night out there, he
takes a step out the door --
-- and, with a quiet FFFT from right behind one, a bullet
whizzes across the kitchen and hits Three in the back of the
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head. He falls, right into the open kitchen doorway. one
SHOUTS and turns, sees Two standing there, a silencer
twisted onto the barrel of his gun.
“Nobody leaves.”
In the panic room, the Boy’s eyes are wide. He points at
the monitors, tries to mouth the words. The Woman looks up.
Downstairs, One is freaking out, but trying like hell to
remain calm, First things first, he and Two go to the
doorway and drag Three’s body back inside, As they’re
pulling it across the floor, they hear a voice come from the
still-open doorway.
“oh, my God.”
They look up. A man (the HUSBAND!) stands there in hastily
thrown-on clothes, staring down at the dead body in shock.
Up in the panic room, the Woman gasps, throws her hands over
her mouth as she sees her ex-husband grabbed and hauled into
the house, the door slammed behind him.
Downstairs, we see Two vent some more of his rage on the
Husband, landing a solid blow to his head that dizzies and
disorients him. One, realizing how dire his situation is
and that he is now an accomplice to murder, decides they
must take drastic steps to end this as quickly as possible
and get out of there while they still can. He and Two drag
the Husband up the stairs --
-- and hurl him, hard, against the door to the panic room.
Now comes the most harrowing scene in the film. one demands
that the Woman open the door, or else. The Husband shouts
to her and his Boy do not, under any circumstances, open
this door. ‘wo begins to beat him. The Woman, of course,
cannot open the door. She and the Boy can only listen to
the agonized screams of the Husband, watch the grotesque
images on the bedroom’s video monitor as he is savagely
beaten outside. Right up until he loses consciousness, the
Husband screams out his insistence that they do not open the
door. Which they do not. The Husband finally blacks out.
one turns and looks up at the video camera with a terrifying
determination and the Woman looks right back at him. One
17reaches out and flicks off the lights in the bedroom, so she
can’t see at all. A BEEPING sound tears her attention away.
The horrid spectacle he just witnessed has filled the Boy
with anger, causing his adrenaline to kick in again, and his
blood sugar monitor now reads a dire fifty-seven, and an
alarm is going off. The Boy collapses, he begins to
convulse. The Woman must do something, now. She turns away
from the monitors and begins to force feed him a cereal bar,
desperate to get some sugar into him.
Out in the bedroom, they hurl the unconscious Husband into a
corner of the room, “Did you kill him?,” One asks. “You
want me to?,” Two replies. “No! You’ve done enough of
that.” One thinks. Just let me think.
Back in the panic room, the alarm is still going off, and
the Woman is getting desperate. she looks back up at the
monitors. What she sees is good news. The lights are back
on in the bedroom, and the only person there is her Husband,
who lies slumped on the floor in a corner. She looks
quickly at the monitor for the entry floor, and sees One and
Two having an urgent conversation, One sitting in a chair,
Two pacing in front of him, ranting.
The Boy’s convulsions grow worse. The Woman knows it’s now
or never. She hits the button that controls the steel door.
It cranks open. She pushes open the hidden closet door.
She steps out into the bedroom. She starts to go to her
husband in the corner, then realizes first things first, and
turns and races out of the room and up the stairs to the
Boy’s bedroom, as silently as she possibly can.
Downstairs, Two looks up, hearing the pitter-pat of bare
feet on the upstairs hallway. He smiles. Coming around
behind him, we see One sitting in the chair. Except it
isn’t One at all, it’s the Husband, unconscious, wearing
one’s shirt. And if the Husband is the person in the chair,
that means -
-- the person in the corner of the bedroom is One, wearing
the Husband’s shirt. His eyes pop open, he turns and looks,
sees the wide open doors to the panic room.
Im the kid’s bedroom, the Woman races in and tears open the
door of a mini-fridge. Inside are dozens of little bottles
of insulin and something called Glucogen. She grabs a
bottle of Glucogen and a syringe kit and takes off.
18As she comes down the stairs, she sees a terrifying sight.
