Ever the Hunted
3.5/5
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Betrayal
Loyalty
Survival
Family
Friendship
Forbidden Love
Friends to Lovers
Secret Identity
Chosen One
Love Triangle
Quest
Loyal Friend
Reluctant Hero
Secret Royalty
Enemies to Lovers
Adventure
Revenge
Trust
Love
Magic
About this ebook
Seventeen year-old Britta Flannery is at ease only in the woods with her dagger and bow. She spends her days tracking criminals alongside her father, a legendary bounty hunter—that is, until her father is murdered. The alleged killer is none other than Cohen Mackay, her father's former apprentice. The only friend she's ever known. The boy she once loved who broke her heart.
She must go on a dangerous quest in a world of warring kingdoms, mad kings, and dark magic to find the real killer. But Britta wields more power than she knows. And soon she will learn what has always made her different will make her a force to be reckoned with.
"Britta's fierce tale of love lost and family found, combined with the lush setting and intriguing world-building, make for an unforgettable read."—Ally Condie, #1 New York Times–bestselling author of the Matched Trilogy
"With a resourceful and cunning heroine, a compelling and nuanced romance, and a truly fascinating system of magic, Ever the Hunted ensnared me from the very first pages. Absolutely marvelous."—Sarah J. Maas, New York Times bestselling author of the Throne of Glass books
"A solid choice for fantasy readers who prefer a large helping of adventure with their romance."—Kirkus Reviews
Erin Summerill
Erin Summerill was born in England. After spending years bouncing between Air Force bases in Hawaii, England, and California, her family finally settled down in Utah. When she doesn't have her nose in a book, she's busy chasing after her four kids, two dogs, one cat, and five chickens.
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85 ratings9 reviews
- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5
Jun 8, 2019
There's a plot here, but the real draw is the fascinating and complex relationship between Britta and Cohen. In so many romances, you have ice and fire pairings like this: people who are drawn to each other and who love each other, but who also just seem bad for each other. But in Erin's book, I feel like the book actually acknowledges some of the problematic elements here. The book is about Britta struggling to accept her love for this guy who on one level claims to respect and value her (as few others in her country do), but who on the other hand doesn't really seem to trust her. It's a tough one, and there are no easy answers here (though maybe there will be in the sequels).
(I received an advance copy of this book in exchange for an honest review) - Rating: 3 out of 5 stars3/5
Apr 25, 2019
This one was another meh fantasy book for me... Picture all of the YA cliche plots and mash them together and you’d have this book. While I loved many aspects of it, the pace and timeline killed the experience. It felt extremely drug out and a bit redundant. It was woods, woods, water, mixed emotions, woods, and then a jumble of crazy twists. The crazy was good, but the rest, not so much. I like slow burn romances, but this one was so hot and cold that it became annoying. Is it bad that I wanted something to happen with Leif? I needed excitement and lure, I needed that fantasy feel laced with magic.
While most of the book was pretty plain, there were some redeeming parts. I really loved the introduction of Grandma and I enjoyed that a fierce heroine was the glue to the story. The writing did get better as the book progressed so I think there is a strong potential for a good sequel. I’m just not sure I’ll be eager to read it. - Rating: 3 out of 5 stars3/5
Mar 6, 2018
This is a very solid book with above par writing, a decent plotline and characters you can get behind. My main gripe was the sloooow pacing at times (typical for a traveling yarn) and the confusing romance. "I love you but you don't love me but then you love me and now you don't again and in the end I'm not sure how I feel now GRRRRR!!!!! The few major plot twists were pretty easily sussed out and the ending was weird but still satisfying in its own way. I will most likely check out book #2 from the library but I'm not compelled to do so anytime soon. - Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5
Aug 20, 2017
Ever the Hunted
By Erin Summerill
Narrated By Helen Johns
Published 2016 by Dreamscape Media, LLC
11 hours and 27 minutes
I received a free audio copy of this book from the publisher in exchange for an honest review.
Britta is everything I could ask for in a strong female character. She is brave, capable, and independent but she is also vulnerable, fiercely loyal, and compassionate. Britta is both a survivor and a savior. Forced into poaching the king’s wildlife for food, she is offered clemency from the king’s advisor in exchange for a favor. Trained in the skill of bounty hunting, Britta is tasked with tracking down her father’s killer which is believed to be Cohen, her father’s former apprentice and her only friend. We learn early on that Britta has supernatural abilities, but on this journey Britta discovers that she is more powerful than she knew. It is through this new found ability that she is able to save the king and prevent a war.
This was a well-paced story that kept my attention the whole way through. I loved Britta and thought the author did a great job capturing the complexity of a teenage girl. As the first book in a series, this story ended with more questions than answers and I was disappointed it had to end. Needless to say, I’m looking forward to the release of the second book.
This book was narrated by Helen Johns. She was the perfect choice for Britta. Her voice is youthful and warm—exactly how I imagined Britta would sound. She also has a British accent which I’ve come to expect and anticipate when listening to certain types of fantasy. - Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5
Feb 16, 2017
"Ever the Hunted" is an incredible YA fantasy with a touch of romance. The story begins with Britta, starving and alone since her father was killed, hunting (poaching) for something to trade for lodging. As a person who is half Shaerdanian living in Malam, she is already ostracized by the locals who will not trade or help her and cannot inherit her father's land and/or home. Shaerdan and Malam are on the verge of war. Since she was a baby, Malam has closed its borders and made laws, for which the penalty is death, against the Channelers, women with powers to alter one aspect of nature. Britta's father, Saul, protected her to an extent as he taught her to do his job, tracking, and stealth as a bounty hunter. He also trained Cohen, who was to be an apprentice and Britta's only friend. Britta hasn't seen Cohen in a long time, as even though he said he would meet her the next day after she confessed her love for him, he never appeared or returned.
