Directors Copy Of Script Along With Notes:
Him walking around
taking pictures
kind of nostalgic/dream like effects
girl talking to guy (boyfriend etc)
focusing on them
then fading in on their conversation
Guy walks up to them, smiling
"Sorry, I'm a freelance photographer, and kinda like a hobby,
and I wondered if I could take your picture. I can sense the chemistry
between you two"
girl guy - bit creeped out
girl says yeah though, pose next to guy
smiling etc
main guy says thank you
looks at camera
smiling then acts surprised for a split second
sniffing, acting more awkward and starts backing away etc
Girl asks what
guy says "nothing, you just. You look just as beautiful as you
do in person"
girl looks at friend creeped out etc
"M-mind if I quickly get another one"
*starts taking loads of pictures of them*
- EDITING -
camera filming and moving about a bit to act as taking picture in guys
camera, camera effect overlay, then she turns demonic thing etc*
guy backs away quicker smiling lookinga this camera, saying bye
then close up as he turns from smiling to angry/more serious etc
walks off
Guy says "weirdo in background"
Shot to guy looking through camera, then on phone
"Hey. Yeah, I found another one" - him looking around and moving about
"They're pretty young, no obvious symptoms, apart from what *we* can see.
But she's an easy target. For me and them" - more serious face
"I'm in a pretty crowded place right now, so- I know *nodding head* don't
get too close, I know"
Shot inbetween guy character then girl character
Girl talking about what's she's gonna do at home
How she's gonne get home, then guy's phone conversation
Girl says bye to friend
walk towards the park
She walks straight past main guy leaning against wall/tree
him in alleyway maybe?
Shot of her up close, then shot of him walking down, curious face
then her looking behind,
turns around corner
she goes to call her friend (scared she'd being followed)
She looks around a lot
Guy walking up to her
Closer and closer shots, and follow shot (first person)
then side shot of him tapping her shoulder
Another girl (same hair) turns around,
He gets startled
Guy "Sorry, I thought- I thought you were someone else"
backs away, other girl weirded out
starts cussing under his breath, freaking out
"Fuck fuck fuck, she didn't have long left"
Starts turning on his camera and taking pictures all around him
Girl double takes, see's him taking pictures frantically, gripping hair etc
"I see him, he's walking down the main path-"
"Head back to the Grafton, I'm still around"
She starts walking back (to street)
Shot of guy turning around and taking pictures and looking at the screen
(checking)
then one at audience, then shot of him looking down, smiling
Shot of him walking/skidding off
Then she picks up phone again, says she's heading down Elm street
*her walking past sign post*
Shot of her keep looking behind her*
Then she bumps into someone, she sighs of relief saying
"-friends name- you scared me"- then shot looking up it's main guy
Shot of him (pulling cameras hair), turning head, then seeing him about to
inject neck in corner of screen (zooms in a little)
Then friend in background on phone
then focuses on friend, saying "Hey, starts running towards girl"
Guy looks back, then back to female
"Wait wait wait, I can explain, please" - desperate holds syringe in hand,
zoom into syringe a bit
"You do it then, I don't want to get any closer to her for any longer than
I have to" - guy
"What kind of messed up shit are you into?" - close up shot of them angry
together heads close
guy smiles then "Not my shit, her shit now"
- guy has control of the situation
walks over to girl
*Holds cheeks* "I'm here to help you, I swear to any God that you may pray
to, you don't have much time left, you're dying, you have to try and
acknwledge I'm trying to help you"
friend comes over, guy "Stay the fuck away from her, otherwise it will
latch onto you, and your body will slowly start to rot, decompose, your
life will literally fade away, and you won't even know about it" - more
dominant in the situation angry
"There are these Creatures who latch onto individuals who are very social,
spend a lot of time with people, surrounded by people. They feed off human
life to survive"
- goes behind girl and clings onto her shoulders- closer to her head -
photo cover etc / thumbnail
"Meaning the longer they're latched on, the shorter your life span becomes"
Guy walks up to friend
"And guess what, she didn't even look human a few seconds ago"
slight pause, then punches friend
friend falls back,
Guy "Your turn" smiling a little
Girl goes to run
"Oh, please don't run, you don't really wanna run do you?"
"You wanna believe me right? You look like someone who likes a bit of
fiction? Witchcraft?" - looks her up and down
"You gonna be a good little girl and give your arm to the weirdo?"- guy
Girl extends arm
"Good, you're easy. I like that" - guy
friend comes over and pulls guy back, tackles him etc
they both struggle, grunt etc
girl goes back against the wall, starts to faint etc
Then original idea, blurry vision first person
Friend fighting guy
then just goes black - blinking effect