It’s Two, who has come upstairs and is racing into ‘the
bedroom ahead of her. She SCREAMS, she takes off after him,
but he’s motoring, fast, headed for the panic room, where
she can already see One, standing in the middle of it, next
to the Boy, wearing the Husband’s shirt and a grim “tricked
you” grin. The Woman hurls herself at Two, lands clinging
to his back, claws and wrestles with him, causing him to
drop his gun, which is inadvertently kicked across the floor
of the bedroom. Two shakes her off his back violently and
makes a move toward the gun, but she’s closer and already
scrambling toward it. Two knows she’1l get there first, he
turns and races through the door and into the panic room.
The Woman shoots a look at the gun, then down at the
medicine in her hands, then at the door to the panic room,
where Two is right now reaching up to push the button that
controls the steel door.
The Woman makes a fast decision and lunges, hurling the
bottle of Glucogen and the syringe kit through the gap just
before --
-- the spring-loaded steel door SLAMS shut with tremendous
ferocity. The last thing she sees is her Boy’s terrified
face as he SCREAMS for her.
And then it’s silent. The Woman WAILS in agony, POUNDS on
the door, She stands back, chest heaving. A VOICE comes
over the house’s intercom system. It’s One. He is calm.
He tells her how it is:
“If you leave the house, we’1l kill him. If I see a uniform
in the house, I’1l kill him. Do you understand?”
She nods to one of the cameras, terrified. Inside the panic
room, we see her face as she SCREAMS something up at the
camera, but One and Two can’t make out what she says. We
know. She's saying the medicine, the medicine, you must
give him the medicine. But they ignore her. One turns to
the floor, removes a very secret panel, revealing a hidden
safe below. So this is what all the fuss was about. He
opens a bag filled with safecracking tools and sets to work.
Two asks how long. One repeats -- forty-five minutes and
we're outta here.
19Again, the pounding on the door. She’s still at it, the
crazy bitch. Two is highly annoyed. He looks up at her, is
amused by her wild pleadings, but they can’t hear a word
she’s saying. But One notices the Boy. He doesn’t look
right. The convulsions have eased, but the state he’s in
now seems even worse. He’s losing consciousness. His lips
are moving. One, who has an ounce of compassion in him,
bends down to hear the Boy.
“I need a ‘jection.”
Or what?, asks One.
“or I’m gonna die.”
One sees the bottle of Glucogen, the syringe kit the Woman
so desperately threw into the room. He understands. The
kid is diabetic. Now there is some debate. Two says don’t
waste your time, you don’t know how to do it, and we're
alzeady in for one murder, what’s the difference if he
doesn’t make it? But One won’t hear of it. He is not a
killer of children. He’s not a killer at all. He gets the
kit, brings it over to the Boy. Here you go, Kid, you know
how to do it, don’t you?
The Boy nods. He tries, but he is much too weak. Can
barely lift his hand, much less give himself an injection.
He's going to have to talk One through the process. ‘Two
absolutely cannot believe they are wasting time in this way.
You're gonna save him and kill us, you know that, don’t you?
After a violent confrontation, Two backs down. One will
have his way. This time.
Outside the room, the Woman is going insane, when the voice
returns over the intercom. Relax. I understand. 1/11 give
him the shot. Some comfort, But she’ll take it.
And so the Boy talks him through it. And it’s a weird,
intimate moment between One and the Boy. One talks to him
during the process, or maybe he’s just talking to himself.
I’m not the bad guy, kid. It seems like it, but I’m not the
bad guy. I’m a decent human being. You try doing what I do
for fifteen years. See so much money, given to all the
wrong people. Treated like shit... the richer they are, the
more they grind you on the price, the people that have the
least to complain about always do the most complaining. And
why are they so rich? I went to college, I’m smarter than
20they ate, most of ‘em. Half of them just inherited their
money. That makes me sick. I’m almost forty years old. I
want a house. I want a wife. I want a nice kid like you.
And I’m never gettin’ it, ‘cause that’s not how this world
works. Well tonight, just for one night, the world works
for me, instead of me for it.
The injection takes effect. The Boy’s life is saved. But
there was a price. The relationship between One and Two is
beyond repair. One goes to work on the safe. You know, he
only needs forty-five minutes. Two watches the Boy.
