This is the peer reviewed version of the following article: Vladimir Brljak, “Early
Comments on Milton’s Anti-Trinitarianism,” Milton Quarterly 49 (2015):44-50, which
has been published in final form at https://doi.org/10.1111/milt.12117. This article may
be used for non-commercial purposes in accordance with Wiley Terms and Conditions
for Use of Self-Archived Versions.
EARLY COMMENTS ON MILTON’S ANTI-TRINITARIANISM
Vladimir Brljak
Comments on Milton’s anti‐Trinitarianism predating the discovery of The Christian Doctrine
were an important factor in dismantling once influential claims about the supposedly
orthodox representation of the deity in Paradise Lost. Although Milton’s views no longer
need defending, when exactly his anti‐Trinitarianism first came to be recognized, and what
reactions it occasioned, remain important questions in the reception history of his work. For a
long time, the earliest known comment on the subject was that in Charles Leslie’s History of
Sin and Heresie Attempted (1698), followed by remarks by Dennis, Defoe, the Richardsons,
and others. More recently, however, two manuscript comments have surfaced that have not
yet been adequately dated and examined.
William Poole made a valuable addition to the store of early commentary on Milton's
work by bringing to light a number of references to Milton in the commonplace books
of Abraham Hill, including the following entry on Paradise Lost and The Art of Logic:
Milton makes the cause of the Angels revolt to be when God declar Christ to be his
son but it would have bin more poetical & more true that there revolt was upon the
incarnation of Christ declared to them & so the humane nature preferd before the
angelica[l] to their great discontent, Discours Pride the cause of heresy Milton a
Socinian Logic. 132 Iohn 17. 3[.] (Sloane MS 2894 fol. 70v)1
Hill’s entry is of interest for several reasons, and his implied comparison between Paradise
Lost and The Art of Logic is rightly described by Poole as “a rather remarkable example … of
an early‐modern author reacting not just to one text, but to the intellectual coherency of an
author’s larger project, even across major generic division within an oeuvre” (“Two Early
Readers” 90). However, Poole’s tentative dating of the entry must be discarded, as must his
explication of its condensed ending. 2
The lower limit for the dating of this entry can be firmly fixed to 1698, as the bulk of
it is demonstrably derived from Leslie’s History. I quote the relevant passage at length,
underlining specific verbal parallels with Hill’s entry:
[Milton] makes the Cause of the Revolt of Lucifer and his Angels to have been, that
God, upon a certain Day in Heaven, before the Creation of this Lower World, did
Summon All the Angels to Attend, and then Declar’d His Son to be their Lord and
King; and Applies to that Day the 7th. verse of the Second Psalm, Thou art my Son,
this Day have I Begotten Thee. The Folly of this Contrivance appears many ways. To
make the Angels Ignorant of the B. Trinity; And to take it ill to Acknowledge Him for
their King, whom they had always Ador’d as their God; or as if the Son had not been
their King, or had not been Begotten till that Day. This Scheme of the Angels Revolt
cannot Answer either to the Eternal Generation of the Son, which was before the
Angels had a Being, or to His Temporal Generation of the B. Virgin, that being long
after the Fall of the Angels.