Britta is captured for poaching, for which the penalty is hanging, and is offered that she would be freed and her father's house and land given to her if she hunts down her father's killer, who is believed to be Cohen. Britta reluctantly agrees and sets out to find Cohen with guards breathing down her neck. However, things are not so simple or clear as they seem and who Britta, her father, and all the characters who seemed so black and white before are gets muddied. Britta must unravel the truth before it is too late for her kingdom and those she cares about.
I really loved this book. It was a bit slow moving at first as the scene is set and the characters developed, but once it really got going (about a quarter of the way through), I was completely hooked. I'm a sucker for medieval style adventures with an epic romance, and this was so well written that I was completely captured by Britta and Cohen and this whole other world. The fantasy elements felt just about perfect- they didn't overtake the book and mysteries of her father's death and kingdom's fate- but they certainly added a unique quality to the story. The romance between Britta and Cohen was incredible and I was cheering for them the whole way- there's a lot of unresolved sexual tension though (you have to withstand a lot of it, but then it makes the idea of their romance even sweeter). There are a few big twists that I didn't see coming, and I really loved following them all the way until the end.
As a note, the end does have a little bit of a cliffhanger, so be forewarned. I am so sad not to have the next book of this amazing series to keep reading right now. The author has built an incredible world, and I loved every step of this amazing journey. Britta really matures throughout the story, and she is the perfect character with which to explore this unique kingdom and fantasy adventure. This book is a wonderful twisty, mystery, fantasy, romance adventure, and I can't wait to read more.
Please note that I received an ARC from the publisher through netgalley. All opinions are entirely my own. - Rating: 2 out of 5 stars2/5
Feb 14, 2017
The theme of early 2017 seems to be reading books I’ve hyped myself up for only to be grossly disappointed once I read them. When I saw Ever the Hunted by Erin Summerill I instantly wanted it. The cover was absolutely gorgeous, it was a fantasy novel, and the main character was a girl with a bow. That was enough for me. I was so sold!
Then I read the book. And… Well, let’s just say I wasn’t impressed.
Britta Flannery is a hunter and tracker, trained by her father, the king’s best bounty hunter. When her father is murdered, her lands seized, and Britta caught poaching things look dire. But she’ll be given freedom and her father’s lands if she manages to catch her father’s killer. The only suspect is Cohen, her father’s former apprentice, Britta’s only friend, and the boy she loves.
The first thing that caught my attention with this book was the cover. This is probably one of the most beautiful book covers of 2016. It’s all silver, white and gold filigree that just oozes a beautiful fantasy setting. The book is also a quick read. I didn’t feel like I’d read nearly 400 pages, but I had. The prose itself flows fairly well as well.
The rest of the book? Well, it goes from trope-filled to downright problematic. Let me explain why.
First off, we have Britta, a very skilled hunter and tracker who was taught everything she knows by her father, the best bounty hunter in the kingdom. Learning this I expected a very strong, very competent woman who could really kick some ass. What I got was an angsty teenager who liked to whine a lot. At first, I was honestly unfazed about this. Her father was murdered and she nearly starved to death following the mourning protocols of the country. I fully expected this aspect of her to change as the story progressed. But the character development I was waiting for as she continued on her quest and healed from her father’s death never actually came.
To be honest, it wasn’t until I hit more than seventy five percent into the novel that I realized Britta was supposed to be two weeks away from her eighteenth birthday. Why? Because she acts very immature. Not only that, but it didn’t feel like she was probably nearing the end of her training with her father.
This is one of the things I found the most problematic early on. Britta is supposed to be one of the best trackers and hunters in the kingdom. Everyone respects her ability. She’s known as one of the best. Except more often than not she misses the tracks she’s looking for. This happens a lot in the book, from beginning to end. I’m not sure why Britta is touted as a great hunter and tracker. She very frequently misses the signs she’s looking for and she doesn’t actually use her bow that much. There was no real evidence she was actually very good at her job.
Beyond having no visible skill in hunting or tracking past what the author tells us, Britta is dumb as a rock. She can’t see the obvious, even when it’s right in front of her. Despite being nearly eighteen she’s incredibly naïve. She’s whiny. She faints and cries a decent amount. I must admit that one of the ‘villain’ characters was correct when he referred to Britta as a “weepy girl”. Nothing about Britta makes me want to root for her. The only thing she makes me feel is the uncontrollable urge to smack some sense into her.[/paragraph]
Speaking of hunting and tracking, this is where I first knew I was going to have some massive problems with the book. Within the opening chapters we have Britta escorted by several guards to find Cohen. How do they go about this? Sitting on horseback wandering outside the castle saying ‘Okay, track him.’ Tracking isn’t magic, and it certainly isn’t done from horseback along a major thoroughfare. It was completely unrealistic and immediately made me question how much background research was done prior to writing this novel.[/paragraph]
Every single time something happens the reader can guess it long before Britta ever does, even if the answer is quite literally staring her in the face. This is an issue that permeates the book. The plot and characters are all very, very predictable. If you’ve read a fantasy novel before, especially a young adult fantasy novel, you know what’s going to happen next. The plot and characters are filled with tropes of the genre. Now, this isn’t always a bad thing. A book can be formulaic and still very enjoyable. After all, there is a reason writer’s today still use themes and story structures that have been around for centuries. They work. Always have and always will. This novel is not one of those. There isn’t any feeling of ‘I know what’s going to happen but it’s damn fun getting there’. It’s just stale.
