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Time Hunters #1
The Time Hunters
A murdered time traveller. A mysterious ancient relic. A treasure hunt through history to find the Golden Fleece.
Becky Mellor is a typical thirteen-year-old girl. She likes social media, coffee shops, and plenty of sleep.
So when she and her brother, Joe, are invited to stay with their 'loony' Uncle Percy at his stately home, Bowen Hall, she thinks it’ll be the worst summer ever.
What she doesn't realise is Bowen Hall is also home to a Triceratops, two Sabre-tooth tigers and the mythic hero, Will Scarlet.
'The Time Hunters' is a thrilling, fast-paced adventure that takes Becky, Joe, Uncle Percy and Will on a quest to find the legendary Golden Fleece.
Becky’s head spun like a top. She felt confused, bewildered. Not to see Uncle Percy up at this time of night - she half-expected it. No, looking at the sleeping animal, she knew it shouldn’t be alive at all. She’d seen one before at the Natural History Museum, but that was only a lifelike reconstruction, and not the genuine article.
A Sabre-tooth tiger lay sedated on the lawn of Bowen Hall - a very large, very real Sabre-tooth tiger.
Six other books in the Time Hunters saga are also available: 'The Time Hunters and the Box of Eternity', 'The Time Hunters and the Spear of Fate', 'The Time Hunters and the Sword of Ages', 'The Time Hunters and the Lost City', 'The Time Hunters and the Wraith's Revenge' and 'The Time Hunters and the Odin Horn.'
JOIN THE HUNT!
Becky Mellor is a typical thirteen-year-old girl. She likes social media, coffee shops, and plenty of sleep.
So when she and her brother, Joe, are invited to stay with their 'loony' Uncle Percy at his stately home, Bowen Hall, she thinks it’ll be the worst summer ever.
What she doesn't realise is Bowen Hall is also home to a Triceratops, two Sabre-tooth tigers and the mythic hero, Will Scarlet.
'The Time Hunters' is a thrilling, fast-paced adventure that takes Becky, Joe, Uncle Percy and Will on a quest to find the legendary Golden Fleece.
Becky’s head spun like a top. She felt confused, bewildered. Not to see Uncle Percy up at this time of night - she half-expected it. No, looking at the sleeping animal, she knew it shouldn’t be alive at all. She’d seen one before at the Natural History Museum, but that was only a lifelike reconstruction, and not the genuine article.
A Sabre-tooth tiger lay sedated on the lawn of Bowen Hall - a very large, very real Sabre-tooth tiger.
Six other books in the Time Hunters saga are also available: 'The Time Hunters and the Box of Eternity', 'The Time Hunters and the Spear of Fate', 'The Time Hunters and the Sword of Ages', 'The Time Hunters and the Lost City', 'The Time Hunters and the Wraith's Revenge' and 'The Time Hunters and the Odin Horn.'
JOIN THE HUNT!
240 pages, Paperback
First published October 2, 2010
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About the author
Carl Ashmore
15 books81 followersI'm a children's writer from Cheshire in England. 'The Time Hunters' is my first novel. The series continues with 'The Time Hunters and the Box of Eternity', 'The Time Hunters and the Spear of Fate', 'The Time Hunters and the Sword of Ages' and 'The Time Hunters and the Lost City'.
I have also completed two non-Time Hunters novels - 'The Night they Nicked Saint Nick' and 'Bernard and the Bibble.'
I am currently working on the first book in another series for children - 'Zak Fisher and the Angel Prophecy'.
I like alternative music, Marvel comics, Naan breads and coriander. I am rubbish at fixing stuff.
Please come and meet me at www.carlashmore.com
If you have any questions then contact me on carlashmore@mailcity.com. We could share a virtual cup of tea and discuss books :)
I have also completed two non-Time Hunters novels - 'The Night they Nicked Saint Nick' and 'Bernard and the Bibble.'
I am currently working on the first book in another series for children - 'Zak Fisher and the Angel Prophecy'.
I like alternative music, Marvel comics, Naan breads and coriander. I am rubbish at fixing stuff.
Please come and meet me at www.carlashmore.com
If you have any questions then contact me on carlashmore@mailcity.com. We could share a virtual cup of tea and discuss books :)
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January 16, 2012
Well, I did write it. :)
October 2, 2018
Book Reviewed by Pravnav on www.whisperingstories.com
‘Time Hunters’ is one of those books that takes up the exciting, yet not-so-used genre of time-travel and comes out triumphs.
