Noting Drafting
Noting Drafting
A. Noting
B. Drafting ( Letters)
NOTING
(i) Admin remarks (Nemi Noting)
(ii) Noting on incoming letters
(iii) Self originated Noting
LETTERS
Signature
Letter
Thank you very much for your letter which came this morning. am
glad to hear that you are better and are getting about again. What a time
you must have had ! Two months in bed ! I wonder how you could
stand it. But, thank God, it is all over and you are nearly will
rather weak at first, but I am sure you will soon pick-up strength.
3rd Part
I cannot write more just now, but I will send you a longer letter in
a few days. I hope we shall be able to meet soon.
1. Definition
2. Guidelines
5. Urgency Grading
Most of the cases dealt with in Government of India can be divided into the
following five categories:
The following guidelines are given for dealing with noting on the above five
categories of cases:
Purpose:
iv. What are the priorities for solution and which should you choose first?
v. What is the origin of the problem - political, psychological, human,
sociological or administrative?
vi. What is the background or cause of the problem? How has it arisen?
vii. Is it ripe enough for a solution? Can it be modified?
Data:
viii. If more information is essential for a solution, you can prepare a pro forma
for all required data.
- Don’t ask for information piecemeal. Ask for all details which are both
necessary and sufficient.
ix. If the problem is to be solved, what is the “Rule” position?
Solution:
In preparing a detailed note for consideration at the top management level follow
the hints given preparing summary or statement of case for Minister given in
Para 7.
In these cases, a short para in respect of each of the following questions would
suffice:
These do not require any detailed noting, It would suffice if a brief note,
as indicated below, is recorded
D. Routine/Repetitive cases:
E. Unnecessary cases:
These should be filed at the dak stage itself by the Section officer or desk
functionary recording in brief the reasons why no action is necessary.
They should be kept in File “O” bundle, i.e. cases to be kept wit the
Daftary and destroyed on 31st December of every year.
DRAFTING
Definition
Is a draft necessary?
Who should be addressed and who will sign?
What is the relationship between the sender and receiver?
What should be the form?
Is something to be conveyed or to be called for?
Are all details available?
What is the intention of the decision?
What should be the recipient response?
Does the language convey?
Has the referencing been done?
Is it logically sequenced?
Does it have proper urgency, security grading?
A draft should
Commands
Identify - SENDER
Adopt - RIGHT FORM
Visualize - RESPONSE
Express - CLARITY, CONSISTENCY
UNIFORMITY
Avoid - REDUNDANCY, VERBOSITY
CIRCUMLOCUTION, REPETITION
Summaries - COMPLEX & LENGTHY
1. LETTER
2. DEMI-OFFICIAL LETTER
3. OFFICE MEMORANDUM
4. TELEGRAM
5. OFFICE ORDER
6. ORDER
7. CIRCULAR
8. INTER-DEPARTMENTAL NOTE
9. NOTIFICATION
10. RESOLUTION
11. PRESS COMMUNIQUE I NOTE
12. ENDORSEMENT
13. ADVERTISEMENT
METHOD OF DELIVERY
(1) Letter: This form is used for corresponding with Foreign Governments, State
Governments, the Union Public Service Commission and other constitutional bodies.
A letter begins with the salutations Sir/Madam as may be appropriate.
Government of India
Ministry of Defence
Ordnance Factory Board,
Ordnance Factory Kanpur
To
The Director General,
Central PWO, Nirman bhavan,
New Delhi
Sub:
Ref:
Sir,
Yours faithfully,
Sd/-
(A.B.C.)
For General Manager
(1)
(2)
Sd/-
(A.B.C.)
(2) DEMI-OFFICIAL LETTER : (a) This form is generally used in
correspondence between Government officers for an inter-change or communication of
opinion or information without the formality of the prescribed procedures. It may also
be used when it is desired that the matter should receive personal attention of the
individual addressed. Since demi-official letter is written in the first person in a
personal and friendly tone.
(b) Communication to non-officials can also take the form of a demi-official letter.
