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I get you, Ken is probably my favorite character and the one I am most excited for. Would kind of suck if it ultimately goes nowhere, but hey, not like there aren't other options on Ken's route... 

I can't put into words how excited I was for more Ken, and this absolutely did not disappoint. I love that we're slowly learning more about Ken, and actually getting to meet the "real" him - I do genuinely like the other routes (excluding Mark), but I really think Ken might just be the best character, and the one that needs Grey's help the most.

Not just Ken either! Jessie, Colt and Takoda(both) are also amazing, and I really can't help but want to spend more time with them. Amazing job, truly!  

Wait, he is? There's a few lines in the latest build that give the impression that he might have growing feelings for Grey...I'm not going to argue with the actual creator for the VN, but I do find that a little confusing.

Unless you mean "Ken certainly believes he's straight," In which case I certainly understand.

I want to thank you for all the M/M Inclusion. I know it's not easy to juggle the wants of both the straight and gay crowds. This game is coming along nicely, can't wait to see where you take it! <3

You think it's unplayable because YOU don't like the content, or more accurately because the game isn't specifically tailored to YOUR likes?

Seems pretty good! Still hoping to see the hot Landlord tho <3

The first version of this game took me by surprise, finding out out that I was strangely into the idea of dating a murderous furry ram was rather a shock, as you can well imagine. 

Jokes aside, I'm so happy to see this back, and that you've fleshed out Jacob to such a degree that I even sympathize with him for the most part. I love the new additions and I'm also really really hoping to see more from this, I think it has potential to become it's own thing, and judging by the comments I'm not alone. 

My only criticism would be confusion over the pronouns; we're referred to as 'she' then 'he' and then 'they'. Just wondering if it was perhaps an oversight and it was supposed to be neutral? Otherwise ignore this.

I gotta wait till 1am too, bloody London times!! 🥴

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This is quite the VN! I actually played it yesterday, but I needed a few hours to process it before leaving any form of comment. Your work resonated with me - given that I share a few similarities with the MC - and the message behind it has even inspired me to change my outlook on my own life. Life is indeed fleeting, and should be enjoyed before it's cut short. It's a simple lesson, but it's so very easy to forget. 

There isn't much I can say that others haven't already said in their own comments, and probably worded better than I ever could, but...That was one hell of a story. I could really feel Mori's exhaustion and bitterness, and it's a sobering reminder of how quickly any of us could end up in the same position. Memento was adorable, and I can't help but feel for him during his struggle - and eventual understanding - of what life was, and why people react differently to him.

The only decent criticism I could offer would be the length, but given the story was created to be a part of a VN collection and in such a short length of time...You all did very well with this. Bravo!

This is quite the VN! I actually played it yesterday, but I needed a few hours to process it before leaving any form of comment. Your work resonated with me - given that I share a few similarities with the MC - and the message behind it has even inspired me to change my outlook on my own life. Life is indeed fleeting, and should be enjoyed before it's cut short. It's a simple lesson, but it's so very easy to forget. 

There isn't much I can say that others haven't already said in their own comments, and probably worded better than I ever could, but...That was one hell of a story. I could really feel Mori's exhaustion and bitterness, and it's a sobering reminder of how quickly any of us could end up in the same position. Memento was adorable, and I can't help but feel for him during his struggle - and eventual understanding - of what life was, and why people react differently to him.

The only decent criticism I could offer would be the length, but given the story was created to be a part of a VN collection and in such a short length of time...You all did very well with this. Bravo!

Thank you for the response!

So for the sake of clarity, will the ending of chapter one actually impact the story for the second chapter, or will two just "stand alone" so to speak? Sorry, I know you probably made it clear but Diablo is killing my brain right now :<

Looking good! I'd also love to see the Landlord added to the relations system <3

Most of us are in the same boat, mate!

Play the other routes though, they do shed a little light on what's going on.

I won't lie, when I first saw his Dad...I needed a moment.

I really have to say, this game took me by complete surprise. I initially wasn't even going to try it - not a horror fan - but something about it kept appealing to me, and I caved.

