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1. Introduction - Small feedback #127

@AnneFaubry

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@AnneFaubry

As I only have small remarks on the [intro](https://w3c.github.io/sustainableweb-wsg/#introduction), I put them all in one issue.

1.1

  • Warning: WSG intro and WSG intro to web sustainability might be confusing. The url is quite close. (if I got confused I guess people who are not so much into the topic might also)
  • Add bold on some parts of sentences to make them easier to read. Readers tend to scan through text, especially on the web. It would be more user-friendly, especially for people with attention disorder and reading issues maybe.
  • In the background I think it would be nice to add a couple dates: when did it start?

1.4
"Only make claims that they can reasonably justify with evidence to back up such statements and provide easy access to such evidence."

  • I might be wrong but the syntax does not seem quite right to me. Who is "they" here? Shouldn't be "you"?

I like the fact we dive quickly into the guidelines and "outsource" the intro to web sustainability.

I also like the plain language intro which is useful to anyone to get a quick summary.

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