X Y Z Government of India
……………………. Ministry of Defence
Ordnance Factory Board,
Ordnance Factory
Kanpur-208009
My dear/Dear Shri.........
With regards,
Yours sincerely,
(X, Y, Z)
Shri …………………
………………………
………………………
(3) Official Memorandum: This form is generally used for corresponding with
other departments. It may also be used in corresponding with attached and
subordinate offices. It is written in the third person and bears no salutation or
supersession except the name and designation of the officer signing it.
NO.....................
Government of India
(Bharat Sakar)
Department of.............
(............. Vibhag)
OFFICE MEMORANDUM
Subject: ________________________________________
Enc.: 3 statements
(A.B.C.)
Under Secretary to the Govt.of India
Tele.No.........
To
The Department of..........
(................ Vibhag)
(Shri /Smt............ ..)
Yojana Bhavan,
Parliament Street,
New Delhi
Telegram : This form is used for communicating with out-station parties in matters
demanding prompt attention. The text of the telegram should be as brief as
possible.
TELEGRAM
STATE
MILITARY
DCOMAH
BOMBAY
……………………………………………………………………………………………
HOMEX
……………………………………………………………………………………………
NOT TO BE TELEGRAPHED
(A, B, C)
Under Secretary to the Govt. of India
To
The Director of Census Operation,
Maharashtra Sachivalaya,
Bombay
(A, B, C)
Under Secretary to the Govt.of India
(5) OFFICE ORDER: This form is normally used for issuing instructions meant for
internal administrations, e.g. grant of regular leave, distribution of work among
officers and sections, appointments and transfers, etc.
NO………………
GOVERNMENT OF INDIA
(BHARAT SARKAR)
DEPARTMENT OF.........
(............... VIBHAG)
OFFICE ORDER
It is certified that but for his proceeding on leave, Shri XYZ would have
continued in the same post.
(A, B, C)
Under Secretary To the Govt. of India
Copy to:
NO………………
Government of India
(Bharat Sarkar)
Department of......
(........Vibhag)
ORDER
(1) XXXX
(2) XXXX
(A,B,C)
Under Secretary to the Govt.of India
Tele. No.......
Government of India
(Bharat Sarkar)
Department of..........
(............. Vibhag)
Subject: ___________________________________
The present rules regulating the issue of identity cards provide interalia that
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2. A question has now arisen whether....................
3.
4.
5. This department will be grateful for the advice of the Department of Legal
Affairs on the issue raised in pares 4 above.
(X.Y.Z)
Deputy Secretary
Tele. No.
Government of India
(Bharat Sarkar)
Department of......
(... ... .Vibhag)
NOTIFICATION
(A,B,C)
Joint Secretary to the Govt. of India
To
The Manager
Government of India Press
(Bharat Sarkar press)
Faridabad
NO………………
Government of India
(Bharat Sarkar)
Department of.......
(........ Vibhag)
RESOLUTION
The Government of India has had under consideration the question of further
improving efficiency bf the departments and services concerned with the collection of
revenue. As a first step in that direction the President has been pleased, under the
powers vested in him by provisio to Article 309 of the Constitution of India, to decide
that a Class I Central Service to be known as 'India Revenue Service' should be
constituted with effect from..................
(A,B,C)
Secretary to the Government of India
ORDER
ORDERED also that the resolution be published in the Gazette of India for
general information.
(A, B,C,)
Secretary to the Government of India
To
The Manager,
Government of India Press,
(Bharat Sarkar)
Faridabad
(10) PRESS COMMUNIQUE/NOTE : This form is used when it is proposed to
give wide publicity to a decision of Government.
PRESS COMMUNIQUE/NOTE
2. The Commission will consist of Shri............ ... ....... as Chairman and the
following as members:
1.
2.
3.
Department of......
(....... Vibhag)
No......................