The world building was lacking here as well. In the novel we have two kingdoms on the brink of war. However, I struggled to find any real differences between them. One hates Channelers, the book’s version of magic users, while the other one does not. At one point it’s mentioned that one of the countries speaks in a brogue, inferring the other does not. And that’s it. I honestly cannot tell you any other cultural, artistic, or political differences between the two nations.
The world of Ever the Hunted doesn’t feel like a world. It feels more like a zone in a video game. The characters get from place to place too quickly to give any sense of grand scale. One town is pretty close to another, and most of them seem to be of the same size. Things like the architecture of the buildings or the layout of the streets isn’t included, small things that often go a long way in making a fantasy world feel real.
One thing I am very, very happy about is the lack of a love triangle. I’m not sure this is still going to be the case for the next book in the series with how this one ends. But this novel, at least, doesn’t have one. However, the romance included here is still awkward and unrealistic. Britta doesn’t just get angsty about Cohen. She downright agonizes over it. The majority of the time she’s more interested in either smelling Cohen or whining about him than finding her father’s killer.
The plot point I was most interested in was the one we spent the least time on. I was honestly interested in the King and the plot surrounding him. After all, I was promised mad kings and dark magic in the synopsis. However, I there was very little of both. I felt as if that plot line, which was supposed to be one of the main focuses of the book was poorly fleshed out and rushed. We really didn’t get to spend any time with the king at all. Moreover, Britta never experienced any of this danger herself, merely taking Cohen’s word that something was wrong with the king. This removed all sense of danger for me and made what would otherwise be a very interesting plot feel like less of an issue than it truly was.
Overall, I was massively disappointed in Ever the Hunted by Erin Summerill. What had the potential to be a very good young adult fantasy novel just fell completely short of the mark. If you can push past the tropes and a whiny protagonist, you may like this novel. If you’re looking for a strong protagonist and a fully fleshed out fantasy world, you will probably want to skip this one.
*I received this book from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.* - Rating: 3 out of 5 stars3/5
Feb 7, 2017
This book was provided to me as an uncorrected digital proof by the publisher, via Edelweiss, in exchange for an honest review.
Seventeen year-old Britta Flannery is at ease only in the woods with her dagger and bow. She spends her being trained to track criminals by her father, a legendary bounty hunter—that is, until her father is murdered. The alleged killer is none other than Cohen Mackay, her father’s former apprentice. The only friend she’s ever known. The boy she once loved who broke her heart. She must go on a dangerous quest in a world of warring kingdoms, mad kings, and dark magic to find the real killer. But Britta wields more power than she knows. And soon she will learn what has always made her different will make her a force to be reckoned with.
It took me a while to get through Ever the Hunted. It’s not a bad book; I just didn’t feel terribly invested in the story until more than half-way through. I can’t put my finger on it, but something about the relationship between Britta and Cohen left me cold. I don’t like Cohen, perhaps because of his domineering attitude. There was never a feeling of anticipation in regard to their relationship, just a bland inevitability. Like I said, it’s not a bad book; there were scenes that made me cheer and others that nearly made me cry. The world-building is adequate, and secondary characters, such as Enat and Tomas are well-written. The book ended on something of a cliffhanger, but not in such a way that I feel manipulated into reading the next book in the series. I may read the sequel, as the ending did intrigue me. If I do, I hope for more actual magic to occur, rather than just being talked about. I would recommend this book to teenagers who enjoy fantasy novels involving a quest. - Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5
Dec 16, 2016
There was a lot involved in EVER THE HUNTED, but Erin Summerill did a great job of setting up the world and pacing out the action.
Britta is only seventeen, but she appeared older to me. I found her to be strong, a little willful, and very determined. I won't go into explanations for fear of spoilers, but Britta experiences a lot of loss in EVER THE HUNTED. I'm not sure how she functioned for half of it, but she is a fighter and did a great job of keeping her head in the game that she was forced to play. Cohen was extremely easy to like after you got to know him and he added a lot to the storyline. Their relationship isn't easy and there is a lot of history, but they worked well together and you can't help but root for them.
I have a tiny complaint. There seem to be a love triangle coming and after everything Cohen and Britta went through, I'm not sure how much I will be able to connect to a new love interest if it is indeed going to happen.
The world building was great. Every scene and location was set up in a way that had me lost in every bit of it. I didn't want to stop reading for fear of losing the flow. The different kingdoms that makes up the world were both interesting and the conflicts that they were facing were easy to understand. EVER THE BRAVE is already on my wishlist and I look forward to seeing how the story ends.
I gave it 4/5 stars
* This book was provided free of charge from the publisher in exchange for an honest review. - Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5
May 29, 2016
Review courtesy of Dark Faerie Tales
Quick & Dirty: Enthralling fantasy that you won’t soon forget! This is quite possibly my favorite book this year and I would highly recommend it to everyone!!!
Opening Sentence: To survive these woods, a man has to be strong as the trees, Papa had said.