I went in with low expectations (sorry, I've been burnt before), and very very quickly was proven wrong. I won't spoil anything, but this is probably the first VN where I can say I genuinely love every love interest AND the player character (seriously, Grey really is a charming, handsome guy). I'm a little more interested in Ken and Hiro, but the other two are still great and I really like how every route is so different.

That's not even touching on the incredible art nor the amazing writing. Seriously, ya'll are so talented. I'm worried this and RTF (I caught that little reference by the way!) are really gonna spoil me for other VN's! 

I meant more "Try and make an effort to actually READ about what you are playing." It's all appropriately tagged, so you really have no justification for your homophobic whining. 

Like, OMG! Homosexual content in a VN by Echo projects!? Like, get outta town!

You could also try to be better person in general too, but if you wanna stay a hateful little goblin, that's your prerogative. Best of luck!

No need to worry, I'm sure you existing is ruining something for somebody else.

The game is literally tagged as both Gay and Queer? I know homophobes in general aren't all that bright, but at least TRY and make an effort?

That would depend on who you ask?

I myself am not opposed to the sex, but the story and suspense is what keeps me hooked. 

I think you have to get lucky with a specific rune, I did manage to turn back at some point after repeated attempts. I do agree though, they do have SOME semblance of personality, as in Mark (the taur I think) seems to be more flirty and playful, and the Kangaroo seems to be more studious, but then when we actually get tf'd...They all act the same, more or less.

I won't lie, I like asshole characters in this situation because the game is basically a battle of wills between your character wanting to return/remain and them, but there should most definitely still be variation

Gonna second this comment. I do like this game - a lot - but the characters basically share the same personality.

Perhaps make certain hosts more reluctant to accept the circumstances, and perhaps others more malicious? That would at least change how we have to interact with each host, depending on our goals.

Nah, not quite. First of all, he's hot. This is important in a VN. 

Second, he's a lot more interesting (complex) than Ranok in my opinion. There's obviously a soft-side buried in there somewhere, and finding it is part of the appeal. Yes, he's a prick, I won't defend that. But! If he can sort out his issues and let his guard down to the point he can actually have a healthy relationship with somebody? Somebody other than the FBTW's doormat MC. I mean.

Oops yeah, I forgot to add Burrows, I've been keeping an eye on that one too. But I'd still fully recommend Cryptid Crush!

Agreed! 

I won't lie though, I really REALLY wanted Vulgor to be an option. 

You could also try "Remember the Flowers" and perhaps Soulcreek if you want more great VN's!

Actually the comparison with Maruuk and Vulgor was pretty spot on, I noticed that pretty quickly. Gruff, somewhat rude, outright suspicious while also secretly caring (to an extent). I wouldn't call either of them "nice" either. 

There are a few similarities with FBTW, with the main one being the MC ending up in a different world with no clue how or why, but to be fair that's a pretty common trope.

That said, I prefer this VN. The MC doesn't quickly decide to become a doting housewife for a closet case wolf, and you aren't forced into one romance route either (it seems).

Good start! Interesting plot, great art, backgrounds and several varied characters.

Now, I want to make it clear that I DID enjoy this first release, but I did find a few issues with it as well. Thankfully, there are two comments below that highlight exactly what I wanted to say; Kallier's comment regarding the grammar, punctuation and syntax, although harsh, is probably about as accurate as I could write myself. I noticed it was often inconsistent and at times would flow awkwardly. I also noticed quite a few times that the wrong name popped up in reference to the dialogue too. You might want to consider proof-readers to remedy this? The second comment is Kentaro Manedwuff's criticism of the length; I won't say it's too long myself, but there were times when a particular scene would begin to feel very drawn out or I would start to get very bored of the MC's thoughts/rambles. I would consider condensing it a little - at least trim down the repetitive interactions perhaps (MC's complaints about the food, Marruk being a prick, etc)

Other criticisms I haven't seen mentioned include how fast we progressed from simple, single words and phrases for the "A.I's benefit" to immediately holding and understanding casual conversations within a few days. I'm also not sure if Rhoun is just constantly nervous or has a stutter.