Forwarded to the Principal Information Officer, Press Information Bureau,
Government of India, New Delhi for issuing the communique and giving it wide
publicity
(ABC)
Joint Secretary to the Govt. of India
(11) ENDORSEMENT : This form is used when a paper has to be returned in
original to the sender, or the paper in original or its copy is sent to another
department or office, for information or action. It is also used when a copy of a
communication is proposed to be forwarded to parties other than the one to which
is addressed. The appropriate form for such communications should be a letter.
NO………………
Government of India
(Bharat Sarkar)
Department of.......
(........ Vibhag)
(A,B,C)
Under Secretary to the Government of India
Tele. No... ...
12. Circular: This form is used when important and urgent external
communications received or important and urgent decisions taken
internally have to be circulated within a department for information and
compliance by a large number of employees.
03.. As per rule the Head of the Department i.e. General Manager is the cadre
controlling authority of CM-I and is empowered to sanction leave and issue
NOC.
I/C Estt.
WM/A
AGM/A
GM
No. 1034/Estt /08 Dated: 20th August’08
This Organization have no objection to his acquiring of an India Passport & visit
( )
For General Manager
NOTING - 3
OFIL KN is catering the training needs of all Group ‘B’ and ‘C’ employees of
North Zone Ordnance Factories besides other Factories & Allied Establishments. At
present this Institute is facing lot of inconveniences due to deficient strength of Faculty
Members.
02. OFIL KN has the sanctioned strength of 9 JWMs & 7 Asstt Foremen. At present
against the above sanctioned strength, only 8 JWMs and 1 Asstt Foreman is posted to
this Unit. Further, one JWM namely Shri ……………….. is going be retire in this
month which will further reduce the strength of JWMs.
03. Keeping in view the depleting strength of JWM/AF, it is submitted that we may
approach OFB through a DO letter from PD/OFIL KN to Member/Per, OFB for
posting of 2 JWMs and atleast 4 Asstt Foremen who are having teaching interest and
good academic back-ground.
04. A draft DO letter from PD/OFIL KN to Member/Per is also placed opposite for
approval.
Submitted please.
FM/Estt
PD
DFA PL.
My dear
I am writing this D.O. to seek your kind help in meeting deficient strength of
JWM and AF(T) posts of this unit. The sanctioned strength vis-à-vis existing strength
of these two categories are given here under:-
As seen from the above, the total deficiency will be 9 in near future. Thus,
besides Five AFs, the replacement of these JWMs are to be posted early so that they
can pick up the faculty work and other miscellaneous work being looked after by them.
I would therefore like to request you to kindly look into the matter and favour
this OFIL by posting JWMs and AFs preferably having teaching interest with good
academic background at the earliest so that the activities of this unit are taken care of in
an effective manner and depleted manpower may not be a hurdle in smooth functioning
of this unit.
Yours
( )
Shri , IOFS
Member/Per,
Ordnance Factory Board,
10-A, S. K. Bose Road,
KOLKATA – 700 001
NO. 01/PD/OFIL KN/08 DATED:
To
The PC of A (Fys)
Office of Principal Controller of Accounts (Fys)
10-A, S.K. Bose Road,
KOLKATA-700 001
As per the existing practice in vogue, the bill was preferred along-with the
self attested air tickets. However, as asked for vide above referred letter, the 5
Nos of boarding passes in original are enclosed herewith. As the boarding
passes for two sectors Delhi-Pune and Delhi-Lucknow have been misplaced, a
certificate issued by M/s Balmer Lawrie & Co. Ltd., Travel & Tour Division,
Lucknow in respect of the journey performed to above sectors, is enclosed
herewith.
Encl: As above
( )
General Manager
FAX MESSAGE
( )
OFFICER-IN-TY-CHARGE
Friendly Letters
Dear Amit,
Uncle Bhushan has sent a very nice present for you from Australia. Can you
guess what it can be? I think I should not reveal it. I shall send it after your reply so as
to make sure that you are there at the present address. I am sending your address to
uncle, and he may write you directly.
The other day, I met Saurabh Bajaj, whose sister’s marriage has been fixed and
she would be married soon. He has asked me to say you ‘hello!’ on his behalf. She
will invite you on her marriage. He was in a hurry and with his maternal uncle.