The Woman, realizing there’s nothing she can do here, picks
up the gun (for all the good it’1l do her) and hurries
downstairs to check on her Husband. He’s in awful shape,
barely conscious, and isn’t going to be any help. She
quickly explains the situation, but the basics are pretty
clear already, and they don’t need to say much. While
they’re talking, there is a KNOCK at the door (the entry
£loor door, not the bloody kitchen door downstairs). The
Woman turns, aghast. Who the hell could that be? “Police,”
the groggy Husband mutters. Police?! You called the
police?! Yeah, the husband says. You sounded freaked out.
The Woman is horrified. This is exactly what she and the
Boy prayed for him to do not fifteen minutes ago, now it is
the worst possible thing that could happen.
She starts to pull herself together, says I gotta put on
clothes. ‘Then changes her mind, realizes that’s the
opposite of what she should do. She takes a deep breath.
She looks up at the camera in the entryway, makes gestures
that say “I’m going to take care of this.”
Im the panic room, One and Two notice. What the hell is she
doing? ‘hey watch her go to the door, open it, and face TWO
UNIFORMED POLICE OFFICERS. Holy shit! Is she insane?! Two
freaks out, grabs the Kid, One says relax, relax, she’s
smart, she can do this. That Guy who showed up must have
called them. Sit tight. Let’s watch this.
Downstairs, she acts very sleepy as she talks to the Police.
They say they got a call from the Husband, that she told him
she was in trouble, then got cut off. She says “Huh?” They
ask to come in, they say you don’t look so good. she acts
annoyed, says, hey, you woke me out of a sound sleep at
three in the morning, of course I look like hell. You don’t
lock so hot yourself, Jim. They sorta believe her. But one
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of them notices her burned sleeve, so he persists. Your
husband said you said “There are three-” right before you
got cut off. He lowers his voice. Now, lady, if there’s
something you want to say to us right now that maybe you
can’t say to us right now, maybe you just want to make a
signal to us, by blinking a few times, something like that.
That’s something you could do.
She looks at this very smart young officer, severely
tempted. She thinks and thinks -- and bursts out laughing.
You're good, Officer, and I appreciate that. But no,
there’s nothing I have to say to you. The Officer still
presses her. Well, may I ask what the rest of that sentence
was going to be? She fudges, she hems, she haws, she
blushes. Okay, look. My husband and I just broke up. It’s
my first night in the new house, and I was feeling a little
lonely and a little drunk. The sentence was going to be
“There are three things I’11 do for you if you come over
here right now and get in bed with me.” But, thankfully, I
came to my senses and hung up instead. Satisfied?
That was suitably embarrassing, and now they believe her.
They wish her a good night, but not before the Smart Officer
gives her his card and urges her to give hima call. You
know, at home. If you ever want to talk. Always time to
make a little time. The cops leave, she closes the door --
-- and in the panic room, they go back to work. Two watches
the Boy. And he watches One.
‘The Woman confers with the Husband again, and together, they
come to an inescapable conclusion. There is a body
downstairs. ‘The men upstairs have killed. We are
witnesses. When they come out of that room with whatever
they came for, they are going to kill again. They will have
to. Maybe One won’t want to do it, but Two certainly will,
and it will happen just the same. The Husband has seen it.
Felt it. The Woman knows it too, But we have their gun!
But they have our boy.
Somehow, they have to get into that room and get their Boy
out. Actually, the truth is, somehow she has to get into
that room and get their Boy out. But how? She has a gun,
sure, but the room is impenetrable. And could she even use
the gun once she’s in there?
22She goes back into the bedroom. She gets dressed. Jeans,
boots, shirt, gun tucked in her belt. Yeah, Baby! She
examines all around the outer walls of the panic room.
Stell reinforcement, what can be done?
Inside the panic room, One is making progress on the safe.
He fires up a high-speed drill.
In the bedroom, the Woman hears the drill. So, apparently,
does the neighbor next door, who POUNDS on the wall again,
shouting something they can’t make out. The Woman’s eyes
light up with an idea. She goes to the front wall of her
bedroom, stands with her back against the extexior wall on
the street side and with her left shoulder against the
common wall that’s shared with the neighbor’s brownstone.
She begins to step off the distance, measuring with her feet
until she reaches the faux closet door that is the entrance
to the panic room. Fourteen feet. Got it.