I found the book to be very easy going and the storyline smooth. The presence of grey characters and shady plots is commendable and it’ll take you to put your Sherlock detective mode on to guess what will be happening next.
The story mainly revolves around Becky, her brother Joe and the adventures that follow them in the due course of time (pun intended). The novel is well-researched and the presence of known figures, creatures and artifacts throughout the book will make you connect easily.
Since this is a part of series, the climax ends well on cliffhanger and makes sure you want to grab on to the next part ASAP! Though it can be argued as a children’s book, I completely enjoyed reading it and strongly feel it’ll cater to all demographics.
‘Time Hunters’ is one of those books that takes up the exciting, yet not-so-used genre of time-travel and comes out triumphs.
I found the book to be very easy going and the storyline smooth. The presence of grey characters and shady plots is commendable and it’ll take you to put your Sherlock detective mode on to guess what will be happening next.
The story mainly revolves around Becky, her brother Joe and the adventures that follow them in the due course of time (pun intended). The novel is well-researched and the presence of known figures, creatures and artifacts throughout the book will make you connect easily.
Since this is a part of series, the climax ends well on cliffhanger and makes sure you want to grab on to the next part ASAP! Though it can be argued as a children’s book, I completely enjoyed reading it and strongly feel it’ll cater to all demographics.
January 23, 2013
I decided to read the revised edition of this book since my first reading was prior to the rewrite. And I can honestly say that I enjoyed this book just as much as I did the first time around (if not more). This book has the perfect mix of adventure, action and intrigue. The fact that it is a time travel story is just the icing on the cake. Can't wait for book three , which is due out in just a couple of months. Heck, I might even reread book two just to review our story thus far.
February 6, 2014
This is a kids book meant for 10-12 year olds! That being said this was a fun romp. Fast paced action. Likeable characters. Some good time travel elements. Uncle Percy seemed a bit too cool at times of extreme danger but, I think that is just a reflection of a man who knows the future. Mythical creatures such as harpies and pegasus play a big role in this story which is a big plus. This is book one of a series so it does wrap up a bit but it is not a stand alone book.
I read this as part of a group read in my time travel group and it was fun to talk about the wild technological elements time travel sure but also a universal translator device, a huge tranquilizer gun, bio-enginered drones. Also, being able to discuss the book with other readers and the author made for a very enjoyable read.
John...We will always miss you.
I read this as part of a group read in my time travel group and it was fun to talk about the wild technological elements time travel sure but also a universal translator device, a huge tranquilizer gun, bio-enginered drones. Also, being able to discuss the book with other readers and the author made for a very enjoyable read.
John...We will always miss you.
May 15, 2011
Having read several time travel stories, I'm always skeptical when I read one that attempts to rewrite history or show that the past is not quite what we imagined. However, I think Carl Ashmore does a fabulous job of creating an alternative history (myth?) that is not only believable but engaging. I'm definitely adding this book to my top ten list of favorite time travel books. "The Time Hunters" has some great characters (Edgar is my favorite) and plenty of action. I actually found this book to be a real page turner, which was a pleasant surprise considering it is young adult fiction. I can't wait for the next book in the series.
July 24, 2014
The first half of the book was slow-going and felt very much like a kid's book (kid main characters, a time machine van, and pet dinosaurs). However, in the second half, the story became quite enjoyable as the search for Jason and the Argonauts and the Golden Fleece got underway. I especially enjoyed the secret of the Minotaur. Great ending to lead into book #2. For the adventurous time-travel-loving myth-loving kid in us all.
April 2, 2014
Breathless!
This is exactly how I felt at the end of this wonderful, action-packed, time-traveling adventure.
It starts with Bernard Preston stealing an artifact, which is known to him and his vicious pursuers as the Theseus Disc, from a house in Victorian London. Although fatally wounded, he manages to escape in his Reliant Robin time machine to hand the disc to his friend and fellow traveler, Percy Halifax, owner of Bowen Hall, before expiring.
The next scene opens with Percy's niece and nephew being packed off by their widowed mother to spend their Summer with their eccentric uncle. Becky is extremely reluctant, but her brother, Joe, cannot wait. As they leave their home, Becky is attacked by a rogue budgerigar. The significance of this attack does not become apparent until much later in the book.
There are sabre-toothed tigers, dinosaurs, Will Scarlett (of Robin Hood fame), rescued refugees from Nazi Germany, Jason and his Argonauts, the Golden Fleece, mythical creatures, and even a visit to one of the Ice Ages. None of these revelations count as spoilers, as you can read most of it in the book description.