Therefore, we could not talk much. he has promised to see me day after tomorrow.
Papa and mummy send their love and hope that you all are well. Please reply
immediately and give me all the news
Yours Sincerely,
Alok
Family Letters
Letters to and from family are a tonic. A letter of good cheer from someone in
the family can be a great source of solace, inspiration, encouragement and freshness in
these days of dark times. Family letters should incorporate in them the qualities of
sincerity, simplicity, originality and warmth. They should not be a routine affair.
Cultivate the habit of writing lively and interestingly family letters.
10, HIG
Saket Dham,
NEW DELHI-09
15TH August’08
Dear Rahul,
Your long and ominous silence has puzzled all of us. You have never been before
so tardy in writing about yourself to us. Why so much delay? We have written you
three letters in succession during the past fortnight but without any reply.
My son, are you not well, or are you in some trouble? We hope there is nothing
to worry about. Your mother and sister are very worried to know about your well-being
and therefore, anxious to come to you. In case you don’t reply by returned post, I will
have to escort them to you.
Write immediately and let us know why this silence? What’s the matter? You
need not hide anything from us. If there is any problem we can certainly help you out.
If it is because of your sheer laziness, cast it away at once and do write promptly, or
come over here at the earliest.
My dear Rahul, you don’t know how thirsty we are to receive the good news
from your end.
Vivek Rai
The power of the press as a mass media in a democratic county like India is well known.
Letters to the editor is very popular means to give vent to one’s feelings on a current topic of general
interest or to draw the attention of the concerned authorities to some matter, or to make the public
opinion against or in favour of one thing or the other. In every daily newspaper and other periodical
magazines letters of the readers are published. These letters are on topical subjects in which a large
majority of the readers take interest.
Such a letter should always be brief, lively, logical, convincing, interesting and of some
literary merit. Every day hundreds of letters are received by the editors, but only those letters which
are significant, on contemporary vital issues and readable see the light of publication in the columns
meant for this purpose. It is not necessary that a letter should agree with the editor, but the
disagreement must be within the limits.
Motilal Saxena,
15, MIG, Barra-7
KANPUR-208 011
To
The Editor,
The Times of India,
The Mall,
KANPUR-208 001
Will you very kindly give a little place to my letter in your esteemed and highly popular paper?
I write to you to put forward the difficulties which the public has to face due to frequent break
down of water supply in the locality Barra-7, Kanpur. We are in a very difficult situation. The
rainy season is already on. The Ganga is full of water. So, there is no problem of electric power.
I fail to understand the causes of the frequent break down of water supply. We have not got even
a single drop of water for the last two days. None can know the difficulties we have faced these
days. In my opinion the break down is due to the inefficient working of the water supply
department.
Will you very kindly publish my letter in you paper so that the higher authorities may come to
know of it and warn those who are responsible for it?
On Birth Control
Jeevan Gandhi,
24, Nai Basti, Kalyanpur
KANPUR-208 018
To,
The Editor,
The Hindustan Times
Mall Road,
KANPUR-208 001
Sir,
Over population is one of the greatest problems our country has been facing. It is
high time that we do something to curb the growth rate of our population today and
now, otherwise, tomorrow may be too late. Let us take the problem seriously to reduce
our population to the manageable proportion. Sterilization, use of contraceptives and
late marriages should be encouraged. A nationwide door to door campaign is the need
of the hour to educate the masses in this connection. The mass media should also take
up the issue on war footing.
Offering of economic and other incentives to the govt. employees and the public
in general should be a welcome step. In consideration of allotment of quarters, flats,
building loans, promotions, the size of the family may also be taken into consideration.
There are many myths regarding the large population. One of these is that a large
population is needed to fight and win a modern war. We should not overlook the hard
fact that wars are fought and won with mind, machines and not muscles. Militarily
most advanced countries like America and Russia have a controlled and thin
population. The over population creates problems regarding supplies, civil defence,
morale and discipline during the war. In the context of possible atomic war, the number
of heads becomes quite meaningless.
