Oh man. Looking at my save I haven't played since this first came out! It's such a night and day difference in terms of rendering quality! You can tell a lot of time and effort went into learning the tools being used and to make things that much better.
Can't wait to see future updates, hope they go by smoothly for you!
Since it has been so long since I last played I re-played from the beginning and some minor typos I noticed:
"I must be the only one in town studying on vacation whereas everybody enjoys." enjoys what? It's not said in this or the next bit of text.
"I wanna be Professor once and for all..." -> "I wanna be a Professor once and for all..."
"The house is so quite" -> should be quiet
"Yeap, it's definitely no one here." -> should be there's
"She stores the empty box so it looks like there's still cereal on it but it's just to avoid going to the groceries store" -> should be in, should be grocery
"LIAR! You did saw me!" -> should be see
"It's the first time Isee her around" -> should be I have or I've, should be seen
"I say stop staring, you idiot!" -> should be said
"Ok, I stop" -> should be I will or I'll
"... I also touched your boob... and I love it!" -> should be loved
"after my bath I promise I do." -> should be will
"... but first, I'm gonna put some clothes." -> should be put on
"SHORTS no LONG!" -> should be not
"Well, I choose then." -> should be I will or I'll
"What was that? It's that what I'm thinking?" -> should be "What is that? Is that what I'm thinking it is?"
"I think [MC] has it on his pants." -> should be in
"No like [MC], he picks awful movies." -> should be not
"Where he hides it?" -> should be where does
"Yes! There are cereals!" -> should be "Yes! There is cereal!" or there's.
Hey🌼 thank you so much for taking the time to play my VN💟 and for pointing those errors! I'm not a native speaker so somentimes I make mistakes by using Spanish structure to speak in English that has a different one. I will fix the typos, thank you again! 🤗 In my Discord I have a "language-errors" channel where you can put this kind of things if you want! Thank you again and have a great end of the week.😊💞
Hi guys! I wanted to let you know that I'm working very hard on the first update, generating new content for updates, and also improving the visuals and textures of the characters and the environment. 😊
In addition to that, I've corrected the game features where I originally mentioned a Day/Afternoon/Night cycle, but that was a mistake as it could be misinterpreted as indicating a sandbox game. I want to clarify that my game will not have farming, grinding, or any sandbox elements. I'm planning to create a pure visual novel with choices. 🥰
Thanks to everyone for the support I've received in these days. ❤️
Hello there! It's been a while since I've seen such a promising start, so congratulations! If these are the beginnings, I can't even imagine what's coming next. I see a lot of potential! Best of luck, and I'll be keeping an eye out for updates.
Cuando dices los "roles" te refieres a que el jugador puede elegir la relacion que tiene con algunos personajes? (Ya sabes a Lo que me refiero jajaja) y los kinks/fetishes van a ser evitables (estos no suceden en la historia por elección del jugador) salteables (es solamente una opción para daltear la escena, pero esta igualmente sucede) o quizas forzados?
Por último y mas importante a que te refieres en la seccion de contenido planeado con "escenas no vainilla"?
Holis. Sí, las relaciones las elegís vos😉 jeje. Tanto los kinks/fetiches como todo lo que no sea vainilla, va a ser evitable y/o salteable.👍 No tengo pensado forzar ningún tipo de contenido a nadie.
Las escenas no vainillas las voy a ir desarrollando a medida que haga el juego (y lo voy a ir actualizando en el post).💻
Muchas gracias por tomarte el tiempo de dejarme un mensajito.💟🌸
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hey why not take a look at my video
Hi Boxlax! 🥰 Oww thank you for sharing my game on YT. 😘
You're very welcome I had tons of fun
Oh man. Looking at my save I haven't played since this first came out! It's such a night and day difference in terms of rendering quality! You can tell a lot of time and effort went into learning the tools being used and to make things that much better.
Can't wait to see future updates, hope they go by smoothly for you!
Since it has been so long since I last played I re-played from the beginning and some minor typos I noticed:
"I must be the only one in town studying on vacation whereas everybody enjoys." enjoys what? It's not said in this or the next bit of text.
"I wanna be Professor once and for all..." -> "I wanna be a Professor once and for all..."