But if Mr. Milton had made the Cause of their Discontent to have been the
Incarnation of Christ, then, at that time, Reveal’d to the Angels; And their Contesting,
in such Manner as hereafter told, for the Dignity of the Angelical above that of the
Humane Nature, his Contexture had been Nearer to the Truth, and might have been
much more Poetical . … (sig. A2v‐A3r)
Clearly Hill’s entry is a summary of this more extensive statement by Leslie. 3 The words
“Discours Pride the cause of heresy” are Hill’s reference to Leslie’s History, a descriptive
title summarizing the work's principal thesis.4 This is confirmed by another extract from the
History, appearing on the following page of the manuscript: “It is not said in Scripture that
the Divels knew Christ to be God tho they call him the Son of God the holy one of God &
adjured him by God Discours Pride &c.” (Sloane MS 2894 fol. 71r). 5 Leslie published
anonymously until the late 1700s, which presumably explains why Hill does not give his
name here, but it remains unclear why these extracts appear without page references and
under a descriptive rather than the actual title.6
The final words of the entry—“Milton a Socinian Logic. 132 Iohn 17. 3”—are a
reference, not found in Leslie, to Milton’s Artis Logicae, in its original edition of 1672, which
contains, on page 132 (sig. G6v), an openly anti‐Trinitarian, hence “Socinian,” comment
relating to John 17.3: “And this is life eternall, that they might know thee the onely true God,
and Jesus Christ whom thou hast sent.”7 “Indeed,” Milton writes,
I should consider as more important than these primary modals those secondary ones,
as they are called, by which enunciations are commonly divided into exclusives,
… exceptives, … and restrictives . … And an exclusive is such either in its subject or
in its predicate; in its subject when, by a prefixed exclusive sign, it excludes all other
subjects from the predicate. But reason would dictate this rule in vain if it is permitted
to certain modern logicians, and particularly to Keckermann, suddenly to destroy it by
a rule invented for this purpose. “An exclusive,” he says, “does not exclude the
concomitants of the subject, as in The Father alone is true God. Here,” he says, “there
is not excluded the concomitant, namely, the Son and the Holy Spirit.” But who does
not see that this rule is intended to ridicule that perfectly clear text in John 17.3?
(CPW 8: 330)
The verse was closely connected to Socinian anti‐Trinitarianism both by its advocates and its
opponents,8 and as Hill correctly surmised, Milton joined the former in accepting it as
evidence of the non‐identity of the Father and the Son, a doctrine that surfaces elsewhere in
The Art of Logic, and is of course argued at length in the chapter on the Son in The Christian
Doctrine, where the same verse appears among the proof‐texts (CPW 6: 215, 248; 8: 233).
Hill is thus the first reader on record to take note of the theological subtext of The Art of
Logic, which would apparently evade Milton studies until the controversies occasioned by the
discovery of The Christian Doctrine.9 While the label “Socinian” is certainly not meant
positively, it was not necessarily as negative in Hill’s eyes as it was in Leslie’s, especially
given Hill’s connections to such figures as Francis Lodwick, who leaned strongly toward the
anti‐Trinitarian position, or John Tillotson, who denounced Socinianism in defending himself
from Leslie’s charges, but maintained a respectful and tolerant attitude toward its
adherents.10 There is also nothing in Hill’s entry to indicate that he shared any of Leslie’s
other objections to Paradise Lost.
Another early comment on the anti‐Trinitarian element in Paradise Lost has been
uncovered by Joad Raymond (210), who discusses it very briefly and makes no attempt at its
dating. The comment appears in a marginal entry found in a copy of the first edition of the
poem now in the Cambridge University Library, entered against the same passage (5.600‐15)
to which Leslie objected: “this acco … of Xts birth … [?] seems to bo … on prophan … e …
& destroy … coæternity.”11 Although found in a copy of the first edition, this comment
shows the influence of, and thus post‐dates, John Dennis's Grounds of Criticism in Poetry
(1704). Two details in Dennis’s treatise are relevant: his well‐known comment on the anti‐
Trinitarian nature of a different passage in Paradise Lost (3.383‐96)—described as “very
Lofty and Elevated,” although “a little tainted with Socinianism, for by the first Verse ’tis
evident, that he [Milton] look’t upon the Son of God as a Created Being” (sig. D2r‐v)—and
his parallel between lines 1.105‐11 and Tasso’s Jerusalem Delivered 4.15 (sig. F1r‐F2r).
Going back to the Cambridge copy, only three substantial annotations are found in it: the one
quoted above (sig. S1r); one, apparently in a different hand, pointing to a parallel between
1.70‐75 and the Aeneid 6.577‐79 (sig. A2r), obviously derived from Hume, who quotes the
same lines in the exact same format; and one, apparently in the same hand as the comment on
anti‐Trinitarianism, pointing to precisely the same parallel in Tasso adduced by Dennis (sig.
A2v).12 Thus either the author of the Cambridge marginalia independently arrived at the same
parallel from Tasso as Dennis, and also made a similar comment on Milton’s anti‐
Trinitarianism, or, as seems far more likely, he copied the Tasso parallel from Dennis and
noticed the anti‐Trinitarian basis of 5.600‐15 under the influence of Dennis’s comment on
3.383‐96 (and possibly Leslie’s as well, also on 5.600‐15). In all probability, then, the
comment on anti‐Trinitarianism in the Cambridge copy post‐dates Dennis’s treatise of 1704.