The Review:
Britta has spent her entire life tagging along with her father who was a talented bounty hunter for the King! He taught her how to hunt, track and fight. It was just the two of them so when her father was murdered she was left with nothing and no one to turn to. If she wants to avoid dying of starvation she will have to poach on the kings land, an offense punishable by death! When she is caught by the kings guards she fears her demise is inevitable, but she is offered a deal. If she will agree to hunt down her fathers killer she will be forgiven for all her crimes and given the ownership of her father’s property! The only problem is the alleged killer is her one and only friend.
Cohen was her father’ s apprentice and Britta fancied herself in love with him. But when she told him how she felt he left and never came back! How could he have killed her father? They were like a family to each other. As she journeys to find the real killer she learns much about herself, and about the special abilities she has locked inside of herself!
Britta was such a beautifully crafted character and I instantly connected with her. She is smart, resourceful, witty, sweet, and very stubborn! For her entire life she had been shunned because of her heritage and that has forced her to become a very untrusting person. Once her father died she had no one to turn to but she refused to give up even though her situation seemed impossible! She has so much determination and it was a very admirable trait. In so many aspects of her life she has felt unworthy, but I loved watching her slowly gain a sense of confidence! She was always strong but as the story progresses she really grows into her own. I loved her character and I am so excited to see where her story leads next!
Cohen is such a dreamy guy, just thinking about him puts a smile on my face (I am literally smiling right now)! He is sweet, charming, intelligent, and loyal! I love how dedicated he was to his family. He worked so hard to better his situation and I really admire that. He also has a very stubborn streak but I loved that he had flaws. It made him more realistic! His relationship with Britta is very hot and cold, which generally I’m not a fan of, but it worked for them. The tension between them is great and the way their relationship develops is perfection! I have always been a huge sucker for best friend romances and their relationship is an ideal example of it!! Cohen pretty much had me at hello and I just fell more and more in love with him as the story progresses!
Ever the Hunted is an epic high fantasy that immediately captured my heart. From the first page I was hooked and I literally didn’t want the story to end because I was enjoying it so much! The pacing was spot on and there was never a dull moment. The romance was adorable and written so well! The plot was intense and full of great twists. The characters were so well rounded and I loved all of them. The writing was gorgeous and the ending left me satisfied but still dying for more! If you can’t tell by all my flailing, I LOVED this book and would highly recommend it! If you are a high fantasy fan this is a must read!!!!
Notable Scene:
I hear him whisper my name once more for his mouth is on mine. Oh stars. My lips are frozen beneath his as shock and logic wage war–this is everything I shouldn’t want. Still, I don’t care. He kisses me gently at first, and then not so much when my lips respond. His hands clutch me to him, the firm spread of his body presses against mine. I can taste the mint leaf on his lips. His tongue. Flames shoot through my limbs and bring my heart, erasing everything of thought in my head except for the sweet awareness of Cohen. Of her needy kiss.
My fingers are process, tracing up his neck to twist in his hair. I’m on escapes his throat. Oh my. It’s the most alert and sound I’ve ever heard.
FTC Advisory: HMH Books for Young Readers provided me with a copy of Ever the Hunted. No goody bags, sponsorships, “material connections,” or bribes were exchanged for my review.
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Ever the Hunted - Erin Summerill
Copyright © 2016 by Erin Summerill
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Map illustration © 2016 by Jennifer Thermes
Cover illustration © 2016 by Martin Schmetzer
Cover design by Lisa Vega
The Library of Congress has cataloged the hardcover edition as follows:
Names: Summerill, Erin, 1978– author.
Title: Ever the hunted : a clash of kingdoms novel / Erin Summerill.
Description: Boston : Houghton Mifflin Harcourt, [2016] | Summary: Seventeen-year-old Britta Flannery is the outcast daughter of a bounty hunter who must use her powers to track her father’s killer in a world of warring kingdoms and dangerous magic.
Identifiers: LCCN 2015039038
Subjects: | CYAC: Fantasy. | Magic—Fiction. | Revenge—Fiction. | BISAC: JUVENILE FICTION / Love & Romance. | JUVENILE FICTION / Fantasy & Magic. | JUVENILE FICTION / Action & Adventure / General. | JUVENILE FICTION / Mysteries & Detective Stories.
Classification: LCC PZ7.1.S853 Ev 2016 | DDC [Fic]—dc23
LC record available at https://lccn.loc.gov/2015039038
ISBN 978-0-544-66445-6 hardcover
ISBN 978-1-328-76700-4 paperback
eISBN 978-0-544-86812-0
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To my dad, who accepted my kidney and, in return, taught me about sacrifice and love and healing
Chapter
1
TO SURVIVE THESE WOODS, A MAN HAS TO BE strong as the trees, Papa had said. The memory is a whisper compared to the attention my cramping stomach demands.
I try not to think of him or my trembling legs as I dust my boot prints from the path with a broken branch. Every starved scrap of me begs to stop and hunt here on the foot trail in the Ever Woods. Only the danger of getting caught propels me onward, boots stumbling over rocks and dirt.
Weak as I am, I won’t make it through the craggy Malam Mountains to where King Aodren’s land edges the lowlands. It’s a two-day walk. Two long, grueling days. Spots dance in my vision. Seeds, I need food. Papa’s old training spot will have to do. The king’s guard, the eyes over the royal city of Brentyn, aren’t likely to catch me there. Through a pinched, rocky canyon, the remote site has only been used by Cohen, Papa’s former apprentice, and me. A spasm racks my insides, and the decision is made. To the practice clearing.