This is a lot of fun for all children aged between 7 and 123, but there also a few scary moments.
My favorite character in the whole book is Edgar. Now, it WOULD be a spoiler if I told you who Edgar was, so you'll just have to read the story to find out. I am sure that you'll enjoy the experience though.
Once you've read it, you can tell me if you agree with me in my love of Edgar.
This is exactly how I felt at the end of this wonderful, action-packed, time-traveling adventure.
It starts with Bernard Preston stealing an artifact, which is known to him and his vicious pursuers as the Theseus Disc, from a house in Victorian London. Although fatally wounded, he manages to escape in his Reliant Robin time machine to hand the disc to his friend and fellow traveler, Percy Halifax, owner of Bowen Hall, before expiring.
The next scene opens with Percy's niece and nephew being packed off by their widowed mother to spend their Summer with their eccentric uncle. Becky is extremely reluctant, but her brother, Joe, cannot wait. As they leave their home, Becky is attacked by a rogue budgerigar. The significance of this attack does not become apparent until much later in the book.
There are sabre-toothed tigers, dinosaurs, Will Scarlett (of Robin Hood fame), rescued refugees from Nazi Germany, Jason and his Argonauts, the Golden Fleece, mythical creatures, and even a visit to one of the Ice Ages. None of these revelations count as spoilers, as you can read most of it in the book description.
This is a lot of fun for all children aged between 7 and 123, but there also a few scary moments.
My favorite character in the whole book is Edgar. Now, it WOULD be a spoiler if I told you who Edgar was, so you'll just have to read the story to find out. I am sure that you'll enjoy the experience though.
Once you've read it, you can tell me if you agree with me in my love of Edgar.
February 27, 2023
My son (10) picked this for his book for us to read along together this month, I was a little apprehensive at first as the chapters were quite sure so I wasn't sure there was going to be much to it. However I was proved wrong - many nights I have caught my son up still reading as 'it just got to a good part and I can't put it down' and myself read it within two days as the story just keeps you gripped and you want no need to know what happens next. We look forward to the 2nd book for next month's read
November 3, 2013
This book was an absolute joy to read. It needs to be approached with the same frame of mind you would getting on an amusement park ride. Jump on Board and hang on! If you are interested in scientific explanations regarding the possibilities of time travel, this is not the book for you. It is an adventure/mystery with some really loveable characters.
March 21, 2014
I was expecting a fun YA romp, but this is really for even younger readers. I don't read a lot of children's' books so I could be off in my expectations, but this is a far cry from the standards of something such as Narnia. There were too many typos and errors, which indicates the book needs better editing, but really that is minor compared to the other problems with this book. It needs improvement in pacing, in dialogue, in character development, and in plotting in general. This book is just way too silly. History and legends are twisted in the silliest way imaginable all for no apparent reason than to be as different and silly as possible. We're expected to accept crazy things with no adequate explanation at all, and characters who invent magical technologies out if nowhere without even an attempt to make it believable. This book is just plain silly, silly and unbelievable, and poorly written. The combination of those elements is what will kill any story.
December 27, 2010
This book had me hooked from the first page and the only thing that stopped me from finishing it in one go was my battery on my kindle running out and me forgetting the charger! I honestly can't wait for the sequel.
May 2, 2020
I didn't know what to expect from The Time Hunters, the first book in a series of children's stories by self published British author Carl Ashmore. In short, this is a fantastic time travelling adventure story. The plot starts like so many children's stories: a brother and sister, named Becky and Joe, are sent to the home of a distant relative for a long summer holiday. It doesn't take long, however, for the children to discover that there is more to their uncles home than meets the eye, and in typical fashion, they become involved in a huge secret involving time travel, Indiana Jones style treasure hunting, and naturally, chases with bad guys. So far, so normal. On paper, this could easily be dismissed as simply one more Harry Potter/Percy Jackson style clone.
Yet, for all this, I feel The Time Hunters earned that five star rating.
Ashmore has a terrific imagination. Whilst much of this book felt familiar to me, for all its lack of originality, it made up for by having plenty of warmth, humour and action. One particular element I loved was that of a Greek mythological monster, which I shall not reveal for fear of spoilers. This usually bloodthirsty beast is portrayed as a vegetarian, and a bit of a pacifist. It could have been cringeworthy, but Asmhore handles such seemingly silly moments like this with a gleeful attention to detail, creating his own version of famous myths and legends in the process. Comparisons to the likes of Rick Riordan, Brandon Mull and J.K. Rowling are justified. Speaking of Rowling, I believe that like Harry Potter, The Time Hunters has the potential to do that rare thing: unashamedly appeal to a great number of adult readers who love to escape for a while in a good, adventurous read.