The earliest known comment on Milton’s anti‐Trinitarianism thus remains Leslie’s, a
full generation after the first edition of Paradise Lost. One explanation of this might be that
earlier comments have not survived or are yet to be uncovered. Another possibility, not
necessarily exclusive of the former, is the one suggested by Rumrich (77‐79), namely that
this aspect of Milton’s work became more visible to readers who, like Leslie and Hill, read it
against the background of the intense “Trinitarian Controversy” emerging in the late 1680s
and lasting throughout and beyond the 1690s. Besides Dennis’s explicit remark, a link
between Milton and Socinianism was implied, as Lieb notes (249‐50), in Toland’s Life of
1698. In this respect it is interesting that although Leslie is embroiled in anti‐Socinian
controversy, and elsewhere in his History denounces the teachings of “Arius and his
Bastard Socinus”—“Generals of the greatest Name” in a whole army of anti‐Trinitarian
heretics: Apollinarians, Cerdonites, Ebionites, Eunomians, Eutychians, Familists,
Macedonians, Manicheans, Marcionites, Muslims, Nestorians, Quakers, Saturnians,
Theopaschites, Unitarians (History sig. D1r‐v)—he does not use these or any other terms in
reference to Milton, and even seems to imply that Milton was merely inadvertently, rather
than consciously, heterodox. The impression is that Leslie was perfectly aware of the
conscious nature of Milton’s heterodoxy, but did not want to furnish his opponents with so
distinguished an ally.
Finally, a methodical examination of Abraham Hill’s notebooks is likely to yield
more entries on Milton. My own browsing turns up six that are not mentioned by Poole, three
of which on works not previously noted as known to Hill: two extracts from Hirelings
(Sloane MS 2893 fol. 45v; 2894 fol. 108v), of early church examples against the public
maintenance of the clergy, and a reference, among a series of entries on the subject of
rebaptism, to A Brief History of Moscovia (2894 fol. 99r).13 There is also another extract
from Civil Power (2894 fol. 95r), and references to the First Defence (2897 fol. 76r) and The
History of Britain (2897 fol. 32v).14 A comprehensive study, systematically collecting and
analyzing all of Hill’s references to Milton, would be an important contribution to the
scholarship on the early reception of Milton’s work.
University of Warwick
Notes
1
The biblical reference appears to be underlined, although slight damage to the bottom edge
of the page makes this difficult to confirm. In addition to this entry, Poole notes references to
Lycidas, the First and Second Defences, A Treatise of Civil Power, The History of Britain,
and Of True Religion; a record of two comments on Milton's blindness, one attributed to
Milton himself, the other to an unnamed contemporary; and entries for several of Milton's
works in two of the book lists in Sloane MS 2893 fols. 149r‐218v, one of which “appears to
be a partial catalogue of Hill’s … library” (“Two Early Readers” 89‐90). The entry on Hill in
Shawcross’s Bibliography reproduces the information from Poole’s article. It may be noted
here that Hill’s record of Milton’s retort to the question on his blindness demonstrates the
spuriousness of the later forms of the anecdote, tentatively accepted in French 4: 391,
Parker 1092n55, and elsewhere.
2
Poole cautiously dates Hill’s entry to “presumably within the same decades” as the
correspondence of John Evelyn and John Beale (“Two Early Readers” 76), which also
contains references to Milton. The earliest of Beale’s letters to Evelyn, in British Library Add
MS 78312 fols. 1r‐4v, dates from 28 Sept. 1659; the latest, in Add MS 78683 fols. 60v‐61v,
from 26 June 1682. “Logic. 132” is misinterpreted as referring to a passage in Book 1,
Chapter 32, of The Art of Logic (90). A slight error in the reading of the biblical reference,
“12” for “17,” leaves Poole unable to connect the verse to the subject of Milton's alleged
Socinianism.
3
Poole cites Leslie’s comments as stating “Exactly the same criticism” as Hill’s (“Two Early
Readers” 92), without realizing the latter’s derivation from the former.