The sun’s halfway to its peak when I stumble into the glade. Heady, sweet pine scents the brisk air. The leaves on the white-barked quaky trees around the nearby lake glow like embers, fiery gold and auburn against the evergreens. The sight is a warm welcome home.
Though starved and here to hunt, I cannot stop myself from finding our tree and tracing the carved names: Britta & Cohen.
Nor can I swallow the emotions that lump in my throat.
Since Cohen left last year to work for the king and Papa was killed two months ago, I’ve kept the pressing loneliness mostly at bay, managing it in little pieces. But this morning, it’s like isolation up and walloped me in the face.
I swipe a sneaky tear away and ready an arrow to my bow.
My body resembles a freckled skeleton for how thin I’ve become. Not much will change my paleness, but catching a squirrel or grouse will satisfy my hunger. Something to strengthen me. Later, I’ll bag a larger beast. Winter’s not far off, and I desperately need a decent kill to trade for lodging. The king’s guard will soon seize my land—no, Papa’s land—now that my mourning is over.
Bludgers will be pounding on my door in a couple days, foaming at the mouth over my cozy, one-room cottage. I pull back on my bowstring, testing the pressure, needing to shoot something. Anything. To keep a Malam tradition—home isolation for two months of mourning—I nearly starved, and now must break the law, since no one brought food after Papa died. Never a kindness for me—Britta Flannery—daughter of a Shaerdanian and, therefore, an outcast.
A year before my birth, the king regent closed the border between Malam and Shaerdan. Since then it seems all of Malam contracted amnesia; nobody remembers the good that came from the neighboring country. Once, we prospered from Shaerdan’s trade and relied on Channelers’ healing salves. Now we shun them for their strange Channeler magic. We fear what they can do.
With a huff, I push down the anger and focus on the hunt.
That’s when I discover the print of an elk hoof, two half circles with pointed ends. The moisture puddling inside the tracks reveals that the elk was here recently. My pulse quickens at the promise of a good catch as I stand stiller than a tree to listen for the elk’s movement. Birds whistle; leaves swish. All normal sounds of the Ever Woods, but something is off. That something abruptly tugs inside me, and an invisible finger skitters unease up the back of my neck.
I’m not alone.
My eyes ricochet from the branches to the shrubs to the sky, seeing everything and nothing. I spin around, expecting to meet the red coats of the king’s guard, and only find pine trees. I bite my lip. Swipe ghostly blond strands of hair out of my face.
Who else could be here?
No one dares hazard a hunt in the king’s Ever Woods. Hunting is only permitted where royal land ends near Lord Devlin’s fiefdom. That’s two days west in the Bloodwood firs or three and a half days south. On a rare day, poaching will get a man whipped or tortured. Most days, death.
I clench my bow and push myself to search for signs of an intruder: broken tree limbs, prints in the soil. It’s frustrating to abandon the elk hunt, but safety ensures survival—Papa’s first lesson.
An hour of combing the underbrush passes before the strange sensation disappears. Which in a way is more unsettling, since my instincts have never led me astray. Perhaps hunting without Papa has me on edge. Perhaps being alone—
A shadow shifts a few lengths ahead.
I dash behind a rotted trunk. My fingers contract and relax around the bow’s well-worn grip. Flex. Release. Papa would clap my ear for acting like a skittish girl. Stay in control, he’d say. Focus is a weapon as much as your bow.
I draw a breath, slow and calm, and force myself to lean away from the decaying wood to get a look.
Whatever I was expecting to see, it wasn’t a six-point bull elk. A king of the forest, he struts into the glade. Proud shoulders, sturdy haunches. It takes a beat to remember this elk means my survival. From where I’m crouched, the angle makes for a tricky shot. One knuckle-width too high or low will hit bone or cartilage, seriously wounding but not killing. Torturing, if my aim is off.
I shoot. The arrow thunks deep into the bull’s chest, impaling the vitals in a killing blow. The elk starts, jerks to a run, staggering a few steps before his eyes roll white. He thuds to the needle-covered ground.
I stare blindly at the beast, my bow arm falling to my side. A touch of sadness, a trickle of unworthiness beats through me as blackbirds flap out of the branches. An absurd reaction for a hunter, I know. His husky, labored breaths echo around us, to which I whisper shapeless, calming words as the beast accepts death. The life left in the animal struggles, a ravaged soldier fighting his way off the battlefield, having no hope of survival.
My hunter’s instinct always recognizes the cusp of passing. The awareness you possess is a talent only the best hunters develop, Papa said. Except, how can it be a talent when it’s only ever felt like a curse? I give the elk a quick end, slitting his throat.
My grip tenses over the intricate etchings on Papa’s dagger, my knuckles a match to the ivory handle. I force the blade to the animal’s belly to begin gutting and quartering. Stick to the task. Cut through the fur. Slice the skin. Roll out the innards. I’m good at pressing forward, always moving onward.
While some elk is curing and drying, other pieces roast over a small fire. It’s the same way Papa prepared the meat from my first kill ten years ago. He laughed when I took a bite and grimaced from the gamy taste. Nothing better than this dinner right here, he’d said. Because you caught it. Now I know you can do it again. His praise didn’t come as often as his lessons. When it did, I treasured every word.