"The house is so quite" -> should be quiet
"Yeap, it's definitely no one here." -> should be there's
"She stores the empty box so it looks like there's still cereal on it but it's just to avoid going to the groceries store" -> should be in, should be grocery
"LIAR! You did saw me!" -> should be see
"It's the first time I see her around" -> should be I have or I've, should be seen
"I say stop staring, you idiot!" -> should be said
"Ok, I stop" -> should be I will or I'll
"... I also touched your boob... and I love it!" -> should be loved
"after my bath I promise I do." -> should be will
"... but first, I'm gonna put some clothes." -> should be put on
"SHORTS no LONG!" -> should be not
"Well, I choose then." -> should be I will or I'll
"What was that? It's that what I'm thinking?" -> should be "What is that? Is that what I'm thinking it is?"
"I think [MC] has it on his pants." -> should be in
"No like [MC], he picks awful movies." -> should be not
"Where he hides it?" -> should be where does
"Yes! There are cereals!" -> should be "Yes! There is cereal!" or there's.
Hey🌼 thank you so much for taking the time to play my VN💟 and for pointing those errors! I'm not a native speaker so somentimes I make mistakes by using Spanish structure to speak in English that has a different one. I will fix the typos, thank you again! 🤗 In my Discord I have a "language-errors" channel where you can put this kind of things if you want! Thank you again and have a great end of the week.😊💞
The game looks very good but I want to know. Will the game be harem?
Hi! Thank you! ❣️ Yes! The game will have harem! 🤭
Oh eso es genial. Por cierto, recien leí bien que es de Argentina y yo aquí hablándole en inglés😅
Estaré siguiendo su trabajo🌹
Jajaja sí! Soy Argentina! 🔵⚪🔵 Gracias por tus comentarios y espero que te gusten los próximos updates! 🥰
Hi guys! I wanted to let you know that I'm working very hard on the first update, generating new content for updates, and also improving the visuals and textures of the characters and the environment. 😊
In addition to that, I've corrected the game features where I originally mentioned a Day/Afternoon/Night cycle, but that was a mistake as it could be misinterpreted as indicating a sandbox game. I want to clarify that my game will not have farming, grinding, or any sandbox elements. I'm planning to create a pure visual novel with choices. 🥰
Thanks to everyone for the support I've received in these days. ❤️
Hello there! It's been a while since I've seen such a promising start, so congratulations! If these are the beginnings, I can't even imagine what's coming next. I see a lot of potential! Best of luck, and I'll be keeping an eye out for updates.
Hi, Khal! Thanks for your kind words 😭💟 Stay tuned to the updates and have a great night 🤗
Ha Sammie you sound like me but i am from usa, keep up the story and keep loving cats!
Oh, hehe, hello from the South 😚😋 Thank you and always with the cats 🐈💖💖
i enjoyed the start very much and i wish progress goes well :)
Ow, thank you so much😍🤭
It looks fine but is there supposed tobe no sound
Yes, I don't know how to put sound yet :(
EDIT: The game has a lot of sounds/music/ambience since v0.3.0
pls no Netorare, but netori is fine :)
Don't worry, there will never be NTR in any of my games. 😄
Pregnancy maybe?
Mmmm maybe😏
I like it so far. When is the next update? I want more!
Thanks a lot!🤗 My plan is once a month!🤭
pretty good start.
Thank you so much 😍
Yes yes pretty good 🥰🥰
Hola dev.
Cuando dices los "roles" te refieres a que el jugador puede elegir la relacion que tiene con algunos personajes? (Ya sabes a Lo que me refiero jajaja) y los kinks/fetishes van a ser evitables (estos no suceden en la historia por elección del jugador) salteables (es solamente una opción para daltear la escena, pero esta igualmente sucede) o quizas forzados?
Por último y mas importante a que te refieres en la seccion de contenido planeado con "escenas no vainilla"?
Gracias, buena suerte.
Holis. Sí, las relaciones las elegís vos😉 jeje. Tanto los kinks/fetiches como todo lo que no sea vainilla, va a ser evitable y/o salteable.👍 No tengo pensado forzar ningún tipo de contenido a nadie.
Las escenas no vainillas las voy a ir desarrollando a medida que haga el juego (y lo voy a ir actualizando en el post).💻
Muchas gracias por tomarte el tiempo de dejarme un mensajito.💟🌸
Besitos🥰