Another element that really impressed me was the presence of a darker than normal undertone. Bubbling beneath the surface (one that resembles a cutesy light-hearted tale of adventure) is a relatively sophisticated study of life and death, as seen through the eyes of children. Told in such a way that doesn't feel patronising for youngsters, themes such as death, pain of loss, fear for the future and regret over the past are handled expertly here. There are moments of potential bleakness that could very easily have been problematic, but are in actuality artfully handled in such a way that only a mature reader could fully appreciate. A prime example is that of two characters, an elderly couple named Maria and Jacob, who we learn have been rescued from Nazi Germany. We meet them in modern day Britain, grateful for their lives, loyal to their saviour. Under threat, they are put in a vulnerable, and unnerving situation when reminders of the past literally come crashing through their front door. We have a terrifying time travelling Nazi threat, and it's tastefully written, but also surprisingly sinister for a middle grade series. The layers of darkness are perfectly written for a child to handle, but heightened enough to encourage intelligent conversation. Once again, comparisons to Rowling are worth bearing in mind.
To conclude, The Time Hunters, the first in a five book series, was an absolutely enthralling read. I was entertained, moved and left wanting more.
Highly recommended, no matter your age.
Yet, for all this, I feel The Time Hunters earned that five star rating.
Ashmore has a terrific imagination. Whilst much of this book felt familiar to me, for all its lack of originality, it made up for by having plenty of warmth, humour and action. One particular element I loved was that of a Greek mythological monster, which I shall not reveal for fear of spoilers. This usually bloodthirsty beast is portrayed as a vegetarian, and a bit of a pacifist. It could have been cringeworthy, but Asmhore handles such seemingly silly moments like this with a gleeful attention to detail, creating his own version of famous myths and legends in the process. Comparisons to the likes of Rick Riordan, Brandon Mull and J.K. Rowling are justified. Speaking of Rowling, I believe that like Harry Potter, The Time Hunters has the potential to do that rare thing: unashamedly appeal to a great number of adult readers who love to escape for a while in a good, adventurous read.
Another element that really impressed me was the presence of a darker than normal undertone. Bubbling beneath the surface (one that resembles a cutesy light-hearted tale of adventure) is a relatively sophisticated study of life and death, as seen through the eyes of children. Told in such a way that doesn't feel patronising for youngsters, themes such as death, pain of loss, fear for the future and regret over the past are handled expertly here. There are moments of potential bleakness that could very easily have been problematic, but are in actuality artfully handled in such a way that only a mature reader could fully appreciate. A prime example is that of two characters, an elderly couple named Maria and Jacob, who we learn have been rescued from Nazi Germany. We meet them in modern day Britain, grateful for their lives, loyal to their saviour. Under threat, they are put in a vulnerable, and unnerving situation when reminders of the past literally come crashing through their front door. We have a terrifying time travelling Nazi threat, and it's tastefully written, but also surprisingly sinister for a middle grade series. The layers of darkness are perfectly written for a child to handle, but heightened enough to encourage intelligent conversation. Once again, comparisons to Rowling are worth bearing in mind.
To conclude, The Time Hunters, the first in a five book series, was an absolutely enthralling read. I was entertained, moved and left wanting more.
Highly recommended, no matter your age.
October 5, 2018
'The Time Hunters' is one of those books that takes up the exciting, yet not-so-used genre of time-travel and comes out triumphs.
I found the book to be very easy going and the story-line smooth. The presence of grey characters and shady plots is commendable and it’ll take you to put your "Sherlock" mode on to guess what will be happening next.
The story mainly revolves around Becky, her brother Joe, the 'mysterious' residents of Bowen Hall and the adventures that follow them in the due course of time (pun intended). The novel is well-researched and the presence of known figures, creatures and artifacts throughout the book will make you connect easily. In the midst of all this, there are human values, children's innocence and hidden secrets.
Since this is a part of series(there are total five parts in all!), the climax ends well on cliffhanger and makes sure you want to grab on to the next part ASAP! I am already on the quest to reading the next four parts and jumping on the next adventure through time! Though it can be argued as a children’s book, I completely enjoyed reading it and strongly feel it will cater to all demographics.