I chew the last sinewy bite and pull my threadbare blanket from my satchel. The cloak of night cinches around the forest. Chilly air sneaks through the blanket’s weave and nips at my arms. And still, the evening is better than any I’ve had since Papa passed. Stomach sated, I settle onto a bed of needles. If only he could see me now, surviving on my own.
Sleep steals me away in seconds.
I’m standing outside. Behind me, the coarse stones and thatched roof of my cottage are stained bluish black from the night.
Stars sprinkle the sky like salt spilled across a well-oiled table. My hair, which is usually bound in a braid, falls past my shoulders, a veil of pale blond that shines silver in the moonlight.
Where our pasture meets the Evers, something moves. It’s the shape of a young man.
My eyes narrow, and then I smile. Since the incident, he’s only come once—earlier that day he traveled the half league from Brentyn to visit our cottage. My heart gallops as I force myself to walk to where he stands in the shadows until the darkness swallows me whole. There, his whispery breath breaks the stillness.
Hair the rich color of soil after a rainstorm. Sharp hazel eyes. A face too handsome for the angry scar that mars his cheek. The guilt is overwhelming as my fingers itch to trace the shiny red mark. I want to touch him and tell him how I feel about him. How he owns my heart.
All that comes out is Cohen, I’m sorry.
The howling wind wakes me. Cohen vanishes, replaced by the gray shaded trunks and the pine limbs stretching above like specters. I curl my legs in tight and cinch the shoddy woolen blanket snug around my shoulders. The dreamt memory has left me disoriented, and it takes two inhales and two exhales to ground myself. To calm my pulse.
When I was twelve, Papa no longer took me on regular bounty hunts for King Aodren. Alone in the cottage, I felt the quietness eat at me. I pretended the creaking woods or my own breaths were other voices. Company to pass the night. Ridiculous, but it helped me fall asleep.
Those old tricks won’t work tonight. Not when Cohen’s face lingers in the darkness. Always, I see his scar first—an injury suffered weeks before he left. Starting just under his eye, it leads to the strong line of his jaw that’s covered in sparse sable scruff, because at eighteen, when we were last together, he was too boyish to grow a full beard. Perhaps that’s changed now that he’s twenty, two years and a pinch older than me.
I like the idea of an older, rugged Cohen. More than I should admit.
A year and three months have passed since Cohen completed his apprenticeship and became one of the king’s court, taking up the title only my father, my grandfather, and all Flannery men before them held. As one of the king’s two bounty hunters, Cohen is allowed to travel through Malam’s fiefdoms and cross the borders. It’s unimaginable to me. I’ll never have the chance to leave Malam.
When Cohen left without a goodbye, I hoped he would visit. Except he didn’t return; not even for Papa’s wake.
Using the heels of my hands, I try to rub him out of my mind. A useless endeavor. Cohen has taken up too much space in my heart and head for the last five years to dismiss so easily. As always, my thoughts turn to his long absence. And I wonder if he never returned because he realized there’s no future for us.
As the king’s bounty hunter, Cohen is in a league above commoners. Ten leagues above me. Like Papa, he’ll be revered for his position in the king’s court. He’ll be considered nobility and be given lands. And if he chooses, he’ll marry the daughter of a lord.
A noble marriage, let alone any union for that matter, is about as likely for me as the king himself proposing. I snort at the idea.
All that came with Papa’s honored title, home, and land returns to the king, since Papa has no living relations except me. And I’m ineligible to inherit. Though my parents married in Shaerdan, the law only recognizes unions made before a priest of Malam. Before they could do so, my mother was accused of selling secrets to Shaerdan and killed.
In the law’s eyes, I’m illegitimate. To most of Malam, I’m Shaerdanian. But to some, the gossipmongers in Brentyn, I’m a traitor’s daughter.
None of that matters to me, though, because like my father, I’ll always be a Flannery, and I can take care of myself.
At sunrise, I walk to the crystal-clear lake and splash water on my face. Brisk morning air fills my lungs and prickles my skin. It isn’t until I’ve patted dry with my tunic that a disturbance along the muddy shore seizes my attention. Fresh boot prints. A man’s—by the size of them.
I leap to my feet, spinning wildly to search the clearing. Like yesterday, nothing stands out. Nothing more than evergreens and the glassy blue water spread beneath the cloudless sky. Even so, there’s no question now.
I’m not alone.
Chapter
2
IT ONLY TAKES A FEW MOMENTS TO THROW together my pack and to shove strips of cloth-wrapped elk around my bow and blade. A pile of elk cuts remains on the edge of my camp, but there’s no room left in my bag. I groan and curse the leftovers. But I cannot carry it all. Nor can I risk returning.
I glance at the lake. At the boot prints.
An arrow of fear zips through me.
The lucky forest animals will get to devour the remainder. I quickly fasten a gray woolen skirt over my trousers and adjust my tunic, belting it at the waist like the style worn by most townswomen. Balancing the heavy bag on my shoulder, I dart out of the clearing, eyes peeled for any signs of movement in the trees and undergrowth.
Autumn bites the air as I hurry down the mountain.
Brentyn’s royal cathedral sits like a stone watchman, its spires snaked in green ivy and piercing the sky. A sullen viol harmony drifts through the stained glass. It clashes with the market sounds: commoner chatter, shouts from traders, creaking carts, cooing church birds. I hide in the cathedral’s shadow and smooth down my braid. I’m restless and anxious, as always when coming to town. Today, though, with boot prints on my mind and poached meat burdening my bag, the usual nerves feel more like a bout of winter ague.