She goes downstairs. She goes into a room in the front of
the entry floor and searches the four corners of it. No
video cameras in this one. That’s good. She tries to open
the window. Screwed shut, of course. Very funny,
motherfuckers.
In the panic room, the safe is almost cracked. ‘Two is
watching the monitors carefully, watching the Woman as she
walks around the house. He sees the Husband still in the
chair. He sees the Woman find a sledgehammer, their
sledgehammer. Who cares, it won't do her any good, just as
long as she stays in the house and doesn’t call the cops,
we're fine. Of course, we’ll still have the little problem
of EER HAVING THE GUN when we get out, but then, that’s why
we have the Kid, right? One just scowls at him. Great idea
to bring a gun, jackoff.
Downstairs, the Woman goes to work on the screws in the
window, gets them out with relative ease. She slides open
the window and the wind blasts in, it’s a hell of a spooky
night out there. She tosses the sledgehammer out, jumps
outside, lands on the front stoop, looks up, and realizes
with horror --
-- she’s standing right under a video camera. In the panic
room, the Boy sees this too, and if Two averts his gaze just
an inch or two, he’11 see it, that the Woman has left the
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house. So the Boy fakes another convulsion, drawing Two's
attention just long enough --
-- for the Woman to dart down her front steps and out of
range of the video camera. We stay inside, of course,
watching the Woman from the window as she climbs the steps
of the Neighbor’s house, shifts the gun to the back of her
pants, and POUNDS on the door. We strain to see, she’s all
the way at the right side of the frame, barely visible at
all, but hey, if the camera’s gonna stay in the house, the
camera’s gotta stay in the house.
We hear the important snatches of the Woman’s conversation
with an OLD LADY next door, the gist of which is let me in,
Bitch, and don’t ask me a lot of questions, I don’t have
time to explain. As the Old Lady is slow to respond, the
Woman just shoves past her and into the house. Now we do
something really groovy. As the Old Lady and the Woman have
@ heated conversation, the camera moves, following them from
our side of the shared wall. We rise up, as the heated
conversation goes up a flight of stairs.
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We move down a hallway, still following the heated
conversation on the other side of the wall, the Old Lady’s
fearful, angry tones, the Woman’s firm, urgent declarations.
We drift into the master bedroom, now the voices are louder
beyond the wall, but still muffled. The camera moves with
the Woman, even though it can’t see her, it knows what she’s
doing, she’s stepping off the paces on the other side of the
wall, measuring where the panic room starts. We keep
moving, approaching the door to the panic room, passing
through the door, arriving inside the panic room --
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-- where One is THIS CLOSE to getting the safe open when
they all suddenly hear a WHOMP and a CRUNCH from the shared
wall. They turn in alarm, and the WHOMP comes again.
Somebody is on the other side, pounding like hell. Two
looks at One in alarm. Walls are steel, right? Not that
one. Not the neighbor’s wall. What is that crazy bitch
thinking?! We've got the Kid! She’s thinking she’s got
your gun, that’s what she’s thinking. What do we do?! We
hurry. 1
one keeps drilling. The POUNDING keeps up. Sheetrock is
torn away on the far side. Bricks SCRAPE out of place. The
Boy is overjoyed at his mother’s tenacity and ingenuity.
Energized, he palms his syringe.
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| 24Finally, at the very moment that One gets the safe open, the
head of a sledgehammer bursts through the wall of the panic
room from the other side. Two grabs hold of the Boy, One
maintains his focus, throwing open the safe, revealing --
-- nothing.
‘The sledgehamner head strikes again. The Woman has opened
up a hole about a foot across. Light spills through from
the other side, as well as the voice of the hysterical old
Lady, screaming “I called the police!” Two hurls the Kid
against the far wall, leaps over to the side of the hole,
and waits.
One doesn’t lose his cool, just opens a false bottom in the
safe, revealing --
-- a manila envelope. He grabs the envelope, opens it, and
his eyes dance as he holds up fourteen individual one
million dollar U.S. Treasury Bearer Bonds. What he came
here for. He shoves them inside his jacket. Okay, let’s --
-- but the Woman’s arm comes through the gap, gun extended,
and fires a shot that SLAMS into the wall just behind him.