I found the book to be very easy going and the story-line smooth. The presence of grey characters and shady plots is commendable and it’ll take you to put your "Sherlock" mode on to guess what will be happening next.
The story mainly revolves around Becky, her brother Joe, the 'mysterious' residents of Bowen Hall and the adventures that follow them in the due course of time (pun intended). The novel is well-researched and the presence of known figures, creatures and artifacts throughout the book will make you connect easily. In the midst of all this, there are human values, children's innocence and hidden secrets.
Since this is a part of series(there are total five parts in all!), the climax ends well on cliffhanger and makes sure you want to grab on to the next part ASAP! I am already on the quest to reading the next four parts and jumping on the next adventure through time! Though it can be argued as a children’s book, I completely enjoyed reading it and strongly feel it will cater to all demographics.
February 9, 2022
I loved this book. I think boys and girls ages eleven and up would enjoy it immensely.
January 9, 2025
Very much recommend it was so good
June 29, 2012
Brief synopsis - Becky and Joe are the kids who lost their dad years ago. Their kindly, though rarely-seen, uncle offers them a holiday at his estate. There, they find their uncle to be one of a regulated fraternity of time travellers, and they set out on a venture through time to find the legendary Golden Fleece. Pursued, of course, by the obligatory bad guys.
I try, wherever possible, to deliver a balanced review. I make sure that if there is good, no matter how deeply it is buried, I bring it into the review. Likewise, if there is something which doesn’t sit right, I try to include it in a positive way so that you can be assured you are getting my genuine and honest review.
And so it is with this one. I’d like to kick off with the bad. There’s a line of dialogue I didn’t particularly like (it wasn’t offensive, I just didn’t like it). I found a ” where there should have been a ‘. And… that’s about it.
Well, there is maybe a glaring plot hole (which I won't mention to avoid spoilers), but that’s it.
Seriously.
This is an absolutely charming children’s book. The characters are delightful and believable. The dialogue rings true. There’s a sense of whimsy which carries through the whole piece, and things which shouldn’t work are carried off delightfully.
Even the cheeky playing with established mythology (Greek primarily, although there’s a fantastic play with the Robin Hood mythos) works. And I’ve long enjoyed the classics.
Hell, the time travel is done nicely, especially so with the introduction of the Omega Effect (which works largely like an enforced “set moments in time” from Doctor Who, but more strongly). And includes a (possibly accidental) tip of the hat to Bill and Ted. Or, at least, that’s how I read it!
The book is 240 pages, yet never once drags or outstays its welcome. For an old cynic like me, who enjoys horror, fantasy, and the occasional action-adventure, this hearkened back to the movies and books I enjoyed as a kid, without making me feel bored as an adult.
Bravo, Mr Ashmore. I look forward to reading this with my little ‘un in a couple of years.
I try, wherever possible, to deliver a balanced review. I make sure that if there is good, no matter how deeply it is buried, I bring it into the review. Likewise, if there is something which doesn’t sit right, I try to include it in a positive way so that you can be assured you are getting my genuine and honest review.
And so it is with this one. I’d like to kick off with the bad. There’s a line of dialogue I didn’t particularly like (it wasn’t offensive, I just didn’t like it). I found a ” where there should have been a ‘. And… that’s about it.
Well, there is maybe a glaring plot hole (which I won't mention to avoid spoilers), but that’s it.
Seriously.
This is an absolutely charming children’s book. The characters are delightful and believable. The dialogue rings true. There’s a sense of whimsy which carries through the whole piece, and things which shouldn’t work are carried off delightfully.
Even the cheeky playing with established mythology (Greek primarily, although there’s a fantastic play with the Robin Hood mythos) works. And I’ve long enjoyed the classics.
Hell, the time travel is done nicely, especially so with the introduction of the Omega Effect (which works largely like an enforced “set moments in time” from Doctor Who, but more strongly). And includes a (possibly accidental) tip of the hat to Bill and Ted. Or, at least, that’s how I read it!
The book is 240 pages, yet never once drags or outstays its welcome. For an old cynic like me, who enjoys horror, fantasy, and the occasional action-adventure, this hearkened back to the movies and books I enjoyed as a kid, without making me feel bored as an adult.
Bravo, Mr Ashmore. I look forward to reading this with my little ‘un in a couple of years.