4
See Leslie, History esp. sig. F2v: “I have Endeavour’d to Trace this Pride from its first Rise
in Heaven; and shewn its Progress upon Earth; and that it is the Mother and Nurse of all
the Heresies in the Church . …”
5
Cf. Leslie, History sig. D1r: “It is said indeed in Scripture that the Devils knew Him, but not
that they knew Him to be God. They call’d Him the Son of God; and the Holy one of God,
and they adjur’d Him by God . …”
6
Perhaps Hill confused the History with one of the three works by Leslie titled A Discourse
published around the same time, namely in 1697, 1698, and 1700; the latter two bear the
same title, yet the 1700 publication contains five additional works (although not the History),
continuously paginated but with separate title pages. A sermon by Leslie was published under
his name in a joint publication of 1702 (Leslie and Dodwell), but subsequent works of the
mid‐1700s are still anonymous. Apparently it was the 1708 pamphlet by Thomas Emlyn,
entitled Remarks on Mr. Cha. Leslie's First Dialogue on the Socinian Controversy, that
outed Leslie as the author of his more controversial works, and his authorship is regularly
acknowledged in his subsequent publications, beginning with his reply to Emlyn (Mr.
Leslie’s Answer). Elsewhere, Hill refers, by name, to Leslie’s Supplement: “Lesly. Clendon of
Person. pref.” (Sloane MS 2897 fol. 65v).
7
I quote from the King James Version of 1611.
8
See Socinus et al. sig. C1v : “Q. Who is this one divine person? / A. That one God, the
Father of our Lord Jesus Christ. / Q. How prove you that? / A. By the most evident
testimonies of the Scripture, thus Christ himself, Iohn 17. 3. saith, This is life eternall that
they may know thee (Father) the onely true God.” Cf. Wallis esp. sig. F1r: “The first and
great Objection of the Socinians, from this place, against the Divinity of Christ, and the
Doctrine of the Trinity, is this; If the Father be the onely true God; then the Son, or Holy‐
Ghost, is not God, or not the True God; but the Father onely.”
9
The earliest modern reference to the work’s theological subtext that I have been able to find
is, ironically, by Thomas Burgess, who attempts to use it as proof against Milton’s Arianism
(Milton, Protestant Union xviii‐xxii).
10
On Hill and Lodwick, see Poole, “Milton and Science” 20‐23; and Henderson and Poole
passim. Henderson and Poole describe Lodwick’s position as categorically anti‐Trinitarian
(43), yet some of his most explicit passages on the subject stop short of a definitive
statement: “in holy writ we haue no positiue description of the Generation of our Lord Christ
as God and therefore silence in this matter would best becom us” (189‐90); “the doctrine of
the Trinity … is an Article so much beyond the capacity of humane reason that the ablest
diuines cannot giue a naturall reason thereof nor a plain positiue place of holy writ to proue
the same, and therefore a distinction would be made between such positions as are fit for
yong learners and such as are for the greater proficients and to admit each to that which best
befits his capacity” (194). Hill served as comptroller for Tillotson from his appointment as
Archbishop of Canterbury in 1691 to his death in 1694, and Tillotson is reported as “often
expressing the pleasure he took in Mr. Hill’s conversation, and would frequently term him,
his learned friend, and his instructing philosopher” (Hill et al. x). Even if he did not know the
identity of their author, Hill must have been familiar with Leslie’s anti‐Socinian writings of
the period, notably the 1695 Charge of Socinianism against Dr. Tillotson Considered, and
topics relating to these controversies crop up frequently in his notebooks. On Leslie’s attack
on Tillotson, see Kolbrener.
11
Cambridge University Library, classmark SSS. 32. 40, sig. S1r; the copy is of the sixth
“issue” of the first edition, according to the classification in Shawcross and Lieb’s edition of
the ten‐book Paradise Lost (392‐94). Raymond mentions no earlier discussions of this
comment, and I have been unable to find any. The right side of the page has been trimmed for
binding, resulting in a loss of a few letters in most lines of the entry, but the general sense is
clear. A possible reconstruction might be: “this account of Xts birth seems to border on
prophaneness & destroy his coæternity.”
