There are differing views on whether schools should focus more on academic subjects or physical education. While physical education provides health benefits, some argue academic subjects better prepare students for their future. Both sides have reasonable arguments, and schools must consider students' overall development.
There are differing views on whether schools should focus more on academic subjects or physical education. While physical education provides health benefits, some argue academic subjects better prepare students for their future. Both sides have reasonable arguments, and schools must consider students' overall development.
There are differing views on whether schools should focus more on academic subjects or physical education. While physical education provides health benefits, some argue academic subjects better prepare students for their future. Both sides have reasonable arguments, and schools must consider students' overall development.
There are differing views on whether schools should focus more on academic subjects or physical education. While physical education provides health benefits, some argue academic subjects better prepare students for their future. Both sides have reasonable arguments, and schools must consider students' overall development.
PARAGRAPH 1: Introduction - Paraphrase It is an undeniable fact that… There is no denying/disputing fact that… Some individuals/people argue that… People have different views about… The question whether…has drawn much attention from the public. It is true/thought/argued that… - State your opinion Agree I completely/totally agree In my opinion, this idea is completely justifiable From my perspective, this practice/idea is feasible…and there are compelling reasons why… Disagree I do not agree/ completely disagree To my perspective, however, the mentioned idea should be rejected and below is an essay clarifying my viewpoint I disagree with this view, because I believe that… Partly agree While I accept that…, I believe that… Although I agree that…, I don’t believe… Although…is justifiable to some degree, reality, in my opinion, has proven otherwise (Although occupational suitability based on gender is justifiable to some degree, reality, in my opinion, has proven otherwise)
Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?
In my view, the drawbacks of those changes are more significant than the benefits. While there are some advantages of this trend, I would argue that its disadvantages are more significant. Although some benefits can be seen from the phenomenon, the drawbacks are more significant. While there are some drawbacks of this trend, I would argue that the advantages more than compensate for any disadvantages. Despite some obvious disadvantages of this trend, I believe that these are outweighed by the advantages.
PARAGRAPH 2 - Topic sentence To begin with, there are a variety of reasons why… To begin with, the underlying/fundamental reasons for this trend are varied There are justified reasons from those who support… Those who argue that…base their cases/opinions/ideas on the following arguments. On the one hand,… - Supporting sentence Firstly,… Thus/Consequently,… For example,… Secondly,…Furthermore/As a result,… For example,…
PARAGRAPH 3 - Topic sentence Additionally/ In addition,… On the other hand, I believe that… However, I would argue that… - Supporting sentence Firstly/ To be more specific,… Secondly,…
PARAGRAPH 4: Conclusion - In conclusion, I believe/ I would argue that… - In the light of aforesaid factors/ aforementioned reason, I am convinced that,… - In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I believe… - In conclusion, I believe both the arguments/ sides/ opinions have their merits. On balance, however, it seems that…(In conclusion, I believe both the arguments have their merits. On balance, however, it seems that schools should provide young learners with other vital skills helping them develop more comprehensively) - Having considered both views, I think/believe that…is/are of overriding importance….Also, I would suggest…(Having considered both views, I believe that employees’ soft skills are of overriding importance, contributing hugely to the development of a company) - In conclusion, it seems to me that… (In conclusion, it seems to me that it is more comfortable to live in big city owing to advanced education systems and more employment opportunities.) - Although there are still drawbacks of…, I think its values are more significant. - In conclusion, it is obvious to acknowledge…, but the adverse effects of this development/ trend/ phenomenon should not be overlooked. (In conclusion, it is obvious to acknowledge the dominant benefits of humans’ effort to make products financially available for everyone, but the adverse effects of this development/ trend/ phenomenon should not be overlooked.) - In conclusion, it appears to me that the merits of…are more notable than its drawbacks. (In conclusion, it appears to me that the merits of international tourism are more notable than its drawbacks.) - In conclusion, despite a few beneficial aspects of…the demerits are of greater significance from both individual and social/environmental angles. (In conclusion, despite a few beneficial aspects of having a car, a TV and a fridge, the demerits are of greater significance from both individual and environmental angles) POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE (OPINION) BOTH Paragraph 1: Introduction - Paraphrase In recent years, there has been a growing tendency… It is true that… - In my opinion, this trend could have both positive and negative consequences in equal measure
Paragraph 2: reason positive
- The…can be seen as positive for both personal and broader…reasons (The rise in one-person households can be seen as positive for both personal and broader economic reasons) - Idea 1: On an individual level/ From an individual perspective… - Idea 2: From a social perspective/ an economic perspective…
Paragraph 3: reason negative
- However, the personal and economic arguments given above can be considered from the opposite angle. - Firstly, opposite with idea 1 - Secondly, opposite with idea 2
Paragraph 4: Conclusion In conclusion, the…will have both beneficial and detrimental effects on… (In conclusion, the increase in one-person households will have both beneficial and detrimental effects on individuals and on the economy) And this is, in my view, advantageous and detrimental as well.
POSITIVE Paragraph 1: Introduction - Paraphrase In recent years, there has been a growing tendency… It is true that… - State your opinion I believe that the majority do have a positive influence on… In my opinion, this could be seen as a progress/positive development for the following reasons. There could be several reasons for this and I consider it to be a very positive trend.
Paragraph 2: reason positive
- From an individual perspective - View from social - First: reason it’s a positive development
Paragraph 3: reason positive
- From a social perspective - In my view/ From my perspective - Second, reason why doing the opposite with first is a drawback Paragraph 4: Conclusion In conclusion, I think the changes occurring to…are a positive step toward a better world. I conclusion, I believe that the…is obviously an important step forward.