May 15, 2019
Had seen it described as something for Harry Potter fans. To be honest, I couldn't see it. Interesting concept for the story, but the actual story is just too obvious and, to be honest, not that well written. Not one I'll be sharing with my children just because there are so many better books out there although I did persevere to the end.
June 25, 2011
The Time Hunters is excellent first novel written by author Carl Ashmore and is a wonderful mix of time travelling, ancient mythology with a bit of murder mystery thrown in. I had only recently finished reading the Percy Jackson series by Rick Riordan when I first encountered this book, and after reading the blurb, I thought, "Oh no, not another story about a Percy and the Golden Fleece". Despite this, I took it on and was pleasantly surprised by this gem.
The story begins with Becky and Joe being sent to spend the summer with their Uncle Percy. The children were never close with him and always thought he was some kind of eccentric loner living in his mansion. It wasn't long before the children unravel the secrets hidden within Bowen Hall and learn that their uncle is actually a member of a secretive group of time travellers. Soon afterwards they find themselves on an adventure across time to investigate the mysterious murder of their uncle's friend while being chased by a group of renegade time travellers.
I had a great time with this book even though its target are kids. I found it to be well written, fast paced and most importantly the story hooks you right from the beginning. I've always been a little wary of time travelling stories as they introduce all kinds of paradoxes and so far the story has handled them nicely. I especially enjoyed the re-imagination of classical characters. You think you know your Argonauts and Minotaur? Well think again.
This book has been called a natural successor to Harry Potter and indeed it has the same magical qualities that I found in those books. I look forward to reading the second book, The Time Hunters & the Box of Eternity which is due out Christmas 2011 and I wish Carl Ashmore the very best with his future books.
(Reposted from http://www.paperlessreading.com/2011/...)
The story begins with Becky and Joe being sent to spend the summer with their Uncle Percy. The children were never close with him and always thought he was some kind of eccentric loner living in his mansion. It wasn't long before the children unravel the secrets hidden within Bowen Hall and learn that their uncle is actually a member of a secretive group of time travellers. Soon afterwards they find themselves on an adventure across time to investigate the mysterious murder of their uncle's friend while being chased by a group of renegade time travellers.
I had a great time with this book even though its target are kids. I found it to be well written, fast paced and most importantly the story hooks you right from the beginning. I've always been a little wary of time travelling stories as they introduce all kinds of paradoxes and so far the story has handled them nicely. I especially enjoyed the re-imagination of classical characters. You think you know your Argonauts and Minotaur? Well think again.
This book has been called a natural successor to Harry Potter and indeed it has the same magical qualities that I found in those books. I look forward to reading the second book, The Time Hunters & the Box of Eternity which is due out Christmas 2011 and I wish Carl Ashmore the very best with his future books.
(Reposted from http://www.paperlessreading.com/2011/...)
December 17, 2016
It started off promising. Riveting catch to pull you into the book.
Characters were getting fleshed out; their identities were forming and consistent.
The beginning of the sixth chapter was picking up speed and the reader just knew it was about to get good.
It was still confusing WHY this uncle has been absent from the children's lives all these years. A fight with their father doesn't fly with me. I figured we'd know in time.
And although the mom had no contact with this estranged brother-in-law, she sends them away. One minute, they're old enough to go by themselves for "a couple weeks". The next, she tells them she'll run and get them if it's awful.
*But seriously, they go inside to talk about the bird? Couldn't that be a car ride tale?*
By the middle of the the sixth chapter, it plummeted.
And after everything they witnessed, How do you ask a 13 & 11 to start asking questions? Even in investigations with adults after they witness trauma, the lead detective starts somewhere to help people focus.
As Americans are oft chastised with our education... but 13 year olds in the UK have read MacBeth in school already?
I read the first six chapters in like no time flat, despite the holes.
Then I think the story got ahead of the storyteller and details, flow, and staying in character went to the wind.
This book should come with a "Reader Beware" warning. Disappointing.
Characters were getting fleshed out; their identities were forming and consistent.
The beginning of the sixth chapter was picking up speed and the reader just knew it was about to get good.
It was still confusing WHY this uncle has been absent from the children's lives all these years. A fight with their father doesn't fly with me. I figured we'd know in time.
And although the mom had no contact with this estranged brother-in-law, she sends them away. One minute, they're old enough to go by themselves for "a couple weeks". The next, she tells them she'll run and get them if it's awful.
*But seriously, they go inside to talk about the bird? Couldn't that be a car ride tale?*
By the middle of the the sixth chapter, it plummeted.