Moreover may other serious problems like unemployment, food, heath, housing
are the direct result of over population. We should not hesitate even if we have to take
some drastic steps in this direction. Special measures have to be devised to achieve the
desired results.
Yours Sincerrely
To
The Secretary,
Union Public Commission,
Dhaulpur House,
New Mehrauil Road,
NEW DELHI-110 045
Dear Sir,
My present employers are entirely satisfied with my work and conduc, but the
post offered here has better prospects from salary, perks and the career point of view.
In view of the facts, given in my bio-data, enclosed on a separate sheet, you will
not deny me the chance to prove that I possess the requisite taste and spirit for the post,
I am applying for.
I shall look forward eagerly for a letter of interview at your earliest convenience.
Thanking you,
Yours faithfully
Encl: as above
Dated:
( Bhanu Pratap Singh )
Bio – Data
Declaration : I certify that the above information is correct and complete to the best of
my knowledge and nothing has been concealed/distorted. If at any time, I am found to
have concealed/distorted any material information, my appointment shall be liable to
summary termination without any notice or compensation.
Dated: Signature………………………
APPLICATION FOR LEAVE
To
The Principal Director,
Ordnance Factories Institute of Learning,
Kalpi Road,
KANPUR-208 009
Sir,
With due respect I beg to state that I have been laid down with malaria fever for
the last three days. Therefore, I have been unable to attend my duties. I was not even
in a position to write an application for sick leave. Now, the fever has subsided and the
doctor has advised me a week’s rest. Hence, I request you honour to grant me sick
leave for 10 days with effect from 16th August’08 to 25th August’08.
The medical and fitness certificate will be submitted when I join my duties.
Thanking you,
Yours sincerely,
( )
Dated: 20-08-2008 JWM/OFIIL KN
Notes of Invitation
All formal notes of invitation are in the third person and have almost a fixed and standard
language, but many variations are possible in the choice of printing and the placing of the wordings in
specified lines.
For wedding, we say, “request the pleasure of your presence” and for dinner, reception,
inauguration, we say, “request the pleasure of your company”.
To solicit a reply we use, “R.S.V.P.” It is a French term : Respondez sil vou plait and means
Reply, will you please.
1 Formal Invitation
R.S.V.P.
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2. Formal Invitation
S. Yamdagni, IOFS
Principal Director, OFIL Kanpur
requests the pleasure of the company
of
Shri A. K.Rai, IOFS
General Manager
Ordnance Factory, Kanpur
at Dinner
on Sunday, the fourteenth of September’ 2008
at 20:00 Hrs
at Inspection Bungalow, Armapur Estate, Kanpur
R.S.V.P. : 2213290 Dress: Informal
Informal Invitation
“Sita Sadan”
10, The Mall
Kanpur-208 001
August :
Dear Suraj,
I feel great pleasure in informing you that my eldest son Gaurav is being married
to Garima, the daughter of Shri & Smt. Kailash Chandra Vajpayee on 4th Sept’2008 at 8
O’clock in the evening at their residence, 1/25, Hill side Road, Greater Kailash, New
Delhi.
I and my wife solicit your and your wife’s benign presence in this wedding
celebration. I hope you both will be with us well in time and grace the occasion.
Needless to tell you how Gaurav and we shall miss you in case you both don’t
turn up in time?
Cordially,
CLASSIFIED DOCUMENT
1. Top Secret
2. Secret
3. Confidential
4. Restricted
TOP SECRET
Certain secret documents, information and material the security aspect of which
is paramount and whose unauthorized disclosure would cause “EXCEPTIONALLY
GRAVE DAMAGE TO THE NATION” shall be classified “TOP SECRET”.
CONFIDENTIAL
The following are some examples of matter which normally will be graded
“CONFIDENTIAL”.
RESTRICTED
All official documents and correspondence requiring protection other than those
covered by higher categories which should not be published or communicated to any
one except for official purpose.