NEGATIVE Paragraph 1: Introduction - Paraphrase In recent years, there has been a growing tendency… It is true that… - State your opinion In my opinion, this is a negative development which can lead to idea 1, idea 2 However, this development, too, has some negative aspects.
Paragraph 2: reason negative
Idea 1: One serious problem that can arise from…is that it can lead to
Paragraph 3: reason negative
Idea 2: Another issue is that…
Paragraph 4: Conclusion In conclusion, although it has become more popular…, it has brought about too many problems for this to be considered a positive trend. DISCUSS PARAGRAPH 1: Introduction - Paraphrase It is thought by some people that… The view/idea that…has sparked much debate. (The view that a marriage should be arranged by the parents of the couple has sparked much debate) In recent years, there has been a growing debate as to whether…(Nowadays, there has been a growing debate as to whether it would be more effective to replace physical education classes with the academic subjects) People have different views about whether… - Thesis statement Many people believe that…is the best way whereas others believe that…is a better option Some people argue…while many others contend that…(Some people argue the globalization has fundamentally beneficial influence on our lives while many other contend that it has detrimental effects as well) Along with the advantages of…, there are disadvantages also. (Having one language would certainly aid understanding and economic growth but there will also be some drawbacks) Although some benefits can be seen from the phenomenon, the drawbacks should not be overlooked. Those who argue that…base their cases on the following arguments.
PARAGRAPH 2 - Topic sentence To begin with, there are a variety of reasons why… There are quite plausible reasons for… Those who support…base their cases on the following reasons. On the one hand,… - Supporting sentence First of all,… In addition/Consequently,… For example,…
PARAGRAPH 3 - Topic sentence On the other hand,…/ However,… Convincing argument can be made that… Others are of the opinion that… - Supporting sentence Firstly,… Furthermore,… Secondly,… For example,…
PARAGRAPH 4: Conclusion - In conclusion, it seems evident that… (In conclusion, it seems evident that both working right after school and choosing to continue higher-level studies each have their own unique advantages) - To sum up, considering all the reasons and benefits of… CAUSES & EFFECTS PARAGRAPH 1: Introduction - Paraphrase It has been widely noted that,… In recent years, the…has become an increasingly popular trend. In recent years,…and this seems to be an increasingly common trend in many countries. There is a common trend that… - Thesis statement There are a number of reasons behind this tendency and I would argue that it has a serious negative impact on society. There are a number of reasons for this trend, which is having a significant impact on… This problems happens due to some reasons, and it can have some adverse impacts on society.
PARAGRAPH 2: Causes - Topic sentence The phenomenon can be attributable to two principal factors. Two important factors influence… There are two important reasons why… To begin with, there are several reasons/explanations why… - Reason 1 Firstly,… For example,… As a result,… - Reason 2 Secondly,… Therefore,… For instance,…
PARAGRAPH 3: Effects - Topic sentence However, this tendency could have negative consequence in term of both…and…(family life and society/ personal and community) The effects of this trend on society are potentially grave/serious. The problems of…can result in some negative effects. There are many harmful effects on the individuals and society. - Effect 1 One significant problem may be that… An important concern for…is that… The first impact is that… - Effect 2 Another negative factor is that… Additionally,… Consequently,…/ This will result in…
PARAGRAPH 4: Conclusion - In conclusion, there are dangers/ negative impacts in… and the causes of this phenomenon/trend should be addressed urgently. - In conclusion, several factors/reasons lead to…and the negative influences/ impacts/ effects of this trend/ phenomenon should be taken into consideration/are too serious to be neglected. (In conclusion, several factors lead to the obesity among children in Western nations and the negative influence of this trend should be taken into consideration) - In conclusion, … is caused by several factors and this problem might bring about serious impacts. (In conclusion, the shortage of students choosing science subjects is caused by several factors, and this problem might bring about serious impacts) PROBLEMS & SOLUTIONS PARAGRAPH 1: Introduction - Paraphrase It is widely argued that… It is true that… There is a growing concern that… - Thesis statement While there is a strong case for this view, solutions must be applied to resolve some of the serious issues which have arisen. There are a number of reasons behind this phenomenon and several solutions should be adopted to solve the problem. Several problems have resulted from this tendency and they should be tackled by a number of effective solutions from… While there are various reasons for this trend, some measures can be implemented to… Some causes for this problem can be identified, but there are some solutions could help to… Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.
PARAGRAPH 2: Problems - Topic sentence The phenomenon can be attributable to two principal factors. There are two primary/main reasons why… As…, several related problems can be anticipated. - Reason 1 One of the most obvious problems is… Firstly,… For example,… - Reason 2 Another worrying trend is… Secondly,… For instance,…
PARAGRAPH 3: Solutions - Steps must be taken so as to solve/overcome/combat… Measures should in order to deal with/eradicate…
- Another solve/overcome this problem would be…
One (possible) way to combat/deal with the problem of… is… An alternative eradicate
- People focus to solve/overcome the problems of…
Governments their/our to improve the situation of… We attention to reduce the impact of…on society.
- If steps/measures were taken to… the effect/result/consequence
If attempts were made to address the problem would be…
- By + V-ing … we/government can ensure that/prevent…
- The situation could be improved if… - It would be a good idea if… - The effect/consequence/outcome/result of… would/might be…
PARAGRAPH 4: Conclusion - In conclusion, only by addressing the…will…be changed. (In conclusion, only by addressing the concerns of local people will negative attitudes to international tourism be changed) - In conclusion, the…is a big problem for…and solutions should be implemented urgently to tackle this issue. - In conclusion, there are various negative consequences of…and appropriate steps need to be taken to tackle these problems. - In conclusion, some reasons why…can be identified, and some solutions should be adopted to… - In conclusion, several factors/reasons lead to…and we should take the aforementioned/ the aforesaid measures/ solutions to tackle/ address this modern-day problem.