And after everything they witnessed, How do you ask a 13 & 11 to start asking questions? Even in investigations with adults after they witness trauma, the lead detective starts somewhere to help people focus.
As Americans are oft chastised with our education... but 13 year olds in the UK have read MacBeth in school already?
I read the first six chapters in like no time flat, despite the holes.
Then I think the story got ahead of the storyteller and details, flow, and staying in character went to the wind.
This book should come with a "Reader Beware" warning. Disappointing.
December 7, 2010
I got a copy of Carl Ashmore's Time Hunters for my Kindle for iphone app. I wound up enjoying it immensely!
Becky and Joe aren't orphans, sentenced to live with their crazy Uncle Percy, but they may as well be, for as little as we see their mother. While they initially resent being sent to Percy's for the summer, they learn to love it once they discover that Uncle Percy is actually an experienced time traveller, looking for the legendary Golden Fleece!
This was a highly imaginative story, intertwined with bits, places, and characters from several other famous stories. There's Will Scarlet (Will Shakelock to you), Jason the Argonaut (a sniveling coward?!), and The Minotaur of Greek mythology. Every one of these characters and settings is carefully placed and measured, and nothing feels shoehorned in for quantity's sake.
The science feels accurate, and the fiction is entertaining. A scene at the end -- Percy's "Missions of mercy" DID remind me a bit of Bill and Ted... "We'll go back later and leave the keys on the desk!" but other than that, it felt completely original.
Carl Ashmore says this is just the first in a series, and I for one am looking forward to the next one with anticipation!
Becky and Joe aren't orphans, sentenced to live with their crazy Uncle Percy, but they may as well be, for as little as we see their mother. While they initially resent being sent to Percy's for the summer, they learn to love it once they discover that Uncle Percy is actually an experienced time traveller, looking for the legendary Golden Fleece!
This was a highly imaginative story, intertwined with bits, places, and characters from several other famous stories. There's Will Scarlet (Will Shakelock to you), Jason the Argonaut (a sniveling coward?!), and The Minotaur of Greek mythology. Every one of these characters and settings is carefully placed and measured, and nothing feels shoehorned in for quantity's sake.
The science feels accurate, and the fiction is entertaining. A scene at the end -- Percy's "Missions of mercy" DID remind me a bit of Bill and Ted... "We'll go back later and leave the keys on the desk!" but other than that, it felt completely original.
Carl Ashmore says this is just the first in a series, and I for one am looking forward to the next one with anticipation!
July 7, 2025
What a fantastic book! So many people keep telling me that this is a fun, adventure filled rump geared towards a younger audience but suitable for all ages - and I can tell you that is completely true. There is a sabre-tooth tiger, a dinosaur (in fact, there is multiple), time travelling ice cream vans, campervans, limos, and a whole host of really great characters. At first Becky kind of annoyed me so much I wanted to slap her but her character really matured as the story went on. Joe was just a typical boy - the cricket scene made me laugh out loud! Uncle Percy and Will were fantastic and the lesser characters were lovely.
The plot was well paced and there was never a dull moment. I wouldn't say the twists were shocking or surprising for me but I really did enjoy how Ashmore wove his story.
The only thing that niggled at me was Ashmore's apparent love of the movie Schindlers List because there is no other reason he would of said Schindler was a good man. So if the only thing that bugged me was one single sentence, then you know you have a great book!!
The plot was well paced and there was never a dull moment. I wouldn't say the twists were shocking or surprising for me but I really did enjoy how Ashmore wove his story.
The only thing that niggled at me was Ashmore's apparent love of the movie Schindlers List because there is no other reason he would of said Schindler was a good man. So if the only thing that bugged me was one single sentence, then you know you have a great book!!
January 18, 2014
I took on reading this book to contribute to a discussion on the Time Travel Book Club discussion page for January of 2014. I read it with the understanding that it was a children's book but quickly warmed to the characters and the story. It is a quick read with lots of adventure and mystery. There are amusing scenes as well as a couple of scary moments that keep one engaged and wanting more. I am from the USA and I enjoyed the particularly English aspect of the language the characters speak. I also enjoyed the historical references. I have to say that the elements in this book are not only geared to small children but will appeal to anyone with a sense of adventure and fun. I look forward to reading the further adventures of Becky, Joe, and Uncle Percy as they travel through time. Highly recommended.
February 7, 2014
So, I will likely have to read the next one to see what happens!
Wish I was still a kid to gain a true appreciation for a novel like this. I do know that I liked the characters and found them very easy to learn and get to know.