12
Of the remaining marginalia, there are four corrections based on the “Errata” (at 1.25, 409;
10.575, 598), and a curious suggestion of an alternative reading, appearing on the same page
as the Tasso entry. Here, in line 1.91, “In” is underlined (but not crossed out, as with the
corrections), with “And” written next to it, presumably as an alternative reading. The same
unnecessary emendation is proposed by Bentley in his Emendations and edition of Paradise
Lost, and as it seems improbable that it would have occurred independently to another reader,
it could be that at least this entry post‐dates Bentley’s publications (or is perhaps of a slightly
earlier date, if the author was among those to whom Bentley is said to have showed his work
before publication; see Harper 71‐74). The only potential indication of the author(s) of any of
these entries appears on the title page, which is inscribed “Char[les] Blount,” presumably the
deist who adapted Milton’s Areopagitica. This Charles Blount cannot, however, be the author
of any of the three substantial entries, as he died in 1693, and was also unsympathetic to
Trinitarian orthodoxy.
13
The Hirelings extracts correspond to the following passages in Milton’s work: “a councel
at Antioch, in the year 340, sufferd not either priest or bishop to live on church‐maintenance
without necessitie …”; “about the year 359, Constantius the emperor having summond a
general councel of bishops to Ariminum in Italie, and provided for thir subsistence there,
the British and French bishops judging it not decent to live on the publick, chose rather to be
at thir own charges. Three only out of Britain constraind through want, yet refusing offerd
subsistance from the rest, accepted the emperor's provision; … in w[hich] regard this
relater Sulpitius Severus, a good author of the same time, highly praises them” (Milton,
Considerations sig. F10r‐11r). The reference to Moscovia points to the account of Boris
Godunov rebaptized on his deathbed: “Before his death, though it were speedy, he would be
shorn, and new christn’d” (Milton, Brief History sig. E3r). Here and in the following note I
quote from the editions used by Hill, as determinable by his page references.
14
The extract from Civil Power corresponds to the following passage: “deliverd up … from
the fould of Christ and kingdom of grace to the world again which is the kingdom of Satan
…” (Milton, Treatise sig. D8v‐9r). The reference to the First Defence relates generally to the
work’s preface (“Milt cont Salm pref”), while that to The History of Britain relates to the
chapter on King Harold Harefoot, specifically to the tradition of his illegitimacy: “Harold for
his swiftness surnam’d Harefoot, the Son of Canute by Algiva of Northampton (though some
speak doubtfully as if she bore him not, but had him of a Shoo‐makers Wife, as Swane before
of a Priest; others of a Maid‐Servant, to conceal her barrenness) …” (Milton, History sig.
Nn1r).
Works Cited
Bentley, Richard. Dr. Bentley’s Emendations on the Twelve Books of Milton’s Paradise Lost.
London, 1732.
British Library, Add MSS 78312‐78313. Evelyn papers: correspondence of John Beale, 1659‐
1679.
British Library, Add MSS 78683‐78685. Evelyn papers: miscellaneous correspondence,
1621‐1769.
British Library, Sloane MSS 2891‐2900. Commonplace books of Abraham Hill.
Cambridge University Library, classmark SSS. 32. 40. Copy of John Milton, Paradise Lost
(London, 1669).
Defoe, Daniel. The Political History of the Devil, as well Ancient as Modern. London, 1726.
Dennis, John. The Grounds of Criticism in Poetry. London, 1704.
Emlyn, Thomas. Remarks on Mr. Cha. Leslie’s First Dialogue on the Socinian Controversy.
[London, 1708?].
French, J. Milton, ed. The Life Records of John Milton. 5 vols. New Brunswick, NJ: Rutgers
UP, 1949‐58.
Harper, David A. “Bentley’s Annotated 1674 Edition of Paradise Lost: Hidden Method and
Peculiar Madness.” Review of English Studies ns 64 (2012): 60‐86.
Henderson, Felicity, and William Poole, eds. Francis Lodwick, On Language, Theology, and
Utopia. Oxford: Oxford UP, 2011.
Hill, Abraham, et al. Familiar Letters Which Passed between Abraham Hill … and Several
Eminent and Ingenious Persons of the Last Century. [Ed. Thomas Astle.]
London, 1767.
Hume, Patrick. Annotations on Milton’s Paradise Lost. London, 1695.