Two, who is hiding just next to the hole, STOMPS down on her
hand as hard as he can. The Woman SCREAMS, the gun drops,
and falls into the crack between the two houses, bouncing
three stories down, far out of everyone’s reach.
One demands -- I’ve got the money, let’s get outta here!
Two says sure, but he’s coming with us. He grabs the Kid
and hits the button to open the door. The Woman SCREAMS in
anger, hurls herself through the narrow opening, grabs Two’s
leg, and begins pulling herself into the panic room, scraped
and bloodied by the edges of the too-small hole.
One just keeps shouting GO, LET’S GO, OUT OF HERE!
But Two is deep into a violent rage, and insists on
finishing off any witnesses. He drags the Woman through the
opening and into the panic room. One has had enough. He
leaves, alone, with the bonds.
In the panic room, Two drags the Woman across the flooz by
the hair, into the open doorway, right in the track of the
open steel door. She realizes with horror what is
25happening, he holds her head down on the floor, hard, below
the infrared safety beam that would prevent the door from
closing. The Boy pulls his syringe, jabs it into Two's
neck, Two SCREAMS in pain.
On the stairs, One stops. He hears the murder taking place
just above him, What is he going to do? Fuck.
Two is stretching to hit the door button, but he has to hold
the Woman's head down, out of the lower beam, with one hand,
all with the Boy savagely attacking him at the same time.
Finally, he gets her head all the way down, out of the
beams, they are solid, he jams the button
-- but the Boy breaks the beam at the last second with his
hand. Two ROARS in anger, hurls the Boy across the room,
and goes back to it. The Woman strains like crazy, holds
her head as far up against his hand as she can, but Two is
jamming on the button over and over and she’s just barely
managing to maneuver her head in and out of the beam, but
she’s tiring, she’s tiring, she can’t keep it up, her head
finally falls, the beam completes, Two hits the button --
-- and One reappears, grabs Two by the hair, pulls him
forward, into the gap, and his big, fat head is crushed by
the spring-loaded steel door that SLAMS forward just as the
Woman draws herself back.
She falls across the panic room, grabs the Boy, and holds on
tight. The door opens again, detecting an obstruction.
Two's head. Too late, He’s dead. One stands there,
looking down at the Woman and the Boy. They stare at each
other, wordless, their first face to face contact. She sees
the bonds, protruding from his jacket. He zips it up.
He turne and hurries away.
Downstairs, One flies down the steps, hurries to the entry
door, throws it open --
-- and is flooded with police spotlights. He freezes,
silhouetted in the doorway. Wind and leaves blow into the
house, a real gale outside. The cops SHOUT, One SHOUTS
back, deranged by the tension of this night, he can’t
believe he came this far for this. They say don’t make a
move, he SCREAMS at them, No jail, no jail! They warn him
again, hands in the air, don’t move. We creep up behind
26him, He makes a move to the back of his belt, where he
knows perfectly well there is no weapon, but better that it
ends here than thirty miserable years from now in Attica.
The shots seem simultaneous, a cannon round of them, eight
in all. They SLAM into his chest and he falls to his knees.
He turns, still silhouetted, on his knees, puts one hand to
the entry wall for support. He lowers his head, he is the
silhouette of a man in prayer. He lingers, then falls over
on his back, dead.
The wind gusts, picks up the stack of bonds that were tucked
into his shirt, blows them back into the house, as if they
were never meant to leave. We back away from the doorway,
further into the house, among the stacks of moving boxes, as
the police come up the steps.
Dissolve to that same camera position in entryway, but now
it’s daytime. All the moving boxes are gone. The house is
completely empty again. The Woman comes down the stairs
with the Boy, each carrying a small bag. They head for the
door, and we follow behind them. They open the door. It’s
a gorgeous day outside, the sun shining, kids playing,
traffic trafficking. The Woman looks back at the place, the
place they lived in for all of one night. Then she turns
toward the sidewalk.
WOMAN
It’s beautiful outside.
They step out, we start to follow them, but since we haven’t
left the house for a single shot yet we're certainly not
going to start now and --
-- WHANG! A heavy steel door SLAMS across the entire screen
and we cut to black.
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