Something at the far end of the square has drawn the crowd’s attention. People shuffle closer, filling in the square like pigs in a pen when the slop is served. On my tiptoes, I stretch to see what has everyone’s interest. My insides twist harder.
A woman is in the pillory, wrists and neck captured in the wood planks. Dried blood clings to her broken lip. Agony is written on her tear-stained and dust-caked face as she shifts her weight from one filthy, swollen foot to the other. A ring of dirt surrounds her—a ritual believed to draw out a Channeler’s power.
A farce is what it is. If a woman draws water from a well thought to be dry, she’s a Channeler. If she walks through a storm and doesn’t catch a sniffle, it’s black magic. All the real Channelers fled to Shaerdan, where their magic originated, twenty years ago during the Purge.
Channeler magic is devilry in its darkest form, a scourge sent from Shaerdan . . . Those inflicted must be cut down and their powers eradicated. I read the Purge Proclamation once, found it in Papa’s books. The Proclamation didn’t start the mutual hatred between Malam and Shaerdan, but it certainly sealed it. In Shaerdan, Channelers are revered.
There’s nothing to be done for the woman. The guards will decide her fate. Still, it’s challenging to pull my eyes away and to not selfishly worry that an accusation will be made against me now that Papa’s gone.
I clutch the satchel’s straps, fingernails biting my palms, and search the crowd three times over. Leather coats, earth-colored tunics, blackened trouser cuffs, sweeping skirts. None wear the royal red. The king’s watchdogs aren’t near the pillory or in the market. For the time being, they’re letting the townspeople torment and shame the woman into submission.
While skirting the market, my bag hangs from one shoulder, as if full of feathers and not elk. The last thing I need is questions. I’ve every right to shop at the market, but no one likes to be seen consorting with the Shaerdanian girl. My trade opportunity is limited to Mr. Tulach, the only merchant who willingly did business with me when Papa wasn’t at my side.
A gaggle of children winds around a log, laughing uproariously and singing a tune of Midsummer’s Tide as they imitate the maypole dance. I sidestep their play, wondering how it would’ve been to have so many friends. You won’t trade with Britta? Then I’ll take business elsewhere, Cohen once told a merchant, and never bartered with the man again. Cohen was the only friend I needed.
Mr. Tulach’s tent is busy with patrons who are admiring winter blankets and woolens.
Filth.
It’s spoken softly, but the venom in the word snags my attention. I glance up to find two townswomen, woolen brown dresses, full skirts dusting the cobblestones, and arms holding baskets of tubers and carrots. One woman is old, her skin like crumpled parchment, and the other is young and well fed, if not overfed. The two months of isolated mourning come to mind, and my abdomen grumbles in remembrance. Under the women’s gaze, I self-consciously smooth a free hand over my ratty skirt.
The older one turns her nose up. Dirt. Like her mother.
I stiffen. Papa said not to let their words affect me. Words cannot hurt.
Besides, the same could be said of her, considering the mop of hair on her head looks like an entire flock of birds has used it for nesting. I cannot react. Ignore them. Biting the inside of my cheek, I force my feet to the side of Mr. Tulach’s tent where the leather flaps hide me from the market and those awful crows. It doesn’t block the sound, though.
Their kind shouldn’t be allowed here.
Gods bless the border.
A murmur of agreement then: Did you know her mother tried to follow the Archtraitor?
I roll my eyes at the outrageous rumor and the ones that follow about the Archtraitor’s blood thirst, the savages he’s gathering, his plan to take over Malam. The gossip never changes.
Malam’s built on gossip; its towns are pens of sheep. Papa’s silly saying makes me want to bleat at the ladies, since nobody really knows where Millner Barrett, the Archtraitor, is or what he’s doing now. Once he was captain of the king’s guard. Then he opposed the Purge and the border closure before he cut down his own men and fled. His disgrace will never be forgotten. At least, not till he’s caught.
Once they leave, I release my grip on the table and quickly straighten the leathers and wools as Mr. Tulach steps to my side of the tent. His attention remains on the passing patrons. He doesn’t like for others to see us trading.
You haven’t been here in a while.
Mr. Tulach’s chin dips in a subtle nod.
He knows I’ve been in mourning, so I forgo this detail. I need to trade. I have bull elk for you. A six-point catch. It’s fresh—
Where’d you hunt it?
He whips around to me, raven braids slicing around his broad back. Never mind. I don’t want to know.
His eyes volley to the crowd. What are you asking?
The profile of his hawkish nose doesn’t alter direction as he waits for my answer.
You have a connection to a place of lodging in Fennit,
I say, fighting to keep my voice from cracking with desperation. I need a place for winter.
Mr. Tulach shoots me a questioning look.
Surely he knows about the king’s inheritance law. I meet his stare, but when he doesn’t yield, I rush to explain, The king will soon be seizing my cottage.
Mr. Tulach turns away, crossing umber-brown arms. I cannot take the risk. Not when we’re on the brink of war. The guards overlook nothing these days. A bunch of bloodthirsty wolves, they are.
His voice drops. You’ve known the law your whole life. You must have other options.
Panic presses on my chest, making it difficult to breathe.
Papa said I had a talent for knowing the honesty of a man’s word. A sort of heightened gut instinct. When someone speaks the truth, a warm sensation starts in my belly and spreads beneath my ribs. A handy trick, considering it works for lies too, except dishonesty feels like ice on my insides, chilling me top to bottom. I can feel the warmth of his words, the truth of his rejection.
