NAME: LAST YADHIRA AIMEE
NAME: CARRILLO MACHADO
TEACHER: ZENIA LALI MORI GARCIA
COURSE: ADVANCED READING (ARW1)
SCHEDULE: 4:00-5:00
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CONTENT
Step 1: Listing………………………………………………………………………………………………3
Step 2: Write the topic sentence…………………………………………………………………….4
Step 3: Graphic Organizer………………………………………………………………………….....5
Step 4: Basic Outline……………………………………………………………………………………..6
Step 5: Completed Outline……………………………………………………………………………..7
Step 6: First Draft………………………………………………………………………………………….8
Step 7: Second Draft……………………………………………………………………………………..9
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Step 1: Listing
01 Albert Einstein 11 Steve Jobs
02 Isaac Newton 12 Bill Gates
L I S T
03 Gregor Mendel 13 DaVinci
04 Rosa Parks 14 William Shakespeare
05 Rosalind Franklin 15 Piotr Ilich Chaikovski
06 Mark Zuckerberg 16 Wolfgang Mozart
07 Stephen Hawking 17 Nicolás Copérnico
08 Elvis Presley 18 Galileo Galilei
09 Charles Darwin 19 Ludwig Van
Beethoven
10 Marie Curie 20 Frida Kahlo
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O N E O F T H E M O S T I M P O R T A N T NATURALISTS
Step 2: Write the topic sentence
Gregor Mendel should be considered a genius because he was very
intelligent and has conducted scientific research as a naturalistic biologist for 34
years.
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Step 3: Graphic Organizer
Topic
Opinion
Controlling Idea
Gregor Mendel should be considered a genius because
he was very intelligent and has conducted scientific as a naturalistic biologist
for 34 years.
.He was an advanced math teacher for
two years.
. He developed the famous three laws
of genetics. . For two years he studied physics and
mathematics at the Olmütz
. He entered one of the most Philosophical Institute.
important universities in Vienna-
. He started scientific
. He made the first scientific investigations since he was 25
description of a tornado
years old.
. He proposed new methods of
research with plants and insects . He began a four-year course of
study at Brünn Theological College
in 1845
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Step 4: Basic Outline
Topic sentence:
Gregor Mendel should be considered a genius because he was very intelligent and has conducted scientific
research as a naturalistic biologist for 34 years.
A. Supporting sentence 1:
Gregor Mendel was a great naturalistic.
. Supporting Detail 1:
He developed the famous three laws of genetics.
B. Supporting sentence 2:
Gregor Mendel was a recognized experimenter
Supporting Detail 2:
He proposed new methods of research with plants and insects.
C. Supporting sentence 3:
He is one of the most experienced naturalists.
Supporting Detail 3:
He started scientific investigations since he was 25 years old.
D. Supporting sentence 4:
Gregor Mendel became the father of genetics.
Supporting Detail 4:
He was the first to discover this theory. Gregor began to investigate this
theory at the age of 25 when he was at the University of Vienna and made
his first publication of scientific research at the age of 32 in 1865.
Concluding sentence:
In summary, for the incredible discoveries and contributions to the development of humanity that
characterized him and for the years of dedication to his career, Gregor Mendel should be considered
a scientific genius.
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Step 5: Completed Outline
Title: Gregor Mendel
Topic sentence: Gregor Mendel should be considered a genius because he was very intelligent
and has conducted scientific research as a naturalistic biologist for 34 years.
S. S. 1: Gregor Johann Mendel was a great naturalistic.
S. D. 1: He developed the famous three laws of genetics, which are the principle of uniformity,
principle of segregation, and the principle of independent transmission. Gregor Mendel
took 8 years to discover these theories.
Transition: Definitively
S. S. 2: Gregor Mendel was one of the greatest experimenters in the 80s
S. D. 2: He is awarded this recognition thanks to his innovative research proposals with plants
and incest. In fact, these methods served to arrive at the origin of what today we
known as inheritance.
Connector sequence: Moreover
S. S. 3: Gregor Johann Mendel is one of the most experienced naturalists in scientific research
S. D. 3: He started doing science-related jobs when he was 26 years old and taught advanced
math for two years. This means that Gregor Mendel has been in the scientific research
industry for over 27 years.
Transition: Consequently
S. S. 4: Gregor Mendel became the father of genetics.
S. D. 4: He was the first to discover this theory. Gregor began to investigate this theory at the
age of 25 when he was at the University of Vienna and made his first publication of
scientific research at the age of 32 in 1865. This refers to that Gregor Mendel was
involved in the origin of hereditary genetics for more than 7 years.
Transition + Concluding sentences
In conclusion, for his talent and intelligence that characterizes him and for the years of
dedication to his career as a biologist, Gregor Mendel must be considered a scientific genius.
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Step 6: First Draft
Gregor Mendel
Gregor Mendel should be considered a genius because he was very
intelligent and has conducted scientific research as a naturalistic biologist for 34
years. Gregor Johann Mendel was a great naturalistic. He developed the famous
three laws of genetics, which are the principle of uniformity, the principle of
segregation, and the principle of independent transmission. Gregor Mendel took 8
years to discover these theories. Definitively, Gregor Mendel was one of the
greatest experimenters in the 80s. He is awarded this recognition thanks to his
innovative research proposals with plants and incest. In fact, these methods
served to arrive at the origin of what today we have known as inheritance.
Moreover, he is one of the most experienced naturalists in scientific research. He
started doing science-related jobs when he was 26 years old and taught
advanced math for two years. This means that Gregor Mendel has been in the
scientific research industry for over 27 years. Consequently, Gregor Mendel
became the father of genetics. He was the first to discover the genetic theory.
Gregor began to investigate this theory at the age of 25 years when he was at
the University of Vienna and made his first publication of scientific research at the
age of 32 years in 1865. This refers to that Gregor Mendel was involved in the
origin of hereditary genetics for more than 7 years. In conclusion, for his talent
and intelligence that characterizes him and for the years of dedication to his
career as a biologist, Gregor Mendel must be considered a scientific genius.
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Step 7: Second Draft
Gregor Mendel
Gregor Mendel should be considered a genius because
he was very intelligent and has conducted scientific research as a
naturalistic biologist for 34 years. Gregor Johann Mendel was a great
naturalistic. He developed the famous three laws of genetics, which
are the principle of uniformity, the principle of segregation, and the
principle of independent transmission. Gregor Mendel took eight
years to discover these theories. Definitively, Gregor Mendel was
one of the greatest experimenters in the 80s. He is awarded this
recognition thanks to his innovative research proposals with plants
and incest. In fact, these methods served to arrive at the origin of
what today we have known as inheritance. Moreover, he is one of
the most experienced naturalists in scientific research. He started
doing science-related jobs when he was 26 years old and taught
advanced math for two years. That means that Gregor Mendel has
been in the scientific research industry for over 27 years.
Consequently, Gregor Mendel became the father of genetics. He was
the first to discover the hereditary theory. Gregor began to
investigate this theory at the age of 25 years when he was at the
University of Vienna and made his first publication of scientific
research at the age of 32 years in 1865. That refers to that Gregor
Mendel was involved in the origin of hereditary genetics for more
than seven years. In conclusion, for his talent and intelligence that
characterizes him and for the years of dedication to his career as a
biologist, Gregor Mendel must be considered a scientific genius.
Author: Yadhira Carrillo Machado