Again, I do like what you've got there, but these issues do tend to ruin the immersion and there were times where I was just clicking through the dialogue waiting for something interesting to pop-up because I'd lost interest in a drawn out scene. If you can manage to fix these issues - which I think you can, clearly - you'll have a great VN here. 

Oh, I'm so glad somebody on the team got to see it! I really need y'all to understand exactly how much I love this VN. You blew away any expectations I had, and turned me into an Axel (and Talon) simp in the process. 

I can't even begin to describe how excited I am to see what happens in the future.

Okay. So, as unlikely as it is that the creator(s) will even see this, I wanna get this off my chest. I've been aware of this VN since it first released, and from the description decided I didn't really want to play another game with a human MC suffering from amnesia (I was obsessing over FBTW at the time). I decided to give the VN a go about 2 weeks ago and bloody hell, I am an absolute fool for not playing this sooner. 

The writing; the art; the music; you've all done an excellent job with this VN. I love the characters, and I especially love the story. My arrogant ass thought I had the reveal all figured out - I did get it half right to my credit - and even then I was completely unprepared for it, and the subsequent tenderness that followed near enough bought me to tears.

I could rave about how much I love this VN for hours and how it's knocked FBTW out of my top 3 VNs. My only complaint/criticism is that there wasn't art of either of the very tender moments with axel...and even then, that's a shallow complaint considering I'm not the artist nor actually paying for the art.

I think, for now at least, It's Aaron. But if Xavier IS actually alive...That could change.

Mind you, I'm hoping we get to a point where we have the option to choose who to pursue. I'm curious if Talon will be an option🤡 

Yeah, I can imagine. If not more art/sprites, then maybe a little more written description or maybe have the characters talk a little more? Anyway, just my 2 cents, you know what you're doing either way. 

This is now one of favourite games, and I've played quite a few (sadly)

I'll admit, I'm not usually a fan of games like this, but in this case I'm glad I made an exception. A very hot game, and I very much enjoyed the various different scenes (and slut mode!)

My only real criticism would be to maybe have a few more events during battles? As in, more than just oral (anal, facesitting, etc etc). Either way, great game, and I'm very much looking forward to the upcoming chapters! I hope we do get to see the boars again, or maybe some permanent consequences for getting slut-mode! 

Oh, I'm already very excited to see what you have in store honestly...Also can't wait to meet the shop owner! He reminds me of another charming, well-dressed wolf who knew both magic and potions and ran his own shop...I wonder if that's sheer coincidence? 😉

Yes, that is absolutely a nice, thoughtful touch, seeing as we will be specifically hunting the sweet sweet game-overs. You have my - and I suspect many others - eternal gratitude for that addition. In the meantime, I'm gonna fully complete your older games to prepare 😊

Oh yeah, I'm pretty sure I played the early version! Glad I wasn't going crazy and that my memory wasn't messing with me. Either way, I've played one of the author's games before and I love it, and the early concept for this game was pretty great too, so here's hoping

There are worse ways to go...Hopefully you'll be adding some bad ends though 😈

Oh, hey, I knew I recognised that name! You created one of my favourite games on TFGames (The Town)!

Gave the demo a try and what's there is already great, aside from a few bugs but they've already been reported from what I can see in the comments. I have to admit though, I'm not entirely sure why the game-overs are game-overs, there doesn't seem to be much...finality to them? I had a nice relaxing romp with the boar and then the games over, was there some sinister plot to keep me locked in my room in a state of lust forever?

Either way, looking forward to what's coming in the future. The Town really was great so I know this'll shape into something amazing too 👌

Hi, I loved RTD and looking forward to this one too - Just a quick question, Will the MC strictly be female or will you have the option to play as male at some point? Thanks, and best of luck!

Ah, np! Thanks for informing me :)

Hello again good sir, loving the updates! Just one question; I seem to be missing an event with security (that's what the gif is called), and I just cannot seem to find it? I've gotten the mall security where you can pay him or suck him off, but I cannot find this one

Thank you! Maybe in future then :)