The table’s edge digs into my hip as I lean closer. Please,
I say, swallowing my pride. The other merchants won’t trade with me. And I didn’t plan on my father getting murdered.
The words taste like ash.
He balks. If I’m caught with your poached meat, I’ll be thrown in the dungeon. Or worse. Boys as young as fourteen are being made to fight against Shaerdan. I cannot risk my family. Take your trade and go.
The closed look in Mr. Tulach’s eyes, coupled with the warm truthful sensation spreading through my core, crushes my hope. I grit my teeth, sling the bag over my shoulder, and dash from the tent. How will I get lodging now?
The other merchants will have nothing to do with me. Eyes shift away when I approach. Backs turn. It’s no different from the first time I went to market without Papa by my side. Can you not see we’re here to do business with you, sir? Cohen’s words were steely.
I’ve got no business with Shaerdanians, the vendor sneered.
Cohen stepped in front of me. If she’s a Shaerdanian, then you’re a jackass.
It took a beat for the insult to settle on the merchant. By then we were running away. The man’s rejection stung, but Cohen’s defense soothed the hurt.
If only he were here now.
I’m nearly out of the market when Old Lyman, in soiled rags huddled on the church’s steps, whispers a plea from his cracked lips. He lifts his beggar’s cup. I don’t know why I pause.
When Cohen accompanied me to town, he always stopped to give coins to the poor. If I were ever in this situation, I’d like someone to extend the same kindness, Cohen said with conviction, even though a man like him—the chosen apprentice to the king’s bounty hunter—would never fall to such misfortune. But that was Cohen, always charitable. Even to those deemed worthless.
I’ve nothing to give Old Lyman, and so I feel foolish for having stopped. I shake my head, a touch flustered for having dallied at all.
Kind of ya, anyway, to share yer smile.
His words are garbled by the loss of teeth.
Before I can talk myself out of it, I swing my satchel to the side, and, after checking every face in the square, pull out some elk. The portion is small. All I can spare. I press the meat into his dirty palm while muttering an apology for not giving more.
His other hand lands atop mine, trapping me softly between trembling, mud-crusted fingers. They’re lookin’ for ya, lass. Guards are comin’. Best go quick.
It takes a beat for his warning to hit me. I jerk out of his grip, mumble thanks, and race toward home.
I’m nearly to my cottage on the outskirts of Brentyn when a whinny and nicker echo behind me. In the distance, the pebbled dirt road hums with the pounding of hooves.
Quickly, I scan for a place to toss the bag. The piles of leaves beside the road aren’t ideal, but they’re the only hiding spot. Distress snakes through me as I bury my sack, making frantic work to memorize the area before darting back to the path.
Where will I live when they seize my home? Who will take me in?
Dust dirties the air as the riders draw closer. Only then do I remember Papa’s dagger in the bundled meat. I glance at the lump of leaves, hedging on making a desperate grasp for the blade, but time is gone. Six royal guards wearing red coats with gray stripes and the king’s emblem—a circular badge with the head of a stag in the center—emerge around the bend.
I tug my skirt lower and run my fingers over my braid, drawing out twigs. When the group trots closer and divides, three riders moving to my left and three to the right, I drop into a small curtsy, as is customary around nobility and the king’s men.
A man with a staunch scowl set against weathered skin brings his mare to a stop so that the animal’s breath of heat and hay puffs across my face. I stifle a cough and keep my spine tree-trunk straight. The man must be the leader since he has the most stripes on his shoulder. Five in total.
Britta Flannery.
Not a question. Where have you been?
On a walk.
My eyes remain forward despite how badly I wish to check the leaves beside the road.
Is that so?
His doubt makes me ill. I never know what to say. My usual awkwardness feels like a death sentence as I fumble for a believable answer.
Perhaps you could explain what that is.
His chin jerks to the side where a guard pulls my bag from hiding. No! Fear jolts through me.
I stamp the urge to grab the pack and run, and feign indifference. I—I don’t know.
The bag’s marked with your father’s emblem.
The leader’s mouth purses behind a tidy graying beard.
If they see the meat, they’ll have evidence I was poaching. Are you here for my land?
I ask in diversion. Better to give up my home than my life.
Watch it, scrant,
a guard sneers, that’s the captain yer talking to.
Captain of the guard? The condescending tone and crusty expression make sense now. He reports directly to the king. Why didn’t they send the lower guards?
On the captain’s command, a guard dumps the bag’s contents on the road, and strips of meat tumble out with my bow and dagger. I blanch, staring in horror at the elk pieces.
We came for your father’s property. But it appears you’ve been poaching on the king’s land.
The captain’s voice is cool and eerily calm. His fingers drum against the hilt of his sword for a prolonged moment before his lip curls. Seize her.
Boorish hands come at me, grasping my shirt and ripping the sleeve as I jerk away. The dagger is all I can think about through a frenzy of elbows and fists. Mine, his, all so I can get Papa’s blade. Somehow I free myself of the guards. Maneuver to the pile of meat and weapons on the ground. Push aside the wrapped strips of elk. My fingers find the familiar curve of ivory and—
I’m slammed to the ground. Dirt and rock mash against my mouth.
My arms are wrenched behind me, followed by a kick that knocks the wind from my lungs. I cough and wheeze, spitting blood and saliva and dust, until the air comes back. The captain plucks my dagger off the ground.
No!
The captain grabs