The time travel element was not unique but it was a lot of fun. I liked the explanations of the "omega effect" and other common paradoxes.
Highly recommend for children of all ages.
Wish I was still a kid to gain a true appreciation for a novel like this. I do know that I liked the characters and found them very easy to learn and get to know.
The time travel element was not unique but it was a lot of fun. I liked the explanations of the "omega effect" and other common paradoxes.
Highly recommend for children of all ages.
May 7, 2011
"Harry Potter meets Doc from Back to The Future and together they go on adventures ala Carmen Sandiego". That's how I sum up the book. I love all three of them. That's why I am more than willing to overlook a-little-too-much shouting -- I distaste all caps in a book, several sharp mood swings of characters and a-little-too-easy conclusion. Please write the next adventure of Becky. Please, Carl.
November 5, 2018
The Amazon blurb stated if we liked Harry Potter we'd probably like this book. No probably there; I could not finish the book, written at way too low a grade level, choppy, way too much 'telling' not enough 'showing'. I don't usually have a problem with books written for the younger generation, but just could not get into, or finish this book.
April 6, 2014
I loved this book and would recommend it to anyone who wants a fun read and a book to disappear into for a few hours. Although aimed at a younger audience I thoroughly enjoyed it (and I am in my 30's!!) and was the perfect antidote after a very stressful day at work!!
March 28, 2012
The new version with the extra chapters and material help to make the book even better and earn that last star from me.
February 27, 2012
It caught my attention at first. I soon lost interest. I finished it just to see how it turned out.
February 17, 2014
Loved it! The, Time Travelers Group, for your ing me on to it!
April 14, 2018
Becky and Joe are sent off to spend the summer with their Uncle Percy, whom they've never met. Neither is very excited about it, but it turns out to be the most exciting thing that could have happened to them - and something that could change their lives forever.
This is actually a tricky book for me to review. It's not because I didn't enjoy it. I did. Rather, it's because I'm not the target audience. This is clearly written for younger readers. I wish I could have given it to a young teen and asked them what they thought. For me, I thought it was pretty over the top, a little too much going on in here and not enough character development. But it wasn't written for me.
The book has plenty that would have appealed to my kids when they were younger - the idea of time travel, the fun look at classic myths and the twists the writer includes, and hey, dinosaurs. What kids wouldn't enjoy that? I liked that the writer looked at time travel from a kid's eye. Most adult time travel books have them going back to see famous historical events like Washington crossing the Delaware or the Battle of Hastings. But kids would absolutely be more interested in dinosaurs, in events they have personal knowledge of, or things that affected their family. I felt that was very real.
That said, I hope that as the series progresses we see some character development. Becky and Joe are pretty typical siblings - they don't get along great most of the time. Joe is very much treated like he's too young to understand what's going on while Becky gets the full explanation. I'm not sure that's completely fair. There's only two years separating the kids. I'd like to see their relationship develop and the kids mature. With the big reveal near the end of the book, there's certainly room for some growth.
Overall, I enjoyed this book and I would recommend it for parents with kids about 9 - 13. As it is, I don't think I'll be reading more, but it was a fun read.
This is actually a tricky book for me to review. It's not because I didn't enjoy it. I did. Rather, it's because I'm not the target audience. This is clearly written for younger readers. I wish I could have given it to a young teen and asked them what they thought. For me, I thought it was pretty over the top, a little too much going on in here and not enough character development. But it wasn't written for me.
The book has plenty that would have appealed to my kids when they were younger - the idea of time travel, the fun look at classic myths and the twists the writer includes, and hey, dinosaurs. What kids wouldn't enjoy that? I liked that the writer looked at time travel from a kid's eye. Most adult time travel books have them going back to see famous historical events like Washington crossing the Delaware or the Battle of Hastings. But kids would absolutely be more interested in dinosaurs, in events they have personal knowledge of, or things that affected their family. I felt that was very real.
That said, I hope that as the series progresses we see some character development. Becky and Joe are pretty typical siblings - they don't get along great most of the time. Joe is very much treated like he's too young to understand what's going on while Becky gets the full explanation. I'm not sure that's completely fair. There's only two years separating the kids. I'd like to see their relationship develop and the kids mature. With the big reveal near the end of the book, there's certainly room for some growth.
Overall, I enjoyed this book and I would recommend it for parents with kids about 9 - 13. As it is, I don't think I'll be reading more, but it was a fun read.
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