Kolbrener, William. “The Charge of Socinianism: Charles Leslie’s High Church Defense of
‘True Religion.’” Journal of the Historical Society 3 (2003): 1‐23.
Leslie, Charles. The Charge of Socinianism against Dr. Tillotson Considered. Edinburgh,
1695.
Leslie, Charles. A Discourse Proving the Divine Institution of Water‐Baptism. London, 1697.
Leslie, Charles. A Discourse; Shewing, Who They are That are Now Qualify’d To Administer
Baptism and the Lord’s‐Supper. London, 1698.
Leslie, Charles. A Discourse; Shewing, Who They are That are Now Qualify’d To Administer
Baptism and the Lord’s‐Supper. London, 1700.
Leslie, Charles. The History of Sin and Heresie Attempted. London, 1698.
Leslie, Charles. Mr. Leslie’s Answer to the Remarks on His First Dialogue against the
Socinians. [London, 1708?].
Leslie, Charles. A Supplement, in Answer to Mr. Clendon His Tractatus Philosophico‐
Theologicus. Or, A Treatise of the Word “Person.” London, 1710.
Leslie, Charles, and Henry Dodwell. A Sermon Preach’d at Chester, against Marriages in
Different Communions. By Charles Leslie … and the Same Subject Farther
Prosecuted, by Henry Dodwell. London, 1702.
Lieb, Michael. Theological Milton: Deity, Discourse and Heresy in the Miltonic Canon.
Pittsburgh, PA: Duquesne UP, 2006.
Milton, John. Artis Logicae Plenior Institutio. London, 1672.
Milton, John. A Brief History of Moscovia. London, 1682.
Milton, John. Complete Prose Works of John Milton. Gen. ed. Don M. Wolfe. 8 vols in 10.
New Haven, CT: Yale UP, 1953‐82.
Milton, John. Considerations Touching the Likeliest Means To Remove Hirelings out of the
Church. London, 1659.
Milton, John. The History of Britain. London, 1670.
Milton, John. Pro Populo Anglicano Defensio. London, 1650.
Milton, John. Milton's Paradise Lost. Ed. Richard Bentley. London, 1732.
Milton, John. Paradise Lost: A Poem Written in Ten Books: An Authoritative Text of the 1667
First Edition. Ed. John T. Shawcross and Michael Lieb. Pittsburgh, PA: Duquesne
UP, 2007.
Milton, John. Protestant Union. A Treatise of True Religion, Heresy, Schism, Toleration, and
What Best Means May be Used against the Growth of Popery … to Which is Prefixed,
a Preface on Milton’s Religious Principles, and Unimpeachable Sincerity. Ed.
Thomas Burgess. London, 1826.
Milton, John. A Treatise of Civil Power. London, 1659.
Parker, William Riley. Milton: A Biography. 2nd ed. Ed. Gordon Campbell. 2 vols. Oxford:
Clarendon P, 1996.
Poole, William. “Milton and Science: A Caveat.” Milton Quarterly 38 (2004): 18‐34.
Poole, William. “Two Early Readers of Milton: John Beale and Abraham Hill.” Milton
Quarterly 38 (2004): 76‐99.
Raymond, Joad. Milton’s Angels: The Early‐Modern Imagination. Cambridge: Cambridge
UP, 2010.
Richardson, Jonathan, father and son. Explanatory Notes and Remarks on Paradise Lost.
London, 1734.
Rumrich, John P. “Milton’s Arianism: Why It Matters.” Milton and Heresy. Ed. Stephen B.
Dobranski and John P. Rumrich. Cambridge: Cambridge UP, 1998. 75‐92.
Shawcross, John T. Milton: A Bibliography for the Years 1624‐1700 (Revised) and for the
Years 1701‐1799. Iter and the Arizona Center for Medieval and Renaissance Studies,
2006. Web. 30 July 2014.
[Socinus, Faustus, et al.] The Racovian Catechisme. [Trans. John Biddle.] Amsterledam [sic;
London], 1652.
Tasso, Torquato. Godfrey of Bulloigne, or The Recouerie of Ierusalem. Trans. Edward
Fairfax. London, 1600.
Toland, John. The Life of John Milton. London, 1698.
Wallis, John. Three Sermons Concerning the Sacred Trinity. London, 1691.